Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#451

first, mein thora sad hoon iye itni acchi ff complte hogaya ,

second happy for,raj and naina ka mil hogaya and they lived happily together.

ok let's come to the update now,

it's superb mindblowing update. just perfect gift for valetines day.loved it.

toh rahul jee sab jaan gaye. good.ha bahut bolta ahin, realsie kia atleast, he is nice person but naina sirf raj ka hain....

loved their sweet conversation....

loved the s cene between raj ,alekh and huda.

Alekh did wonderful job, raj ko bhi pata chal gaya,, u really beautifully described the feeling of raj, alekh and huda.loved it.

but when raj un dono se idea manga toh both them are just too .. itna busy hogaye ke bhool hi gaye raj uha hain.....

loved the scene between raj and naina. too good.

lov ed the epilogue part.

loved the part when raj gaya naina ke ghar and uske parents ke saamne aapna baat bola....

bu ti lov ed more huda's comment, shatabdi express .. sach mein...😆

finally they married to each other good.

wow, raj and naina became proud parents of raina.

loved her.she is too cute,sweet and naughty.

loved the father daughter scene and their conversation....

too good update.loved it.

tu jaldi aur ek rn pe ff likh.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

Quote

Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#452

Wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was an awesome part...!!!! The bestest part was Aalekh ki hool and dhamkis and all that...!!!!

And aaj pehli baar Rahul ke liye rona aaya...!!! 😭😭 Galti Naina ke parents ne ki aur bhugatna bechaare Rahul ko pada...muft me....!!!

Aur Rajveer Aalekh aur Huda se ideas le raha tha lekin use kuch karne ki zaroorat hi nahi padi...!!!! Usne ek baar pyaar se sorry bol diya aur Naina maan gayi...!!!

And bechaara Raj, Naina ke parents ke saamna kitna nervous ho raha tha...aur jab bola toh kya bola...???? 😆😆😆

And I loved the epilouge...acha hua woh bhi aaj hi post kar diya...!!! Raina is sucha beautiful name...ideal for RN's daughter...!!! Man have to admit...woh apne Mamma Dadda se do nahi chaar kadam aage hai...!!! Loved her....!!!

So is update ke saath Love Happens Only Once khatam hota hai...!!!

I had a lovely time reading this fic...!!! Haan...isne rulaya bahot hai but...chalta hai....end toh happy tha naa...!!!!

I am going to miss this fic...!!! Hoping you write many more fics !!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#453

Hmm....kahan se shuru karu?? 😉 As usual Raj se???😳😳

Chalo aaj Mana se shuru karte hai....(though maine Raj ka naam le liya hai....😆😆😉).....U r really a sweetheart Mana!!! Pata hai kyun?? Tumne Rahul k saare gunn ussise ginwa liye....😆😆 like he is a tubelight.....zyada bolna uski bachpan ki problem hai....😆😆😆....the scene was nice....special when Naina burst out saying...."Yehi....yehi wajah hai jo main kuch bil nahi payi....tum kisi aur ko bone kaha dete ho?".....😆😆 emotional scene me bhi main hasti rahi...😆😆 waise bhi do u really think I'm so gud that I'll feel bad for Rahul??? 😲 NAAAHHHH!! 😈 Main itni achhi nahi....😆😆....main to Raj k liye khush hu....kisi aur k liye dukhi hone ka tym anhi hai yaar!!😉😉

Raj wid Aalekh & Huda was nice!!! Though at first I was confused the way they were behaving wid him....I mean agar tum isse plan nahi show karti....then ye kuch zyada drastic behaviour hota.....very much against their nature.....but then u r always aware of that....😃😃....so u did it really well!!

I loved it when Raj wanted Aalekh to stop....but he went on & on....while Huda kept chuckling!! And then their round of giving ideas.....went completely futile!! Dono sach me kisi kaam ke nahi hai....😆😆...in case of such kinda ideas warna to ye dhaasu ideas late hai!!😉

I was smiling when Huda commented abt Raj's Dimag when it came to Naina.....arre ab mera Raj kare bhi to kya? Pyar me Dil to Dimag pe hawi hoga hi na?? There's no need to comment on him like that....😳😳 (Aa gayi main apni line pe...I mean Raj ki line pe😆😆😳)

And then when Raj told Aalekh in his tapodi lingo....that shaadi me saale ki kami nahi hogi....it was a wow moment for me...😃😃....so cute!!

