Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
Great Part..!!!👏
I feel sad for Naina..!!! 😭
And that guy is ready to stay away from her...??😕 waise its gud...!!!! 😉
And what did she see...????😕
Can't wait for the next part...!!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Wonderful part dear👏.But too small.

Anyway, u beautifully shown the love and pain of naina.

She is suffering too much😭.

Pls, raj ke sath usse jaldi se mila do,

Post next part soon dear.

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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh Raj is not here n Naina is in a fix. I donno y parents behave like this. It must be really painful for her to get engaged to sum1 else. I luved the lines that said: She smiled to hide the sadness n laughed to hide the tears. It was very touching. And I liked the song also. Wonder whom or wat she saw.

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kind of Disheartning, to see Naina in that state 😭 I understand her Completly .. I would have done what she is doing, just for my Parents 😒 But I really hope she Tells Rahul that she Loves Raj, He seems like a Guy who'll Understand 😊 BTW who or what did she See ...

You got me Curious !! 😕

So please Update soon !! 😃 and BTW this was a Very Nice Update 👏 👏

Take Care 🤗

Yasmin
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
a very emotional n very touching part....but beautiful......

hope she dosent gets engaged....

but lets see wats der on ur mind....

waitin for next.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
very emotional update
naina has completely broken down. she is missing raj very much..but she has no choice but to do get married for her parents.
You have written some beautiful lines, to describe naina's emotions and pain. I specially liked these two.
"Naina ke dil mein toh aapke alawa koi aur nahi aa sakta, parr...parr Naina ki zindagi mein koi aa raha hai......Aap ....aap mujhe Maaf kardenge naa? Aap apni naina ko samajhte hai naa?"
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"She smiled to hide the sadness n laughed to hide the tears. It was very touching. And I liked the song also. Wonder whom or wat she saw."

Please continue soon


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Bad!!!!! 😭😭

Naina was gazing at the moon thinking about Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Prerna se lekar Heer tak sab heroines yehi karti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 U know...main bhi yahi karti hoon😆 jab mom mujhe daanti hai 😆yaa mere exam theek nahi hote 😆yaa koi problem hoti hai....mann ko shaanti bhi milti hai aur dimaag ki batti bhi jalati hai (mentos ki zaroorat nahi padhti!😆😆😆)...even u try it some day...😆

Raj is not here and Naina is in a fix!!!!!!

Why do the parents behave like this??😕 😕 😕 😕I know this is not a right thing to do....but try to understand their view rather than getting too preoccupied that all parents in evry serial does the same....Thinking from their pov....i feel they have already lost their son, they are getting old ...and having seen the state of their only daughter, any parent's heart would wrench....In such conditions, no parent would decide to let her daughter live alone with her grief....any father would try to bring some happiness....In case of her parents, they know it isn't possible, but they are hopeful....

It must be really painful for Naina to get married to someone else!!!!!! Ofcourse it is!! after all she truely loved Rajveer...

She said she will forever love him but is forced to get engaged!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

This is not Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Naina ladti haalat se aise haar nahi manti!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Well THIS IS Naina....any other girl who truely loved some person and forced to marry someone else would either suicide or run away( as u suggested) , but this what real Naina is... Woh apne inn WORST HAALATON se ladd rahi hai....Death is easier for her, you know...but she is fighting her life...We should appreciate her spirit, shouldn't we?

Naina toh apne parents se ladh kar KMA gayi thi na toh ab usse kya huya??😕 😕 😕 😕Woh unnse ladd kar KMA gayi thi, but somewhere, uske parents bhi uske saath unknowingly uss decision mein the...they wanted their son to be proven innocent....And one more thing....she has gone for her BROTHER....that is not HERSELF but for someone ELSE.... Khud ke liye apne parents ko dukh dena yeh kisi bhi beti ke liye aasan nahi hota...aur woh bhi tab jab her father suffered a heart attack....do you expect her to make her mom lose her husband too after she lost her son??

Itni asani se usne har maan gayi!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒She is ready to marry somone else!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡If not for her father's health, she wouldn't have agreed....Afterall, she is not just a soldier and Raj's love, but a DAUGHTER too...

She can take a transfer and go away somewhere!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊She can even run away!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She can't take transfer...she needs to proove Raj and Naveen innocent and for that staying in KMA is important. and with the time, evidences will fade, so this is the last option... And to run away....this is not Naina....tHis is not what Raj had taught her...to 'Run away' from life's battles..

When she knows he is alive then why is she doing this!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒I explained it above...

