Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: manatated

hey dhara....i know even me not happy wid NAina gettin engaged 2 sum1 else.....but c dis is fic and me writer...to sab kuch thik kardungi....😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Good yaar, 👏 👏 👏
i just read the part two n this was brilliant.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Y did Naina get posted on KMA again?😲 😲 😲 Again for the safety of triggers. Naina's mom's n dad's worries are genuine because already last two times something wrong had happened to their dear ones 😭 😭 😭 so now Naina is going to do the duty so how could they allow Naina to work on Naveen's case again? 😕 😕 😕
She has already promised Rajveer that she would bring his honor back to him so i believe she would do it;😊 😊 😊 neways update soon n i have a complain that u didn't inform me whenever u update , so pls next time do it.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
Part was really awesome.
Mujhe lag raha hai na ki tum ne jaan moojh k nahi bataya mujhe k ud kiya hai. Chalo khair maaf kiya vaise bhi RN k liye anything.

Alekh was there to recieve Naina n she is happy that he his best friend Alekh is there to support her n Huda gave her a pleasent surprise. I liked the logic Huda gave for getting his posting in KMA. As usual us ki flirt karne ki aadat na to gayi hai na kabhi jaayegi.
BC ko koi khushi nahi hue i think apne old cadets ko yahan dekh k, i think un k back record ki vajah se as MN said.but now they r here so they will surely make any plan for MN. Naina is recalling her first meet with Rajveer in front of hall of fame.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
ONe thing i would like to say that Hussain looks old as compared to Naina so may be u can choose anyone else.
Coming to the ud,
I liked this one n would like to have our Raj back in Naina's life asap . Now pls don't let Naina wait more n more because i know she can't wait for so long.😭 😭 😭 Her parents made her agree to marry with Rahul but how can she marry with someone else?😡 😡 😡
Their emotional atyaachaar made her week n she had to take the decision this time.😭 😭 😭 Rahul called Raj's watch old!😲 😲 😲 how can he do like this?😡 😡 😡 But i know there wasn't his mistake he didn't know about it.😕 😕 😕
As far as the juta chappal comes i think there is no need for that because all parents will do the same.
😊 😊 😊
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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry yaar, now i days i come to forum less so i didn't get enough time to read it n reply on it, so will read a few more parts soon i will reply soon.😛
Just now i read the one more part of u r fic n this was good but more than that suspicious that y did Naina get posted in KMA again.
😕

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Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
Thnx Sania...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: rituka7

superb
awesome
too good
update soon

Thnx rituka...yeah will update soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was good

feel bad for Naina
plz continue soon

thnx a ton....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

very good story,I read all the parts and they are simply awesome.

U r great writer.Ur story is just wonderful.
par ek request hain tujhse , pls raj ko wapas le aa aur naina ko mila de usse.
Keep it up.

thanks a lot dear....😊
well raj ke baare mein toh main bus itna keh sakti hoon...
aayega...aayega...aayega... aayega aanewaala...aayega...😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

It was really nice. She was imagining Raj saying Fresher. That was so touching. And the others wer also feeling bad as they remembered the actual Most Wonderful n Frndly teacher. These points wer really sad. Thanks...

And then Naina's parents want her to marry any1 ELSE?????? Gosh....I wonder ye heart attack kyun ata hai???? Aur Rahul ne aise kaise Raj k watch ko purana kaha?????? Mujhe itna gussa aya....but then wo aisa koi khaas to nahi hai na jo uski baaton ka bura lage. Uske kehne se hi Raj ka watch purana thodi ho jayega??? Its evergreen coz HE is evergreen.

Rahul don't know anything abt Raj....thats why he said so... parr phi...apne Raj ki watch ko aise kaise bol sakta hai???😊

And the last line was so beautiful that if she is not able to replace Raj's watch then how can she replace RAJ???? Very emotional!!!!

U r really gud wid emotions so u deserve praises.THanks a ton... It was genuinely beautiful. Pls continue soon. yeah....will update soon...

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