My Mayur FF..Updtd Chp 12 Pg 42

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#211

ur FF is gonna end aftr marriage?

no way yaar.

neways this part was as usual mind blowing.

awwwwwwwesuuuum.

loved mayu-dodo convo.

n mayu's anger on benji.

loved the part.

😊

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430105

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#212

awwww.....dont end it yaaar.....and loooooved the update......awesome...dodo will remain a complete dodo....it was funny + cute.....simply too goood!

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Kanika

@Kanika05

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#213

amazing part.. loved the mayur sceness!!

i guess its sheena? is she? lol!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#214

i bet its sheena..?? haina..?? hehe...

ufff...woh yahan bhi aa gayi...samrat-gunjan ki shaadi ho rahi hai...peecha nahi chodegi..! LOL

Mayank ka full on romance ka mood hai but kya karega...shaadi ho rahi hai ghar mein! hehe...

soo the whole FF is of the wedding day ony..??

me looking forward to the next part!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#215

Hey dont end ti so soon

Do try to contiue

Chapter nine was very nice

Loved dodo in it

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Kitsin

@Kitsin

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#216

Hi! As usual this update too is just great! Really the mayu - dodo scenes and mayu - nupur scenes blend in so seamlessly. Pls continue soon. and thanx for the pm.😊

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#217

Mayank's really possesive about Nupur, he just can't stand it when some other guy touches or even comments on how beautiful she looks.😆 Poor Dodo even though he's her brother Mayank refused his assistance for the dori. 😆 And Benji, got the glare just for commenting how beautiful she looked.

And like evreyone else I guess the person is either Sheena or Nupur ready to do the arti?

The creatives should really read your ff and use some of the scenes, anyway great chapter as usual, please try to make ur ff a bit longer and please...... update soon, can't wait to read the chapter.

Anjali 😊

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Priya

@--Priya--

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#218

That was a really cute chapter, I just love a jealous Mayank.

Please, please , please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee post the next chapter soon.

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#219

FUNNY PART!!

LOVED MAYUR-UDAY CONVO

SOOOOO FUNNY AND CUTE

BECHARA UDAY.....LOL!!

AND SAYANK-BENJI...TOOO GOOD!!!

WHO IS THE PERSON WHO CALLS SAM?

MAYBE RV!!

WILL WAIT 4 NEXT!!

SEEE YAA

LOVE UUU!!

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Tarandeep Kaur {Taran}

@frndship_trust

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#220

lolz dont worry dear...we wouldnt give u gaali or chappalz.....u have done FANTASTIC job.....yaar u knw i just love ur FFz...i hope u will continue another ff after u done with this one.....okay abut this update...its just.too gud....romantic scene between MayUr..wanted to do something but couldnt...wow sweet....keep up the gud work.👏

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