But u knw wat was cuter?? When Naina came to his room...started hitting his chest.....while he was shaking his head to say he wont leave her and also was moving behind.....when I imagined that particular scene.....that was the loveliest!!😃😃

And then....Raj ka Naina k ghar jaake shaadi ki baat kehna....😆😆....c'mon yaar.....adki ki baap se wo kaise baat kare....I mean this thought is very terrifying....sacchi!! Isiliye main khush hu main ladka nahi hu....😆

Now Raina!! Apne Dad se bahut pyar karti hai....I think meri uski achhi jamm sakti hai....main bhi uske Dad se bahut pyar karti hu....😆.....ok now...enough of my crazy talks...😆😆

Raj ka logic adhiya hai....ki uski beti usse itna pyar karti hai ki jaldi bahar aa gayi...😉...😉....and she is the perfect Raina Singh Shekhawat....after all Raj k haath se chhut gayi 'stunt' dikha kar....usse 'punch' bhi de di.....wat needs more to prove she is the daughter of this gr8 father!!! 😍

Aah main phirse Raj pe aa gayi na....😆😆....I'm sure Raj loved his bday gift more than anythig else....it was awesum!!!😛

It was a LOVELY, AMAZING, AWESUM, FANTASTIC, FABULOUS, BRILLIANT fic.....😃😃.....abhi aur adjectives yaad nahi hai.....aur phir kaafi rulaya aapne madam.....isiliye apne VIOLENT nature ka proof dete hue....maine adjectives yehi khatam kar di....😆😆

But seriously yaar....I must say....u did a gr8 job....aur sach kahu to Raj k character ko tumne kaafi achhe se balance kiya wid that stint of jealousy n insecurity along wid his all tym calmness n sacrificing nature.....it was handled beautifully!!

Abhi main ek aur baat kahungi....😆....mujhe wo saare shot writers ko thank karna hai (along wid me😆)...jinki shots pahke aap inspire ho gayi aur aaj hi pura post kar diya....😃😃

Waise tum comments pe araam se reply karo....main baad me check karungi....par haan....sabse zaruri baat.....I always wanted to hav the ending of the fic....I wanted to read it always....but now when its done....I knw ITS DONE!!! Phir se UD nahi hoga....😕....*sigh*....but then all gud things cum to an end...😃

So thanks for this wonderful 'gud thing'.....and hoping to hav more from u!!! Ahh....kitna likh liya maine.....agar ye tumhara biggest part tha....then it has to be biggest reply ever!!!😉

Luv,
Sumi....🤗

Quote

sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#454

wowww....fantastic end MANALI.... just awesome yaar...
but i m sad ... this is the last part... 😔
but m happy with the lovely n happy ending...
finally Raj ko truth ka pata chala...liked alekh's "bhaasan"..hehehehehe...
chalo raj naina dono ka pyaar jeet hi gaya n saari misunderstandings dur ho gayee... thank god..
u hv described their feelings soo well...loved the scene when naina started hitting raj..hehehe... lovely scene....
so they got married.... so they hv a daughter named Raina shekhawat.... prank master....
n naina is again pregnnat...lovely family...
lovely lovely lovely end......
pls start one more ff... waiting for the new one.....

Quote

Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#455

Hi Mana

How r u???

Update was realy gud..A perfect ending for a brilliant fiction👏👏

Rahul seems to b so understanding..Naina is lucky for being loved by 2 people so dearly..

Rahul was so hurt to let go Naina but he knows she loves some1 else..

Alekh gave a gud lecture to Raj..he explained him everything n Raj was so shocked to know the truth..

Raj was so frustated n angry on his behaviour with Naina..He really behaved like fool..

Finally everything was fine between Raj n Naina n dey both were desperate tp get married.

Naina's parents didn't have any objectioncoz they have forgiven Raj for killing Naveen..They understand that he was forced to take such a step..

The marriage part was too beautiful..

Raina is a nice name..Raj was so shocked to see his birthday present😆😆😆..She is really very naughty but Raj loves her too much.

Naina is again pregnant n Raj is so happy to know dis..

God has really showered them with all his blessings..😛😛

Raj n Naina were perfect for each other .. Life was different.....those days of despair seemed alien...All of dem were really happy now..

"Forever takes me by a minute,
While I'm here with you.
I'm falling even more in love,
With everything you do.

Hold me in your arms,
Look deep into my eyes,
Don't turn away and let me go,
Don't ever tell me lies.

I swear I'll never loose you,
In my arms I'll always hold.
I'll never let you slip away,
And leave nothing left untold.

There aren't enough hours,
In each passing day,
To find all the words,
I wish I could say.

Your kiss will last forever,
Your touch forever warm.
You'll guide me to the sunlight,
And shield me from the storm.

