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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww Priya...you are a sweetheart...!!! 🤗

After reading so many fics and becoming friends with the best 😉 writers, I have realised that my dhamkis work well......toh maine socha hai, kyun naa apni is skill ko cash karun...!!!! Aaj se agar kisi ko dhamki deni ho toh do contact me....!!!!

Swami Priyanandji...the pravachan was superb, as usual...!! Toh yeh sab problems hai...sach me main hamesha ulta hi sochti hun....chal ab se sochna hi chod deti hun...!!!! 😉

Naaz ka part was excellent...!!!!!

And the last RN part.....pata hai mujhe rona aa gaya woh padhte padhte lekin uske immediately baad teri typical note....😃

Now if you dont want me to badnaam you anymore for late ud's then update soon...!!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey that was awesome
i really loved RN scene in the end and Naina's last dialogue that was rocking let see what Raj has as an answer
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear wowwwwwwwwwwwwww no words to describe amazing fantastic update soonnnnnn tc
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiii Priya,

How r u?
Fabulous part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Sab se pehle meri fav scene in this part pe aati hun,mera matlab poora update i liked so much but raj n naina scene i loved sooooooooooo much
wah kya scene tha yaar ,maine us part 2 times padha tha,isse pehle tu mujhse kahegi kha kasam main sirf kasam hi kya sab kuch khakhe kehthi hun i read that part two times .......
especially jab naina raj ko huda samajhke baat kar rahi thi na ..n when naina said "mujhe apni poori zindagi main aapki jarrorat hain" n naina raj aur uski photo wall pe lagathe hue jo baat ki thi na ..they r such an awesome scenes.....loved them ..tune bahut cutely likha tha
so finally naina madam aagayi line pe ,kitna sweetly raj kaha
Naina ki friends kitna acche hain ..huda is so nice ....thanks to him ..ab uski wajah se hi humko itna acchi ,lovely sweet RN scene mila na...the canteen scene is so funny
Loved the way how u portrayed Naazs character ...ye naaz ke family ke saath kya hua..aur ye yusuf usko kaunsa kaam karne ko kehraha tha..
the convo between raj n Col Gupta is nice
tune ye kahape rokdi yaar waiting eagerly to know now what raj say to naina....so jaldi se update kar
thanks to dhara for giving u maarne ki dhamki ..ab tu uski wajah se ye ud ki na ....n lots of hugs to u for this lovely update 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
awsome update
superb
mindblowing
loved the part
beautifully written
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr88 update dear..Naina n Raj sach mein bohot badal gaye hai...dono ne sharmana chodkar freely baat karna start kar diya hai...luved the update..plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
absolutely wonderful updt.....👏

convo of col and maj was very nice and interesting..unhone bhi raj ko pakad hi liya dat he luvs naina.......raj is very obvious wen it comes to naina...too good der.....
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den naaz and gunny part wasa good as well...
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loved d cadets part and den rn was awesome....
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loved it wen raj said
"basss...itna sa kaam...voh toh main jaldi hi kar dunga...!!! us k baad...kya...main Rajasthan ja sakta hun...???

Naina:- "nahi...bilkul nahi...aap mujhe chod kar kahin nahi ja sakte...!!!

Maj rajveer mushkuraye...Naina k thoda aur kareeb aaye eur kaha:- "kya kaha tum ne...???"

Naina ne nazrain jhukayi aur dhire se kaha:- "mujhe apni puri zindagi me aap ki jaruart hai Raj...!!!"....

tooo goood luved it......👏😳


gr8 updt in all

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Posted: 15 years ago

Superb part

Raj gets worried to see that Col Gupta wants naina to be the target of the enemy in their coming mission. He tries to change Col Gupta's decision but when he sees that he is losing. He puts behind his emotions and like a true soldiers accepts the challenge. He is confident that they will be successful in their mission and naina will be his strength and not weakness.

Col Gupta knows that Naina is the love of Raj's life. And just like us he wants to know that when will Raj propose to naina. He even tells Raj that he will waiting to meet his naina and not Lt Singh.

Naaaz and her family have suffered so much'par yeh saab kaise hua? And After all of this how could Yusauf that she will marry him. Hope that Naaz will be ok.

Naina and her friends are trying to bring Raj and her together. All of them come up with excuses and refuse to help her to set up her room.

Huda manages to send Raj to naina's room by making an excuse.

And when Raj reaches there he is surprised to hear her complain about him. Who bina dekhe hi apni baat bol rahi thi. He has never heard naina speak like this and wonders whether he has changed over time or has she changed.

Naina Raj se keh deti hai ki who zindagi bhaar ke liye Raj ko apne paas rakh na chahati hai. Raj aur apni photo lagete hua naina Raj se jo kuch bhi kehti hai usse yeh to saaf hai ki who raj se bahut pyaar karti hai.

Hope that Raj bhi apne pyaar ka izhaar karke naina ko jaldi se aapni banale.

Waiting to know what happens next. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
that was awesome.......part..........👏 👏 👏..... it was good to see Raj & naina talking so freely.........😃........... hope they confess soon.....ya u planning to make them confession on mission..😉 😉..........
continue soon asap......... & soon means real soon.... not late ki readers bhul hi jaye last part mein kya hua tha 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maj Rajveer n Capt Randhawa.....kya dhasooo combo hai yaar!! Main to abhi se day...umm its night tym actually.....so I am night dreaming wid open eyes....hehe.

So Naina has to be a part of the mission widout being let to knw abt it all....in fact she will act as the target....hmm....I'm sure Raj n tum....dono sab sambhal lenge....mujhe chintakarne ki zarurat nahi hai...hehe!!

Naaz ka scene zabardast tha....I liked the way her character is being portrayed....and Gunny ji to kuch zyada hi polite behave kar rahe the...hehe!! Not that I mind btw!!

Ali ka wo scene...bechara help karne jaa raha tha....lolz!! Huda did a gud job.....he is a gud kid here.....and Aalekh is as always "I knw it all".....gosh!!

RN scene was fab fab fab!!! Pehle to Naina ki bak bak....without seeing that handsum face just behind her....and Rajveer ka usse Raj bulwana.....and then wo tasveer wali scene....khana banane wali baat....all was tooooooooo gud!! Gr8 yaar Priya.....aise hi UD karti raho...punya milegi!!

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