My Journey-MayUr FF Part-16 pg-116, 5/dec

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

shinella

@shinella

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

ruchhhhhhhhhi

i loooooooooooooved it

add me to the pm list its suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb

and dont leave this hanging like the other ones and make it a happy one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Quote

Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

RUCHHIIIII!!

i loved it.. cont soon i want more.. love the way u write sis.. : ) do cont soon plzzz. thanks for the pm.. xxSonia

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

ruchi ruchi , my magical queen, your ff is sooooooo unique and exciting, i have never read any ff on mayur like this, oh gosh the way you narrated how mayank and nupur were feeling, gave me so many butterflies in my tummy man, it got me soooooo interested that when this part ended i was like no this is not happening, oh man i am soooooo excited to read ahead. excellent job, do continue man. i am totally enjoying and loving it.

Quote

palak5

@palak5

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Another FF jaani...please add me to the pm list first..

ohk the first part!..ruchi the way you write is phenomenal..i mean the beginning was amazing and the way you've put mayank's POV!!..ahem ahem..imagine karne lag jati hoon..its powerful....there is this different feelin when i read it..and thats just because of the way you put it..!!you are amazing jaani!!loved the first part ..do update soon..!!love you🤗

Quote

Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

wow ruchi jaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......tnx alot fr d pm yaar........im so happy u started anoder one........totally luved d concept!.......1st part ws too gud......mind blowing.......bt dat does nt mean u shud stop updtin ur oder ffs.......so ill wait fr all 3 2 b updated ok?........nyway continue soon.....nd plz pm me...
luv ya
ananya

Quote

nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

hi ruchi!

really nice beginning. poor mayur.........but jo hota hain achchhe ke liye hi hota hain....lol.

anyways, awesome part. continue soon.

Quote

Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

ruchi dear...........plzzzzzzzz update dis 1 n d other ff's of urs soon....its been ages yaar dat u hv updated d older ones!!!! 😔 n plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz yaar pm me wen u update ny of ur ff's... 🤔 ok??? god bless ya dear!!! 👍🏼
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

Quote

meepha

@Meeph

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

CONGRATS on ur new FF Ruchi!!!!

will definately read it

Add me to the pm list

Quote

Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

wowwwwwwww..............ruchi........wht a superb amazing REALISTIC start!!!!!!!!!...........👏.....
it ws soooooooooo soooooooo real............i lovd it vry muchhhhhh n like other ffs of urs....tere is ff par bhi main fida ho gayi hun yaar.........n thnxxxxxxx soooooo much for d pm........🤗