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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Beautiful update....

Thanxxxxxxx Namita...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very emotional part tha Priya............maine abhi abhi padha hai........ sorry bohuth late hui na,jaanthi hu...but ye part tha bohuth achcha..... Rajveer par saare cadets ke itna vishwaas dekh kar achcha laga.....aur Aalekh aur Huda ne milke Gunny ki toh band bajaa di aur uperse Naina bhi unhe hairan kardiya.........par iss update mein Rajveer aur Naina ke rishtey ki khoobsoorathi saaf dikh rahi thi.............Thank u for this beautiful update.........jaha baat dil ki ho waha simple si baat bhi beautiful lagthi hai,jaise Naina ka Rajveer par ye vishwaas !

par sach kahu mujhe na iss update se jyaad achcha tere 'LRL Classes' lage.......wow yaar.......kya classes hai.....kaash aise classes hum bhi attend kar paathey😆😆😆............aur khaas kar ke voh jo last waala class hai na,vo 'special class',jara bataa toh voh kaha conduct kiye jaathe hai 😆............too good yaar,tu bhi aur tere updates bhi as always.............

Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So here comes the reply for ur update of Ankahi.
Nice one. thanqqqqq😃
Raj jaanta tha ki us ne Gunny k man me shak daal diya hai aisa kar k par jab us ne kuch bhi kiya tha aur koi bhi step uthaya tha to obviously kaafi soch samajh k hi uthaya hoga na. ofcourse...us ne kuch kiya hai toh wajah bhi toh hogi na...😊
Gunny ne apni taraf se poori koshish ki hai Naina se Raj ko door rakhne ki par shayad vo bhi theek se nahi jaanta hai abhi. Tabhi to Raj khud ba khud vahan se chala gaya. gunny kuch bhi nahi janta na hi RN k bare me aur na hi us rishte k bare me jis rishte se raj k sare cadets us se jude hue hain...!!! voh toh raj ko sirf ek teacher samjhta tha...in sabhi ka...
Accha kiya Huda aur Alekh ne Gunny ko directly samjha diya acche se ki Raj aur Naina ki zindagi se door rahe vo aur beech me ek aur Abhi aane ki koshish kar raha hai. tabhi toh in dono ne achhe se samjhaya hai use...😃taki aage tang na adaye...
Ek baar us ki ki gayi galtiyon se ab dono alert hai but jo baat mujhe sab se jyada pasand aayi vo ye thi ki itna jyada bharosa hai in logon ko Rajveer par. main bhi toh is fic me yehi dikhana chahti hun...jise DJ'S ne nazarandaz kiya tha...trust...😃
Itne dangerous ho gaye Alekh n Huda us k liye. Gunny bhi sochta hoga ki jaane kya jaadu kar rakha hai Rajveer ne in logon par ki ye sab kisi ki sunte hi nahi hain. gunny janta hi kitna hai raj k bare me...😃
Naina ne finally Rajveer ko yaad kiya sab se milne k baad aur ab jab Naina ne yaad kiya hai to aana to hoga hi Rajveer ko us k paas. That song was really beautiful n in one of my fav too. mera bhi fav hai yaar...😃
Raj ne Alekh aur Huda ka samjha bhi diya aur responsibility bhi di ki un dono ko ab Naina ka khayal rakhna hai. Naina ki jaan khatre me hai aur isiliye itne tight security lagayi hai. kuch baat aur bhi hai...
Raj k saamne aaj ek baar fir past aa k khada ho gaya ki kaise us ne Naveen ko ek baar goli maari thi par tab aur aaj ki situation me bahut difference hai na. hai toh...par situation bhi thoda vaisa hi hai...dono par raj ne majburi me goli chalayi...!!! aur dono bar sab se jyada taklif bhi raj ko hi hui...😃
Raj apne aap ko Naina se bhi bahut jyada hurt feel kar raha hai aur akele ansoon bhi nahi nikal paa rahe hain jab Naina ne us ko call kiya aur bola ki milne aaye vo us se.Teri song choice mere se kaafi milte hai. haan...yeh baat toh hai...😃

Kitne koshish ki na Alekh n Huda ne Naina se Gunny ko baat na karne dene ki par jab Naina ne Gunny ko ye jawab diya ki vo apni jaan ko nahi maar sakte to mujhe bahut accha laga. ab naina bhi toh janti hai ki voh raj k liye kitna mayne rakhti hai...😃
Naina ne kitne confidentally jawab diya na Raj ko ki us ko poora bharosa hai Raj par ki vo kabhi Naina ko hurt nahi karega aur Naina ne jis tarah se Gunny ko Raj ki saari settings k baare me samjhaya that was fantastic. ab protegee kis ki hai...😉 aur heroine kis k fic ki hai...😆
Aaj pehli baar mujhe laga ki Naina bahut jyada bharosa karti hai Raj par. Their close scene was really nice, bina kahe bhi dono jaante hain ki kya maayne rakhte hain dono ek doosre k liye. thanqqqqq😃
update kar jaldi.

Thanxxxxxxx Vertika...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was Superb, Fantastic, Too good.... 👏👏👏 thanqqqqqqqq😳 😳 😳

Naina is being treated at the hospital and Raj wants to be with her ...to take away all her pains. But he is hesitating because of his guilt.😭 ander se khud ko tuta hua feel karr raha tha voh...
Gunny does not let him enter naina's room and demands an explanation for him. But this is raj he does not share his worries with anyone.😭 gunny ko kuch bhi pata nahi hai na...
It was a treat to see Alekh and Huda's confidence in Raj. They not only defended and stood up for Raj but showed gunny their unquestionable trust in their Sir, despite of knowing that Raj was the one to shoot naina. Loved their dialogue when they warned Gunny that they would not tolerate another Abhi in Raj's life.👏👏 ab unhe bhi Abhi chidh thi na...!!! us ka bhi gussa is par nikalenge hi...😆
Both of them are worried about Raj and naina's safety.😲And then after seeings naina's faith in Raj, just like Huda even I wanted to give naina a jappi.😉 he he he...😆 par pahla jhappi toh koi aur le gaya...😆
Gunny is once again shocked when naina tells him that she knows that Rja was the one to shoot her. But then she points out other factors which Gunny had not noticed. She is right Raj could never kill naina because naina toh uske dil mein basti hai.😃 dekho...naina me kitni aqal aa gayi hai...ha ha ha...😆
gunny is not able to believe how all of them have so much trust in Raj. 😲 kaise samjhe...use thode hi na pata hai in sab k bare me...
Naina knows how hard this must have been on Raj and so she tries to console him and reassure him that she would never leave him. She will alwyas be his.😊
This part bests potrays the title of this FF. Where sab ne Raj ki ANKAHI baat samji hai. loved this part....thanqqqqqqqqqqq😳
and cannot wait to read further.👏

