Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02)

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

So sry Mana...mujhe pata hai ke mai bahot late edit kar rahi hun but I m just not able to find time....!!!!! Last baar maaf kar de, next time se jaldi jaldi comment kar dungi...!!! Mad or what dhara??? Sorries from frenz are not accepted here, okay??? 😛 It's okay dear....no probs !!! 😊

Anyways....

Jab ek cheez me gadbad ho toh gadbadiyon ki line lag jaati hai....aise hi hua na yahan pe...!!! Know what?? this is the best description of the Update ! 😆 😆 😆

Waise yeh Rahul kitna irritate karta hai...???? Kuch bolne hi nahi deta...!!!! Bachpan ki bimaari hai ! 😛

The song was soooo sad...!!! Log agar kisi ko bolne ka mauka denge toh aise songs gaane ki naubat nahi aaegi...!! Sahi mein!!! Par apne Captain Shekhawat ko kaun samjhaye??? 😕

Lekin yeh Raj ne toh hadh hi kar di...Naina se dur jaana chahta hai...!!!

Jab itna emotional atyachar hho raha tah..you had to write... ( Kiskisko PURANA Raj waapis chahiye tha?? 😛 😉 😆 😆 😆)....!!!

Tu kya hai yaar...pata nahi apne patients ko kaise treat karti hogi...??? Yeh aise ulti seedhi baatein karke unko hasake hi thik kar deti hogi...????? Shshshsh !!! don't leak out my secret ! 😉 And anyways...matlab toh patients thik honese hai.... kyun??? 😛😆 😆

Naina pagal hai kya...??? yeh kya soch rahi hai...??? Woh kuch bhi soche! Uske sochne se kya hota hai???Iss fic mein Wahi hoga jo manjoore mana hoga ! 😆

So ab Shalini Rahul ko sab kuch bataegi..!!! Great...!!! Right person to leak out the secrets ...isn't it? 😉 Waise bhi bechari ko do hi kaam hote hai...Guessing and help RN expressing ! 😆

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#462

superb ,fantastic ,mindblowing. lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy ending. couldn't ask for more............🤗 thanks for this beautiful story god bless!👏👏👏

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@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#463

Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 lovely 👏 👏 👏 👏 fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 superb 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally Rahul ko sab kuch pata chalgaya... thanks to dear shalini...when he was accusing naina"tumne mujhe dhokha diya"...maine bhi wahi socha jo naina ne kaha...usne naina ko bolne ka mauka hi kab diya...naina ne kitni baar batane ki koshish ki lekin wo to kuch sunne ko tayyar hi nahin tha...good usse ye baat pata hain apne bachpan ki bimari ke bare main....and phir usne naina ko ye bhi kaha to go n stop raj...good he said that

Alekh ne Raj ki kya class li...raj ko naina ki engagement ke piche jo raaz hain wo bhi pata chala n raj is feeling sad for hurting naina...wahape raj is feeling bad n huda is enjoying seeing his expressions .akhir main alekh ne raj ko warning bhi dedi...loved to see alekhs concern for his behan naina

Misson Manaofy Naina started..alekh n huda ne kya kya ideas di...huda is saying gaana gaayiye for naina..but alekh to kehraha tha..sab bhaag jayenge...nahin alekh koi nahin bhagage..we all love to hear rajs sweet voice..yahape ye log planning main busy the n kuch tikh se plan bhi nahin bana...itne main naina wahape aagayi..alekh n huda to bahut samjhdar hain they left the room..mujhe wo scene bahut accha laga how naina started hitting raj on his chest aur usse poochrahi thi aap mujhe chodhke jaayenga...n raj saying maaf kardo aur kabhi usse chodhke nahin jaayega...how they both hugged ...n their kiss...kya scene tha yaar..u have written it so beautifully

mujhe ye bhi bahut accha laga when raj went to nainas house uska hath maangane ..the way he said all so fastly...ab usko koi experience nahin hai na..to bechara aise hi bolega na..aur wo kitna cute lagraha hoga...naina ki parents to jhat se maangaye for their shaadi....

Naina is sooooooooo lucky hain yaar ..raj se uski shaadi jo hogayi... the marriage scene also u described so beautifully

Raj ko ladhki chahiye..n usne pehle se naam bhi sochke rakha...Raina..lovely name...par rana ki aankhen sirf naina ko honi chahiye..baaki sab raj jaisa....

Raj is Major now...Rianas surprise gift for rajs birthday is so nice...kitna happy n cute family haina...raj ko perfect gift di naina ne on his birthday.

