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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Bahut chutku sa update tha pata hai tujhe mujhe bahut gussa aaya ki Raj aur Naina k saamne aane k baad bhi koi progress nahi ho paayi dono k case me. Haa yaaar....maine bataya toh starting mein....i was busy, par laga atleast itna toh post kar deti hoon. ha ha ha😆😆😆 Hogi dear....jaroor progress hogi....aakhir tum jo baithi ho meri ' Progress report' haath mein lekar.....!


Song selection was nice. Thank u😊

Raj k aas paas hote hi Naina ko ehsaas ho jaana us k hone ka is just so sweet , aisa hota hai hum jis se dil se jude hue hote hain us k hone ka ehsaas hume hota hai. Ab mujhe toh koi experience nahi hain na iska😆😆 Par baat jaha RN ki ho, toh mujhe laga ki Naina ko ehsaas hogahi!

Par tune jis tarah song ki lines me emotions ki mixing ki thi that was pretty nice, Thank you soooooooo much....!!!😃
update soon. Yup....i'll.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb update. Thank you so much dear😊
Finally Raj has come back to KMA. You have described RN's meeting in a splendid manner...the situation...songs....emotions....too good Oh thank you so much dear. Thanks for liking it. I was kinda apprehensive while choosing song....but chalo theek hi hai ab jab aap sab ko pasand aaya!!!😊 And yeah....Now Raj is back!!!!😃
Waiting for your next update. Will update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hello ma'am...😛!!! dekh aaj HAIIII nahin kaha...😆!!! KYUnnnnnnnnnnn????
vaise main kahnewali thi, par socha ki tu kahin irritate na ho jaye...is baat se...😆!!! Aree nahi re! Balke mujhe toh ab uski aadat pad gayi hai...rather wahi achcha lagta hai!😆
aur haan maine dekhi hai SBS ka voh epi...raj ka interview...😆!!! aisa lag raha tha ki jaise 'raat ki utri nahin thi tab tak'😆...!!! Bilkul!!😆😆 I thought sirf mujhe hi aisa lag raha hai....but chalo achcha laga yeh jaankar ki yeh vichar sarvajanik hai!😆😆
main dining table par baith kar dekh rahi thi😆...papa ne kaha bhi ki beta chair par baith kar dekho...!!! par yeh chair par ya sofe par baith kar TV dekhna toh kitna normal hai yaar...😆!!! par raj k interview dekhna itna normal toh hai nahin...isiliye main jab LRL dekhti thi tab bhi aur aaj bhi jab bhi raj ko dekhti hun toh table par baith kar...😆!!! Woah girl!! Tum naa!! Waise tumne mujhe meri yaar dilaadi....jab bhi Sourav aise century ki aas paas yaa phir bahot form mein khel raha hota, toh main aise hi koi harkat karti thi!😆
vaise us din mujhe raj ki voh halat dekh kar ek song gane ka dil kar raha tha..."do boond mujhe bhi peela de sharabi...dekh phir hota hai kya"😆....!!! Ek baat bata priya, kahi tu meri kumbh ke mele mein bichdi hui behen toh nahi??? 😆😆😆 Dekh na? kitni similarities hain hum me!! Ab jaise yeh....main bhi yeh gaana gaate waqt SAME MISTAKE karti hun😆😆 aur woh bhi HAMESHA !!! Woh Do BOOND nahi Do GHOOT hain!!😆😆😆 Do boond se uska kya hoga??😆😆😆
okkk...ab nautanki band...aur kaam ki baat chalu...😛 Oh no!!! Kyun???😛😛
asusall ud bahhhhhhhhhht hi chota tha....!!!😆 Teri toh!! Oh sorry! mujhe Gaaliyan dena allowed nahi hain naa?😆 Par maine pehle hi kaha tha na ki update chota hoga?? phir?? Mamaa!! Dekho naa!! Khud toh itne chinne chinne updates karti hai....woh bhi once in a decade aur mujhe chida rahi hai😭
n asusall amazing one...👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ Ahmm...Thank you😃
toh naina ko saree pahna na aata hai...well main abhi sikh rahi hun...aur do baar gir bhi chuki hun...aur tishri baar girne ki tayaari hai...!!! par abhi mera paaon bhari hai na😆...toh isiliye xperiment se dur hun...!!! aree voh wala bhaari nahin...mera matlab hai ki stiches wala bhari...😆Pata hai pata hai....mera mind itna DIRTY nahi hai😆😆 Waise yeh Saree kiskeliye pehen na seekh rahi hai?😛
naina aur raj mile...wow.....sab se jyada achha mujhe kya laga pata hai...??? jab naina aur raj aamne saamne aaye aur un k dil ne ek dushre ko mehsus karna chaha...👏 👏 👏!!! song bilkul perfect tha...aur tumhara sahi waqt par ud ko end karna un-perfect tha...!!! Well thank chu so much Priya dear! Maine woh 'un' pada hi nahi😆 aur main dono bhi as a compliment le rahi hoon😆😆😆
gaaliyaan sun ne bachna chahti ho toh tumhare paas ek hi festival offer hai jaldi se ud karo...varna main tumhari patient ban kar tumhare hostipal(hospital ko maine naya naam diya hai😆) me aajayungi aur tumhe majburan AGRA k mental hostipal me jana padega...so cont sooooooooooooon😃 Ab teri gaaliyaan nahi sunungi toh mera peth kaise bharega?? Dekha kitne bure din aagaye hai! Gaaliyon se peth bharna pad raha hai😆 Waise mujhe teri Festival offer bahot ATTRACTIVE lag rahi hai...😆😆 Rather wahi Feasible hain....😆😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Manali, How r u dear?
Sorry yaar... comment hi nahi kar pa rahi hu..!!! 😒
Update ws amazing...i m so happy..finally RN mil hi gaye...!!!
u have described that scene sooo well... just awesome..their emotions,... meeting after a longggg time...n for Naina, it ws like a miracle...!!!...
So madam ne sari pehni hai...gr88..Raj jo aane waala tha....hehehhe 😉
superb update..waiting for the next part....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi Manali, How r u dear? hiee shona!😃 me absolutely fine!!!


