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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberrychip

fabulous updates..

i just hope raj comes back to naina soon... hurts to see her like this..
continue soon and pls pm me if u can..

Thanx....
I know...mujhe bhi likte waqt bahot bura laga...😭
will continue soon...
plz add me 2 ur buddy list as multiple pm option is avilable with that only..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

pahle galiyan 😑us k baad taliyan......πŸ‘!!! matlab kadbi chiz khane k baad meethi chiz khane achha lagta hai...rite...!!! πŸ˜›

haan...toh kaan khol kar taiyar raho......
tumne kya mujhe ullu ka pattha samajh rakha hai...😑??? matlab sayad shaqal se aisi lagti hun...πŸ˜•par aqal se bilkul bhi nahin hun...samjhi...😑!!!
tum ne is baar bhi short ud post kiya hai...😑!!! change sirf itna kiya hai ki tumne letter ka size bada kar diya hai aur har paragraph k bich gap jyada chode hain...taki ud lamba lage...!!!😑Bilkul nahiπŸ˜†πŸ˜† .... this one was a long update...! mere do update milaake 1 tha....and madam aapke itne lambe update bhale hi naa doo...parr main aapki tarah saal mein ek baar update nahi karti..πŸ˜†
now abt taliya.......πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
batayun...kaisa tha yeh ud...πŸ˜‰??? yaar...baht emotional tha...😭 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘!!!Thanks... mujhe really baht taklif hui...naina k condition ko dekh kar...😭!!! alekh, huda aur naina ki soch apne rajveer sir k liye... bilkul sahi likha hai tum ne...πŸ‘!!! vo teeno bhale hi apne students k liye sab se achhe teachers ho...par un k liye jis teacher ne apni jaan ki bazi lagayi aur har ek kadam par un ka sath diya...use toh voh log kho hi chuke hain na😭. sab k emotions ko achhe se describe kiya hai tum ne.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanks a ton dear...
tum toh doctor ho na...πŸ˜›!!! plz kisi cardiologist se poochna ki kyoun haar baar aise situation me fathers ko heart attack aa jata hai...πŸ˜›??? matlab unhe toh pura mauka hi mil jata hai bachho par emotional atyachar karne ka...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†aree main abhi filhaal issi pe research kar rahi hoon...taaki aage se koi bhi father apne beti pe emotional atyachaar naa kar sake...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
vaise rahul ko bol yahan us ki daal nahin galnewali...😑!!! mujhe baht gussa aaya jab us ne raj ki di hui watch ko purana kah diya😑. main naina ki jagah hoti toh voh is waqt I.C.U me hota....😑yaar rahul ki toh wahi haalat hone waali thi...but meri wajahse bach gaya..πŸ˜‰...
vaise yeh bhi sahi hai ki use nahin pata hai ki yeh naina k liye kitna imp. haiπŸ˜•...par us k paas dimag toh hoga hi naπŸ˜•. koi bhi insaan agar kisi chiz ko itne pyar se apne paas rakhi hai toh jarur us k sath us ki koi achhi yaad judi hogiπŸ˜ƒ...voh rahul yeh nahin samajh paya kya...!!! use army officer kis ne banaya...jarur bharghav ne banaya hoga...😑!!!
personally mujhe poems baht achhe lagte hain...πŸ˜ƒ!!! tumne hindi me jo kavita likhi aur last voh poem...baht hi achha tha...aur situation k hisab se bilkul perfect baithta hai...!!! really amazing yaar...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thanks...
ab plz jaldi se raj ki entry karwao na...!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Nope...intezaar ka phal mittha hota hai baalike...πŸ˜›
aur jahan tak dukhi aatma ka award ki baat hai...πŸ˜›!!! toh koi gal nahin hai ji...πŸ˜›!!! ab yeh toh chalta hi hai...πŸ˜›!!! kyoun ki yeh award bhi mehek aur vershita mujhe pahle hi de chuke hain...πŸ˜›!!! aur mujhe akele 'dukhi aatma ki kashti' me rahna achha nahin lagta tha...πŸ˜›!!! isiliye ab tum aa gayi ho na...toh mil kar 'dukhi aatma ki kashti' me maze karenge....πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Phew...chalo koi gal nahi toh phir...πŸ˜›
God...yeh mera comment hai...😲!!! sharm aani chahiye mujhe...😑!!! kisi par naraz hone k baad itna bada comment post nahin karte...!!!thank u..and luv u 4 this...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