Thanxxxxxxxx Nisha...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Very emotional part tha Priya............maine abhi abhi padha hai........ sorry bohuth late hui na,jaanthi hu...but ye part tha bohuth achcha.....chalo koi gall nahi kudiye...der aaye durust aaye...😛

Rajveer par saare cadets ke itna vishwaas dekh kar achcha laga.....aur Aalekh aur Huda ne milke Gunny ki toh band bajaa di aur uperse Naina bhi unhe hairan kardiya.........gunny ko thodi si medicine ki jarurat thi...jo in teeno ne mil kar de di...😛
par iss update mein Rajveer aur Naina ke rishtey ki khoobsoorathi saaf dikh rahi thi.............Thank u for this beautiful update.........jaha baat dil ki ho waha simple si baat bhi beautiful lagthi hai,jaise Naina ka Rajveer par ye vishwaas ! thanqqqqq...aur tum ne sahi kaha...baat RN ki ho toh un ka pyar sach me baht khubshurat lag hi jata hai...😃

par sach kahu mujhe na iss update se jyaad achcha tere 'LRL Classes' lage.......wow yaar.......kya classes hai.....kaash aise classes hum bhi attend kar paathey😆😆😆
ha ha ha...mujh se sabhi yehi kah rahe hain addmission k liye...!!! ab toh lagta hai donation le kar addmission dilana hi padega...!!! par next year se...kyoun ki syllabus suru ho chuka hai...classes start ho chuke hain...😆😆😆
............aur khaas kar ke voh jo last waala class hai na,vo 'special class',jara bataa toh voh kaha conduct kiye jaathe hai 😆 mere school me hota hai...jab tera addmission ho jayega toh tu bhi dekh lena...😆
............too good yaar,tu bhi aur tere updates bhi as always............. thanqqqqqqqqq😆

Thanxxxxxxxxxxx Siri...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

"Wishing you only the best on your special day"

"Enjoy your day! I'll be thinking about you!"


On your birthday,
I'm thinking about how much light and sparkle
you freely dispense wherever you go,
how your sunny smile lights up any gathering.
Every birthday marks another year
of you radiating positive, happy energy,
contagious happiness
that infects all who come in contact with you.
May your next birthday find you the same--
glowing from within,
beaming bright joy on everyone you meet.
I feel blessed to know you.