Mana really its a lovely ..beautiful.wonderful ..n fantastic fic...ha tumne rulaya raj ko bahut aur uske saath saath hum sab ko bhi but wo sab maaf for this perfect n beautiful ending..u have portrayed all the charachters so nicely..but u know i am feeling sooooooooo sad because this is the last update..main hamesha chahthi thi jaldi sab kuch tikh hojaye... what i want to see happened uske saath ye khubsurat fic bhi end hogaya..

Mana thank u soooo much for writting this fabulous fic 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 n i really hope to have more beautiful fics from u dear

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yogitha

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#464

Well... so the fic is completed... Happy Ending!!!

It has really been a tearful journey for all of us... seeing naina and Raj bearing pain and sadness that life gave them. But finally they decided not to take things lying down...

Let me start chronologically...

Rahul finally realised the truth and Naina also said the right thing... that he never gave here a chance to speak and didn't even want to know about her past... and he was blaming her for no reason at all... I'm happy that he freed her and asked her to stop raj from going. And he said the dialogue that "Love happens only once." Well... as much as u say rahul was not bad... I seriously cannot sympathise with him. So I am just leaving it there.

Aalekh did the best job... he carried the day... stole the show or whatever you may say... Fantastic dialogues... Poor Raj!!! Aalekh didn't even give him a chance to reply. Raj said ki "Uski shaadi me saale ki kami nahi hogi". Well... someone had to drill sense into Raj's screwed up brain and Aalekh did it perfectly... Cheers to Aalekh...

Then started the mission manaofy Naina and Aalekh and Huda slipped back to their cadets mode. I was laughing throughout their charade... And Naina came in just then. Huda's gave a perfect dialogue... "Naina ka naam usne Phoolan aise hi nahi rakha."

Now Naina did most of the job... hitting him.. complaining... crying... and finally hugging him. Ahhhh!!! It was the much awaited part...

The way Raj said to Naina's parents about their marriage was so funny... So finally Raj and Naina are married and they become the proud parents of the little angel RAINA SINGH SHEKHAWAT... I loved that child - MASTER PRANKSTER... Raj and Naina make a happy family along with their daughter...

And thus we had a HAPPY ENDING!!! Beautiful story Mana... And you deserve all the praise that you have got...

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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poojabi

@poojabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#465

hey its lovely only one of its kind.i have read so many fics on rn bt urs is d best.you described all the emotions so clearly and beautifully!its just like i can feel all the emotions.i just loved itpls ek naya fic start karona.nehito mai tumhara writing ko bohot miss karoongi.bye.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: preet09
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Nice way to reserve your post Preeto !!! 😆 😆 😆

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: rituka7
damn cool
superb
great ending
loved it

Thanks Rituka.....😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

simply mind blowing....👏 Thanks lipi !😃

luved d way emotions wer portrayed....njoyed aalekh and huda and rajveer convo and d dialogues der....👏 Thanks yaar !

den naina and rajveer as always tooo good.....👏👏👏

den d part wer two 've become threesome...luved d gift der and raina is too smart....👏 yeah...glad that u liked Raina !

amazing fic and totally beautifully presented....👏 Thanks a ton sweets...aap logoke bina yeh fic kuch nahi hai !😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

first, mein thora sad hoon iye itni acchi ff complte hogaya ,

second happy for,raj and naina ka mil hogaya and they lived happily together.

ok let's come to the update now,

it's superb mindblowing update. just perfect gift for valetines day.loved it.

toh rahul jee sab jaan gaye. good.ha bahut bolta ahin, realsie kia atleast, he is nice person but naina sirf raj ka hain....

loved their sweet conversation....

loved the s cene between raj ,alekh and huda.

Alekh did wonderful job, raj ko bhi pata chal gaya,, u really beautifully described the feeling of raj, alekh and huda.loved it.

but when raj un dono se idea manga toh both them are just too .. itna busy hogaye ke bhool hi gaye raj uha hain.....

loved the scene between raj and naina. too good.

lov ed the epilogue part.

loved the part when raj gaya naina ke ghar and uske parents ke saamne aapna baat bola....

bu ti lov ed more huda's comment, shatabdi express .. sach mein...😆

finally they married to each other good.

wow, raj and naina became proud parents of raina.

loved her.she is too cute,sweet and naughty.

loved the father daughter scene and their conversation....

too good update.loved it.

tu jaldi aur ek rn pe ff likh.