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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Hmm....Not too happy with the new entry and his words but happy with Naina's reaction...!!!

hey dhara....i know even me not happy wid NAina gettin engaged 2 sum1 else.....but c dis is fic and me writer...to sab kuch thik kardungi.... 😃

Edited by manatated - 16 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: hinal60
yeah waakai mein saad Update tha
i hope next UD mein kuch exciting sa mile

and yah please please please naina ki shaadi us rahul se mat karana aur raj ki entry to ab karni hi hogi.

I know hinal...sorry

exciting...in nxt update??? yaar mujhe toh ab kuch parts post karnese darr lag raha hai...😆

Naina ki shaadi aur Rahul se?? mujhe zinda rehna hai...plz 😆... agar maine Rahul aur naina ki shaadi karadi toh sablog mujhe comment aur pm se maar denge...aur mera marne ka koi iraada nahi hai....and most important, i cnt imagine Naina wid any1 else....RN rocks!

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Thanku

Naina is indeed Raj's protegee!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊She has accepted to fulfil her duties and went back to KMA!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina does not have anything to lose as destiny had ripped her of the most important person!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She is thankful that Aalekh is posted with her!!!!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊this is only good thing....

Aalekh ko pata hai Naina ki haalat and Naina hugged him and started crying!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Alekh is like a brother to her and she can't hold in front of him...

Aalekh ne kaha usse yeh karna hi hoga and assured her ke woh hamesha Naina ke saath hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊hez a true friend and a brother...

Huda toh Huda hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆Woh kabhi nahi badal sakta!!!!!!Nautanki kahi ka!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣he'll bring cheer to her life...

It felt like the old days to hear them plan how they could create trouble for Nair!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope they can bring some happiness back into Naina's life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

All the memories came flashing back to them while they were walking through the academy grounds which were connected in some way or the other to their Rajveer Sir!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

I hope Raj jaldi wapas aa jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aayega...aayega...

It seems like BC is not too happy with the three of them being posted there but does not say much!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔BC consider them as ones helping a murderer(Rajveer) to escape....

Nair aake phir se bakwaas karne laga!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I hate that bloody Mucchad but then again who doesn't!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Kutte ki doom,tedhi hi rahegi naa...

Why can't someone just murder him??🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢how abt u??😆

Naina ne accha jawab diya usse!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Uska bharosa Navin aur Rajveer par hamesha tha, hai aur rahega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼kahi dagmaga ne laga toh hum hai naa!

It took Aalekh hell of a self control not to utter BC!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆aree yaar Rajveer bhi control nahi kar paata tha,phir yeh to apna aalekh hai...!😆

Huda is right that even a bhais has enough brains to chuck Nair out of a tabela!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Then how come that bald head BC doesn't??😕 😕 😕 😕

I loved Aalekh's line ke kaha se aayega saale ke dimag mein gobar jo bhara hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina got emotional on seeing the Wall of Fame!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Both Aalekh and huda leave her alone on her request!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina stood there crying there!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh kaun hai jisne Raj ka dialogue bola??😕 😕 😕 😕I am sure Naina is imagining it!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔lets see...

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Some of you are unable to open pg.10...so pstn this on pg.11 again.

Hey friends presenting part four.....As per Priya's accusation i post very small updates....Aapka 'ilzaam' sar aankhopar😆 (sorry...has to modulate 'hukum' for 'ilzaam'😆😆) Neways....this is loooooooong update....so priya,happy now?? But i'm dead sure after reading this not only you but all of the readers will give me loads of gaaliyaan😆😆....

Jabtak main apne aapko joote-chappal khaane ke liye prepare karti hoon, aap log update padhiye

Part Four:

She stood there....in front of hall of fame....staring at it.

Shedding silent tears ......when suddenly......

"FRESHER?????"

Naina stood dead in her tracks.

She knew this voice.Yes,she knew it.

How she longed to hear it.Is it a dream or reality?

No,its real! She knew it....

"I knew it.You can never leave me alone sir!"

Naina was smiling through tears as she was reminded of similar incident on her first day of academy.

"FRESHER???"

"Yes sir.."

"Name?"

"Cadet Naina Ah..m.. Singh"

"Toh cadet Naina Ah' Singh !......."

Her smile broadened at the memory of "Cadet Naina Ah' Singh".

She slowly turned.

There he was....

With his cutest smile ever....glint in his eyes....

Tears started flowing through Naina's eyes.....

"Tum aaye toh hawaaon mein ek nasha hai...

Tum aaye toh fizaoon mein rang sa hai...

Yeh rang saaare hai bas tumhare...

aur kya?"

She felt someone's hand at her shoulder.She turned to find Aalekh.

"Kya dekh reli hai?"

"Alekh....Sssir..."

She turned to show him......

But....there was no one.....There was NO ONE.....

"Sambhal apne aap ko Naina...",Alekh said with a heavy voice.

"Hmmm..."

Days passed by.She pretended to adjust to the routine.Pretended to be happy.