Kya usne yeh nahi socha ke Raj jab lautega toh uspe kya beetegi??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡She is thinking this all the time and that's why she is lost,isn't it? And well....we all know Raj....He can never misunderstand her as if she had betrayed him....

Well jab usne har manke kisi aur se shaadi karke samjhauta karna ka faisla kar hi liya hai then I don't think there is any need for Raj to come back!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Again you got it wrong...Ussne apne father ke health se haar maani...not with the situation....She is just getting engaged....if you would have noticed, she even made herself clear to rahul that she would stay at KMA....Aur uske liye naa sahi...Raj ko mere liye aur baaki RN fans ke liye toh aana hi hoga re baba!😆

She can just marry this Rahul and do whatever she likes!!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢Oho! Shaina mataji is so very angry on our Naina...😆

As it is she is behaving like a typical K serial heroine!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Arey yaar...get out the K-serial out of your mind re! That makes you perceive K-serial anywher and everywhere😛 Think like i'm doing....Naina on a mission to fight life's worst battle.....! better lag raha hai naa?

Rahul agreed to let Naina stay at KMA!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Woh sab RN fans se darr gaya...😆

Rahul is trying to make Naina happy but he does not know its not possible!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina kaise khush rahe jab uski saari khusiyan cheen chuki hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She should tell Rahul about Raj!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But I doubt that would deter him from marrying her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Exactly!

Naina ke parents bahut galat kar rahe hai ek jhoot pe ek riste ki buniyaad rakh ke!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Aisi situations mein sab logics,ethics gayab hojate hai parents ke...

Why is Naina resting her head on her father's chest??😕 😕 😕 😕Ideally she should not be talking to them at all!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡She herself is not resting re ! Now i'm annoyed with you ! 😡 maine itni mehnat se likha...aur tumne thik se padha bhi nahi?? maine likha na she is turned into stone and her father hugs her....Ab woh koi paraya mard to hai nahi jo woh jhatke se side hojayegi😆 come on yaar...itz her father , after all ! And right now,she is not in a position to argue anything....

Naina ne aisa kya dekha??😕 😕 😕 😕Woh tum bhi agle update mein dekhogi...😆

Thanks for commenting....hope i'm able to satisfy atleast few of your doubts...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dear......😊
First of all...ek writer k liye sab se bada challege hota hai...us k charachters k emotions ko xpress karna...!!! chahe vo comic ho ya tragic....romantic ho ya aur kuch...!!! badi baat yeh hai ki jo tumhe read kar rahe hon...voh khud us charachter k situation ko feel kar saken...!!! jo ki tum ne is ud se bakhubi nibhaya hai...!!! too gud dear... just awesome...👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
zindagi itni asaan nahin hoti...jaisa ki hum serials ya movies me dekhte hain...!!! apni ek khusi k liye baht sare compromise karne padte hain. aur apni khud ki khusi se pahle humain un ki khusiyon ka khyal karna padta hai...jin ki khusiyan hum se saamil hain...!!!😃
naina ne bhi bilkul vahi kiya hai...!!! apni khusi ka nahin balki us ne apni parents ki khusi ka khayal rakha. chahe voh ander se kitni bhi dukhi ho...kitni bhi tuti hui ho...par...us k liye yeh jaruri tha ki us se jude hue log...kam se kam khush toh rahen...!!! hala ki us ki zindagi me khusiyan rahe na rahen...!!! ek daughter ka scrifice apne parents k liye...ek lover ka emotion apne khoye hue pyar k liye...baht hi achha likha hai tum ne...!!! har ek word har ek line jo naina k dil se nikli....ek dam sahi tha... naturally...ek aam insaan ki zindagi aisi hi hoti hai...😊
"she smile to hide d sadness & laughed to hide d tears" ...my fav line...😃!!! yaar yeh toh mere dil ki baat thi...tumhare paas kaise chali gayi...!!!😃
naina ka raj se dil hi dil me baat karna...yeh sochna ki voh use jarur maaf kar dega...it's very touching...👏
hope ki Rahul ko sachhai pata chal jaye...aur voh Raj aur Naina ki zindagi me RAAHU ban kar na baithe...aur apne liye TINA ko dhundh le...😆
vaise main hamesha itna emotional nahin rahti...par kabhi kabhi ho jati hun...😳!!! aur aaj is comments ka pura shrey jata hai...IF ko...😡!!! kyoun ki yeh pg khulne k liye mujhe 20 baar try karna pada...😡!!! aur main itna emotional ho gayi ki yeh comment kuch aisa ho gaya...!!! toh plzzz yaar...maaf kar dena...!!! 😃
cont soon.😊
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part
Felt very bad for naina
update soon

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