IMMENSELY IN LOVE pt 35 n last pt pg 107 - Page 2

Hey sweety pie lovely ff yaar

Awesome!

waiting to read more of it!

Nice intro!!! [/QUOTE
surely would continue soon and pm you😊
thanks for the comment.😊

Originally posted by: sannila

Hey sweety pie lovely ff yaar

plz conti..

n fanx foh pm dear

love it

keep it up...hehe

thanks sannila will surely pm you.

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Hey awesome yaar... I'm a huge fan o AK so obviously excited and i like DMG characters aswell, heard about MJHT as well so i'm sure i'll enjoy it!

AR/RM/AA/AN are old huh😆😆 but sure they can romance like padma and shashank used to. hehe😆😆😆 would love to read more...

Please continue sooon and PM me😉

Luv
Nadz😳

Name: i guess if you post a lil summary of the story we can think of some names😉

hey nadz thanks yaar
but mujhe AK ke baare mein jyada nahin maloom
and i will surely pm you.

Originally posted by: jennykaran

nice intro.... love the characters... will try to cont sometime this week.. but if u have ideas... cont!!

sure but i am continuing with the 1st part.

next part coming in few minutes

Part 1

It is a beautiful morning atleast for the MALLIK MANSION.

We see a boy of around 20 yrs sleeping peacefully.🥱🥱🥱

A cute but naughty girl comes in his room with a bucket full of water and a mischievous smile on her face.

She asks the boy sleeping

"bhai jaldi utho ."

The boy says "ummmm Nupu sone do na "🥱

she smirks at this and starts counting.

1

2

3

SPLASH!!!!!!!!!!

The boy "Ahhhhhh yeh kya hua"😲😲

The girl starts laughing "kyun bhai bhabhi ke sapne dekh rahe the."saying so she runs away.

"Sis aaj main tumhe nahin chodon ga" he to starts running behind her.

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Here in the master bedroom of the house we see a beautiful lady of 40-45 yrs all ready standing in front of mirror and her love busy staring at her standing behind.

Riddhima (Ri) :( all blushing) armaan kya hai aise kya dekh rahe ho

Armaan (ar) (going closer to her): basket dekh rahoon 25 years ho gaye par tum ab bhi kitn'''

But are disturbed by the two persons running around in the house

Mayu (m):ruko sis (gunjan) abhi tumhe dekhta hoon.

Gunjan(g):papa bachao bhai mujhe (saying so she hids behind her dad)

M: papa ke chupti hai ruk....

Both again start running all over the room

Ri: stop it!!! (Both of them stop) Mayu yeh tumne apni kya haalat bana rakhi hai.

G (laughing): mumma lagta hai bhai ko kissi se milne ki itni jaldi hai ki shanti se bath bhi nahi liya'

M:nahi mumma yeh gunjan ne nujhe is tarah se uthaya hai dekho(at this both dad and daughter half a good laugh)😆😆😆

Riddhima looks at armaan sternly n he stops doing so.

G:mumma ab bhai ko hi kissi ko milne jaana tha aur abhi tak so rahe the so maine socha kyun uthaloon nahi to mujhe hi kaheinge daant padne ke baad "sis tum mujhe jaldi utha nahi sakti thi"

Ar: (suppressing his smile) 😆par mayu tumhe kis se milne jaana hai subah subah.

M:who papa bas yunhi jogging par jana hai sis toh kuch bhi bolti (saying so he leaves from from there)

Every one laughs at this.

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In hall

Ri : are gunjan tumne sammy ko dekha kahin .

M :haan ma aap sis se hi puchiye usse pata hoga.😛

G (giving his brother stern look):😳haan mum who toh basketbaal khelne gaya hai aata hi hoga.

Ar: are mayu tujhe kahin jaana tha shayad kissi se milne

M (remembering):arey main ek kaam karta hoon main jake sammy ko le aata hoon.

Saying so he leaves the house

G (from behind ):bhai sammy ko lekar aana kahin khud kissi ke pass mat rukjaana (she laughs)🤣

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Garewal house

Is ghar mein to subah subah chilane ki awaje sunai pad rahi hain

Muski (mu):(shouting) oye kankhajure dekh kya time ho raha hai aur tu hai ki abhi tak ghode bechke soya padha hai uth.

Rahul (ra):oye sone dena yaar waise bhi raat bhar Olympics bhagti rehti hai,kharate pe kharate leti rehti hai abhi shanti se sone de.

Mu: kya kaha tune main Olympics bhagti rehti hoon,kharate pe kharate leti rehti hoon ruk abhi tujhe batati hoon. Saying so she rums towards him but rahul turns and she lands in his arms.

They both stare at eachother lost in eachothers eyes.

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Basket ball Court

A boy of around 20 was playing basketball and had many of baskets

Boy :wow yaar sammy maja aagaya tu toh champion hai BB khelne mein.😉

Yes he is none other than samrat (s).

He starts to leave when he sees nupur(n) over there.

S (teasing her): are bhabhiji aap yahan subah subah 😉.

N:😳dekho sammy plllz tang mat karo main yahan kissi se milne thode hi aayi ho main to bas jogging karne aayi thi.

S: par maine aapse nahin pucha ki kya aap yahan kissi se milne aayi hain. (😲nupur bits her lips for blabbering such a way) well agar aap milne nahin aayi hain toh bhi theek hain nahi toh shayad who abhi ajayenge. Isliye main yahan se bhag nikalta hoon😉.

Saying so he smiles at her and leaves the court)

Nupur goes and sits at a side.

Mayu comes to the court and sees her nups.nupur looks at him and starts smiling .

mayu comes and the sit there busy staring and mesmerizing eachother .nupur blushes into deep shades of red.

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Mallik Mansion

Samrat comes home.

S: hey massi hey uncle kya chal raha hai.

He finds both of them staring each other lovingly.

Gunjan comes and whispers to him "romance" 😳

They laugh slowy.

S n g:ohu...ohu.... A little louder ohu...ohu.... 😆

Both ar n ridz break their stare and look towards them as always riddhima blushes😳 a bit.

Then suddenly

Ri: are sammy tum akele kaise mayu toh tumhe lene gaya than a.woh kahan rehgaya

S n g:whispering but loud enough for both of them to hear "bhabhi ke saath romance karne mein busy honge.😆

Armaan riddhima smile at this and everyone goes to there respective rooms😊.

So here's the 1^st part, that's all for now you guys also do continue.

Love,

Ridz/sammy.