ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 65

hey sherni i am so sorry main isbaar phirse late ho gaye.mujhe kha mat jana.bt isbaar reason tum khud ho itne time baad baad ud karti ho ki main pichli story hi bhul jaati hun.to main phirse shuru se shuru kya parna and faida mera hi hua kyunki this time i enjoyed it more than the last time.

now coming to this update its a truly romantic update.naina's reaction about raj's kiss is described really well.after all its the first kiss from him😃😃.rajveer itna sharmate hai ki naina ke lye toh yehi boht hai. i like huda's comment on maj.rajveer ki wow din bhar jaha bhi urte phire naina ke bina unka koi thikana nehi.haye pehli baar kitni pyari baat kahi huda ne.and then the dinner and a perfect night walk so romantic.they cared so much about each other.

Great part

Naina is waiting for Raj she refuses to leave the hospital without him. But Huda and Alekh convince her to return to the camp. Huda has indeed changed a lot.

Raj convinces his superiors that Naina is a true soldier and that she would never back out from saving her country just because her life was at risk. He is thankful to Col Gupta for telling him about the mission earlier so that he could plan all of this. Hope that Raj not only shares the truth wiht naina but also with all his cadets. After all of them have earned his trust.

Naina gets very angry when she see the tiffin which Raj had sent for her. She is mad because Raj had not come to meet her after returning to the camp and had continued working.

Par Raj ki bhi pata hai ki naina ko kaise manaya jata hai. Raj ne bade hi pyaar se maafi mangi naina se. Naina bhi use maaf kar deti hai...after all she cannot stay angry with Raj for a long time.

Naina ko accha lagta hai jab Raj uski choti choti baat man leta hai. Akhir Raj naina ki baat kabhi taal hi nahi sakta.

Both of them love each other very much, par who apne dil ki baat ek dusre se keh hi nahi paate. They should just listen to their hearts and not their mind

please continue soon

Simply mindblowing part......👏👏👏

loved d way it started wid naina remembering the event of last night ...too good and cute...👏

also njoyed d way raj manaofy naina tooo good and sooooooooo cute...typical raj......😳👏

loved d way u presented der relationship here ...wonderful....👏👏
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Hey dear

any scene of update??

whr r u pls update the fic

Hey

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ohh....lovely birthday gift....😆....I mean of course its Rajeev's birthday (HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U RAJ 😳)....but phir bhi gift to hamara hai na....😉...😆 haan...cake bhi toh us se pahle hum kaat kar kha jate hain...us ke naam se...😆

But u knw wat this fic tests my intelligence....jo ki bahut terrible hai....😆😆....all the while I was trying to make out wat actually is going on....wid Maj. Rajveer and those seniors....again they r talking of sum 'jhooth'....😕.... I suggest....Sach Mat Bolo.....but plsssss....Jhooth bolke confoose mat karo yaar.....😆😆 ha ha ha...'ab is mission me sirf 'jhuth hi jhuth' milenge tumhe...!!! vaise is JHUTH ka parda-faash main jaldi kar dungi... bas naina raj ke kabu me aa jaye...😆

Anyways....avoiding that very conveniently....I wud move on....😉....Btw....I didnt expect Rajveer when it was Pooja....after all....Raj uss waqt waha seniors ke saath tha....ab wo Army Jeep use karta hai.....Bruce Wayne ki tarah koi hot shot car nahi....jo aise hi pohuch jayega yaha....😆😆 ha ha ha...par fictions me kuch bhi ho sakta hai...!!! sayad raj harry pottor ki jhadu le kar pahunch jaye...😆

But yeah....next tym....I wud hav thought of him perhaps....if u hadnt written those lines in brackets....😆...I loved that orderly scene....when he said "Ye khana Maj. Rajveer ka hai jo ghalti se aapke paas aa gayi"....🤣...that was marvelous....and then Raj's behaviour at the beginning....when she was carving for food....even that was awesum!! 😳😳 thanqqqqq...vaise mujhe pata hai ke ...raj hai matlab...tumhare liye toh marvelous scene hoga hi...😛