She was acknowledged by cadets.She was Cadet's favourite...they all were....Yet she was unhappy....everyone knew that;her pretence not that strong ,yet very few knew the reason.

All three of them were adored by cadets.

Cadets called them most wonderful and friendly teachers ever......at which they used to laugh sadly....cause only they knew,most wonderful and friendly teacher was lost.

On the other hand they were progressing in their mission.Life seemed to be back on track for Naina when a boulder hit her again!

She was called by her parents and was asked to reach Nainitaal as soon as possible.

All throughout journey She dreaded the situation there. She dint know why,but she was restless today.She dreaded something worst to happen.....

And when she reached there....what her parents asked her to do was indeed worst nightmare of her life....

They asked her to marry!! She denied outright. They forced her, pleaded, coaxed, threatened her....but she won't budge.

They asked her to atleast meet Captain Rahul Kapoor,whom they chose for her.

She reasoned,there is no point of meeting him when she was not going to marry anyone else....the last word she thought in mind.

"Naina.... tu kabtak aisi hi rahegi? Hamari umar ho chali hai.....Hamara kya bharosa ? Hamare baad tumhara dhyan kaun rakhega ?", Her father raised voice.

"Baba main khud apna dhyan rakh sakhti hoon...."

"Naina...." , Baba shouted.

" Main yeh shaadi nahi karungi. hargiz nahi !" , she also raised her voice.

"NAINA !!!", her baba shouted while he placed his one hand on his chest above heart.....

Her father suffered from Heart attack.Life left her no choice.

Again she was a pawn of FATE'S CRUEL GAME!

Her father threatened her to not to tell Rahul anything about Capt.Rajveer or else he won't take medicines....

She met him in a cafetaria.

{RAHUL KAPOOR - Captain in Indian Army. Good looking,dashing,Fun loving guy.Good at heart, full of life. His friends acknowledge him as the Best friend can ever be.Likes to spread happiness wherever he goes.

played by Hussain}

After inital hellos, She asked Rahul ,

"Why you want to marry me? You don't know anything about my past..."

He simply smiled.

"I'm more interested to be your present and future."

He had liked her the moment he saw her.

In the eveninig Rahul came to meet her father. After checking on his health, when he was leaving, Naina's mom asked her to see him off.

She went.

While leaving he said,

"Naina jee..."

"Please...you can call me Naina."

He smiled.

"Naina, this is for you."

He took out a neatly wrapped gift box.

"Iski kya jaroorat..."

"Aap khol ke nahi dekhegi?"

She opened it to find an exquisite watch. She looked up in surprise.

"Aap ki watch kaafi purani lagi..",he said pointing to Rajveer's watch which adorned her hand, " toh mujhe laga aapko yeh pasand aajaye."

She didn't reply. She was not in a state to.

She just wave him goodbye and ran to her room.

She didn't even stop when her parents called her.

She shut the door behind her and slowly slid down with her back at the door.

She cried bitterly..... She looked at the gift beside her.Rahul's words echoed...

"Aapki watch kaafi puraani lagi..."

Her fingers crushed the wrapper.

"Aapki watch kaafi puraani lagi..."

She glanced again at the watch gifted by Rahul. A storm forming in her mind. Anger taking it's toll. How dare he call Raj's watch like that? Does he think i will ever replace Raj's watch with his? She was about to break the watch gifted by Rahul into several pieces when her eye fell on photo of her parents photograph. She was in turmoil.

"Aapki watch kaafi puraani lagi..."

She got up suddenly.Went to one of her drawers and put that gift deep down inside where she will never catch glimpse of it.

Then her eye fell on her hand that was adorned with Raj's watch.She instantly calmed down.She slowly moved her fingers over it and kissed it, as if she is kissing his hand.

The ticking of the watch reminded her of his heart beats....

She slowly got up and went near window. She stood there gazing at the moon.

I walk the streets alone
I hate being on my own
And everyone can see that I really fell
And I'm going through hell
Thinking about you were somebody else

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That Somebody's Me

How, How could we go wrong
It was so good and now it's gone
And I pray at night that our paths will soon cross
And what we had isn't lost
Cause you're always right here in my thoughts

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That Somebody's Me

You'll always be in my life
Even if I'm not in your life
Because you're in my memory
You, will you remember me
And before you set me free
Oh listen please

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That somebody's me

She can't even replace Raj's watch.....How is anyone going to replace RAJ?

And she smiled sadly....at her destiny.....

'Life can't be worse than this' ....

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All my dear dear friendz....here was the update....Hope (this time seriously hope!😉) u likd reading it....

Well.....main bhi taiyyar hoon aap logokee joote-chappal aur gaaliyan khane ke liye.....

Please...recession chal raha hai, toh apni gaaliyon pe agar break lagao to.....😛

But haa...if any kind soul wants to praise,plz plz plz comment mein kanjusi mat karna😆

me waitingggg...

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

that was good

feel bad for Naina

plz continue soon

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

very good story,I read all the parts and they are simply awesome.

