MayUr FF:- Together...Forever [Updt Chp 1-Pg 11]

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GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

i updated my comments on pg 16

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Lipsa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Hey kanika
*sholly 4 the late comment*:)
By the way fabulous update
u write so well
thanks for the pm
luv lipsa

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Ananya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......too gud yaar......loved it.....do continue.....

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Kanika05

Thanks!!!

i will...

good good.... now im happy... lolz.... wen are you gona update this.... it started off soooo welll....!!!!! lol!
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399703

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Kanika05

Thanks!!

ur welcome!

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

awwwwwwwww...that was so chweet re

truely awesome-blossom !!

jst loved it and they are fighting fr thta seat...lolzzz...so like mayank-nups

love yaa...its awsome

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kavya

@kavya.b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

kanika, this part wasn't short n i already feel i love with nupur
waiting for the nxt part

but dont worry, u beetr concentrate more on ur studies
thanks for the pm

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meluvsrk

@meluvsrk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

Hey Kanika,

I am so sorry for the late comment...I just read your FF....firstly congrats on your new FF and I must say the story so far is awesome dear! loved the way you wrote Nupur's POV and she named him Sadu...😆...do update soon...can't wait to read Mayank's POV...great job!!! and please please please add me to your PM list....I don't want to miss any part...

Ayushma

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LiSa

@KHJL

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Posted: 16 years ago

#129

OMG kanika darling...

that was superb!!!!👏👏
but then again i can never expect anything less from you..😊

u always leave me wanting more from ur writing...
and this time it was no different...
i want more hun...more..more..MORE😳😳

now about this first part of ur...toooooooooooo good!👏👏👏
loved how you've decided to continue this FF in both NPOV n MPOV...good idea...😛
would be so much fun reading both of their thought process as the story progresses..

as for NPOV...loved it!❤️
i was completely able to imagine her character...head strong, determined, stylish, short tempered
and an absolutely sweetheart...😳😛

very well written⭐️

that first part where u introduce her or rather where nupur introduces herself to the readers and then the story goes bak and continues from her point of view...fab-ly done...it blended in so well....👏👏👏

and the lil' sneak peeks you gave us...on mayank...
and his akdu+sadu paan...adorable!😳😳
can't wait to read MPOV on the next part...😉

like i always say hun...i'm a fan of ur writing style...
and always look forward to reading ur ffs/one shots😳
continue soon...me hungry for more of ur writing...
can't wait....😛

oh! and i totally forgot to mention...
i loved how it was similar to MJHT storyline with ur own twists to it😉...👏👏
once again it was a fantastic read⭐️😊....looking forward to the next part...and mayur nokh jhok in the upcomming part...😳

luv ya...🤗

~*LiSa*~

Edited by KHJL - 16 years ago