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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

NJ I reserved somewhere but now forgot

anyhows--the story was brill and a complete contrast from what you have written so far. Loved the chem and the sweet bantering between the newly married couple. It all sounded so peaceful yet sensoual.

A beautiful piece NJ thank you for sharing it with us :)

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Mini

@cool_pisces

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Hey NJ

Should have guessed, such a lovely one shot must have been written by u only, i loved reading it, and u deserved all the votes and ofcourse winning.

Congrats Mini

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268143

@268143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

lovely oneshot 👏 👏 👏

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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

reserved*

sorry all, never go to the replies on this one, will do it soon!

cheers,
nj

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ridzi830

@ridzi830

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

hey nice one....do write more...

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Hannah

@nondescript

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Only a week ago they had completed residency. A week later, last night they had tied the knot. The week ahead they were off from work for their honeymoon. And today, he mused, his last fading thought, was the first day for the rest of their lives...

Beautiful. Just loved this paragraph :)

Peace Out
Much Love Hannahxx

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

what!??!!! how did i miss this?!!! seriously...like how come i never knew about this!!! :( am sad that im sooo late!
chal koi naa better late then never right ;)

*sigh*
im feeling so content...cant get this crazy grin off my face...am simply happy :)
all thanks to you nj!
ahh i dont even know what to say girl or how to praise this one! im at a loss!
im pretty surprised that its JUST an AR shot! not that i doubt your abilities...but i didnt know u could do AR without the others! but i definitely like :D ...ok "like" is not a strong enough word...LOVED to bits!!! noo thats still not strong enough to describe HOW much i enjoyed this one!
they style to was a bit different then anything u have written, it was very intimate and really made my heart all gushy and mushy lol i had this dreamy face the whole while reading it =D
the last bit really had me floored...such a beautiful and elegant way to put it! u really nailed it!
sweet, simple and lovely :)
ahh you just blow me away lady! beyond awesome job hehe thanksss soooo much for writing it :)

Edited by Robin_M - 15 years ago