If it was meant to be-(Update 2/10/10pg107) - Page 70

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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update neha plz next part mayur thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow

this part was fantastic

i loved it a lot

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow update soon neha and pm me too plzzzzzzzz
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
totally wow part
i really loved it so much Neha
just beautiful n awesome
cud the story get any more better
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for that cute and nice part, thanks for pm me,.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Please update next part soon.Can't wait to see sajan's engagement..please ASAP...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you for the lovely comments- As always let me tell you both SAjan and Mayur are equally important part of the stories- so fear not- if there will be sajan parts-mayur parts will soon follow!

If it was meant to be

Chapter 21

This was supposed to feel good-Right?!


"Diya you are not speaking at all"Annie whined behind me.I was sitting in front of my dresser putting finishing touches on my make up.Annie pouted.

"Diya it is not everyday that you go out on date-What happened at the date?Where did RV take you?"

I smiled at her throwing the brush into the basket of toiletries.
"It was amazing.I never knew people could be so attentive.He picked me up at sharp 8 in a black limo- We drove down to the Bon Petit and had a great dinner-He is goodlooking,rich and extremely cool."

Annie clapped excitedly
"Wow Diya that is amazing.This is even better than Sammy- I mean he is a prince - royalty- You know..."

I smirked.
"Ofcourse he is better than Sammy"That was the whole point- I wanted to show everyone that I could and would snatch someone better than Sammy.

"He is not only royalty- he treats me like a princess."I said remembering the way he showered me with showers last night.

"Anyone would treat you like a princess Diya"said a small voice from the doorway.

We both looked up.Nupur was standing at the doorway smiling hesitatingly.I felt a rush of affection- as it was customary since childhood her confusion always made me protective- but then came the greater rush of anger and I looked away,
"What do you want Nupur?"I said.

She entered the room and placed something on my bed.

"We are all wearing Jaipuri chunris for the mehendi and Ma just send you yours.Its dark blue- I know you like that color."she continued.

I stared at her,her smile and her affectionate tone.My best friend-was I right in spurning her?

Yes the voice inside me answered.I merely nodded.

"Tell her thanks."I said turning away.

She moved forward-
"Try it out-Lets see how it goes with your skin"

I stepped back
"No..Thanks Nupur.I am sure it will be fine."

"Diya dont be so formal- I mean we have other blues by god-so if you want another one-"she moved closer and placed it on my shoulder.The chunri was nice- It went well with my skin.

I did not say anything.Nupur did.
"By god Diya it looks splendid."

She tucked one strand of my hair back and gave me a gleeful smile.I dont know what made me do it-maybe it was the gesture which showed how much we had shared and now that came to nothing - when she obviously cared about Gunjan more than me-
I pushed her away roughly.

"Thats enough Nupur- "

"Diya I was just-"

I flipped the chunri off my body and threw it to the floor.
"You want me to have this freakingly thing-I take it-Now leave."

She looked at me bewildered and confused.

"Leave Nupur."

With a nod she turned away,her body shaking with suppressed sobs- I could hear her running down the stairs.

"God she is so freaky-"Annie said from the bed.

"SHUT UP Annie."I shouted,slamming the door of the washroom.

I sat down on the floor and sobbed my heart out.

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part !! It was touching!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww..that was such a sad part..

Nupur might be heartbroken!!!

It hurts when best friends do this to you..

Continue soon..=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey neha......long tym i havent commented on the SF lol.....sorry for that.....i was busy with my 12th as u already knoe:)

coming to this part....i always loved the dia nupur rapport....the slight protectiveness on dia's part........and nupur's affection for her!! this part was very touching....im hoping for a MN part next!
oh and let me tell you....i LOVE sujoy and dia........do write their parts too:)

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