"All the best for a special person on their special day."
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EPISODE:-14
Naina ne ankhen kholi...toh paas hi do chairs par Huda aur Alekh ko sote hue paya...!!! dono raat bhar hospital me the...baht pareshan... sayad abhi abhi so gaye the...!!!
Naina ne idhar udhar dekha...maj Rajveer kahin nazar nahi aa rahe the...!!! sayad abhi tak wapas nahi aaye...
Naina ko yaad aaya...kal raat maj Rajveer us k paas hi the...!!! ander se tute hue...khud ko sambhal nahi pa rahe the...!!!
Naina ne apne fore head ko apne hathon se touch kiya...dil hi dil me socha...'unhone mujhe kiss kiya tha...'
us k chehre par halki si lali ubhri...ek choti si smile aayi...jo baht kuch bayan karr rahi thi...!!!
last nyt...
maj Rajveer ka fone ring hua tha...
kuch der baat karne k baad...unhone Naina ki taraf dekh kar kaha:- "mujhe abhi jana hoga...!!!"
Naina:- "koi urgent kaam hai...???"
maj Rajveer:- "haan...baht jaruri...!!! par main jaldi wapas aa jayunga...!!! tum apna khayal rakhna...!!!
Naina:- "hmm...aap aa jayoge toh sath me camp chalenge...!!!"
maj Rajveer k chehre par ek halki si mushkurahat aayi...unhone kaha:- "sayad thoda late ho jayun...tum huda aur alekh k sath chali jana...!!! vaise bhi kuch aur naye soldiers...appoint hue hain...voh bhi tum sab k sath jayenge...!!!"
Naina:- "par...main aap k sath jana chahti hun...
Naina k chehre par halki si narazgi thi...ek bachpana tha...jise maj rajveer ko dekhna achha lag raha tha...
maj Rajveer:- "par...
Naina:- "aap hi kahte ho ki...ek fauji ko...har kaam me perfect hona chahiye...!!! aap mujhe camp se dinner k liye le kar aaye the...!!! aap ko nahi lagta ki aap hi ko mujhe wapas le kar jana chahiye...???"
maj Rajveer:- "matlab...kuch aur ho hi nahi sakta...!!! mujhe tumhe le kar hi jana padega...???"
Naina:- "haan...!!! matlab...aisa hi hona chahiye na...???"
maj Rajveer hasste hue kaha:-" thik hai...main jaldi aane ki koshish karunga...okay...!!!
Naina ke chehre par ek khubshurat si smile thi...!!! maj Rajveer ne Naina k balon par hath rakha...dhire se kaha:- "take care...main chalta hun...
Naina:- "ahh...aise nahi kahte...!!! jab kahin bahar jana ho toh kahte hain...ki 'main ja kar aata hun...'...aur aap bhi aaj se yehi kahoge...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "naina tum mujhe order de rahi ho...???"
Naina thodi si dhimi awaz me boli:- "nahi...voh actually...
maj Rajveer ne hasste hue kaha:- "thik hai...aaj se main yahi kahunga...!!! meri mazal hai jo main lft Naina...ahh...singh ki baat talun...???"
Naina k chehre par ek cute si smile thi...!!! jise maj Rajveer ko dekhna achha lag raha tha...!!!
voh chale gaye the...
Naina uthi washroom ki taraf gayi...!!! jab wapas aayi...toh dekha Huda pareshan khada tha...
Naina:- "kya hua...???"
Huda:- "kuch nahi...bass humain jaldi camp chalna padega...vaise bhi 11 bajj rahe hain...!!!"
Naina:- "thodi der aur ruk jate hain na...??? Rajveer sir ne kaha hai ki voh aayenge...toh sabhi sath chalenge...!!!
Alekh:- "Naina...base camp se hi order aaya hai ki jitni jaldi ho sake...humain yahan se niklna hai...!!! hum jyada der tak nahi ruk sakte yaar...!!!"
Naina...thodi si udaas hui:- "par...
Huda us k kareeb aaya aur kaha:- "dekh pholan...ek baat gaanth bandh le...!!! Rajveer sir ka tere bina aur koi thikana nahi hai...!!! voh din bhar chahe kahin bhi udte rahen...par finally tere hi paas wapas aayenge...!!! isiliye fiqar not...abhi hum camp me chalte hain...!!! tu chahe toh un se fone par baat kar le...!!!"
Naina ne fone kiya...par switch off aaya...
Naina:- "switch off aa raha hai...
Alekh:- "koi baat nahi yaar...hum chalte hain...aur jab Rajveer sir ko pata chalega...ki humain jane k liye order mila tha...toh voh bhi kuch nahi kahenge...hai na...???"
Naina...kuch nahi boli...muh fulaye baithi rahi...
Huda:- "Naina...plzzzzzzzzzz
Naina:- "thik hai...chalo...
cut to Rajveer...
Head qtr, J&K
maj Rajveer baithe hue the...un k paas hi clrn Gupta bhi baithe hue the...!!! jo ki kafi der se maj Rajveer ko gaur se dekh rahe the...!!! sayad samajhne ki koshish karr arhe the...!!!
maj Rajveer hamesha ki tarah kafi gravely baithe hue the...
un k samne 3 aur senior officer baithe hue the...
1 officer:- " lekin hamari samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki...yeh sab hua kaise...??? matlab...abhi tak is mission k bare me sirf hum teen jante the...aur cln Gupta ko pata tha...!!! yahan tak ki aap ko bhi pata nahi tha maj shekhawat...!!! toh phir un terrorists ko kaise pata chala...lft Naina singh ahluwalia k bare me...???"
2nd officer:- "upar se...unhe kaise pata chala ki aap sabhi dinner k liye kahan ja rahe ho...???"
3rd officer:- "aap ko pata hai maj...jo do terrorists aap ne mare hain... dono hi usi grp se talukk rakhte hain...jo philhal hamare target me hain...???"
maj Rajveer:- "toh phir aap hi batayiye sir...ki mujhe kya karna chahiye...!!! jaisa ki aap ne abhi abhi mujhe yeh file diya hai...aur kaha ki... lft Naina singh hamare liye kitni imp hain...!!! toh aap hi bata dijiye ki aage k plans kya hone chahiye...??? vaise bhi is case me mujhe join karne wale sare officers aur soldiers ya toh mare ja chuke hain...ya phir seviour accidents se hospitalized hain...toh phir mere liye aage kya orders hain sir...???"
2 officer:- "hamare samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai...!!!
maj rajveer:- "sir jaise ki aap sabhi ne yeh plan banaya tha ki lft singh k jankari k bina hi unhe is mission me samil kiya jayega...par mujhe lagta hai ki ab is ki jarurat nahi padegi...!!! lft singh ne sabit kar diya hai ki chahe kaise bhi situation ho...voh darr kar bhagnewalon me se nahi hai...!!! chahe bullet un k kandhe ko chue ya phir seene ko...!!!"
1 officer:- "toh aap kya chahte hain maj...ki hum lft singh ko is mission me directly samil karen...!!!"
baht der chup rahne k baad cln gupta bole:- "mere khayal se haan...!!! hum kis liye is baat ko lft singh se chupana chahte the...??? isiliye na ki...voh ek ladki hain...aur kahin...is khatarnaak mission me khud k jaan jane ki darr se voh is mission me samil na ho...ya phir army hi chod de...kyoun ki army join karne ka mission toh un k liye sirf un k bhai ko insaaf dilana tha...par kal raat jo kuch bhi hua...us se unhone sabit kar diya hai ki...un k dil me apne bhai k liye jitni jagah hai...utna hi jagah is desh k har ek inshan k liye hain...!!! varna us choti si bachhi ko bachane k liye voh khali hath un terrorists k samne nahi aati...???"
