Sajan (Raj-Naina) - Part 7A on Pg 24 - 09/08/09

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
Hi dear u write really well nd dis is for all d parts u hav written...u r just gr8..plz cont soon i m waitingggggggggggg

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Miketa H Patel

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#142

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Oh another part is updated.....donno y I never notice. Anyways, it was gr8 n interesting wid the entry of many characters. Pls continue soon.

Thank you... and now the story is slowly developing after the characters are slowly introduce...

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Miketa H Patel

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Originally posted by: Dhara_s
pls update..!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

God answered your prayers....

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So when r u updating....????

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Miketa H Patel

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#145

After what happened few days ago between Tina and Pia matter with my ex-user ID so I changed it too Pyaar-Ki-Chahat.... anyways sorry for the delay of posting this part because I was busy with Krishna-Bday than Radhaa's B-day in my temple so I finally got a chance today so enjoy....

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Part 6 ~ Friends Reunion

Samrat: Bebo...

Naina ran into Samrat's arms...

Rajveer shocked...

Naina mumbles: Sammy, I missed you so much... In fact the entire gang of ours.

Samrat: Yep... me too! Anyways Bebo go and meet someone special to you and our friendship.

Confused Naina...

Naina: Who?

Samrat: The person who told me Bebo is here...

Samrat points at Uday who was standing beside Huda and Yudi while controlling his tears of happiness and excitement....

Naina smiled!

Naina: Uday Bhaiyya!

Naina runs into his arms, but Uday says "Bebo, why does everyone likes calling me Uday Bhaiyya? Uday sounds way better!"

Naina controlled her tears of happiness by biting her lower lip... after turning away from Uday.

Samrat tries reading Naina's eyes like always...

Naina: Sometimes our names don't matter like our identities because we love you for who you are not name itself.

Samrat realizes he needs to change the atmosphere...

oh dil se dil ka rishta juda
pal do pal mein mitta nahi
bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi

Naina stares at Samrat who is playing his guitar and singing at the same time which shocked Naina the most...

Samrat: tere dil ka mere dil se
rishta purana hain
in aankho se har aansu
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain
tere dil ka mere dil se
rishta purana hain

Samrat place his arm on Naina's shoulder and old memories a waken in those three Samrat, Naina and Uday.

Samrat: teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun
main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam
dard baat lenge ham sun

tears escape from Naina's eyes...

Samrat: in palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain
tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain

Uday hugs Naina to comfort her...

Samrat: kaise main batau yeh tera is tarah rona
dekha nahi jaata hain sun

Samrat place his hand on Uday's shoulder... Naina and Uday break apart and Naina turns away from Samrat to wipe her tears, but Samrat is Samrat who can not see Naina or Gunjan in tears.

Samrat: shaam jab dhalti hain subah muskurati hain
khushbuye lutati hain sun

Naina notice the pain in Samrat's voice by reading his eyes like always or lip reading (they hardly use only during exam times or mini quiz which both of them hate the most during there college time). Naina gives a mini smile to Uday and Samrat, but mostly Samrat.

Samrat open his arms for Naina...

Samrat: udaasi ke lamho mein hamein muskurana hain

Naina runs into Samrat's arm with non-stop tears....

Samrat: tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain
in aankho se har aansu

Uday also joins Naina and Samrat in the hug...

Samrat: mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain

Rajveer is still in deep shock and now double shock after hearing the song his cadet sang.... Also the entire academy is shock by Samrat's song and the connection Uday, Samrat and Naina share together...

Uday: Why is everyone starring at us?

Naina realizes where she is and not at Excel college - she looks at Rajveer who's face is full of question regarding what was going on between her and her friends.

Naina: Because we aren't at Excel anymore so no more masti (Samrat interrupts)

Samrat: Who said we can not do masti? Come' on guys... it's our reunion! After five years we are together (Naina interrupts Samrat)

Naina: Samrat control! It's not Excel and I've heard from someone that this place is full of discipline (Samrat interrupts Naina)

Samrat: True! Discipline is discipline, but are you going to stay here with us and who did you know we were here?

Naina: Samrat, will you let me explain before you attack me with your questions at the moment and yes I am going to stay here with someone because he's the one who brought me here.

Samrat: Who?

