Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!

Shalini is helping Naina get ready for the Fresher's Ball and Naina is feeling restless!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini is teasing Naina about Rahul!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Naina is thinking about last year's fresher's ball and remembering the wow sigh that Raj had given her, she blushed!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ke saamne aane se pehle hi Naina ko ehsaas hone laga tha Raj ke hone ka!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She could feel it when he was near her kyunki unke dil jude huye hai toh hone ka ehsaas toh hoga hi naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is reminded of the day she wore that red saree and came in front of Rajveer!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

When she saw Raj, she couldn't believe it and she wasn't able to comprehend her feelings!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Both are walking slowly towards each other and Naina's tears are flowing like a river!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

This reminded me of the court scene in Veer-Zaara where Shahrukh and Preity were walking towards each other meeting after 22 years!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and beautiful and just perfect fot them and their meeting after so long!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina are just looking at each other and Raj is remembering the times he had spent with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina saw the love in his eyes and got all her answers that he too loves her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

She is so happy that ke jisse woh pyaar karti hai woh bhi usse bahut pyaar karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was just looking at her and moving faster towards her as he could not take this distance any longer!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina could sense his breathing and feel his touch and she smiled while crying as her Rajveer was back!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

She wants to tell him everything that she went through when he was not there!!!!!

He consoled her that they are still one and together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is also crying as he watched her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj wanted to touch her and to hold her till eternity and never let go!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina wanted to confirm if he was really there and all she could say was Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The way Raj and Naina's feelings were described and matched with the lines of the song was fabulous!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally Raj and Naina met!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok.....so the part is dedicated to Raj's much awaited return. U did the scene wonderfully.....the song selection is beautiful.....perfectly matched....I just can admire the way u put it up. Just gr8!!!!

Pls continue soon Mana......w8ing eagerly for the next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part...!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘


πŸ‘Beautiful song, very nicely used....especially when you were actually translating their thoughts...!!!! πŸ‘πŸΌ

Update soon dear...can't wait...!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
itna chot update wo bhi itne din baad
aur woh bhi is modh par
can't wait to see what happens next
update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update.Now, raj is back....Wow. great dear.Naina aur raj meet with each other.U wrote very well their emotion.
Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Dear
Today I read this fiction of yours in 1 go...
It was indeed mindblowing...I know I'm too late but still atleast I didn't miss out such a wonderful creation..
Raj is back...!!! Wat will Naina do now...???
Do update soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was good
song selection was apt
plz continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
the update was superb πŸ‘
finally raj is back
the song is too good n u described their thoughts really well
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Bahut chutku sa update tha pata hai tujhe mujhe bahut gussa aaya ki Raj aur Naina k saamne aane k baad bhi koi progress nahi ho paayi dono k case me.
Song selection was nice.
Raj k aas paas hote hi Naina ko ehsaas ho jaana us k hone ka is just so sweet , aisa hota hai hum jis se dil se jude hue hote hain us k hone ka ehsaas hume hota hai.
Par tune jis tarah song ki lines me emotions ki mixing ki thi that was pretty nice, update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb update
Finally Raj has come back to KMA. You have described RN's meeting in a splendid manner...the situation...songs....emotions....too good
Waiting for your next update

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