This is what I'm saying,
With everything that's true,
I swear on my life,
That I really do love you."

Bye

Happy Valentine Day

Quote

sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#456

awsome fic

wonderful

mindblowing

too good

loved it

& plz jaldi se ek aur fic start karo

Quote

Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#457

Superb part...A perfect end to a beautiful story👏

Rahul is shocked to know the truth behind RN love...the difficulties and challenges that they have had to face to reach to this point. He feels hurt to let naina go...but knows that her happiness lies with Raj and he is the only person that she has ever loved. He has always been a friend to her

Naina is releaved to know that Rahul is not against her and Raj's relationship. She is thankful to him for undertanding her.

Alekh ne acha lecture diya Raj ko. It was about time that Raj was told the whole truth. Raj feels very guilty and hurt for causing naina so much pain....for not trusting her love. He wants to make it up to her for his mistake but does not know how. It was very funny to see Alekh and Huda giving Raj ideas about how he should pacify naina's anger. Both of them come up with such wiered and funny ideas...only to reject them. In the end ...a simple...I love you...from Raj was all that was required. Finding herself in Raj's arms...naina falls in love with him all over again. All the pain and sorrow are wipped out in one stoke.

RN are worried that naina;s parents may not approve of their marriage but they had nothing to worry about because all they wanted most was their daughter's happiness. They forgive Raj for the past and give their consent for the wedding.

RN get married as quickly as possible. Because all they needed was the wishes and blessings from their family and friends.God had blessed their life and filled it up with happiness.

Raina is Raj's little princess...he loves her a lot. Only she could get away by giving Raj such a gift. Nahi toh kisi ki majal hai to Raj ko aisa gift de.

But the most precious gift is the one that Naina gives him. They are going to have another child which will not only bring more happiness but will also make their family complete.👏

I have loved and ejoyed reading the whole Fic. I look forward to reading more of your stories. So please start as soon as possible.😉

Love

Nisha

Quote

Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#458

Ab aate hain...is fic k ud par...

Awesome...fab...superb...too gud...mindbolwing...aur kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai... samajh le...kuch dil se feel kiya hai...par bol nahi pa rahi hun...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

hum hamesha khane k baad sweet khate hain...toh isiliye main apne sweet ko last ka liye rakhti hun...!!! pahle asusall sabji par aate hain...!!! 'french bean' (mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta)... i mean rahul... kitna achha insaan tha... i mean hai...apni tarif...apni hi zuban se karr raha hai...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

itne serious scene par bhi main hass rahi thi...jab naina ne kaha ki 'rahul apne samne kisi ko bolne nahi deta...'...bilkul sahi kaha...aur bina kisi nautanki k rahul bhi samajh gaya...ki sari galatiyaan us ki thi...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

vaise rahul k liye bura toh laga...par isiliye nahi ki naina use chod kar chali gayi...bal ki isiliye ki... bichara aaya toh tha dulha bann ne...par...sahra kisi aur k sarr chadh gaya...aur is ka hath khali rah gaya...!!! ab yeh galati bhi toh usi ki hai na...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

alekh aur huda ka plan...kamiyaab ho gaya...!!! pahle main thoda confused thi ki alekh aur huda aise kaise baat kar sakte hain apne teacher se...matlab agar serial ko dimag me rakh karr socha jaye toh...!!! par plan toh akhir plan tha...raj ko sabb pata chal gaya...voh sabb kuch samajh bhi gaya...par alekh me toh real bro ki aatma ghush gayi thi...ek baar jo voh suru hua toh us k dail khatam hi nahi ho rahe the...!!! raj help k liye HUDA ki aur dekh raha tha...jo hamesha sabb ko sirf problems hi deta hai... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

raj ne sahi kaha ki 'saale ki kami mahsus nahi hogi'...!!! bichara Raj...huda aur alekh se idea le raha tha...main kya marr gayi thi...!!! do aise logon se idea le raha tha...huda...jiss k dimag me sirf gobar bhara hua hai...aur alekh...jiss k dimag me sirf DARU k alawa kuch ghushta hi nahi...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

khair kisi idea ki jarurat padi hi nahi...naina aayi...aur apna gussa raj par nikala...voh scene sach me baht sweet tha...raj k on screen reaction ko imagine karr k main mushkura rahi thi...yeh mera fav scene tha...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

