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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Priya…. 😊

How r u ?

Thank u soooooooooo much....... not only for keeping your word but for the fabulous part also 😃

The part is fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏………beautiful one 👏 👏 👏 👏..…ab main jitni bhi taarif karu is ud ke bare mein wo kam hi hoga……..itni acchi update deti ho aur tumhari har fic ki har update ke baad note likthi ho ye khass nahi……tum na ek dam paagal ho……he …he..he 😆 😆 😆 😆… dont mind ........just kidding

The first part in the update is really beatifully written……naina ki uljan…..the fight between her mind n the heart….its too good….naina kitni dargayi jab salim khan ne usko jaldi chalne ko kaha aur phir wo baagke bahar aayi n she saw raj standing there n wo bina palk japkaye naina ko dekh raha tha ……..wow!!!!!!!!.………mujhe ye scene bahut acchi lagi……isse bhi jyada accha lagi jab raj ne naina ko hug kiya…..aur uska kehna main tumhare liye zinda hun …….aaj main zinda hun toh us ki ek badi WAJAH sirf tum ho Naina...!!!"………the whole scene is really amazing one…u r an awesome writer yaar

Raj ne naina ko promise bhi kiya ke wo hamesha uske saath rahega ………its soooooo sweet………n by the way the song is perfect for the situation

Ab our cute sa gang will meet in srinagar….…..alekh ,ali ,pooja ,huda ki entry hogayi……..waiting for yudi….. Canteen scene is too funny…pooja ali ko dhakka mar kar alekh ko gale lagana……damn funny 😆 😆 😆 😆……aalekh ne bhi kya leg pulling ki sab ki…….

once again i want to say the whole update is toooooooooo good .....n i simply loved it

All the best for your exams 👍🏼
I think ab ye kehne ki bilkul jarrorat nahi ........ waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic............😊
naina ne finally apna gussa thuk diya.
aur rajveer as usual use manane mein kamyaab rahe.
and all the friends circle in J&k.wowwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for ur next update ..............its gonn abe fun with all of them back together😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya,
Toh aakhir tune update kar hi diya. Fantastic update.👏 👏 👏
Toh Naina apne dil aur dimag ke kashmakash me uljhi hui hai. Dil keh raha hai ki usse Raj ko ek mauka dena chahiye thea aur dimag keh raha hai nahi.😕
Aur isi kasmakash ke beech me Raj usse rokne aa gaya. 😊Salim khan ko bhejkar bulwaya to Naina to darr hi gayi ki kahin Raj ko kuch ho toh nahi gaya. Fir jab jeep ke paas dekha Raj ko to shuru ho gaya ruthne aur manane ka silsila.
Mujhe Raj ke manane ka tarika bahut acha laga. 👏 👏 👏Na koi baat, na koi shabd, sidhe usne Naina ko apni bahon me bhar liya. Aur thodi der na nakur ke baad naina maan bhi gayi. Kaise na maanti jab hero itne pyaar se manaye to heroine ko toh maanna padta hi hai. Aur mana ke saath gaana same ho gaya toh koi baat nahi. Veer- Zaara jab milte hain toh yahi gaana hota hai."The eternal meeting song."😊 😳 😳 😳 😊
Naina ka wo ek "Kyun" mere dil ko chu gaya. Aur Raj ka puchna ki mujh par vishwas hai was so lovely. Ab mila hi diya hai to confession bhi jaldi karwa do.
Loved Ali-Pooja convo. Aur aise comment to sirf Aalekh hi maar sakta hai. Huda ki bhi achi band bajai Aalekh ne. Ab bas Yudi ki kami hai. Wo bhi aa jaye. Waise Naaz aur Gunny ka kya hua???
Next update jaldi karna with some RN scenes. Warna tumhari pitaai ho jaayegi.
Continue soon.
Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
awsome update
superb
mindblowing
too good
loved the update
very well written
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was wonderful
finally RN ke bich sab thik ho gaya
plz continue soon with some RN romance
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya..how r u dear??

WOWWW...awesome part...!!!
Raj stopped Naina ..!!! 😳 👏 ..i loved that part... Raj did an awesome job ... 👏 ... So finally NAina said only one word which covered all her questions n all her emotions which she buried in her heart the time she recognized HIM...!!!
U described this scene soo well Priya.. brilliant job..!!! 👏
Now nothing can stop Raj to fulfill his promise made by him to NAina.. 😳
Pooja is soo funny.. 😆 Ali and Alekh r the same.. ali is still so shy..and Alekh..well.. 😉
Huda is also there...Alekh shuru ho gaya...huda ko aate hi pareshaan kar diya..madam..🤣
gr88..the old team is together once again..now only Yudi n Naina aa jaaye..!!! but naina to busy hai..ehehehheheh... 😉now its in Priya's hands how long she will make Naina busy....hehehehe...😉
awesome , mindblowing update..... 👏
Waiting for the next part...
Edited by sweet_shona - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Kitna sweet update tha na yaar, par kahan start hua aur kab khatam ho gaya pata hi nahi chala jara bhi.

Raj ne aakhir Naina ka peecha nahi choda aur mujhe vishwaas tha ki vo is baar is mauke ko apne haath se jaane nahi dega aur Naina ko apni baat suna k hi rahega.

Ye Naina bhi na jab naraj hoti hai to kisi ki bhi ek bhi baat nahi sunti. Salim se bhi acchi help le li Raj ne aur Naina bhi dar gayi thi ek baar jab Salim suddnely aise andar aa gaya tha.

Raj ne kaafi had tak apni baat is song se keh di thi. Naina bhi kitna bear karti apna dard bus us se nahi raha gaya aur vo Raj ki baahon me aa gayi. Song selection perfect tha yaar.

Raj ne na kehte hue bhi us ki aakhein bahut kuch keh gayi hain. Naina bhi samajh gayi hai aur mujhe lagta hai ki ab jaldi hi dono k beech k saare confusions clear ho jaayenge. Raj ne Naina ko barish se hatane ki koshish ki to Naina fir se vaise hi pyaari bacchi ban gayi jaise pehle thi Rajveer k saath.

Par sach me ye episode itna khoobsurat tha ki is ko mai theek se desribe bhi nahi kar sakti ki mujhe kitna jyada pasand aaya tha ye vaala part. 😳 😳 😳
continue soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was superb!!!!!👏

waited for this updt....

finally rn r together .......though always desire of more RN😛

the reunion was perfect n the gang was mindblowing......dat scene was jakaas......

it was too good updt.....
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaar just read episode 5 right now ab us par reply karne jaa rahi hoon. 😉
To ab dono ek doosre k saamne aa hi gaye aur mera maana hai ki Naina ka Raj se gussa hona bilkul sahi tha kyounki Raj ne apne zinda rehne i khabar nahi di hai Naina ko. 😡 Jis dard ko Naina itne din tak sehti rahi ab sach saamne aa gaya ki Raj zinda hai.😭
Song was awesome n perfect for the situation,👏 dekhte hain ab Naina aage kya karti hai.😉
Raj ki bhi baat sunni chahiye na us ko. 😃
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon

Thanxxxxxxxxx a lottttt Rituka...!!!😃

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