Sajan (Raj-Naina) - Part 7A on Pg 24 - 09/08/09

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
Heyo!
Gr8 ud....u hav collected d characters very well...gud job..cont d gud work!

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Sur... thanks a million.

Long as you know how to portray the characters it isn't a problem...

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

{Thanks to each and every readers who left behind awesome replies for me. I enjoyed reading each and every one of them}.

Part 7A ~ Emotional day at KMA

Rajveer silently admires friendly conversation going on between Sunaina and his cadets.

Naina notice Rajveer leaving with a smile on his face.

Naina excused herself from Samrat and Uday.

Naina enters their quarters...

Naina: Sorry about the emotional scene created today in the mess!

Rajveer: No need to be sorry, but I am (Naina interrupts him)

Naina: Don't need to worry from my behalf that our marriage raaz won't be leaked to anyone even though I'm breaking the law of friendship - we created in Excel times.

Rajveer feels disappointed...

Naina: There's no need to be disappointed. Anyways still you hav to show me around KMA and then you are having dinner with me.

Rajveer: Are you asking me out on a date?

Naina: Maybe I am asking my dear fake husband out on a date...

Both of them burst out laughing....

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Rajveer started by showing general and basic area inside KMA.

Rajveer: This is BC's office in front of you.

Continue walking toward five empty classrooms.

Rajveer: First classroom is taught by Capt. Rahul - second one is taught by me and third on by Major Nair - fourth one by Capt. Chauchan and fifth one use to be taught by Capt. Na (Shalini interrupts Rajveer)

Shalini: Raj enough of showing your life - I mean your wife around and lets have dinner at the mess like old times.

Rajveer agrees with Shalini and leads them toward the mess where Rahul is waiting for them at a table. Shalini and Naina sit down on the table while Rahul and Rajveer goes to bring their dinner.

Shalini: So far how was your day in KMA?

Naina: Awesome!

Shalini: Aren't you proud to be Capt. Rajveer's wife?

Naina: Should I?

Shalini looked confused by Naina's reply....

Naina: I am happy to be Rajveer's wife.

Shalini smiled...

Rajveer and Rahul return to their table with two plates in each hands. Naina takes her plate from Rajveer, but makes weird expression.

Samrat pass by Naina's table with Arman and Prem. Samrat stops by and says "Bebo meet Armaan my cousin".

Naina stares at Armaan for few seconds than says "nice to meet you".

Armaan: Same here...

Afterward they leave toward their table where Uday, Huda, Yudi, Aalekh, and Pooja wait for them to have dinner.

***

(After Samrat's arrival in the mess - Naina and him will do some lip reading and lip talking while sitting far away from each other)

Naina watch Rajveer talk with Rahul and Shalini while they ate. After some time she looks at her food than Samrat across the room.

Samrat: Why aren't you eating?

Naina looks at Samrat: You know I can't stand spinach with potatoes.

Samrat looks at Naina: Why don't you let your hubby know?

Rajveer notice Sunaina hasn't touched her plate and asks "why haven't you touched your food? Sunaina"

Naina continues looking at Samrat: I can't...

Rajveer taps Naina

Naina: Huh!

Rahul and Shalini stares at Naina...

Rajveer looked confused...

Naina looked double shock and confused like she was caught cheating in a exam.

Naina: Did you ask me something?

Rajveer: I asked you... why haven't you ate your meal?

Naina doesn't have a answer for Rajveer's question but stares at her plate then Rajveer.

Shalini: Don't tell me you are also dislike spinach with potatoes like my niece?

Naina nods her head.

Rajveer talks to himself inside his mind: Got to know Sunaina before someone catches our lies.

Naina felt guilty entire throughout dinner. Shalini notice a frown on Rajveer's face.

***

Suddenly Samrat comes with a cheerful smile and says "excuse me sir".

Both Rajveer and Rahul look at Samrat...

Rahul: Yes Cadet...

Samrat: Rajveer Sir, can I barrow your wife for few minutes?

Rajveer: Why?

Samrat: Just for few second...

Naina: Samrat!

Rajveer looks at Samrat then nods his head....

Naina stands up and faces Samrat...

Naina: Sammy, can we chat tomorrow because I am so sleepy at the moment of excited day in meeting some of my best friends?

Samrat in deep thought...

Samrat: Please Bebo (makes the cute puppy eyes)

Naina: Not today

Suddenly Samrat's hidden cell phone rings at a wrong time.

Major Nair comes in front of Samrat...

Samrat stares at Naina for help like old days.

Major Nair: What excuse are you going to make cadet?

***

Friends I am sleepy at the moment so I'll post 7B soon - whenever I get time, but for now enjoy this part.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

Interesting part. Raj must knw Naina better otherwise they will be caught. Anyways, pls continue soon n thnx 4 the PM.

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj was admiring the friendly conversation going on between Sunaina and his cadets!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina assured him that their marriage secret won't be leaked out!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Naina asked Raj out on a date!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was more like ordered him like a wife!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj showed Naina around KMA!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why did Naina stare at Armaan before saying hello??😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj has got spinach and potatoes for Naina which she does not like!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Raj and Naina will have to know more about each other and about their likes and dislikes otherwise they would be caught!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj has realised this!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina is giving more importance to Sammy whereas she must be giving it to Raj!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj doesn't know anything about Naina and Sammy and this can create trouble for them!!!!

Sammy wants to talk to Naina but she said she is feeling sleepy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nair has caught Sammy!!!! Dekhte hai Sammy kaise bachta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

Lovely, wonderful update👏.

Waiting for next part😃😳😆.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

Nice part

Raj and Naina will have to know more about each other...about their likes and dislikes, otherwise they would get caught...

Raj has realised this...waiting to know what happens next

continue soon

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

that was nice

plz continue soon

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was nice
plz continue soon

Thank you and 7B will posted soon...

Mickey P

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

Hey i just read the part 6, sorry 4 being late dear.
Update was nice and really loved that. 👏 👏 👏
Last time i said i am confused after reading the update that means there are so many characters in this fic so i got pissed off b/w them. Sammy, Uday n whole Excel Group including the main story people RN n Rahul too 😕 😕 😕. This is really a big group.
Naina cried n let her pain out in Sammy's embrace now she would be happy that his good friend is here too with her.😊 😊 😊 Raj was shocked so she introduced him with her group 😉 😉 😉. Sammy has lost Gunjan's friendship, but how? 😕 😕 😕
I liked the convo of Uday n Raj n Alekh did a right thing by telling Raj about Mayank. 😃 😃 😃

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago