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Posted: 15 years ago
hey very cute update.😃
huda sach mein kamaal hai.asli yaar hai wo naina kaitna chane bawajood sirf uski fikr hai.
naina as always is doubtedon raj's behavior.
very cutely written .
take care🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Here comes the reply for part 6,
Vaise maine ye part pehle bhi padh liya tha par time nahi mila rply karne ka so ab karne jaa rahi hoon.
Naina ka Raj par gussa hona natural hai, is ka reason Raj bhi acche se samajhta hai. Pehle bhi Naina ne kai baar aisa kiya hai ki Raj ki baat nahi suni, is baar fir us ne yahi kiya. Par shayad is baar Raj samajhta tha ki Naina ko itna bada sach us k chupaane se kitne takleef hue hai.
Tabhi Raj ne decide kar liya tha ki is baar vo apne se door nahi jaane dega Naina ko. Tabhi us ne ek badhiya sa plan banaya i mean us ne Salim ko bheja Naina ko bulane k liye aur jab Naina rukna nahi chahti thi to us ne jabardasti Naina ko roka kyounki vo jaanta tha ki Naina aise to maanegi nahi.
Kahin na kahin mai bhi Naina k gusse se itefaaq rakhti hoon. Sahi hai us ka gussa apni jagah. raj ko bhi par poora hak hai apni safai dene ka aur dena bhi chahiye jab us ne kuch galat nahi kiya hai to. I mean kuch na kuch us ki majboori rahi hogi na apne baare me Naina ko na batane ki. Song selection was brillinat yaar.
Is situation me yahi song suit karta na. Bina kuch kahe kitna kuch keh jaate hain dono aur Naina bhi jyada der tak apne aap ko Raj k pass us ki bahon me aane se nahi rok paayi. Shayad us k liye bhi asaan nahi tha ab saamne Raj k hote hue us se door jaana. Raj jaanta hai ki Naina ne kitna kuch saha hai us k saath na rehne ki vajah se.
Purani Naina ek baar fir se vapas aa gayi jab us ne baarish me bheegna chaha aur humesha jaise Raj ne mana kiya. Par ab fir se us ki awaaz me vahi confidence aa gaya hai ki us k rajveer sir hain na us ka khayal rakhne k liye. Raj ne us ko apni baat sunai jab ki vo sun na nahi chahti thi. Raj ne us ka dard us ki aakhon se mehsoos kar liya. akelapan bhi samajh gaya us ka vo.
Coming to our rest of the cadets, Pooja humesha jaise Ali ko samjhane pe lagi hai but mujhe nahi lagta hai kabhi bhi Ali is baat k liye maanega. Alekh ne bhi kya solid entry maari hai aur statement bhi mast diya ki ab ALi ko kaun bachayega Pooja se? Huda n as usual us ki rajesh n dhoodh, poor guy garmi se thandi jagah bhej diya us ko.
Vo bhi surprise ho jaayega sab ko dekh kar jab us ko pata chalega ki sab ne kaisa prank khela hai.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kitna badhiya update tha part 7 yaar. 👏 👏 👏
Ye alag baat hai ki tune us me kahin bhi Raj ko mension nahi kiya fir bhi bahut accha tha.
Jis tarah se Naaz ne apne aap ko un gundo se bachaya hai vo bhi us condition me jab koi us ka saath nahi de raha tha. I feel really proud on her yaar.
Saari ladkiyon ko us se is baat ki inspiration leni chahiye ki hum sab ko selfdepend banana chahiye jis se koi chahhte hue bhi kabhi humara use nahi kar sake.
Gunny ko bhi Naaz k liye kuch karne ki jaroorat hi nahi padi, us ne khud hi sab itne acche se handel kar liya aur badhiya ki sab ki taaliyon ka jawab un ki gairat ko lalkaar k diya.
Huda to phone try kiye hi jaa raha ai Naina ka aur Naina aa k us k peeche hi khadi ho gayi chup k se. Aakhir us k face par Raj se milne ki khushi to obviously dikhegi hi na.
