RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago
Totally agree with you shilpa ....the part was so Awwwwwwwww - able....awesome update appy ......i cant totally imagine rahul blushing hayeeeeeeeeee .....MAST update tha

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Posted: 15 years ago
great part!!
thanks for the pm!!
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww. i loved the confession and this part was also adorable!!

continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ya i am statring a new RM FF: EK rishta thoda hatke....
I have already posted the introduction..i will post the update as soon as this ff gets over...........
Thanks all for ur lovely comments..it means a lot for me....really....
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Posted: 15 years ago
That is awesome Appy!! Can't wait for it!!

But after this one? Do you mean this will end soon? 🤔
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooo cuuuuuuuute yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
;lovd it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
HOW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Such a sweet part bachha! I absolutely loved it!!! MWAH!


love you!


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Posted: 15 years ago
d confession!! it was amazing apoorva, certainly d highlight of d FF so far.. very beautifully done..👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 i just loved it..! thankfully rahul realized what an idiot he was to deny their love a chance.. d next part was very cute too.. their relationship in a new light, as a couple finally.. eagerly waiting to see what's next with them.. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 24:


Next morning:

Rahul went to Sanjeevani early as he had three surgery lined up...he was asssisting the senior doctors...

After his surgeries were done Rahul was searching for Muskaan...

R- Sister, Dr.Muskaan kahan hai???

Sis- Dr.Rahul woh orphange gayi hai wahan ke bachon ke rotuine check up ke liye..

R- Ok....Dr.Sameer bhi gaye hai kya unke saath???

Sis- Nahi..Dr.Sameer ki transfer ho gayi hai delhi.....Dr.Muskaan ke saath Dr.NAina gayi hai....

R- Sameer ki tarnsfer hui hai???

Sis- jee..unho ne aapke liye yeh lettre diya hai.....

R- ok..thank u....


Rahul,

Congrats..main tum dono ke liye bahut khush hu..I am sure ab tak Muskaan ne apni dil ki baat tumhe bata di hogi..i hope so...mujhe pata hai ki woh tumse bahut pyaar karti hai aur tum bhi use utan hi ya shsyad usse jyada pyaar karte ho.....Tum dono hamesh asaath rehna..u both make a wonderful couple.....
Yaar main wapis Delhi jaa raha hu....mujhe yahan kuch aacah nahi lag raha...Ghar ki bahut yaad aarahi hai aur phie kuch hi mahino me didi bhi aayengi unki first pregenancy hai na?? so they will need a doctor neraby..main jaa raha hu...I am sorry tum dono se mile bina jaa rajha hu bt tum samajte sakte ho na....

Mujhe yaad rakhna if possible....I wish u both avery happy life ahead.......Take care....Good bye.............


Sameer


R- O Sameer..thansk dude..Tum ne abhut help ki hai humari! Agar tu Muskaan ko himmat nahi deta toh woh shayad kabhi aake mujhse baat nahi kar pati....Toh hum akbhi mil hi nahi paate..mera point of view aur Muskaan ka bahut diferent tha..hum dono ek hi cheez chahte the bt ek dusre se keh hi nahi paye..... Sameer thanks a toh yaar...Main samaj sakta hu ki tujhe Muskaan sach me apsand thi aur tu hume saath dekh anhi apyega isliye jaa raha hai..i respect it.....Tujhe zindagi me ahr khushi miloe yehi dua hai meri.....

Two weeks passed quickly....Rahul was getting more confident while doing the surgeries....he was doing the suregries in supervision of the seniors...Muskaan was more than happy seimng his progress...

One day:

Rahul was waiting for Muskaan in the canteen....

He saw her running in his direction....

R- Whao..Muskaan jaan sambhalke.....plZzz........


Bt it was tooo alte....Muskaal sliped & dashed on rahul...both fell on the ground...with Rahul below & Msukaan over him....

R- Kya karti hai Muskii??

He looked at her Bt she was busylooking at him...

RM eye lock

The canteen boy looked at RM & smiled.... he called out- Dr.Rahul...theek toh hai na aap???

RM abck to reality...

R- huh??? Haan main theek hu..Muskaan tujhe kagi toh nahi???

Muskaan was all red she could just manage to nodd....

RAhul stood up & held out his hand for Muskaan..she shyly looked at him & took his hand....

R- Woh..tu itne jaldi jaldi me bhaag ke kyun aa rahi thi???

M- Haan..tujhe abhut jaruri baat batani thi...

R- Kyua????

M- Jab tu OT me tha toh Dr.Shahsank ka phone aaya tha aur he is really impressed by ur progress.....AND

R(expectantly)- And???

M- Aur woh chhate hai ki tu Mumbai wapas aajaye......(excited)

R- BINGO!!!!!!!!!! I was expecting this...o God mUskii Main abhut khush hu(hugs her)

M- Rahul main tere liye abhut khush hu..tujhe zindagi ki har khushi mile mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye....

R- Muskaan mere liye tera saath abhut jaruri hai..tune har kadam pe mera saath diya hai agar tu na hoti toh main london ke kissi street pe pagalon ki tarah-----

M(keeps her finger on his lips)- Shss...bahut bolta hai tu....

Coming to Mumbai Sanjeevani was prestigious as the geniunely talented ppl were given oppurtunity in Mumbai..pppl who Dr.Shahsnak felt had the ablity to ake it big...


Two days later:

RM on Goa airport:

R- So meri princess aaj abhut khush hai!!!

M(catches his arm)-Haan ...ab sab bilkul theek ho jayega...hum Mumbai jayenge phirse humari gang se milenge....

R- Kya kar arhi hai??? Sab dekh rahe hai..mera haath toh chod....

M- Kyun??? Maine apne boyfreind ka hi toh haath pakda hai na kisssi arregaire ka toh anhi...

R- Kya baaat hai!! Meri Muskii ek dum boldshold ho gayi..mere boyfreind ka haath hi toh pakda hai & all???

M(blushed)- Rahul!!!!!!

R- Waise Muskii aaj tujhe plane se jaane me daar nahi lag raha???

M(tightens the grip on his arm)- Nahi..aaj tu jo hai mere saath....Jab mera hero mere saath hai toh daarne ki kya baat hai???

R- Aur agar plane crash ho gaya toh???(joking)

M- Agar abhi maut bhi aa ajye toh mujhe koi gam nahi kyunki marungi toh bhi teri abhoon me....

R(tears)- Aee Muskii..plzzz aisa mat bol..i am sorry.main mazaak kar raha tha...Mere rehte tujhe kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta....

M- Mujhe pata hai....

RAhul smiles....

RM in plane:

M- Rahul tu Mumbai jaake PApaji se baat karega na/???

R(in mood to irritate Muskaan)- Uncleji se??? Kya baat karni hai???

M- Rahul humari Sh-

R- Kya Muksaan???(looking staright into her eyes)

M(lowers her eyes)- Tujhe pata hai na Rahul...

R- Nahi Msukii! Mujhe nahi pata tu bata na???(sheepish smile)

M- Huamri shaadi ki baat stupid....

R- oooo Tioh koi mujhse shaadi karna chahta hai.....

M- RAhul!!!!

R(smiles)- Ofcourse jaan..amin uncleji se baat karunga....I love u....

M- I love u tooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...

Muskaan rested her head on his shoulder & closed her eyes.......

hope u like it......do comment......criticize.......
sorry abt the spelling mistakes..maine bahut jaldi me type kia hai yeh part...i am going for my college tour for 8 days so maine update nahi kar paungi...so this is short update........
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Once again, cute part bachha! Very short and sweet! lovely update!



komz di

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