maj Rajveer:- "mera bhi bikul yehi kahna hai sir...!!! balki main yeh soch raha hun...ki agr unhe is mission me sath le kar hi plan banaya jaye...toh hum faide me rahenge...!!! main un ka mentor rah chuka hun... itna toh achhe se janta hi hun ki...agr unhe lagta hai koi galat hai...aur chahe voh inshan un ka kitna bhi kareebi kyoun na ho...voh bina kisi jhijhak k shoot kar degi...!!!"
1st officer:- "lekin hum aise kisi par bhi bharosha nahi kar sakte hain maj...??? aap jante hain yeh kitna confidential mission hai...!!! is se hamare desh k kuch nami politicians k jude hone k bhi chances ho sakte hain...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "aap hi sochiye sir...jo officers mujhe is mission me join karne aaye the...un me se sirf ek hi J&K me pahuncha...capt Randhawa... aur koi nahi...!!! agar mujhe mere is mission me naye officers ko join karna hi hai...toh bhi lft singh kyoun nahi...??? aur vaise bhi sir...aap jis confidential mission ki baat karr rahe hain...usi mission me aap ne mujhe chief banaya hai...!!! us insaan ko jis par kabhi kai sare charges laga kar aap ne jail me dala tha...!!!"
3 officer:- "fine...aap ko lagta hai ki lft singh is mission k liye maan jayegi...jis mission me un k jaan jane ka 70% chances hai...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "jee sir...lft singh maan jayengi...!!! voh khud k jaan ki keemat apne desh se jyada nahi deti...!!!"
1 officer:- "ok...den...aap ko kuch aur officers ki jarurat padd sakti hai...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "main manage kar lunga sir...!!! matlab...mere purane kuch cadets is waqt base camp me hi hain...!!! main unhe is me samil kar sakta hun...!!!"
2 officer:- "lekin maj...jitne kamm logon ko is me samil kiya jaye...vohi behtar hai...!!! kyoun ki agar hamara JHUTH pakda gaya...toh aap samajh sakte hain ki...humara kya ho sakta hai...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "hum jhuth bhi hamare desh k bhalai k liye hi kah rahe hain na... sir...??? toh phir darr kaisa...??? main apni taraf se aap se yeh vaada karta hun ki yeh mission kamiyab hoga...aur gunehgar ya toh sab k samne aayega...ya phir mara jayega...!!!"
1 officer:- "nahi...humain voh zinda chahiye...!!! aur hum yehi chahte hain ki aap yehi puri koshish karen ki voh zinda rahen...!!! aur ek info deni hai aap ko...un ki taraf se ek spy already camp me aa chuka hai...lft singh ko marne...!!! voh koun hai...yeh bhi aap hi ko dhudhna hai...!!! aur yeh bhi khayal rahe...humain voh inshan zinda chahiye...jise hum lft Naina k liye pakadna chahte hain...!!!"
maj Rajveer ne thoda sa smile karte hue kaha:- "jee sir...main is baat ka pura khayal rakhuga...!!!
thodi der baad...
maj Rajveer aur cln Gupta sath me us room se bahar aaye...!!!
cln Gupta:- "ek baat puchun maj...???"
maj Rajveer:- "sure sir...puchiye na...???"
cln Gupta:- "kal raat actually me hua kya tha...???"
maj Rajveer ne un ki taraf dekha...hairani se...
cln Gupta kya kahna chahte the yeh voh achhi tarah se samajh rahe the...!!!
cln Gupta thode se mushkuraye phir kaha:- "tum ne achha faida uthaya hai mere dosti ka maj...!!! maine tumhe file pahle hi dikha diya tha...aur tum ne...
maj Rajveer...unhe aage kuch bolne na dete hue kaha:-" aap bhi toh yehi chahte the na sir...???"
cln Gupta...thode se mushkurate hue kaha:- "haan...main yehi chahta tha ki...tum is baar apno se dur na ho...!!!"
maj Rajveer k ankhon me cln Gupta k liye kafi respect tha...unhone bass itna hi kaha:- "thank you sir...
cut to base camp...
Naina camp me pahunchi...thodi si hairan hui...!!! camp ki saqal badli hui thi...!!! chappe chappe par guns pakde soldiers khade the...!!!
Naina:- "kya baat hai...!!! yeh base camp me itni security kouyn hai...???"
Alekh:- "suna hai ki terrorists yahan par hamla karne k firaq me hain...!!!"
Huda ne hasste hue kaha:- "matt mari gayi hai un ki...!!! bhul rahe hain ki hum Hindusthani hain...!!! pahle toh...hum kisi ko chdte nahi...aur agar koi humian chede...toh hum unhe chodte nahi...!!!"
Naina:- "Alekh...tujhe nahi lagta...ki apna Hsudhar gaya hai...matlab... kafi aqal aa gayi hai us me...???"
Huda:- "us se kya puch rahi hai...mujh se puch na...!!! yeh bimari Rajveer sir se lagi hai...!!! koi bhi un se pyar kare...ya phir un ki batain mane...ya phir unhe apna idiol banaye...voh meri tarah bigad hi jayega...!!! mujhe toh apne purane dino ki badi yaad aa rahi hai...!!! kya din the voh bhi...
Alekh ne Huda ka sath dete hue kaha:- "haan...kya din the voh bhi... Huda...bhainsh...tabela... aur gobar...!!! sabhi ek jaise hi dikhte the...!!!"
Huda:- "abe teri toh...
Huda gusse se Alekh k piche use marne k liye bhaga...!!! Alekh bhaag gaya...
Naina mushkurate hue...apne qtr me aayi...darwaza ander se bandh tha...voh thodi si hairan hui... (soch lo abhi aap sab bhi ki ander Rajveer sir honge...hain na...toh dekh lo...koun hai ander...😉)
darwaje par hath rakha toh khud b khud khul gaya...Naina chaunki... samne Pooja khadi thi...laal mirch le kar...
Naina:- "yeh kya hai...???"
Pooja:- "kuch nahi...tu pahle ander toh aa...???"
Naina ander aayi toh Pooja ne un laal mirch ka kaam pura kiya...us k upar gumate hue...taki use kisi ki nazar na lage...
Naina:- "yeh sab kya ho raha hai...???"
Pooja:- "teri nazar utari ja rahi hai...!!! kitne dino baad toh tu khush hui hai...aur voh bhi Rajveer sir ki wajah se...aur abhi dekh...tum dono thik se mile bhi nahi ki tu hospital pahunch gayi...!!! tum dono ki yeh violent love story pata nahi kab butterfly love story banegi...!!! kabhi Rajveer sir hospital me toh kabhi tu...huh...!!!"
Naina ne hasste hue kaha:- "yeh butter fly love story kya hai...???"
Pooja:- "tujhe nahi pata...??? arre butter fly love story matlab...sab kuch khubshurat...!!! butter flies khubshurat..un ka flowers par ghumna khubshurat...un ka udd na khubshurat...!!! usi tarah se main bhi tum dono ko ek normal zindagi jeete hue dekhna chahti hun...!!! sach kahun Naina...tum dono ne hi na...baht kuch dekha hai...!!! ab hum sab dekhna chahte hain...tum dono ko...khush...baht khush...ek dushre k sath...!!!"
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...aage aayi aur Pooja ko hug kiya...!!! yeh us ki best frnd hai...jis ne us tym me toh kabhi nahi samjah use...par aaj... apne ander ke sara pyar us par luta rahi hai...
raat ko kareeb 8 baje jab Naina...dinner k liye janewali thi...tabhi us k maa ka fone aaya...
Naina:- "aap kisi ho maa...???"
Naina's mom:- "kya kaisi hun...??? tujhe pata hai hamari toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi...jab Pooja ne kaha ki tujhe goli lagi hai toh...!!! voh toh baad me Ali ne kaha ki...goli nahi lagi thi...varna...main...