U r great writer.Ur story is just wonderful.

par ek request hain tujhse , pls raj ko wapas le aa aur naina ko mila de usse.

Keep it up.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

It was really nice. She was imagining Raj saying Fresher. That was so touching. And the others wer also feeling bad as they remembered the actual Most Wonderful n Frndly teacher. These points wer really sad.

And then Naina's parents want her to marry any1 ELSE?????? Gosh....I wonder ye heart attack kyun ata hai???? Aur Rahul ne aise kaise Raj k watch ko purana kaha?????? Mujhe itna gussa aya....but then wo aisa koi khaas to nahi hai na jo uski baaton ka bura lage. Uske kehne se hi Raj ka watch purana thodi ho jayega??? Its evergreen coz HE is evergreen.

And the last line was so beautiful that if she is not able to replace Raj's watch then how can she replace RAJ???? Very emotional!!!!

U r really gud wid emotions so u deserve praises. It was genuinely beautiful. Pls continue soon.

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strawberrychip

@strawberrychip

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

fabulous updates..

i just hope raj comes back to naina soon... hurts to see her like this..

continue soon and pls pm me if u can..

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#89

pahle galiyan 😡us k baad taliyan......👏!!! matlab kadbi chiz khane k baad meethi chiz khane achha lagta hai...rite...!!! 😛

haan...toh kaan khol kar taiyar raho......

tumne kya mujhe ullu ka pattha samajh rakha hai...😡??? matlab sayad shaqal se aisi lagti hun...😕par aqal se bilkul bhi nahin hun...samjhi...😡!!!

tum ne is baar bhi short ud post kiya hai...😡!!! change sirf itna kiya hai ki tumne letter ka size bada kar diya hai aur har paragraph k bich gap jyada chode hain...taki ud lamba lage...!!!😡

now abt taliya.......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

batayun...kaisa tha yeh ud...😉??? yaar...baht emotional tha...😭 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! mujhe really baht taklif hui...naina k condition ko dekh kar...😭!!! alekh, huda aur naina ki soch apne rajveer sir k liye... bilkul sahi likha hai tum ne...👏!!! vo teeno bhale hi apne students k liye sab se achhe teachers ho...par un k liye jis teacher ne apni jaan ki bazi lagayi aur har ek kadam par un ka sath diya...use toh voh log kho hi chuke hain na😭. sab k emotions ko achhe se describe kiya hai tum ne.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

tum toh doctor ho na...😛!!! plz kisi cardiologist se poochna ki kyoun haar baar aise situation me fathers ko heart attack aa jata hai...😛??? matlab unhe toh pura mauka hi mil jata hai bachho par emotional atyachar karne ka...!!!😆 😆😆 😆 😆 😆

vaise rahul ko bol yahan us ki daal nahin galnewali...😡!!! mujhe baht gussa aaya jab us ne raj ki di hui watch ko purana kah diya😡. main naina ki jagah hoti toh voh is waqt I.C.U me hota....😡

vaise yeh bhi sahi hai ki use nahin pata hai ki yeh naina k liye kitna imp. hai😕...par us k paas dimag toh hoga hi na😕. koi bhi insaan agar kisi chiz ko itne pyar se apne paas rakhi hai toh jarur us k sath us ki koi achhi yaad judi hogi😃...voh rahul yeh nahin samajh paya kya...!!! use army officer kis ne banaya...jarur bharghav ne banaya hoga...😡!!!

personally mujhe poems baht achhe lagte hain...😃!!! tumne hindi me jo kavita likhi aur last voh poem...baht hi achha tha...aur situation k hisab se bilkul perfect baithta hai...!!! really amazing yaar...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

ab plz jaldi se raj ki entry karwao na...!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

aur jahan tak dukhi aatma ka award ki baat hai...😛!!! toh koi gal nahin hai ji...😛!!! ab yeh toh chalta hi hai...😛!!! kyoun ki yeh award bhi mehek aur vershita mujhe pahle hi de chuke hain...😛!!! aur mujhe akele 'dukhi aatma ki kashti' me rahna achha nahin lagta tha...😛!!! isiliye ab tum aa gayi ho na...toh mil kar 'dukhi aatma ki kashti' me maze karenge....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

God...yeh mera comment hai...😲!!! sharm aani chahiye mujhe...😡!!! kisi par naraz hone k baad itna bada comment post nahin karte...!!!

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#90

A very emotional update

Standing in from of the Wall of fame reminded naina of the first time that she had met raj. But then reality strikes and she understands that it was only her dream.

Alekh, Huda and naina miss their best and most friendly teacher...they will always miss him. They try to be like him for their students and they succeed as well....but they regret that these students will never know raj and his qualities.

You have potrayed everyones emotions beautifuly.

It was bad of Naina's parents to emotionally blackmail her in such a way...decisions of marraige should never be forced upon. Rahul should never have tried to replace Raj's watch by a new one...Naina is right...when she cannot bring herself to replace Raj's watch how was she to replace him in her life.

please continue soon

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