Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 34

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Ab Khush???😃

U knw wat main sach me dance kar rahi hu yaar....😆😆😆Yeah...i can see it from here also...encore!!😆

Wat a part!!! Love u for this!!! 😛😛😛 Just for that?😉

Such a sweet Raj-Naina meet. Its not that I was fooled wid the first bit....but yes, that portion increased the interest a lot more...😳😳😳he he he...! I imagined the reactions you people might be having reading the first part and thinking it's another dream!! I could see you all screaming and calling me names...😆 But yaar tumlogo ki taang kheenchne mein ek alag hi maza hai!😛

The way Naina went running to him, he invited her to his arms n they both confessed....n not to mention kissed too...😳😳...it was all too lovely!!! And tum kehti ho u cant write romantic scenes. I swear Mana....wo portion padhte waqt main soch rahi thi ki main kabhi aise scenes nahi likh sakti to shayad mujhe tumse thodi training leni chahiye...😳😳😳...it was just wonderful. oye oye bass!! Ab chane ke jhaad par mat chadha mujhe! gir gayee toh tum logoke Updates ka kya hoga?😆 I'm glad that you liked it. But believe me, yeh sab likhte waqt I was super tensed! Coz i'm really very bad at writing those 😆 I just wanted them to be subtle and I hope they were not so loud....😕 Aur tu training ki kya baat kar rahi hai? Training toh mujhe tujhse leni chahiye!

Awesum blossom part tha Mana. But ek sad thing ye hai ki ye ek short ff hai as u had mentioned and it will over in 2/3 parts....but then aise hi lamba khichna sahi nahi hai na....so I'm happy with this short sweet fic. Its brilliantly written. U must not underestimate ur romantic writing ability...do u get that??😆 Thanks yaar! Okay got it! But really...I'm not underestimating...i'm just stating the fact! Chod naa....tujhe toh achcha lagna hi hai na. Mere DIMAGLESS DIMAAG ne jo likhe, woh tere DIMAGLESS DIMAAG ko pasand aaye,ismein koi badi baat nahi...😆

And yes dear, you are right! Fic ko bekaar khinchne mein matlab nahi...

Aur waise bhi....thode thode Rajeev ke gun lagne hi hai na....FIC Jab UNCHAAI PAR HO, TABHI USSE END KAR DENA CHAHIYE 😆😆😆

Now w8ing for the next part eagerly....cant w8 too long dear. UD soon.😃Righto boss! Will update soon.😃

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part Mana...!!! 👏👏Thanks a lot Dhara!😃

I loved the simplicity of their confession...!!! ⭐️⭐️ Oh god!! You don't know what a relief this line has given me!!! As I was really hoping that this part is not loud and that it's subtle. Thanks a ton sweetie! thank you so much!

Continue soon...As it is, you have already warned us of the completion of the fic...!!! 😭😭 yeah...I'll update soon! And don't be sad yaar! Achcha hain na fic COMPLETE ho rahi hai😆 Yaha ussi ke toh vaande hai!😆 ryt?😉

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hey Mana..... hi yogitha!

how r u? fine!! what abt u?

its good to see this fic updated

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...........its an wonderful part.....main tikh se bata nahi sakhti ki how much happy i felt after reading this part......its really amazing one yaar.........u did a wonderful job.......i loved every bit in this update. Thanks a ton dear! I'm so glad you liked it!😊

naina ka is tarah se baag ke search karna raj ko aur uske baad raj opening his arms with out breaking the eye contact aur naina ka sharmana....its beatiful n then the hug.........wow!!!!!!! its awesome n not to forget their confession.....its truely magical. Thanks again! Know what? itni tareef ke baad main sachchi mein samajh nahi paa rahi hoon ki kaise thanks kahu?

raj aur naina kitne khush hain......hope they always remain like that......n i dont want to think about rahul at this wonderful moment......but what will happen if raj comes to know about him.....hope us rahul in donon ke bich mein na aaye. Yeah they are very happy. And it's understood if you don't want to think about Rahul, but Rahul is the fact dear...woh kaha jayega? Aur Rahul in dono ke beech aata hai ya Raj khud....yeh toh waqt hi batayega...so little bit patience,hun!

its so sad that this wonderful fic is going to end soon.

waiting for the next part. will update soon.😊

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanks!😊

Naina ne pehli baar Raj ko Raj bulaya Sir nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Ab woh unhe sirf sir thode na maanti hai!😛

Naina fainted with the shock of seeing Raj and happiness!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Bechari sab kuch ek saath sambhal nahi paayi!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔ekdamse usse itni khushi jo mil gayi!

