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Posted: 14 years ago
FINALLY! (:

I really liked this part, although, I did expect the whole 'Armaan-finding-out-about-Ahana'-thing would be a tad bit more emotional. Honestly, I thought he'd get a bit mad, lol. But I also read that you're planning on ending this FF soon so I guess that's why you made the reunion happy?

Anyways other than that I LOVED the new part and I'm sorry if my opinion hurt you or offended you in any way, just thought I'd be honest. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahmina96

Oh My Gosh! This was such a BEAUTIFUL moment in the ff!

ok now back to you missy! Steffz damn you! i thought you had just left this ff hanging but i guess you were nice enough to finally bless us with an update finally! its good to have you back even though this f will be ending but atleast we know that you will still be here....for us to nag you for another ff

Aww, that's so sweet Tahmina .. nag me? 😆 This isn't the end of my writing, I'll be back with something else, for sure! You can count on that 😊
Back to the update: it was such a beautiful moment. And omg this ff is so KaShified - i imagine KaSh in every AR ff but this one especially is just soo KaShified. OMG the baby reunion was chooo cute! Aah bless. A wonderful update and things are finally wrapping up but i guess there will always be that regret (even though AR will forget about the ugliness of that past years but it will take time) of losing those precious years and their first baby moments because of a misunderstanding.

I love KaSh, and you just said what I always wanted to hear! 🤗
Yes it will, but hopefully, something better may be in store for them, you never know! 😉😆



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: GoldenPanda.

FINALLY! (:


I really liked this part, although, I did expect the whole 'Armaan-finding-out-about-Ahana'-thing would be a tad bit more emotional. Honestly, I thought he'd get a bit mad, lol. But I also read that you're planning on ending this FF soon so I guess that's why you made the reunion happy?

The reunion had to be happy, I didn't want too much crying actually, really.. that was all limited to before Ahana came in And there are some more Armaan-Ahana moments to come. :-) (Besides, they say never cry too much in front of an infant) 😆
Frankly, such moments are hard to get into words and I'm an amateur writer, still learning, I found it hard to express emotions that are inexpressible in words, basically it's easier when you see things, like on TV, but here, your imagination can go to a great extent, that was what I was and am hoping for! :-)

Anyways other than that I LOVED the new part and I'm sorry if my opinion hurt you or offended you in any way, just thought I'd be honest. :)

No way, cummon, I'm open to criticism, It helps in improving! Thanks a lot 🤗

Edited by -Steffz- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
woaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
seriously an awesome update
loved it
god the last part was soooo cuteee
and the whole update was really very nice
i guess one of the best
but short..:(
anyways continue soon
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg loved ur updates yaar. too gud nd toooo cuuuuuuute. do pm me again . ty
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Posted: 14 years ago

Steff i have always known you were a kashian even though i would have liked to see you in the kash heaven more often so that we could talk as kashians and so i guess you would know about ArSh - you say you will continue writing so have you ever thought of writing your next piece on ArSh? just curious

what is the thing in store for AR which will be better? 😛 another baby?! 😆
I don't know if i want you to update soon because i don't want this ff too end so fast after you have come back to updating it. but I guess i would want you to update with the last parts of this ff knowing that you have another idea on mind for your next ff so that we don't have to wait after the end of this ff for you to come up with another ff story because you already would have! confused?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bary

oh god i am like surprised to see this
reserved it takes time for me to recollect all parts..lol
swetha


so read all the parts again like roller coaster ride,reading all at once
great part,really happy to know u thought to end it not discontinue it
rahul n muskaan saviors said only till required,great
hope u come back with some thing a fresh thought n inspiration to write if u are free
though i read only AR ff's i prefer only some in that,i am happy i choose urs
thnx for pm
swetha
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahmina96

Steff i have always known you were a kashian even though i would have liked to see you in the kash heaven more often so that we could talk as kashians and so i guess you would know about ArSh - you say you will continue writing so have you ever thought of writing your next piece on ArSh? just curious ---> I have stepped into KaSh heaven a few times, but I dunno, I feared I would end up comparing and may be getting down to constructively criticize KaSu, and I didn't want to offend anyone, 😳 so I kept away 😳 Oh yes, about my next piece of writing, No, well, you never know who it might be on and what it might be either,😉 I'm trying something different, dunno if it will work...🤔 However, I never found any difference between KaSh and ArSh, she is just Shilpa and she is also the true, first and last Riddhima for me!

what is the thing in store for AR which will be better? 😛 another baby?! 😆 ---> You never know!

I don't know if i want you to update soon because i don't want this ff too end so fast after you have come back to updating it. but I guess i would want you to update with the last parts of this ff knowing that you have another idea on mind for your next ff so that we don't have to wait after the end of this ff for you to come up with another ff story because you already would have! confused?😆

Mixed feelings? I understand how it is, toss a coin, you'll know what you want 😳 I haven't started working on the next one, I just have a plot, for sure, but I have to pen it down, let's see how it goes, you may have to wait a teeny bit, actually I wanted to start it around Feb, but I dunno if I can hold that long... I'll plan once my Sem exams are done... (Nov 10th is the last exam)

Oh... Did I mention it's going to be a FF?
Coz you really never know! 😎

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bary


so read all the parts again like roller coaster ride,reading all at once
great part,really happy to know u thought to end it not discontinue it
rahul n muskaan saviors said only till required,great
hope u come back with some thing a fresh thought n inspiration to write if u are free
though i read only AR ff's i prefer only some in that,i am happy i choose urs
thnx for pm
swetha



You guys, are my motivation, no matter what, people like you have motivated me, so yes, I'll be up with something truly fresh! 😳 Thank you so much for spending time and going thru my whole fic again, I know I've been a pain

@ red: You dunno how elated I am, you really have no idea, thank you very much 🤗


Edited by -Steffz- - 14 years ago

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