My Mayur FF..Updtd Chp 12 Pg 42 - Page 23

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Posted: 16 years ago
firstly thanks a lot for the extra effort.its really hard to wait for the next part.update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
just loved it!!!!!!
plssss post it soon!!!!

dont end ur fan-fic😭😭😭!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Just read the entire ff and I loved it... plz ad me onto ur pm list as I am dying to read the next part:)
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Posted: 16 years ago


Chapter 10

"hey samrat..."
they turned around and saw one guy..
"Hey sameer " samrat greeted him smiling..they hugged..
guys sameer is samrat's friend..they were neighbours when samrat was a kid but later they shifted to a new place..but still sameer and samrat kept in touch..sameer is a nice and funny guy..just like preet in kis desh mein hain mera dil..

"guys ." samrat said looking at benji, RV and Mayank "inse millo..yeh hain sameer, mere bachpan ka dost and my neighbour..aur sameer yeh hain rv, benji aur mayank" all shook hands..samrat continued..
"mayank meri...."
"wow!! wat a beauty"sameer said fascinted.."yaar samrat mein soch raha ho ki aaj tumhare saath saath apni bhi shaadi kar lo.."sameer said still looking at someone behind them..
all looked at him puzzled,,
"matlab" samrat asked confused
"i think i'm in love..kitni gorgerous hain yaar woh lardki..samrat pls meri baat karana usse" sameer pleaded finally looking at samrat..
samrat laughed "kisse yaar..kaun hain joh teri neend ek hi pal mein urda le gayi.."he said dramatically

mayank shook his head smiling..others just smiled..
"arre woh" finally turning samrat around..woh lardki..pointing at a girl..
samrat's smile quickly died and so does other's when they saw who the girl was..it was NUPUR..
Benji swallowed : "nups"
samrat(in undertone)"oops.."
RV made a "oh" sound..
all three turned around to see mayank's reaction..he was glaring at sameer whose eyes were stilled fixed on nupur who was busy chatting with a group of ladies..
mayank looked as if he was about to explode...samrat sighed.
mayank has always been possesive of nupur..it was his way of showing how much he loves her..he doesnt believe in words but in actions..and right now he looked as if he wanted to rip sameer apart..he hid a smile..it'l be fun to watch mayank lose his cool for once..he hardly lets his guards down in front of anyone..except with nupur.with nupur he's always relaxed and carefree..even though they hav become good friends over the past years mayank was still like he was in college..the only time you see real mayank was when he was with nupur..he always found their bickering entertaining and sweet..because it showed their deep love..and he has always admired mayank for letting nupur win all arguments..it was his way of showing love which he was 100% sure nupur knew..

Samrat cleared his throat"sameer" grabbing his arms..woh meri hone waali biwi ki behen hain....jo...
"jo shaadi shoda hain"benji filled in..sameer looked disapointed..
"jiska pati tumhare saamne kharlda hain," mayank finished, furrowing his brows in an angry death glare
sameer swallowed and stared at him.."i'am sorry dude.." he finally managed looking embrassed..."mujhe pata nahi tha.." he stammered

mayank was silent for some time.."its ok.." he said drily suprising everyone especially himself..today was gunjan's big day so he dint want to spoil it..so he decided to lighten the mood.."believe me you wouldnt want to be married to her..."he said chuckling.."dekhne mein pyari hain lekin asal mein theekhi mirchi hain.."he joked..
everybody laughed..

"dude!! seriously?" sameer asked..

"yeah" mayank replied smiling "u should see her when she's angry, us waqt toh woh...."mayank contiuned

suddenly samrat and benji started coughing...

"what??" mayank asked puzzled..wats wrong with you guys..paani mangwao kya" he asked looking concern..