Huda n Alekh ne sab se jyada notice kiya aur phir Pooja ne. Gud that dr. Shalini is back aur vo bhi vaise hi jaise vo pehle thi, such me sweetheart.
huda ko kya jaroorat thi beech me aane ki?
Humesha tease karta hai Yudi ko. So ab sab party me jaa rahe hain vow. I hope ki vahan vo Rajveer se mile aur jitna un ko miss karte hain utna hi khush honge us ko saamne dekh kar.
Kaun se sweet memories hain Naina k dil me jin ko le kar sone jaa rahi thi.?

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Posted: 15 years ago
Good again, hum updtae on pg. 44 ki baat kar rahe hain Priya jee.
Sach me ye Naina bhi na kitne sawaal poochti hai. Ab us ki aadat bhi itne jaldi to jaayegi nahi yu sawaal poochne ki. Maana padega ki Raj k el baar fir se us ki life me aane se fir se bacchon jaise ban gayi hai vo.
Jo baatein abhi tak kahin andar chali gayi thi vo fir se bahar aa gayi hain. Raj sab kuch samajh k hi kar raha hoga i think because vo kabhi bhi jajbaat me aa k koi faisla nahi lega.
naina ka confusion bhi sahi hai apni jagah ki Raj us se kuch bata nahi raha hai jab se mila hai ki kya hua n kaise hua? Ab kitne baar bataye accha hi hai saare cadets Raj k saamne honge to sab detail me batayega.
Naina ko Raj ne Raj ya Rajveer bolne k liye kaha hai par ye itna asaan nahi hai Naina k liye. Humesha se sir bolti aayi Naina ek jhatke me Raj to bolegi nahi par aadat jitne jaldi pad jaaye utna hi accha hai.
Raj ne ek sawaal k liye kaha aur Naina ne to jhadi hi laga di na sawaalon ki. Raj bhi acche se jaanta hai Naina ko ki vo aise hi hai aur kabhi change nahi ho sakti, specially us k saamne to jara bhi nahi.
That scene was cute when he touched her face and she smiled. Shalu ne bhi acchi daat lagayi Raj ko ki kab tak apne cadets se chipta rahega vo aur vo bhi un cadets se jo us se itna pyaar karte hain.
Shalini ki daat ka i hope kuch to asar hoga hi aur ab Raj apne cadets se jaroori milega. Naina bhi na kya kya cheejin try karti rehti hai. Agar gir jaati khayi me to socha hai raj ka kya hota? Ek baar fir bichad jaate dono. Thank god sahi time par Raj ne us ko rok liya.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pg. 51 k update k reply se pehle mujhe ye bata ki kis vajah se tera mood kharab tha.
Jaldi se mujhe pm kar, varna tu jaanti hai mai kya karoongi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pg. 51k update k liye reply.
Good nahi jee bahut accha tha aur haan darna mat mai nahi maarne waali hoon tujhe, us ka reason ye nahi hai ki mai bahut shareef hoon (jo ki mai vaise bhi hoon) par ye hai ki yahan abhi is tarah ki cheej ki jaroorat nahi thi. 😉 😉 😉
naina ki kuch der pehle ki yaadein kaafi sweet thi. Mujhe lagne laga hai ki Raj ab Naina k pass aane me jara bhi hesitate nahi karta hai. Us ne jis tarah se baar baar Naina k paas aana chaha aur aa raha hai that is quite cute dear.
Naina bhi ab apne sir se kuch kam sharmaane lagi hai. Bhutte waala scene ho chahe Naina ka pyaar se Raj se jhagda karna khaane k liye kyounki us ko bhookh lagi hue thi. Kaafi logical thi madam ki baat ki Raj ka kaam hai us ka khayal rakhna.
Raj sach me kuch kar nahi sakta hai bus sochta hi rahega. phir Naina ne jaise us se bhutte mangwaaye aur khaaye hain us k saath hi bhuttewaale ko us ne jaise daata hai that was really funny. Again a good song selection dear.