voh aage kuch bol nahi payi...par Naina samajh rahi thi...apne maa ki bhari awaz k piche ki sachhai ko...voh hasste hue boli:- "maa...mujhe kuch nahi hua hai...!!! main bilkul thik hun...!!! ab bachhe khelte hain toh halki kharonch bhi toh aati hai na...!!! vaise hi agar hamare desh k sath koi khelna chahe toh humain unhe sabak sikhana chahiye...isliye thodi baht kharonch toh humain bhi lag sakti hai na...??? aap fiqar mat karo... main bilkul thik hun...!!! aap bataayo...baba kaise hain...???"
Naina's mom:- "voh packing karr rahe hain...???"
Naina:- "packing...??? kis liye...???"
Naina's mom:- "aaj raat ko hi nikal rahe hain tere paas...kal raat tak toh pahunch hi jayenge...!!!"
Naina:- "maa...main bilkul thik hun...!!! aap kyoun...
Naina's mom:- "bass...karr Naina...!!! tujhe aadat hai har bade dard ko bhi chota kahne ka...par humara kya...??? ek lauti aulad hai tu hamari...!!!"
Naina:- "ok..ok...ok...ab aage ke voh filmy dail nahi...!!! aap dono aana chahte ho toh aa jayo...bass itna bata do ki kab tak pahunchoge...main kisi ko bhej dungi aap ko yahan par lane k liye...!!!"
thodi der tak baat chali...Naina ki apne parents k sath...!!! us ne fone off kiya toh darwaje par knock hua... (dekha...phir se aap logon ne galat socha na ki is baar maj Rajveer honge...huh...)
Naina ne door khola toh ek orderly khada tha...!!! hath me ek tiffin liye...!!!
Naina:- "kya hua...???"
orderly:- "maam...aap ka dinner...!!!"
Naina ne hairani se pucha:- "par yahan kyoun le kar aaye ho...main khud cafeteria aa rahi thi na...???"
orderly:- "maam...maj Shekhawat k orders the ki aap ka dinner aap k qtr me pahuncha diya jaye...!!!"
Naina ne ek min k liye us orderly ko ghura...voh bichara darr kar sar jhuka diya...
Naina:- "maj shekhawat...camp me kab wapas aaye...???"
orderly:- "jee...do ghante ho chuke hain...!!!"
Naina:- "thik hai...toh phir aap ek kaam kijiye...yeh tiffin le jayiye... aur maj Shekhawat k do dena...kahna ki dinner kar le...!!! aur maine do ghante pahle hi dinner kar liya hai...!!! thik hai...???"
orderly hairani se Naina ko dekhta raha...kuch bola nahi...voh samajh hi nahi pa raha tha ki voh kya kare...
Naina ne apne face par ek zabardasti ka smile late hue kaha:- " aap sayad samjhe nahi maine kya kaha...??? thik hai...aap ander aayiye... main aap ko detailed me samjhati hun...!!!"
orderly ne chaunkte hue kaha:- "nahi madam main samajh gaya...???"
Naina:- "kya samjhe...???"
orderly:- "maj shekhat ka dinner galati se aap k qtr me main le aaya...!!!"
Naina:- "very gud...ab jayo...!!!"
Naina ne gusse me door bandh kiya...aur khud b khud bad-badane lagi:- "mujh se kaha ki sath me chalenge...!!! ab yahn do ghante ho chuke hain aaye hue...par unhe toh meri fiqar hi nahi hai...thodi si bhi manner nahi hai unhe ki...puch jaye ki main kaisi hun...!!! jan bujh kar goli maar di...aa kar manane k liye kiss kar diya...!!! bass...kaam khatam...hun...!!! mujhe na aap se baat hi nahi karni...!!!"
Naina ne change kiya...aur nyt suit pahna aur so gayi...
cut to maj Rajveer...
un k samne voh orderly sar jhukaye...hath me tiffin liye khada tha...!!! maj Rajveer k chehre par asusall si ek smile thi...
maj Rajveer:- "toh...yeh dinner mera hai...???"
orderly:- "yes sir...
maj Rajveer:-"jo ki lft singh ne bheji hai...???"
orderly:- "yes sir...
maj Rajveer:- "toh phir rakho yahan par...aur aap jayo...???"
orderly tiffin rakh kar chala gaya...
cut to Naina...
us k room me andhera tha...us zero bulb se kamre me halka sa ujala tha...par use neend nahi aa rahi thi...!!! neend bhi kaise aaye...use zoro ki bhuk jo lagi thi...!!!
Naina:- "kal se thik se khana nahi khaya...!!! aaj hospital me ajeeb sa khana de diya...!!! socha tha ki raat ko sab k sath baith kar dinner karungi...par nahi...main vahan bhi nahi ja sakti...!!! yeh Raj bhi na meri jaan le kar hi chodenge...!!!"
Naina k door par phir se knock hua...
Naina gusse me uthi...aur door ki taraf gayi...bak-bak karti hui ja rahi thi:- "khud kha le na aap....mujhe nahi khana...!!! kitni bhuk lagi hai mujhe...??? is baar agar voh orderly phir se aaya hoga na toh us ki khair nahi...!!! aur Raj...main toh aap se baat bhi nahi karungi...(us ne door kholte hue gusse me kaha)...i hate you...i simply hate you...
voh chup hui...kyoun ki samne maj Rajveer khade the...!!!
Naina ne un ki taraf dekha...us k ankhon me gussa saaf dekh rahe the maj Rajveer...
Naina ne un k hath me vohi tiffin dekha...phir maj Rajveer ki taraf dekha...
maj Rajveer:- "main ander aa jayun...???"
maj Rajveer ne baht hi normally pucha...in fact hum yeh kah sakte hain ki unhone aisa kahte hue...khud hi ander aa gaye the...!!!
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...bahr thandi hawa chal rahi thi...Naina ne door bandh kiya...
maj Rajveer ne table par tiffin rakha...Naina ki taraf dekha bhi nahi...!!! aur tiffin khol kar sare boxes alag kiye...
maj Rajveer:- "tum ne toh khana kha liya hoga na...??? actually mujhe baht bhuk lagi hai...!!! voh kya hai na...subah jab tum se mil kar hospital se gaya...toh itna kaam aa gaya tha ki khana nahi kha paya...!!! ahhh... mujhe yaad hai...maine...2 baje sirf do sandwitches liye the...aur kuch nahi...!!!"
maj Rajveer ne kahte hue...Naina ki taraf dekha...jo abhi bhi door k paas khadi thi...ankhon me gussa abhi bhi thi...aur chehre par narazgi saaf dikhayi de rahi thi...
maj Rajveer:- "tum vahan kyoun khadi ho...???apna hi ghar samjho... yahan aa kar baitho na...!!! tum ne khana kha liya hai toh kam se kam mera dinner khatam hone tak...yahan baith toh sakti ho na...??? akele khana ajeeb lagta hai...hai na...???"
kahte hue maj Rajveer...Naina k kareeb gaye...us ka hath thaam kar le kar us center table k kareeb bithaya...aur khud baithne wale the ki unhe kuch yaad aaya:- "main pani le kar aata hun...
maj Rajveer kitchen ki taraf chale gaye...!!! Naina ki nazar padi tiffin boxes par...!!! us ne us taraf dekha...jis taraf maj Rajveer pani lene gaye the...
phir dhire se tiffin boxes ki taraf apna chehra le kar aayi...use boxes me se achhi khushbu aa rahi thi...us k muh me pani aa raha tha...
maj Rajveer chup kar dekh rahe the...un k honthon par ek smile thi...
Naina ne yeh jann ne k liye ki boxes me hai kya...dhire se us taraf hath badhaya...bas ek box kholnewali thi ki...maj Rajveer k aane ki ahat hui...us ne apne hath khinch liye ...aur chup chap baith gayi...
maj Rajveer ne pani ka glass rakha...!!! aur sare boxes kholne lage...!!! khushbu tez aane lagi...aur Naina ki bhuk badhne lagi...
maj Rajveer ne sare boxes kholne k baad kaha:- "tumhe pata hai Naina...mujhe mashroom baht achhe lagte hain...!!! aur aaj dekho...voh bhi bana hai...!!! jab zoron ki bhuk lagi ho...aur samne aap k fav dishes ho na...toh khud ko sambhalna mushkil ho jata hai...!!! arre...tum ne toh dinner kar liya hai na...??? batayo toh mashroom kaisa bana hai...???"