phir raj ka naina k parents k samne naina se shadi ki baat karna...!!! he he he...ab itna nervous toh voh hoga hi na...akhir sasur jee hain us k...!!! par naina tabb se hi raj ka sath de rahi thi...!!! raj ka SATABDDI TRAIN ki tarah bolna...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Now abt...Raina Singh Shekhawat...!!! sahi kaha raj ne ki us ki beti us se itna pyar karti hai ki jaldi bahar aa gayi...!!! vaise raj ne jabb raina ko apne hath se uthaya tha na...toh mujhe yaad aaya jabb naina ko 'ulti duniya' ki saja mili thi aur raj ne use bachaya tha...!!! par un ki beti un se char kadamm aage hain...use kisi ki help nahi chahiye thi...us ne apne aap ko khud bacha liya...!!! ab jiss k parents raj aur naina ho...un ki beti kaisi hogi...voh toh sirf imagine hi kiya ja sakta hai...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

parr mujhe pata hai...raj ko apna yeh b'day gift kisi bhi gift se jyada achha lag ga...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

cont soon...he he he......😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Quote

Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#459

-:ABT D FIC:-

pahle teri khinchai karti hun...baad me is ud k bare me "kuch" likhugi...!!! sirf 'kuch'...hun...jyada xpect mat karna....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

tumhe pata hai tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi ho...as a doc achhi ho...kyoun ki TN me tum ne Naina ko jaldi dis-charge kar diya...par...yahan tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi ho...!!! pata hai kyoun...is fic k start se tum ne humain kitna rulaya...aur ab jabb is fic ko le kar main addicted ho gayi toh tum ne is par 'the end' ka board laga diya...!!! 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

vaise bhi har ek chiz ka ek anth toh hota hi hai...badi baat yeh hai ki anth khushiyon k sath hua...!!! aur 'LHOO' ka yeh safar ghum k sath sath khushiyon k mayne bhi samjha gaya...!!!ek aur baat ka ehsaas bhi dilaya ki ghum chahe kitna bhi bada kyoun na ho...dil agar sachha ho aur iraade majbut...toh khoyi hui khushi bhi mil jati hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃😃😃

naina...jo Raj ko kabhi bhul nahi payi...use akhir me apna pyar mila...😃

us k parents... jo as usall parents ki tarah apne bachhon ko emotional blackmail karte rahte hain...unhe bhi naina k pyar ko accept karna hi pada...😆

RAJ...baht kuch khone k baad use us ki puri zindagi kuch yun mili...ki voh sayad...hi kabhi gujare hue kal k dukhon ko yaad kare...!!! ofcourse naveen ko toh yaad karega hi...ab voh toh chala gaya hai...par us ki sar-phiri bahn... ko us k liye chod gaya hai...!!! raj ka char...me hamesha sirf sacrifice dikhaya jata tha...par voh bhi toh ek insaan hai...tum ne us me possesiveness...add ki...jealous...gussa...sab dikhya...jo ki kisi bhi insaan me aam baat hai... ki dard se taklif hota hai...aur us ka reaction bhi hota hai...😃

aur alekh n Huda...LRL me Huda ka charachter hamesha negative dikhya gaya...par use agar +ve charachter bhi dete toh voh bhi achha hi karta...i hope...

khair...par Alekh n Huda ne apni dosti nibhayi...!!! alekh ne naina ko le kar apne bhai ka farz nibhaya...jo sayad naveen zinda hota toh yahi karta...!!! par point yeh hai ki naveen zinda hota toh yeh sabb hota hi nahi...matrlab naina KMA aati hi nahi...voh toh CAT k chakkar me kahin aur chali jati...aur Raj k gale me khujliwali powder matlab Dr Mishra hi padti...!!! isiliye achha hua naveen chala gaya...!!! mera matlab toh samajh hi rahi ho na...😉

Okkkk...itne bade BHAASHAN ka TATTPARYA...yeh hai ki is fic ne humain rulaya...par hashaya nahi...bal k chehre par ek khushi ki jhalak mil jati thi...jab bhi is fic pe Raj aur Naina sath ho jate the...aur aaj kal ki duniya me toh khushi bhi baht mahngi ho gayi hai...hai na...!!! toh is "MAHANGI KHUSHI' ko humain dene k liye...main THANXX kahnewali thi...par hamari deal ko yaad karte hue...nahi kaha...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

love u🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

urs

Pri😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

Quote

Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#460

sorry...mere dono posts ulta post ho gaye...jise pahle post karna tha...voh second aa gaya aur jise second karna tha voh first...!!! doc...plzzz help...mera dimag bhi ab mere PM box ki tarah khali ho raha hai😆

Quote

1 ... 44 45 46 47 48 49

Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 46

Related Topics

Explore Topics