Naina: Follow me!

Both Uday and Samrat follow Naina and she stops right in front of Rajveer who is still recovering from his shock he received while ago.

Samrat whisper into Naina's ear: Why have we stopped in front of Rajveer Sir?

Naina: My dear husband meet Samrat champion of Basketball and the cool dude of Excel (Samrat interrupts Naina)...

Samrat: Use to be champion in basketball - but not anymore without someone's friendship.

Samrat leaves...

Naina looks at her Uday Bhaiyya...

Uday: Everything changed after Sheena's arrival and after you left Bebo.

Naina excused herself and leaves to look for Samrat.

Uday stares at Rajveer and then he says "how do you know Bebo and when did you guys get married? Bebo would have informed us? Anyways what do we call you Sir or Jiju? he sounded so confusingly itself while he spoke.

Rajveer smiled...

Raj: Whatever your heart says, but not inside the classroom.

Uday: Alright Sir

Uday leaves confusingly...

Rajveer looked at Aalekh who said "Sir before you get more confused or shock apun isn't the person she thinks I am" Rajveer get more confused while he is trying to understand everything going around him.

Raj: What do you mean Cadet?

Aalekh: She is unaware of the fact that I am not the person she is talking about, but she is talking about apun ka judwa Bhai who is a book-worm named Mayank.. not me.

Aalekh leaves too...

Rajveer smiles and Rahul burst out laughing so hard...

Rajveer: Now what is wrong with you?

Rahul: You should have seen your face a minute ago.

Rajveer: Why?

Rahul: Never mind! Let's have a cup of coffee and catch up on good-old-memories.

Rajveer smiled along, but his smile is full of worries of true coming out in open air about him and Sunaina's fake marriage.

Naina finds Samrat sitting on the stairs alone looking at the flame bowl.

Naina: What are you thinking? Sammy

Samrat looks at Naina who sits beside him...

Samrat: Nothing Bebo

Naina takes a deep breathe...

Naina: Sammy, I know you like a open-book like Gunjan so what is troubling you?

Samrat burst-out into tears in Naina's arm...

Samrat: I miss Chashmes (Gunjan) and her friendship. Also Gunjan's smile means everything to me, but because of me her smile is gone.

Naina: Then win back your friendship by bringing a smile back on Gunjan's face. My Sammy never give up on his friends...

Samrat hugs Naina tightly...

Naina lets him cry...

"What about me?" Uday asked from behind!

Naina opens her arms...

Uday joins them...

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

So when r u updating....????

Just finished writing and already posted the part...

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Nice...!!! 👏
But it is always very confusing for me when there are sooo many characters...!!! 😕
SO pls update frequently...!!!😃

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Nice...!!! 👏
But it is always very confusing for me when there are sooo many characters...!!! 😕
SO pls update frequently...!!!😃

I'll try my best in updating frequently,,,, And sorry about the confusion, but please bare with me and I'll try not to have too many characters added and if I do I'll explain them too you in detail first...

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#149

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ran into Samrat's arms and said she missed him so much!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Raj is shocked to see this!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Sammy pointed out Uday to her and Naina was so happy to see him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

So Uday does not like being called Uday Bhaiya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina said sometimes names don't matter because we love you for who you are not the name itself!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Was she thinking about herself when she said that??🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Samrat starts singing and playing his guitar to change the atmosphere!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The bonding between Naina and her friends is very sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is surprised to see the reunion of Naina and her friends!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

This is very confusing for Raj as he still does not know Sunaina very well!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina realizes that they are not at Excel College but in KMA!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina introduced Samrat to her husband Rajveer!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Uday is confused about what to call Raj Sir or Jiju and Raj smiled and said whatever his heart says!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh told Raj that he isn't what Naina thought he was and she is talking about his twin Mayank!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Rahul is laughing at Raj's face!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj on the other hand is worried about the truth coming out in the open bout his and Sunaina's fake marriage!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Samrat is crying as he misses Gunjan and her frienship!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina tells him to win back his friendship!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The three of them joined each other in a hug!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗How sweet!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waiting to see if Naina will tell Sammy the truth about her marriage of not!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#150

Hmm....its nice. But its highly confusing for Raj. Interesting cast assemble. Pls continue soon.

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