"ahem" someone lightly coughed behind him..mayank closed his eyes..he knew that sound very well..he swallowed before turning around.

he looked at nupur's face and froze. she looked like she could happily strangle him at this moment..slowly she looked at samrat benji and rv..all three starting looking here and there avoiding her sharp glare.
Again she fixed her death glare on mayank, who suddendly looked very uneasy..
"uss waqt main...? she asked pointedly
"Er..nupur," mayank said awkwardly. "main toh bas tumhari...."
"meri taarif kar rahe the?"she asked with a saccharine smile..
mayank laughed nervously throwing samrat a glace which has written "help" all over..

All were trying very hard not to show a single tooth..it was really refreshiong to see mayank nervous..
samrat stifled his laughter behind one hand and took pity on him "umm nupur inse milo this is my friend sameer..." smiling at sameer..
"namaste" nupur smiled warming at him." kaise hain aap..?" she asked

when he didnt reply everybody looked at him..he was staring at nupur..ias if he was mesmerized by her..mayank narrowed his eyes and looked at nupur..she was frowning at him as if puzzled by his lack of response..

"urm sameer .." samrat gently nudged his arm.."nupur kuch puch rahi hain.." smiling at sameer..
"kya...oh sorry..ji main theek aap kaisi hain..?"sameer asked politely..
"main?" nupur asked giving her 1000 watts smile.."main toh bilkul theek ho by god..meri choti behen ki shaadi hain aaj toh sabse zayda theek toh main rahogi.." smiling brightly at him.."pata hain hum sab(pointing at everybody) ek hi college mein pardte teh..tab rv hamara dost nahi tha(smiling at RV,who smiled gently at her)..tab woh samrat ka favourite dushman tha..har cheez mein competition...aur pata hain...."
All this time she was babbling sameer was staring at her dreamily..and mayank was shooting daggers at him..benji and ranvijay was trying very hard not to laugh..they really loved to see mayank like this..esp when his anger was pointed to someone else..

"ah..Nupur mujhe lagta hain pandit ji humme kuch ishara kar rahe..lagta hain gunjan ko laane ka time ho gayahain..mein bhi jaakar kar mandap mein baith ta ho..benji.."motioning him to come with him..
"ha mujhe bhi yahi lagta hain.." mayank said quickly "chalo nupur.."beckoning her to go upstairs..

Nupur completely ignored him and made her way upstairs..

mayank sighed.."Boy...this will going to be a loooooooog wedding" he thought while following her.."now nupur will surely cut me to pieces..main bhi naa.." he groaned..

to be contined!!!
i am sorry no mayur romance this time but i promise there will be in my next chapter..so dnt hate me..
Edited by jayalal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice update....thnxx 4 the pm....
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Posted: 16 years ago
i liked the update and loved how mayu was getting so possesive about nups. Do continue soon:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
there is no way to hate u yaar.
though there was no mayur romance i just loved it.
i love possessive mayank, sooo cute.
this update was just very funny n nice.
bechara sameer .mayu will kill him n bechara mayu, nups is gonna shout on him.😆
just loved it.
very nice.
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Posted: 16 years ago
jayalal
so cute update thanks lot for pm me specially mayank's angry look my god so cute but please in u r next update write mayank nupur romantic scenes but please close that sameer chapter i dont want any one come between mayank & nupur never😭

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Posted: 16 years ago
Vow what a funny ud. 😆 😆 😆
Mujh se bhi apne hassi nahi control ho rahi thi just like Sam, Benji n RV, 😆 😆 😆 but kya karein aakhir humara Mayu is tarah se itna cute lagta hai ki poocho hi mat. 😳 😳 😳
Ye Sameer bhi kahan aa gaya Mayur k beech. 😡 😡 😡 Us ko Nopur se pyaar hi ho gaya by god love at first sight 😛 😛 😛. Noops bhi kya kare aakhir vo hai hi itne cute ki koi bhi pyaar karne lage us se.😉 😉 😉
I love the way Mayu was giving angry looks to Sameer only he knew how did he control his anger. 😆 😆 😆 Mayu ki acchi band bajti agar Sam ne right time pe topic change nahi kiya hota to. 😆 😆 😆
update asap.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx for the pm. Great update, loved mayank's reaction and others enjoyment of the this. Pls continue soon.

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