maj Rajveer ne kahte hue...ek plate me sare dishes thoda thoda nikala... ek roti rakhi...!!! us ka ek chota sa tukda...wid curry...unhone apne hath me lete hue...apne honthon k kareeb late hue kaha:- "main tum se puch kyoun raha hun...main chakh hi leta hun...!!!"
yeh kahte hue unhone voh roti ka tukda...apne honthon k kareeb liya... phir un ki nazar padi Naina par...jo diwar ki taraf dekh rahi thi...
maj Rajveer ne halki si mushkurahat k sath...apna hath Naina k honthon k kareeb late hue kaha:- "i m sorry...Naina...
Naina ne face ghuma kar maj Rajveer ki taraf dekha...phir us chote se roti k tukde ki taraf...
apna chehra thoda aage late hue us ne voh khaya...aur kaha:-" aap ko pata hai...maine aap ka kitna wait kiya...???"
maj Rajveer ne dushra tukda Naina k muh me dalte hue kaha:- "kaam agar itna imp nahi hota...toh main apni kahi hui baat ko nahi talta...!!! mujhe sach me ek baht jaruri kaam se kahin jana pada...sorry...!!!"
Naina:- "par aap mujhe bol bhi toh sakte the na...!!!"
Naina ne maj Rajveer ka hath thaama...jis hath se voh Naina k liye khana pakda hua tha...!!! Naina ne un k hath ko unhi k honthon k kareeb le jate hue kaha...
maj Rajveer k honthon par ek mushkurahat ubhri...unhone khate hue kaha:- "haan...par voh actually mere dimag se nikal gaya...!!! promise karta hun...aage se yeh galati nahi hogi...!!! ab tum plz...apne hath se khayoi...aur mujhe apne hath se khane dogi kya...??? yaar...baht khuk lagi hai...
Naina mushkurayi...
jyada tym nahi laga...dono ko pura tiffin saaf karne me...!!! khane k baad Naina ne maj Rajveer ko coffee k liye pucha toh unhone mana kar diya...!!!
maj Rajveer:- "okk...Naina...ab tum so jayo...!!! kal milte hain...!!!"
Naina:-"sir...
maj Rajveer ne Naina ko gaur se dekha...
Naina...ne saansh ander lete hue dhime awaz me kaha:- "sorry...Raj...!!! actually mujhe order mila hai ki main kal Huda aur Alekh k sath J&K k head qtr me report karun...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "pahla sabak...aap kahan jate ho...kahan nahi...voh aap kisi ko nahi batana chahiye...!!! chahe voh aap ka kitna bhi kareebi dost kyoun na ho...!!! ek soldier hain aap lft singh...itna dhyan me rakhna ki har koi aap ka dost nahi hota...!!! kuch jo dost dikhte hain...voh dost nahi hote...!!! aur kuch jo dushman dikhte hain...voh aap k dushman nahi hote...!!! har baat ko dimag aur nazar...dono se parakhna sikhiye...!!! samjhi aap...???"
Naina ne mushkurate hue kaha:- "yes sir...!!! actually main kehna chahti thi ki...kal mere maa baba aa rahe hain...toh unhe lene kya main kisi ko station par bhej sakti hun...???"
maj Rajveer:- "haan...kyoun nahi...!!!"
maj Rajveer thoda distracted lage Naina ko...
Naina:- "kya hua...???"
maj Rajveer k chehre par ek udasi bhari mushkurahat thi...unhone kaha:- "main bhi toh tumhare parents se milna chahta tha...!!! unhe Naveen k maut ki sachhai apne muh se batana chahta tha...!!! lagta hai yeh dua bhi uparwale ne kafi jaldi puri kar di...!!!"
Naina ne samjha...maj Rajveer k dil k dard ko...aur darr ko bhi...!!!
Naina:- "ahh...walk par chale...???"
maj Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekh kar kaha:- "is waqt...??? nahi... phir kabhi chalte hain...!!! vaise bhi baht raat ho chuki hai...aur tumhe rest ki jarurat hai...aur bahar baht thand hai...!!! isiliye aap chup chap so jayengi...!!!"
Naina ne kafi fastly answer diya:- "main nahi sonewali abhi...???"
maj Rajveer:- "kya...
Naina:- "haan...aap mujhe hospital me akele chod kar aaye the na...!!! isiliye aap ko meri baat mann ni padegi...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "lekin...is waqt...
Naina ne maj Rajveer ko aage kuch kahne ka mauka nahi dete hue kaha:- "thik hai...jayiye aap...main so jayungi...!!!"
maj Rajveer ne Naina ka chehra gaur se dekha...jo jhuthe gusse se thoda fula hua tha...par maj Rajveer ko Naina ka voh bachpana achha lag raha tha...
maj Rajveer ne halke se mushkurate hue kaha:- "bahar baht thand hai Naina...kuch achhe kapde pahn lo..aur swal lana mat bhulna...!!!"
Naina mushkurate hue kaha:- "main abhi aayi...
voh bhagte hue apne room me gayi...aur kuch hi pal me bahar aayi...!!! voh abhi bhi apne white silky nyt suit me hi thi...bass...us ne apne upar ek mota sa swal dal rakha tha...
Naina:- "chaliye...
maj Rajveer:- "aise hi...??? matlab...tumhe pata hai...bahr kitni thand hai...???"
Naina:- "main adjust kar lungi...aap chalo na...!!! mujhe kuch nahi hoga...!!!"
maj Rajveer ne ek gehri saansh chodte hue kaha:- "thik hai chalo...!!!"
dono bahar aaye...kuch pal chale hi the ki Naina ko laga ki koi un k piche aa raha hai...!!! Naina ne turn kar k dekha...ek soldier hathon me gun liye kuch hi duri se unhe follow karr raha hai...
Naina ne maj Rajveer ki taraf dekha aur kaha:- "aap ko nahi lagta ki koi hamare privacy par dakhal dal raha hai...!!! aur haan...mujhe pata hai is par bhi aap k paas...kuch solid jawab hoga...!!! tabhi toh aap maj bann gaye...hai na...???"
Naina itna kah kar thoda narazgi dikhate hue aage chali gayi...!!! maj Rajveer k honthon par ek mushkurahat aayi...voh us soldier k paas... aaye us se kuch kaha...phir apni tez kadmon se naina k paas...aaye...
maj Rajveer:- "sorry..Naina...kuch nahi ho sakta...!!! hamare piche 5 soldiers humian follow karenge hi...!!!"
Naina ne hairani se turn kar dekha...piche koi nahi tha...aur jab paas... dekjha...toh maj Rajveer bhi nahi the...!!! voh thode aage chalne lage the...un k chehre par ek mushkan thi...!!! Naina daudte hue un k paas gayi...dekha...voh mushkura rahe the...
Naina kuch nahi kaha...!!! use achha lag...maj Rajveer ka us k choti choti baat mann na...!!! vaise bhi voh jyada tar yehi karte hain...ya toh Naina ki baat mante hain...ya phir daant kar wapas bhej dete hain...aur phir chupke se us ka kaam kar dete hain...
Naina k chehre par ek smile aayi...!!! dono sath me chal rahe the...kafi kareeb...!!! Naina aur maj Rajveer k hath ek dushre se touch hue...dono ne ek dushre ki taraf dekha...
dono jan kar bhi anjan bane hue the...!!!
maj Rajveer:- "humain jaldi wapas jana padega...!!! kyoun ki lyts out hone k baad...officers ko bhi apne qtr se bahar jane ki permission nahi hai...!!! agar kahin jana ho toh superior se permission leni padti hai...!!!
Naina:- "hum kuch normal baat nahi kar sakte...!!! jab dekho...army k rules...regulations samjhate rahte hain aap...!!! main janti hun na thoda baht...aur agar kuch galat kar bhi diya...toh asausal aap ho na mujhe bachane k liye...!!!"
maj Rajveer:- "matlab...tum galati karogi aur main tumhe bachaunga...???"