Sorry yaar... comment hi nahi kar pa rahi hu..!!! 😒 It's okay dear ! atleast tumne time nikal kar kiya toh sahi !! Aur agar nahi kiya hota, phir bhi main janti hoon, tum UD jarur padhti aur time milne par comment jarur karti, jaise ki abhi kiya! 😃


Update ws amazing...i m so happy..finally RN mil hi gaye...!!! Thanks a ton dear....yeah finally RN milgaye!😃


u have described that scene sooo well... just awesome..their emotions,... meeting after a longggg time...n for Naina, it ws like a miracle...!!!... Thanks again...I was really scared about this scene...it was the most difficult one for me .... coz they were meeting after such a long time and I had to make it really good...If it had been bad, then all of your wait would have been wasted ! Thank god ! that you people liked it !😊

So madam ne sari pehni hai...gr88..Raj jo aane waala tha....hehehhe 😉 Yeah! 😆😆 aakhir madam Saree pehnegi bhi toh sirf Raj ke liye hi naa? I still remember that Red saree scene...it was awesome!!😊

superb update.. Thanks again.😊
waiting for the next part.... Yeah...will be updating soon!😊

Shona !
Thanks a ton for commenting dear....
I'm so glad that you took out time to read and comment...
Just keep in mind....however late it may be, but i shall be waiting for your comment!!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!! Thank u😃
Shalini is helping Naina get ready for the Fresher's Ball and Naina is feeling restless!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 yup...she is intuitive!
Shalini is teasing Naina about Rahul!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Naina is thinking about last year's fresher's ball and remembering the wow sigh that Raj had given her, she blushed!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Yaa...remember the way he was staring at her after complementing her and didn't spare a glance to ritu!😆😆
Raj ke saamne aane se pehle hi Naina ko ehsaas hone laga tha Raj ke hone ka!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She could feel it when he was near her kyunki unke dil jude huye hai toh hone ka ehsaas toh hoga hi naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 bang on!!

Naina is reminded of the day she wore that red saree and came in front of Rajveer!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 what a scene mann!! The horrified look on Raj's face after he says that iss khoobsurati ke liye koi jaan bhi desakta hai, still makes me laugh!😃