When Naina woke up she was sure this was not a dream!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone was there except Raj!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Why wasn't he with his Naina when she woke up??😕 😕 😕 😕 Mujhe thoda dramatic banana tha scene.....issliye!😆

Aalekh came and confirmed her belief and said he has come back and smiled at her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

All of Naina's friends including Shalini are so happy for Naina and themselves that they are choked up with emotions and joy!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊ofcourse! Ab Raj unkeliye bhi bahot maayine rakhta tha...hai na?😊

Raj is important to them too as he was their favourite teacher and Shalini's best friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 right!

Naina searched the entire academy and then knew where she could find him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj and Naina's reunion was just perfect!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanks again!😃

Raj is lost in Naina's beautiful eyes and he already understood the language of her heart and the language of her love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Raj opened his arms out without breaking the eyelock and invited her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗

This was just like Shahrukh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 NO!!!....better than him! I dont like SRK....I like RK!😉

Naina first blushed and and looked at him shyly and then unable to control herself, she rushed into his arms!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

They hugged each other tightly and are crying out of happiness!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj deepened the hug to feel her and possess her and Naina melted in his arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But now Naina is back to her old self and annoyed with him for leaving her but Raj is there to tolerate her tantrums!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊yes...ab uske alawa Naina ke tantrums kaun jhel sakta hai? Aur Raj ke siwa Naina kise apne tantrums dikhayegi?

Finally Raj confessed his love to Naina and said the three magical words!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This was the world to Naina and now she wanted nothing else!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina also confessed her love and he pulled her closer in his strong and secure arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is lost in the depths of Naina's beautiful eyes and her face and Naina pulled away blushing!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj pulled her to himself crushing her into him and she melted into him as if they were always one!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Their first kiss was magical and went on for what seemed an eternity!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

They are just made for each other and finally happy to be with each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏yes...they are destined to be together!

It was nice to see Raj becoming possessive and saying he will never let her out of his eyes for even a second!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ This was what I missed in him in LRL...this possessiveness...So thought of showing it here! Aakhir meri fic mein meri manamani kar sakti hoon na!😉😆

Raj informed Naina he was hiding these months and finally they are successful in gathering information to prove Navin innocent!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I loved it when Raj said yeh tumhare aur mere beech tera-mera kaisa!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne kaha woh successful hai toh bas Naina ke vishwaas ki wajahse!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Finally they decided to go inside!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Aakhirkar hosh aahi gaya unhe!

I think they should just get married now so taaki aur koi na aa sake unke beech!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 ya...they should get married...but kya kare, RN ke liye kuch bhi aasan nahi...😕

Originally posted by: esha143

great yaar,simply superb👏.who says u dnt know to write romantic moments?this update can be described in a single word,'PURE LOVE'.😳(actually two words😆😉😆)i can see its going to end soon but i wish it to have a very happy ending.😛😛😛

Thanks esha( I think that's your name😛) thanks a ton for liking the part. And yes, this fic is gonna have happy ending,or else the readers here will cause my ' THE END'....😆 😆

and definetly its not a torture but only pure pleasure reading it.with RN in the story what else it can be,right?😉Oh right! I meant my writing is a torture...but I think, RN cover it for all!😆

plz do continue soon,byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....................

Yeah I will dear....byeeeeeeee!!😃

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

hope dono chupke se shaadi kar le. and that rahul is an idiot. use dikh raha hai ki naina khush nahi hai phir bhi mane ko tayyar nahi hai

Originally posted by: nihatri

wow amazing fantastic

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was amazing
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

SUPERB update. Thanks..😊

Loved reading every part of it. glad that you liked it!😊

I was a bit surprised that raj was not there by naina's bed side when she woke up. But then i realised that he must have done that so that she can overcome the shock. who better to understand naina's feelings then raj. Bang on!!! Naina needed to overcome the shock after finding her long lost happiness....Raj very well knew that and hence he wasn't there as he wanted the fact to sink into her...

All of naina's friends including shalini are so happy for naina and themselves that they are choked up with emotions and joy. all they can pray for now is that raj and naina would always stay together.

Even we want to do that only...isn't it?😉

The reunion scene was perfect. Very romantic...please dear you have done a fantastic job so do not even think for a sec that you cannot write romantic scenes. Oh! Thanks...😃

Naina and raj have both confessed their love for each other. They are happy to just hold each other and keep on hugging. Its good to see that they are both happily sharing their feelings, love and kiss.

please do continue soon...waiting eagerly. yeah...will update soon.😊