Naina:- "haan...kyoun ki yehi aap ka farz hai...!!! matlab...ek dost ki tarah...
maj Rajveer hasse aur kaha:- "samajh gaya...!!! ab chalen...???"
Naina:- "aap ko yaad hai...KMA me bhi hum ek baar aise hi raat ko bahar gaye the...sabhi se chup kar...!!!"
maj Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:-"hmmm...yaad hai...aur yeh bhi yaad hai ki...cadet Naina ahh singh ne .1857 me jane k liye mujhe kis tarah se majbur kiya tha...!!!"
Naina ne maj Rajveer ki taraf dekha...phir chalte chalte ruki aur kaha:- "kya phir se sab kuch pahle ki tarah ho sakta hai...??? kya aap mujhe vahan par phir kabhi le kar jayoge...???"
maj Rajveer ruke...Naina ki ankhon me gaur se dekhte hue kaha:- "tum phir se vahan jana chahti ho...???...mere sath...???"
Naina ne un k ankhon me dekhte hue...sar hila kar apni razamnadi di...
aaj bhi Naina...usi tarah se white dress me thi...!!! aaj bhi...us din ki tarh raat me ek khubshurti jagi hui thi...aaj bhi dono kareeb the...apne unhi ankahe jazbaton k sath...!!! par ek baat ka yekeen tha unhe ki... kuch khushiyan sayad un k liye hi hai...
Woh shaam kuchh ajeeb thi,
yeh shaam bhi ajeeb hai
Woh kal bhi paas paas thi
woh aaj bhi kareeb hai ] 2
Woh shaam kuchh ajeeb thi
maj Rajveer aur Naina sath me chalne lage...!!! is baar phir se dono k hath ek dushre se takraye...toh maj Rajveer ne dhire se thama...Naina ka hath...!!! un k hath ko bhi Naina k hath ki panah mili...
maj Rajveer ki nazar padi...Naina par...us k chehre par ek mushkuraht thi...halki si...par jo baht kuch bayan karr rahi thi...!!! Naina ki nazar padi...maj Rajveer k chehre par...ek haya nazar aayi us k chehre par...us ne nazrain jhukayi...
Jhuki hui nigaahon mein,
kahin mera khayaal tha
Dabi dabi hansi mein ek,
haseen saa gulaal tha
Main sochta tha,
mera naam gunguna rahi hai woh -2
Na jaane kyon laga mujhe,
ke muskura rahi hai woh
Woh shaam kuchh ajeeb thi.......
thand toh thi bahr...lekin ek khawahish bhi thi dono me ke...dono ek dushre k sath rahna chahte hain...!!! kuch aur pal...kuch pal aur...
achanak Naina ka hath khinch kar...maj Rajveer use ek bade se paid k piche le aaye...
Naina ne hairani se dekha...maj Rajveer ki nazar padi us par...phir unhone ek taraf ishara kiya...
Naina ne dekha...kuch soldiers k sath ek army officer bhi aa raha tha... unhe sayad security k liye kuch instructions de rahe the...
Naina ne achnak...mehshush kiya...ki jab maj Rajveer ne use khinch kar us paid k niche le kar aaye the...toh voh anjnae me hi...un k baht kareeb aa gayi thi...!!! abhi voh un k baht kareeb khadi thi...un k chehre ke ek dam kareeb us ka face tha...voh un ki sanshon ko apne chehre par mehshush karr rahi thi...
maj Rajveer ki nazar un soldiers ki taraf thi...!!! kuch hi der me voh sab vahan se chale gaye toh...maj Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...toh voh khud bhi surprised the ki...anjane me unhone ne Naina ko kitne kareeb le aaye the...!!!
dono ki body...ek dushre ke behad kareeb thi...ek inch ka bhi fashla nahi tha...dono ek dushre se satt kar khade the...!!! sirf dono ka chehra ke bich fashla tha...aur voh bhi baht kamm...
un ka hath abhi tak Naina k hathon me tha...!!! dono ki nazran mili...toh Naina ne nazrain jhukayi...!!! ek 'ahh' nikli...maj Rajveer k dil se...Naina k is ada par...
maj Rajveer ne Naina ka hath choda...!!!
Naina ne hairani se nazar uthayi...unhe dekha...!!! kuch mehshush hua sayad use...!!!
andhera toh tha...par halke se ujale me us ne maj Rajveer ko khud se dur jate hue dekha...!!!
maj Rajveer khud piche ki taraf hatt rahe the...jab ki un ki nazar abhi bhi Naina ko hi dekh rahi thi...!!!
Naina ne bina kuch soche samjhe...apna hath aage badhaya...maj Rajveer ka hath thama......
ek darr tha dono k dil me ki sayad voh dono phir se alag na ho jaye... ek baar phir...khud se khud ko kho na de...
maj Rajveer thoda kareeb aaye Naina...ke...dekha use...kareeb se...phir kaha:- "raat kafi ho chuki hai...wapas chalte hain...
Naina:- "aap ko yaad hai...aap ne mujh se kaha tha ki...aap pura ek din mere sath bitayenge...!!! vaise bhi mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi...
maj Rajveer:- "yaad hai...!!! par Naina...abhi main thoda sa BG hun...!!! par promise nahi todunga...!!! main aap na wada jarur nibhayunga...!!!"
us halki si roshni me bhi maj Rajveer ne Naina ki smile ko mehshush kiya...!!! Naina ki nazar niche jhuki...maj Rajveer chalne lage...un k thode hi piche Naina ja rahi thi...
maj Rajveer ne thoda sa piche mud kar Naina ki taraf dekha...voh kisi khayal me ghum thi...us k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...
Mera khayaal hai abhi
jhuki hui nigaah mein
Khuli hui hansi bhi hai,
dabi hui si chaah mein
Main janta hoon,
mera naam gunguna rahi hai
woh Yahi khayaal hai mujhe,
ke saath aa rahi hai woh
maj Rajveer ruke...Naina aayi un k kareeb...pucha:- "kya hua...???"
maj Rajveer:- "humain sath chalna chahiye...kyoun ki hum sath me aaye the...
Naina mushkurayi...aur kaha:- "haan...aur hamesha sath chalenge...
dono sath chalne lage...!!! kohra hatt chuka tha... chand...ashman me halke se dikhai dene laga tha...
Woh shaam kuchh ajeeb thi,
yeh shaam bhi ajeeb hai
Woh kal bhi paas paas thi
woh aaj bhi kareeb hai
Woh shaam kuchh ajeeb thi.........(movie:-Khamoshi...)
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LRL JOKE:-1
Huda gaya apna fone par recharge karwane...
Huda:-"10 ka recharge kar do...
dat man:- "7 rupaye ka talk tym aayega...
Huda:- "toh baki k 3 rupaye ka namkeen de dena...!!!
LRL JOKE:-2
Rajveer aur Naina ki shadi ho gayi...
raat ko sote waqt kafi late ho gaya tha...reception party k liye...!!! Rajveer ko kafi neend aa rahi thi...us ne lamming karte hue kaha:- "hey...maa...
Naina chidh gayi...aur boli:- "itni khubshurat biwi tumhare paas baithi hui hai...aur tum Hema Malini aunty ko yaad karr rahe ho...???is cinema ne sare husband ki band baja rakhi hai...!!! jab dekho...kisi na kisi heroine ka naam lete hi rahte hain...!!!"
Rajveer:- "husband ka matlab bhi toh yehi hota hai...'HASSTA HUA BAND'
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🥱 main kuch bhul rahi hun kya...???hmmm...arre haan...aaj Hema malini ka bhi birthday hai...😆...!!! aur bhi sayad kisi ka birthday hai...jo yaad nahi aa raha hai...sayaaaaaaddddd Doc Manali ka...😆
MANALI ka full form pata hai...???😛
M:- Mana......
A:- Aaja......
N:- Nach le......
A:- Aaj mere nall......
L:- Lovely......
I:- Ishtyle me......
& finally MANA.........MARNA MANAA HAI...😆 baki jitna chahe dance kar le...😆violin bajate hue...par is post ko dekh kar violent hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai...calm down...😆