When she saw Raj, she couldn't believe it and she wasn't able to comprehend her feelings!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 yes....coz she had lost her faith on destiny...she was not sure, whether this time it was a dream or reality....
Both are walking slowly towards each other and Naina's tears are flowing like a river!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
This reminded me of the court scene in Veer-Zaara where Shahrukh and Preity were walking towards each other meeting after 22 years!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Par mera shukriya adaa karo, maine RN ko itna budhdha nahi banaya😆😆...
The song is very nice and beautiful and just perfect fot them and their meeting after so long!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Yes...I was thinking for a song...and this was the song that came to my mind...it was almost like made for them!😊
Raj and Naina are just looking at each other and Raj is remembering the times he had spent with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳It's always Naina remembering Raj and the times they spent together...so I thought, lets get other way round!!
Naina saw the love in his eyes and got all her answers that he too loves her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
She is so happy that ke jisse woh pyaar karti hai woh bhi usse bahut pyaar karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Yeah...after all this was what she wanted in her life, isn't it?
Raj was just looking at her and moving faster towards her as he could not take this distance any longer!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Enough of Patience for Captain Shekhawat !!
Naina could sense his breathing and feel his touch and she smiled while crying as her Rajveer was back!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭
She wants to tell him everything that she went through when he was not there!!!!! Coz...she always took her problems to him and he sorted them out! however silliest they may be!
He consoled her that they are still one and together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj is also crying as he watched her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Afterall, even he went through lot without her....And now when she is finally there with him, it's nothing to stop him.
Raj wanted to touch her and to hold her till eternity and never let go!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 He is afraid to lose her...As he loves her too much!😊
Naina wanted to confirm if he was really there and all she could say was Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 As i said, she no longer believes her luck...what if it's another dream?
The way Raj and Naina's feelings were described and matched with the lines of the song was fabulous!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a ton Shaina!!😃
Finally Raj and Naina met!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Yess!!!!😃


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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi guys !! Me backkkkk !!! With another and most awaited update....

Rather than wasting time at commentary....lets rush to update!

Part Twelve:

Tears rolled on his cheeks as he watched her. He wanted to touch her, to hold her till eternity , to caress her...

He wanted to hug her tightly to him melting her into him and never let go.


"Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye"

She lifted her one hand and to touch his cheek to confirm if he was really there and all that
she could speak was… "Raj…….."
It was not 'Sir' but it was 'Raj'

She was too happy and shocked with the sudden event that she fainted, unable to take this sudden longing happiness.

Naina woke up sweating………

she was sweating and shivering a lot….

"This can't be a dream!" she thought and surveyed the room, she could see everyone……Aalekh, Huda, Dr.shalini…..almost everyone but she doesn't see him.

"Aalekh....." she called him and he came forward with tears in his eyes.
"Kehedo ki main sapna nahi dekh rahi………kehedo ki maine Rajveer sir ko dekha hai"
He started crying uncontrollably , as he too was at loss when Rajveer left them though not as much as her.
"Please Aalekh....Huda...tum...tum kaho naa kuch..."
"Ph..phoolan....", he could manage only this much.
"Sha...shalini mam...mam please....please aap toh kuch boliye..." , She pleaded.
While shalini tried to speak she could not due to overwhelming emotions.
She just turned her face side ways biting her lip unable to say anything.
Finally again turning back to Aalekh,"Aa..aa..Aalekh....tujh...tujhe....meri kasam hai..."

He was sobbing bitterly but he spoke out breathing hard……
"Woh waapis aagaye hai Naina....woh waapis aagaye hai!",and smiled at her…

Without even bothering about anyone , she rushed out to find him……
She searched the entire academy, running through the corridors , the field……..but she didn't find him….

And there was only one place left where she could find him, the place near the academy's bell……..

She saw him from a distance and Raj too noticed her….and stood there watching her unblinkingly.

She ran through the distance and skidded to stop just in front of him, shedding silent tears and looking into his eyes.....Raj too was looking into her eyes....their eyes fixed gazing into one another's eyes.(Guys! remember concentration game? kuch waise hi! )
Raj was lost in her beautiful eyes...
Naina's eyes were demanding Raj to understand her aspirations...
Well...he already understood the language of her heart....language of her love.....
He slowly opened his arms wide ,without breaking the eyelock, inviting her.
She smiled....smiled through her tears....and blushed.Her heart was racing. She looked at her feet for a while and then looked upto him,shyingly.
And.....she couldn't control anymore....
She rushed to his arms, she hugged him tightly, convincing herself that he was there with her….
He hugged her back fiercely…….they were unable to stop the tears coming out of happiness. Those tears washed away all their pain. Rajveer deepened the hug to feel feel her , possess her....while she melted in his arms. Their hug conveying each other that how much is their need for each other…….they hugged each other for what seemed the eternity…..

"Kaha...kaha... chale gaye the aap……mujh….mujhe akela chodkar……....aapko meri yaad nahi aayi?...mujhe aapki ...kitni jarurat thi",she hardly was able to speak.….but asked him hitting slightly on his back.

He parted himself and looked into her eyes with all the love he had……..
" Naina..."
She didn't looked up.She was annoyed for he left her.
" mujhe maaf kar do……I am sorry……", he said softly.
Still she didnt look up.She could feel his breaths on her face which was making her weak inside .She too had waited like anything for this moment to come.But when it had come, she was back to her old self!
But then...who else than Raj will tolerate her tantrums !!!
"Meri ore dekho Naina...", and he lifted her face to look into her eyes.
"I love you , Naina……. I love you"
His voice echoed in her ears....Today she was the happiest girl on this earth. At last he uttered these three magical words to her.

