If it was meant to be-(Update 2/10/10pg107)

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hasiii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

I loved it sooooooooooooooo much. plz pm me when you update.

Hasi

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Anjali-K

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

Amazing Part! 👏

The sister talk was really sweet, especially how Nuur reassured Gunan.

And then the Mayank Nupur part, it was just beautiful,👏👏 eventhough he didn't say anything, it felt like the moment had said everything.

And then how he said "I am not the kind of guy who peeps into girls at night.I was just'watching you" that was really touching, the last line as well "The music that filled the garden was unlike I ever played.I was serenadng her innocence" also very beautiful.😳

Really wonderful update.👏😳 Please..... update asap, and PM me when you do.

Anjali 😊

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Isha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

love your ff...read it all at one go......plz pm me from the next part

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jeni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

wow thats really awesome neha.....great writter

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Preethi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

nice part dear.. please pm me when you update...

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Kanika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

awesum... amazing part!!!

dont hav words to describe ur writing style!!

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

The music that filled the garden was unlike I ever played.I was serenadng her innocence.

I love this line. It's the most beautiful thing I have ever read in a long time.

Love,
Radz

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x.Heena.x

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

heyy...just caught up with the last few parts....that last mayur part was my fav too....dont have words to expain...but it was fantastic...well written....

when u continuing??? please do soon....its v interesting...too interesting in fact

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

awesome part yaar

update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Neha_S

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

Thanks for all the lovely comments...I simply love visiting this thread and reading the comments.And a heartfelt sorry for the delay in updating.

Part 10

I cant believe I am actually doing this.Why couldn't you refuse Dad?"Samrat grumbled smacking his hand luggage roughly on the chair.

Standing in the airport waiting to borad the plane made him realise that he was going ..actually going away from Mumbai.

Benji grinned at him.
"Why didn't you say no to your father?"

Samrat glared at his best friend.
"You know I cant say no to him."

Taking on a smug look Benji sipped his coffee.

"You cant say no to Mr.Mehra when he is your father and you expect me to refuse him when he is my employer?"

Samrat nodded feeling the truth of the statement.Dad would have eaten Benji alive.Benji smiled and continued.
"And I don't know what is wrong with Ooty.Its cool and romantic.I think we would find it a welcome change from the heat of Mumbai."

Samrat stared at his best friend as though he had lost his mind.Didn't he realise that he was going away from Mumbai-the place where he met her.
"I cant look for her in Ooty."

Benji sighed dramatically.It was a long sufferring sigh.
"Its about Cinderella again.Oh the pain of louve………."

Samrat clenched his teeth feeling irrationally angry.He had no justification in becoming angry with Benji.Living with Samrat had become a nightmare.Benji had all the reasons to be annoyed.Samrat had spent the last few weeks moaning over her and seeking her everywhere.

Samrat wasn't stupid.He didn't believe in love first sight and all that crap.They were fantasies-commercial ways of makings movies click or books sell.He knew that.So what he was feeling wasn't love.But what was it?

He couldn't make sense of it.It was as if the girl from the party was haunting him.He only had to close his eys to see her.Her voice echoed in his ears and worse his eyes played sport on him.
The airport personell had the same shade of brown hair as her.The woman reading the book in the adjacent chair had same prominent cheek as her..

Stop!Stop!
Stop before you go crazy Samrat!

"Hey Gunjan."Benji called suddenly.
Samrat turned slightly and gave her a polite nod.The poor girl had been working all day running through immigration.

"I have your boarding passes."she said softly.
Samrat froze.The voice was familiar… too familiar.His heartbeat accelerated and he whirled around startling both Benji and Gunjan.He stared at her and she flushed red.The feeling of dj vu intensified.
She turned away hiding her face,clearly frightened.

"What did you say?"he demanded.
"Boarding pass."she squeaked.

He stared at her back.
"Say that again."

There was a pause.
"Dude…"Benji began slowly
He glanced at his friend.Benji looked as if he was scared that Samrat was losing his mind.
"All passengers travelling to Ooty by….."

"That's our announcement."Benji sad to Gunjan.She nodded and walked away.
Samrat picked up his bag and followed her.
"You okay dude.?"Benji asked.
'She sounds exactly like her..like Cinderella."Samrat said excitedly.

Benji groaned.Then he stared.
"You think Chashmish is Cinderella.??"

Samrat backtracked quickly.
"No but she sounds like her.."

"Yes!Samrat and my mother has eyes the exact shade of brown as Cinderella.Dude I think you are getting obsessed with this girl and that is why every girl reminds you of her."

He nodded seriously and entered the designated gate making Samrat feel extremely stupid and annoyed.

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