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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jennykaran

nice part!! the eye locks were awesome..


thanks yaar bas aase hi eye locks daal diye 😆mujhse jyada romantic parts nahi likhe jaate😆 for that i am dependent on you all guys.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

thanks going to continue now par tum bhi kabhi continue kiya karo pllllz.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sasik

hey

nice prt.
loved the family moments.
Thanks for pm
Continue soon.


thanks yaar going to continue now.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Hey guys next part coming in few minutes.
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so guys here goes part second lekin isske bad se aap ko bhi continue karna hoga plllllz.

Part 2

Joshi house

We see a cute girl sleeping with 'n' number of teddy around her. With a sweet smile on her face. When her mother anjali (an) calls out for her.

An: krips beta get up tum late hojaogi.

But our kripa in her own dreams.

Later on anjali comes to her room and wakes her up.

Anjie straight goes to the garden to find a man talking to his plants and yes there he is anjai's hubby,kripa's father Atul joshi having his time with his lovely plants.😆

An:atul chalo get ready ourelse we'll get late.atul jaldi chalona.

At: haan haan, anjali main aata hoon tum chalo.😊

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BB Court

Mayu and nupur spend there time talking and staring each other when there mobiles started buzzing and they back to earth from there MAYURland.

Ma:accha nupur main chalta hoon warna sis,sammy milke mujhe pareshan kardenge.😆

Nu:(smiling lightly) haan main bhi chalti hoon mom-dad uthgaye honge.Bye college mein milte hain.

Ma: hmmm bye!!😭

Saying so both left to there homes but little did mayank know ki ghar jakar uski halat hone wali hai.

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Garewal house

On dinning table

Muskan was setting the table just when rahul came and kissed her making her blush.😳😳

Ra: (sitting in his place) aree nupur kahan reh gaye nashta nahin karma usne.

Nu: aagayi papa good morning mom-dad.

Mu,Ra:good morning.😊

Mu:accha chal ab jaldi nashta karle college bhi jaana hai na.

Nu: hmm

Ra:waise itni subah subah kahan chali gayi thi tu.

Nu:kuch nahi papa bas BBcourt mein gayi thi.

Mu,Ra:BB court kyun.😉

Nu:(muterring to herself)shit shanty se baith nahi sakti na ab kya bolon'. Umm who gunjan ne bulaya tha so gayi thi.

RA,Mu:(Smiling) oh toh gunjan ne bolaya tha chal koi gal nahi nasta karle.😉

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Mallik house

Mayu had come when no one was in the hall so he straight away went to have his bath.

On dinning table

Ar:wow basket kya khana banati ho toh bilkul tumhari tarah tasty.

Ri:bahut hogaya armaan romance chodo aur khane ki socho bache aate hi honge.😊

Gu,Sa:nahi nahi aap continue kijiye hum thodi der bad aajaye ge.😊

Armaan riddhima blushed at this😳😳.

Ri:arre bachho chodo nashta karo.

Gu,Sa sat on the table

Ar:arre wah aaj aaj meri princess bahut pyaari lag rahi hai.😊

Sa:usme kaunsi nai baat hai uncle chashmish toh roj hi beautifukl lagti hai.😉

Gu coughed shocked😲😲 to hear sammy saying so loudly and to infront of her parents😆😆.

Gu:uuh ...thanks papa.(and hit sammy's leg under the table.)😆

Ri:bhai hume to koi itne pyaare compliments nahi deta😉.

Sa:aree massi chashmish toh sirf beautiful lagti par aap toh usse bhi jayda pyaari dhikti hain.😊

RI:thanks sammy, main to bas yunhi keh rahi the waise compliment mujhe tumhare uncle de chuke.😊

Ar:hmmmm.😃

Ma:Aree sab yahan baithe baatein kar rahe hai aur who bhi mere bina.(saying so he sat beside gunjan)

Gu;(whispering to mayu) ab aap kissi se itne der bahar baatein kar sakte to kya hum ghar mein baat nahi ka sakete.😆😆

All this was seen and heard by armaan n riddhima

Ma:gives him a deadly look and says sis tum...

But is cut of bye armaan

Ar:aree mayu tum to sammy ko lene gaye the who to aagya tha to tum kahan reh gaye the itne der tak.😉

Ma:um papa who bas BB court mein baitha ...

G:nupur ke saath romance kar raha tha.😆

Everyone looks towards gunjan

Sa:um,mmm who gunjan keh rahi thi ki ... haan who bhabhi aagayi thi na court mein toh unhi se baat kar raha tha mayu.😊

Ri:bhabhi...😉

Gu:mom aap ko to pata hai sammy kuch bhi bolta woh nupur milithi bahi ko hain na (looking towards mayu and asking him)😆😆

Ma: umm haan haan eoh pagali milgayi thi ussi se baatein kar raha tha.😆😆

RI,Ar :its ok mayu hum samjhte hain afterall she's ur friend.😉

Like this they enjoy their breakfast.

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Dinning table

An:offo yeh atul bhi na usse kaha tha maine jaldi aane pata nahi kahan reh gaya.😆

Kr:kya hua mom?😊

An:are krips jara jake tumhare papa ko bula lao bahar hain nahi toh aaj late hojayeinge.

Kr:ok abhi bulati hoon.

She goes out and sees her father still talking to plants.😆

Kr: hey papa kya chal raha hai.

At:are kripa tum aagayi bas main toh pinky se baate kar raha tha.😊

Kr:oh hey pinky she's so sweet.kaisi hai yeh?😊

At:who theek par tum yahan kyun aayi thi.😊

Kr:aree hain papa jaldi andar chalo warna mumma apko nahi chod ne waali.

At:aree hain hain chalo nahi anjali mujhe maar daalegi.😆😆😆

Saying so they go inside and Have their breakfast.

NOTE:GUYS AB MAINE BAKI KI FAMILY KI INRO DE DI MODI HOUSE KI AGLE PART MEIN DONGI LEKIN TABHI TAK TUMLOG CONTINUE KARO.

AUR NAAM KE BAARE MEIN SOCHO EK HI MILA "DIL SE DIL KA KONNECTION".

LOVE U GUYS,

SAMMY/RIDZ


Edited by Sambhenwal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

thats so chweet !!!

loved that Rahul-muskaan as nupur's parents !!!...it was so chweet !
jst loved it , JUST AWESOME !!!!
thanx for the pm ...i am enjoying ur FF
love
ruchi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

thats so chweet !!!

loved that Rahul-muskaan as nupur's parents !!!...it was so chweet !
jst loved it , JUST AWESOME !!!!
thanx for the pm ...i am enjoying ur FF
love
ruchi


thanks for comment ruchi par aap sab ko bhi continue karna hoga😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey
lovely prt.
nice name for ff.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Heya ..
firstly thanx for PMing me nd really sorry for a late reply..

the FF seems really interesting..
I must say you've chosen all the characters pretty well..
I mean Like Mayan nd Gunjan ie, the quiet yetmischievious kinds as AR's kids..
Nupur, the chatterbox as Muskaan's daughter..
while Sammy remains the cool dude..
Kripa is sweet like Atul nd Itellegent like Anjie..
Angad is handsome like his father nd stubborn at times like Nikki..

superb chioce for the name aswell..
I like the name you've chosen for ur FF..
hope you continue sometime soon as the Intro seemed really good..
I never knew u're such a good writer..

Rucha

Posted: 16 years ago
#40
amazing part!! and i have another title suggestion.. Immensly in love.. i knw .. not that good but jus a suggestion.. but awesome part.. i m busy but ill try to cont some other time..

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