My Journey-MayUr FF Part-16 pg-116, 5/dec - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ruchi yaar this is not rite!!!tum hamaisha lutka kay chalee jaatee hoo!!!plzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeah ruchi u will surely get chappals 4 not updating ur ffs...i m waiting eagerly for beete lamhe..😭😭
achha chal tujhe maaf kiya...😆😆
just bcoz of this new ff which sounds very romantic .... oolaallaaa...arrange marriage...woohooo..matlab marriage ke baad love hoga...ahem ahem....hamari khushi ka dhyan rakhna baalike..😆😆



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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow....nice intro...
plzz continue soon....
m waiting...
plzz pm me...!!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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koolll...please PM me when u update...i cant wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeh!!!!!!!!! ruchi....... aur ek ff...........

yaar jaldi update kar..........can't wait😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww................ruchi...........another gr8888888 ff is on d way,huh?superb intro.........n i just looovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvd ur one liner-journey from strangers , to frnds , to soulmates........👏 👏👏

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz add me to d pm list dear......... really really eagerly w8in for ur updates........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow gr8 yaar... one more ff......
nice tag line yaar....
"journey from strangers , to frnds , to soulmates..".....wow dats really gr8
plzzz yaar continue soon........
n plzz dont forget 2 add me 2 ur pm list okkk....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PARt-1

i was sitting on the edge of the bed , when Gunjan came in
Gunjan : dii...kya kar rahi ho ? abhi tak ready nhain huyi tum !!
i didnt reply a word , i was looking at my image in the mirror , all dazzed -confused . Gunjan saw and came and knelt down next to me
Gunjan : tum teekh ho na dii ?
i came out of my thoughts and smiled weakly
Nupur : hmm,...teekh hoon
Gunjan : par lag toh nahin raha !
Nupur : pata nahin gunjan ..kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki ek ajanbi ke saath poori zindagi kaise nikalungii ..
i took a deep breathe and got up to get ready
Gunjan : phir tumne mummy-papa se kyun nahin kaha , ki tumne ladka nahin dekhna ?
Nupur : mein jaante hoon , tum yehi sooch rahi hogi , par zindagi meri sapno ke duniya nahin hai ...yahaan DDLJ ke Raj ke tarah koi nahin hoga aur na mein Simran ke tarah lucky hongi..mummy-papa ka yehi sapnahai aur phir jo unhone soocha hoga woh mere aache ke liye he hoga na .
I smiled a bit , this was the best way to console myself .....
I was standing in kitchen and gunjan placed the tea-cups in the tray for me to get it outside for my wuld-be-inlaws and husband
yeh humesha ladkiyon ko formality kyun karne padhti hai...kuch bhi kaho , yeh baat mein India poora filmy hai !!!!
I took the tray outside ...i didnt dare to look up..but mom kept on introducing me to everyone ...i served the tea to each one sitting there and then as a custom bend down to take blessings from my wuld-be-mother-in-law. She kissed me on my forehead and as we hear in hindi movies ''bahut pyaar bachhi hai'' , i looked up at her..but i dont know ,i felt the warmth in her smile .
then she introduced me to my wuld-be-husband ..Mr. Mayank Sharma , my eyes shot up ..i looked at him , he was well dressed in black suit ...i must say , he was looking hot !!!!...my heartbeats didnt go abnormal, neither i went hyperventilated but still i culd trace honesty in his eyes...
Mayank's POV
what am i dong here ...maa ko ladki photo dekhkar he aachi lag gayi thi and before coming to there place , they have already planned everythng....!!!
as i was already getting late for the meeting but culdnt utter a word coz mom strictly warned me against it...then my eyes went to a girl coming from kitchen , she was acrrying a tray but i culd make out that she was actually trembling , ''our customs are soo cruel'' ..but then my eyes went to her face as she stood opposite me..she was gorgeous and her best features were her eyes..dark brown dove eyes..we both settled down..but the uncomfortable air was making it difficult to evn stay there for a minute
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i seated next to him , as my mother ordered ...we both didnt utter a word..it was our parents who were discussing about our wedding
wat an irony yaar..shaadi jiski hai ,usse toh kuch poocha bhi nahin jaata hai....
Finally the wedding was fixed ..it was in next month but engagement was planned after a week !!
then our parents decided to leave us alone for us to know each other better
how can two people know each other in 20 minutes ???
we both were left alone ..we looked at each othr and then turned other side...and in that 5minutes were wasted...finally Mayank took some deep breathe and began with the convo !
Mayank : hii !!
Nupur [wat an way to start the convo] : hii..
Mayank ; so tum kya karte ho ?
Nupur : i thought u must be knowing this !!!
Mayank smiled ..he was impressed by my guts , i thought ..but watever u say , he had cute dimples !
Myaank : yeh , u are a fashion designer
Nupur : and tum CEO in Microsoft !
Mayank : are u ready for the marriage ?
my eyes shot up..i was not expecting this ...
Nupur : is there any choice left ?
as i said this..he smiled and i smiled back..
we both were fixed in same situation.

..ARRANGE MARRIAGE
PS: PLZ use the like tab .....!!
Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww what a beginning yaar......update soon.........can't wait for their marriage............😉 dr. ruchi muhje pm karana😆
Edited by AMMY LUVS RIDZ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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***EDITED***

u know what ruchi...tere har ff se dil ka rishta sa ban jata hai...aisa lagta hai jaise aisa kuch kahin mere saath to nahi hoga???
well aisa iss liye lagta hai kyunki shayad hum apne aas pass aisa kuch hote huye dekhte hain...
ye wala ff to realities lekar aaya hai...
aisa hi hota hai jab do strangers milte hain..life me pehli baar..aur shaadi fix kar di jaati hai..aur unko poori life ek saath bitane hoti hai but unko khud pata nahin hota ki "kya kare aur kya na kare"...
loved the first part...
u r brilliant yaar...👏👏👏
thanx 4 d pm..
ab jaldi se "beete lamhe" bhi update kar de...😉



Edited by falak01 - 16 years ago

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