This was the world to her !!
He spoke about his love for her…….and she wanted nothing else…….she too confessed……

"I love u too"and she looked into those dark eyes……

He pulled her closer in his strong,secure arms….
He found himself staring in those large, beautiful eyes.....
Raj found himself being lost in those depths...in that face..
looking intimately at each other...
Her arms around his neck....& his hands around her waist...he was pulling her closer to himself as if lost ..they could hear each others breathing....coming in gasps.

And then as if shaken out of her reverie she suddenly pulled away....embarassed....and blushing hard.....only to find herself thrusted into those steady arms again.....


Their bodies gently brushing against each others....
He held her by her waist & pulled her to himself crushing her into him....& she melted into him as if they were always one..

They looked at each other as if trying to hold the moment....he bent & kissed her eyelids gently....
His head lifted , fingertips touching her temple,her hair, trailing along the curve of her
cheek to cup under her chin & lifting it...

He brushed his lips lightly on hers and paused. It sent shivers down her spine.
Then he kissed her lightly which was at first a caress,but deepened to stir her blood until it began racing through her body...
his arms crushing her further.....
They kissed for what seemed an eternity…….a blessing to their love……..

The kiss was demanding one from both sides, it borne out from a long separation…
Taking her lips into his, he sucked n licked them as if they were the sweetest thing his lips have ever tasted.
As her fingers played along his hair, with hard n soft variations, his hands remained still on her waist, too engrossed in the movement to move.

A current of emotions began to rush through all her veins, filling them with desires that
madly tempted them.....
He felt her shiver..& he clinged to her.....
Her response kindling flames in him that neither wished to control....

He was lost in her...

They parted breathing heavy trying to compose themselves…

"I will never leave you again, I will never let you be out from my eyes for even a second",he spoke becoming possessive about her…..

"Aap kaha chale gaye the Raj…..main yaha tadap rahi thi!...... Aapke liye……."

" Naina…….I was hiding these months…….to get some evidences that will prove Naveen innocent….and u know", he broke into a smile , " We are now successful….we have now gathered the needed information."

"Really!" her eyes sparkled and he nodded……
"Raj, yeh sab aapki wajahse hua hai....Aaj agar bhaiya innocent prove hote hai toh sirf aapki wajahse..."
"Ssshhhhh Naina....yeh tumahare aur mere beech tera-mera kaisa? Agar aaj main issmein successful hoon toh tumhare vishwaas ki wajahse....warna main akela toh.."
"Hmmmm.....ab kaun tera-mera kar raha hai?", she asked mischeivously and he let out a laugh.

They remained silent for God knows how long...Holding onto each other tightly....speaking volumes in silence…..and Raj broke the silence……

"Ab andar chale……..sab humara intezaar kar rahe honge. kahi aisa naa ho ki sab bahar aajaye..."
And she nodded happily….
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi guys...
here is another update of " Luv happens only once..."
I just hope you like it...
Coz i'm verrrrrrryyyy verrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy bad at writing romantic things...
I'll be waiting for your comments....
Silent readers, please press " Like" button.
and just to inform you, LHOO will be ending soon....just 2/3 updates more....
So, till then bear with the torture!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

U knw wat main sach me dance kar rahi hu yaar....😆😆😆

Wat a part!!! Love u for this!!! 😛😛😛 Such a sweet Raj-Naina meet. Its not that I was fooled wid the first bit....but yes, that portion increased the interest a lot more...😳😳😳

The way Naina went running to him, he invited her to his arms n they both confessed....n not to mention kissed too...😳😳...it was all too lovely!!! And tum kehti ho u cant write romantic scenes. I swear Mana....wo portion padhte waqt main soch rahi thi ki main kabhi aise scenes nahi likh sakti to shayad mujhe tumse thodi training leni chahiye...😳😳😳...it was just wonderful.

Awesum blossom part tha Mana. But ek sad thing ye hai ki ye ek short ff hai as u had mentioned and it will over in 2/3 parts....but then aise hi lamba khichna sahi nahi hai na....so I'm happy with this short sweet fic. Its brilliantly written. U must not underestimate ur romantic writing ability...do u get that??😆

Now w8ing for the next part eagerly....cant w8 too long dear. UD soon.😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part Mana...!!! 👏👏

I loved the simplicity of their confession...!!! ⭐️⭐️

Continue soon...As it is, you have already warned us of the completion of the fic...!!! 😭😭
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