When it comes to Raj and rest of the group, sab ka naraj hona obvious tha but mujhe shayad sab se accha expression laga Pooja n Ali ka Raj ko dekh k. Pooja ka rona natural tha aur Ali ka bina kuch kahe sab kuch keh jaana bahut hi khoobsurat.
Huda n Alekh ko manana asaan nahi hona tha ye baat Raj bhi jaanta tha par is baar Alekh ne acchi samajhdaari dikhayi hai aur samajh gaya vo ki Raj k aisa karne me koi na koi reason jarror raha hoga. Naina ko ab Raj kehna hoga akele me Raj ko jo us k liye asaan nahi hone waala hai.
Col. Gupta ne jo file di hai Raj ko us me Naina ki photo kyoun lagi hai? I mean Naina ne aisa kya kar diya hai jis k liye file me us ka naam hai vo bhi itna urgent tha ki Col. Gupta ko raat me bula k deni padi file us ko.
Naaz n Gunny aage bhi milenge i am sure. Naina kitna dar jaati hai na har baar Rajveer k jaane k time. Ab khona nahi chahti na us ko.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update. loved scene between raj and naina......
huda ne kuch toh accha kya.....
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kya update tha recent.
Hassi aa rahi thi mujhe Huda n Company pe. Huda chahta tha ki Naina khush rahe isiliye bus ye jaante hue ki Rajveer hai Academy me us ne kisi ko bhi Naina ki help karne jaane k liye mana kar diya. Us k baad kya solid setting ki hai Naina n Raj k liye.
Sahi kaha Alekh ne hum humesha doosron ko galat samajhte hain par kabhi-2 vo bhi sahi hote hain na. Huda ki prayers mujhe poori umeed hai sacche dil se ki gayi hai to jaroor kubool hongi. Jahan tak baaki k logon ki baat hai to accha hi hua Ali nahi gaya varna Raj ko mauka nahi mil paata Naina k saath alone time spend karne ka.
Col. Gupta ne Raj ko acche se samajh liya hai ab. Mujhe poori umeed hai ki jaldi hi Raj un ko Naina se milwaayega aur us ki shaadi ki party bhi jaldi hi hogi. Kyounki sab is setting me hi lage hue hain na. Raj koi na koi aisa raasta nikalega hi jis se Naina bhi bach jaaye aur mission bhi sucessful ho jaaye.
Ab Raj kahin nahi jaane dega Naina ko apne se door. Naaz ka matter kuch had tak confusing hai abhi mujhe thode doubts clear nahi hue hain but i am sure jaldi hi ho jaayenge. Naaz bhi jaan pe khelne ka jigar rakhti hai.
Raj pe shak tha Naina ko. Vaise bhi ye ladki jo hai bina dekhe bolna start kar deti hai. Ab pata chala ki Raj khada tha peeche.Naina ki haath ki chai mili Raj ko. Par ye photo kyoun hata li thi Raj ne? Jab romantic mood hone lagta hai to Raj kuch kehta hi nahi, not fair.
Naina abhi bhi un beete hue dino ko yaad karti hai aur sahi kaha us ne Raj k baare me jo vo feel karti hai. Raj jaanta tha ki Naina jaane nahi degi Raj ko kahin isiliye jhooth me Rajasthan ki kahani banayi us ne.
ab yaar jaldi se aage badaho dekho mai aa gayi hoon bilkul current track pe.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey prya apko kya ho gaya .aap pls udate kijiye.hum kabse apke ud ka intezzar kar rahe.apne to rn ko romance shuru hone se pehle hi atka dya.unhe age toh barne do?
Edited by poojabi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey..dear..
very nice ff yaar.......
rajveer and gunny....nice combi.. i like them very much...and naina is very nice....
gunny aur naaz ki luv story kab start karogi?????
luved ur ff...
plz cont. soon

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