And then their unspoken words.....their beautiful feelings portrayed thru gestures....its all very beautiful!! ⭐️ thanqqqqq .....But ye dono abhi bhi ANJAAN behave kyun harte hai??? I mean....c'mon....I just watched Anjaana Anjaani....waha wo dono bhi itneeeeeeeeeeeee ANJAAN behave nahi karte hai....😆😆 ha ha ha...yeh dono bhi anjaana anjaani nahi hai...sab jante hain samajhte hain...par meri 'hari jhandi' ka intezaar karr rahe hain...😆

Anyways getting bak to the topic.....I was loving their walk....but why did Raj ask "Mere saath phir se jaogi?".....I mean....Who else does he think she wud wanna go wid.....or rather he wud let her go wid?? 😆.....Seriously Pri.....add sum romantic...Dimagless sense into these two....😆😳😉 voh toh main hargiz nahi kar sakti...!!! okay...okay...mrna mat...par jab itna wait kar hi liya hai toh thoda aur sahi...!!! vaise ek baat kahun...tumhe ILTMTLU naam ki ek fic hai jise padhna chahiye...jo ek Achhi Bachhi ne likhi thi...!!! halat kharab kar di thi us ne raj ke confession se pahle...main toh bas use thoaaada sa follow karr rahi hun...😆

However....I loved the song....achha hua likh diya kiss film ka hai....warna main poochhne ko tayyar baithi thi....😆....and that cute cuming closer thing....aweeeeeee......😳 haan...par raj ne kabada bhi toh kar diya...!!! hala ke voh mujhe gusse se dekh raha tha...!!! kya hai na...kahani...camera aur director ki seat par main baithi hui thi aur use kuch karne nahi de rahi thi...😆

Wat an update yaar!! Love you for this..... le...sirf is ud ke liye mujh se pyar karti ho...huh...sumi aaj tum ne mera dil hi tod diya...😆

And yeah....LRL jokes were as usual gr8....😉....now get ready to update more....😉 phil haal toh next ud ready hai...bas post karne ki deri hai...

Luv,
Sumi. 😳



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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya Hiii Suhana...

Update was really gud👏👏👏 thanqqqq

Naina was eagerly waiting for Maj.Shekhawat but he did't came..She was so upset but he was really busy in an important meeting.. ab yeh meeting bhi toh naina se hi judi hui hai na...toh raj toh jyada busy hoga na...

Why is Naina so important for that mission?? Atleast Raj ab usse kuchh chhupana nahina chahta .😊 hmmm...ek do uds me clear kar dungi...pakka...😃

Naina looks gud when she orders Raj😆😆 and Poor Raj has to follow them coz her wish is his command😊 aur nahi toh kya...

Huda has really changed a lot..😊 meri fiction hai yaar...sab kuch ulta hi hoga...😆

Naina was very angry on Raj and when she saw that orderly with tiffin her anger knew no bounds..Raj realized his mistake and he went to meet her..😊 ab galati bhi toh ki thi na...

Naina was so surprised to see him there but she controlled her anger infront of him..She was really hungry and Raj knew it.. tabhi toh raj ki entry hui wid dinner...😆

bade hi pyaar se Raj ne usse maafi maangi..Naina bhi maan gayi..Afterall woh apne Rajveer sir kitni der tak gussa reh sakti hai.. haan...yeh bhi hai...aur main bhi na naina ko raj se jyada dur rakh hi nahi sakti...😛

That song is really beautiful and romatic..It was perfectly describing Raj nad Naina's feelings.. mera fav hai...😃

Dono hi sath chana chahte hain aur woh ek doosre se pyaar bhi katre hain but keh nahin pa rahe hain..😊 kahenge...kahenge...jarur kahenge...!!! un ke muh se nikalwane ke liye hi toh maine yeh fiction start ki hai...

Naina ko accha lagta hai jab Raj uski chhoti chhoti baatein manta hai..They both were remebering point 1857..😍 Itni romantic raat bas aise hi chalte chalte bita di..yaar in dono ka kuchh karo😉😆😆 maine toh preparation kar rakhi hai...jab itni late ho hi chuki hai toh thoda aur sahi...

I hope Raj n Naina ka confession jaldi hi ho..😊 jaldi matlab...kitni jaldi...???

Pls continue soon

Bye