Where did I go wrong?KaSh Mini - COMPLETE - Page 93

Originally posted by: jennykaranSG

hey steff :).. finally you updated!! :) i loved this update!! finally everything is on the open.. ;) but how did they get together like taht.... on the bed.... in riddhima's house??

please update soon :)

soni <3

Originally posted by: -Steffz-

Page 109, I guess you missed one part of forgot,😳
thanks a lot 😳

I'm back 😳

Firstly, I'm so sorry for the late comments but I've been busy and while I've told you that numerous times, I still feel guilty about my tardiness. Secondly, thank you so much for the dedication, and lol true I have bugged you a lot for this update in the past. However, I understand your reasons behind it...

Now onto the update:

I loved it 😃

I think my favorite part is the way you write using a lot of metaphors...it paints a vivid picture in one's mind. In a way it's ambiguous and open to interpretation in many different manners. Moving on, I find this AR quite different than the one in the actual show, especially what AR later became. Actually more than Armaan, I find Riddhima quite different here. She actually understands Armaan, his family (especially his mother aka the wicked witch ;p ) and his limitations. More importantly, they both trust each other a lot, but still the breakup in this relationship happened because of miscommunication. It sounds quite trivial, but I think in that instance Riddhima had reached her threshold level, and she couldn't cope with all the pressure. Hence she allowed her insecurity and evil mom-in-law aka wicked witch to get the best of the situation. I really do wish that Armaan had seeked her out before and dealt with this mess as soon as it happened but oh well.

Nonetheless, even after all this happened, I loved how she believed him so easily and finally understood the whole situation. Again with the DMG AR, especially Riddhima, we wouldn't have seen that. Her instant belief was another great example of the trust she has in Armaan and their relationship. It was necessary for her to cry and quite understandable that she grieved and regretted over the past, and thought of what could have been. And on the other side, I loved how Armaan was there to give her support and take her out of this mood. Thankfully, you didn't spend a whole update on AR crying and thinking about what could have been.

I sort of wish Rahul and Muskaan had a greater role but in this FF AR seem to be the only characters and the others seem more like guest appearances to help move the story along, hence it's okay.

About Ahana? I so thought you would end on Armaan being confused about her or at least at the part when Riddhima comes in the room with her. I didn't think the ending would be on Neha's appearance. Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the family moment you created. It was all so cute and so needed! Armaan had been deprived for a long time but somewhere I also feel that he's also responsible for that. He shouldn't have let his mom overrule their lives and also he shouldn't have taken so bloody long to search for her. In a way, I think Armaan has dealt with his relationship and the bindings of his mother. This FF is focusing more on the AR part but there also seems to be a very strong Armaan-mother relationship that has not been revealed as much...however since people wish to read about AR and these are romantic FFs, this makes sense.

Still though, one thing that bothers me is that did Armaan actually think she aborted the baby? I hope he believed it to be a miscarriage because there would just be something very wrong with his trust in Riddhima and their relationship if he believed it to be abortion.

Okay that's all I have to ramble on for now. I think I talked more about the past situation as opposed to the new update but since this update dealt with the demons from the past, I thought it was necessary. All in all, it was very good, and I really want more family moments especially with Ahana and Armaan. And hey how about telling us how Riddhima selected that name for her? I'm sure it has something to do with Armaan...as I said before, I read the previous parts before so I might be forgetting something if you did reveal the reasons for it already.

Take care and take all the time you need with the next one. And once again, thank you so much =)