I'm wishing you another year
Of laughter, joy and fun,
Surprises, love and happiness,
And when your birthday's done,

I hope you feel deep in your heart,
As your birthdays come and go,
How very much you mean to me,
More than you can know.

badi hi mushkil se yeh cake rakha hai...tu bass...candels bujha kar dur ho ja...hum baki ise saaf karne ka kaam karte hai...!!! vaise bhi tujhe itne cakes mil chuke hai...isiliye yeh cake tere liye nahi bal ke hamare liye hai...😆
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago
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Ohh....lovely birthday gift....😆....I mean of course its Rajeev's birthday (HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U RAJ 😳)....but phir bhi gift to hamara hai na....😉...😆

But u knw wat this fic tests my intelligence....jo ki bahut terrible hai....😆😆....all the while I was trying to make out wat actually is going on....wid Maj. Rajveer and those seniors....again they r talking of sum 'jhooth'....😕.... I suggest....Sach Mat Bolo.....but plsssss....Jhooth bolke confoose mat karo yaar.....😆😆

Anyways....avoiding that very conveniently....I wud move on....😉....Btw....I didnt expect Rajveer when it was Pooja....after all....Raj uss waqt waha seniors ke saath tha....ab wo Army Jeep use karta hai.....Bruce Wayne ki tarah koi hot shot car nahi....jo aise hi pohuch jayega yaha....😆😆

But yeah....next tym....I wud hav thought of him perhaps....if u hadnt written those lines in brackets....😆...I loved that orderly scene....when he said "Ye khana Maj. Rajveer ka hai jo ghalti se aapke paas aa gayi"....🤣...that was marvelous....and then Raj's behaviour at the beginning....when she was carving for food....even that was awesum!! 😳😳

And then their unspoken words.....their beautiful feelings portrayed thru gestures....its all very beautiful!! ⭐️.....But ye dono abhi bhi ANJAAN behave kyun harte hai??? I mean....c'mon....I just watched Anjaana Anjaani....waha wo dono bhi itneeeeeeeeeeeee ANJAAN behave nahi karte hai....😆😆

Anyways getting bak to the topic.....I was loving their walk....but why did Raj ask "Mere saath phir se jaogi?".....I mean....Who else does he think she wud wanna go wid.....or rather he wud let her go wid?? 😆.....Seriously Pri.....add sum romantic...Dimagless sense into these two....😆😳😉

However....I loved the song....achha hua likh diya kiss film ka hai....warna main poochhne ko tayyar baithi thi....😆....and that cute cuming closer thing....aweeeeeee......😳

Wat an update yaar!! Love you for this.....😛

And yeah....LRL jokes were as usual gr8....😉....now get ready to update more....😉

Luv,
Sumi. 😳



😆
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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