A very emotional update

Standing in from of the Wall of fame reminded naina of the first time that she had met raj. But then reality strikes and she understands that it was only her dream.
Alekh, Huda and naina miss their best and most friendly teacher...they will always miss him. They try to be like him for their students and they succeed as well....but they regret that these students will never know raj and his qualities.
You have potrayed everyones emotions beautifuly.
It was bad of Naina's parents to emotionally blackmail her in such a way...decisions of marraige should never be forced upon. Rahul should never have tried to replace Raj's watch by a new one...Naina is right...when she cannot bring herself to replace Raj's watch how was she to replace him in her life.
please continue soon

Thank u soooo much....will update soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
NOTE:
heya guys.....
hope you all are doing fine.. I recently came to know about the multiple PM feature on IF...
So if you would like to be informed through a PM when I update, please send me the buddy request...so that i'll be able 2 inform u without fail....

take care,
manatated😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good yaar, πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thanks a ton !
i just read the part two n this was brilliant.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Y did Naina get posted on KMA again?😲 😲 😲 Again for the safety of triggers. Yeah...she gets posted 4 the triggers again....but it's destiny... Naina's mom's n dad's worries are genuine because already last two times something wrong had happened to their dear ones 😭 😭 😭 so now Naina is going to do the duty so how could they allow Naina to work on Naveen's case again? πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
She has already promised Rajveer that she would bring his honor back to him so i believe she would do it;😊 😊 😊 neways update soon n i have a complain that u didn't inform me whenever u update , so pls next time do it.Sorry dear...i will definitely PM you !

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

ONe thing i would like to say that Hussain looks old as compared to Naina so may be u can choose anyone else. Haan kya?? mujhe koi aur nahi soojha....u suggest some one naa...
Coming to the ud,
I liked this one n would like to have our Raj back in Naina's life asap . Haan yaar...mujhse bhi unki doori aur bardasht nahi hoti parr.....

Now pls don't let Naina wait more n more because i know she can't wait for so long.😭 😭 😭 Her parents made her agree to marry with Rahul but how can she marry with someone else?😑 😑 😑 Even i'm angry wid her parents....lets see....agar unka pyaar sachcha hai....toh....
Their emotional atyaachaar made her week n she had to take the decision this time.😭 😭 😭 No...she isn't weak...i think you can very well makeout it from her resolve that she belong to Raj and Raj only..... It's just to save her parents...she agreed for a ritual....
Rahul called Raj's watch old!😲 😲 😲 how can he do like this? 😑 😑 But i know there wasn't his mistake he didn't know about it.πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
As far as the juta chappal comes i think there is no need for that because all parents will do the same.
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Sorry yaar, now i days i come to forum less so i didn't get enough time to read it n reply on it, so will read a few more parts soon i will reply soon.πŸ˜›
Just now i read the one more part of u r fic n this was good but more than that suspicious that y did Naina get posted in KMA again.
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It's ok varsita....but i'll be waiting for you to read and comment on my fic... About Naina getting posted in KMA, she is there to assist in guarding the triggers...you will come to know as you read further...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part five :

Then her eye fell on her hand that was adorned with Raj's

watch.She instantly calmed down.She slowly moved her
fingers over it and kissed it, as if she is kissing his hand.

The ticking of the watch reminded her of his heart beats....

She slowly got up and went near window. She stood there

gazing at the moon.

How, How could we go wrong
It was so good and now it's gone
And I pray at night that our paths will soon cross
And what we had isn't lost
Cause you're always right here in my thoughts


You'll always be in my life
Because you're in my memory
And before you set me free
Oh listen please

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That somebody's me

She can't even replace Raj's watch.....How is anyone going to replace RAJ?

And she smiled sadly....at her destiny.....

'Life can't be worse than this'

" Raj...", she uttered looking at moon ," Main bas aapse pyaar karti hoon. Saari zindagi bas aap hi se pyaar karti rahoongi. Magar mere naseeb mein ye sukh bhi nahi hai ke mein bas aapki yaadon mein jeeuon. Mujhe...mujhe yeh engagement karni hogi....Baba ke liye. Naina ke dil mein toh aapke alawa koi aur nahi aa sakta, parr...parr Naina ki zindagi mein koi aa raha hai......Aap ....aap mujhe Maaf kardenge naa? Aap apni naina ko samajhte hai naa?"

And she rest her head helplessly on the reeling. After

sometime, her mother came and made her sleep on the
bed.
And it was only for her parents happiness, she decided to
step into her new life….Lt.Naina Singh was getting
engaged to Capt.Rahul Kapoor who was working at
Defence academy at pune.It was not that she considered
Rajveer to be dead, she was sure he will return, but the
happiness of her parents were at the cost of her……

She made her stands clear to Rahul while getting into this
relationship , that she was going to work at KMA as a
teacher even after getting married. And he happily agreed to it.
And it may seem unbelievable, but Rahul agreed to naina's request…….afterall who will want to live away from his wife……But it was his love for her. He fell in love with her at the first sight. He respected her , and his respect grew for her each time he met her and made his decision of wanting to become her partner.
Rahul was always in a search of opportunity to meet her. He tried his best to make Naina open up to him, To make her laugh. Rahul was a good observer. He always saw sadness in her eyes. It was a tough job extracting laughter on that beautiful face.Her Smile, whenever appeared was to hide her pain and her laughter to hide her tears. He saw longing in those beautiful eyes. But for whom, he had no idea. He didnt consider it right to ask her now only as their relationship has just begun to flourish. He decided to ask afterwards.

She did not tell Rahul about relationship between her and Raj, because she felt he might not understand the depth of her emotions….her love for Raj, and one more reason was her parents , they had told her not to tell him anything about Raj……
So it was all fix…….she was going to get engaged tomorrow!
Then her father came to her.....
"Naina beti..."

But she was turned into a statue....she was thinking about Raj......

The thought of she belonging to someone else tearing her apart....
Her father tried her calling thrice, but when she didn't respond, He went forward and hugged her....
She rested her head on his chest staring forward when suddenly she saw ........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Bad!!!!!

Naina was gazing at the moon thinking about Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Prerna se lekar Heer tak sab heroines yehi karti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj is not here and Naina is in a fix!!!!!!

Why do the parents behave like this??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

It must be really painful for Naina to get married to someone else!!!!!!

She said she will forever love him but is forced to get engaged!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

This is not Naina!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Naina ladti haalat se aise haar nahi manti!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Naina toh apne parents se ladh kar KMA gayi thi na toh ab usse kya huya??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Itni asani se usne har maan gayi!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’She is ready to marry somone else!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

She can take a transfer and go away somewhere!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊She can even run away!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

When she knows he is alive then why is she doing this!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Kya usne yeh nahi socha ke Raj jab lautega toh uspe kya beetegi??😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Well jab usne har manke kisi aur se shaadi karke samjhauta karna ka faisla kar hi liya hai then I don't think there is any need for Raj to come back!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

She can just marry this Rahul and do whatever she likes!!!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

As it is she is behaving like a typical K serial heroine!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Rahul agreed to let Naina stay at KMA!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Good for him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul is trying to make Naina happy but he does not know its not possible!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina kaise khush rahe jab uski saari khusiyan cheen chuki hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She should tell Rahul about Raj!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But I doubt that would deter him from marrying her!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina ke parents bahut galat kar rahe hai ek jhoot pe ek riste ki buniyaad rakh ke!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Why is Naina resting her head on her father's chest??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Ideally she should not be talking to them at all!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina ne aisa kya dekha??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part...but very sad... 😭
naina is missing raj soo much... but she doesnt hv any other choice ...she has to move on in her life for her parents sake... πŸ˜•
"Naina ke dil mein toh aapke alawa koi aur nahi aa sakta, parr...parr Naina ki zindagi mein koi aa raha hai......Aap ....aap mujhe Maaf kardenge naa? Aap apni naina ko samajhte hai naa?".... this ws v sad part.... πŸ˜’
rahul is trying to make her happy but he doesnt know it is not possible as naina herself doesnt want to be happy..afterall how cud she?? πŸ˜’ ...
whom she saw??what???
hope she gets some happiness... n her happiness means...??.!!!!
Edited by sweet_shona - 16 years ago

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