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Bmtdluver: Sorry i made this part before reading your comment so its in hindi😕😕 but next part i'll make it mostly in english😉 hopw u like this one😛


Before leap:

Bharti- 16 yrs

Payal- 17 yrs

Armaan- 18 yrs

Bhaskar- 20yrs

Ranbir- 17 yrs

After 4yrs leap:

Bharti- 20yrs

Payal- 21 yrs

Armaan- 22yrs

Bhaskar- 24yrs

Ranbir- 21 yrs

Rano- 20 yrs

Okay guys, I know most of you are confused with the story and rano… actually Rano is gonna join the college in the fourth year so to join she needs permission, so what I'm doing is introducing bharti-armaans character, payal-bhaskars character… then the story will take a leap of 4 years… now I don't want that I should run there story alone and then rano's story so what im doing is rano's story is moving ahead and the others story aswell then when rano gets here they'll all be 4 years ahead…. I hope you understand.

Part 2

Payal was sitting in the class and thinking about bhaskar… he was quite cute… bharti makes a funny face and hits her book on payals head… payal gets a shock.

She holds her head making a face "kya bharti?" she says… "bharti wo bhaskar hai na…" she starts but bharti interrupts "tu wo sab chor aur chal, class khatam hogayi yaar…" she says and gets up, payal looks around embarrassed and gets up.

At lunch time:

Payal, ranbir, bharti, armaan, rohit and nikkita are sitting on one table (all the students from india)

They all were sitting and chatting, payal & bharti were laughing loudly and childishly, armaan was staring at bharti and smiling, he felt something weird… bhaskar was sitting on the other table, he smirks as he sees payal, he moves his hand on his chin… he gets up and goes to there table… payal sees him and stops laughing, she looks at him and he smiles at her "hey guys… I'm the bhaskar bhargav…" he says and they all turn, they introduce themselves and he invites them to a party tonite…

Next class; payal is busy sitting and doing her work when she sees bhaskar outside the class, he's calling her, she looks at him and tells him to go or else she'll be in trouble… finally the bell rings an everyone rushes out of the class, payal was the last one, she asks the teacher a few questions and leaves, when she gets out of the class bhaskar catches her hand, she gets shocked and worried… he pins her to the wall… "so date ke bare mein socha?" he asks and she looks nervously around

"wo… uh… time kahan mila sochne keliye… and waise bhi aaj party pe mil rahe hain na? phir dekhenge" she smirks and gets out from under his hand and he smiles…

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At the party…

Payal was getting bored, she didn't like all this, she just came because of bhaskar but he wasn't here… she sits on a table and smiles at nikkita and ranbir who were dancing really well… just then bhaskar sits next to her and "boo" in her ear… she jumps up with surprise then blushes seeing bhaskar…

"uh… tum… I mean aap… wo… main…" he smirks at her tensed figure… she looks down trying to find something to play with.

"so not enjoying the party hun??" he asks with a smirk looking around, she looks around then honestly tells him "mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi…" she says and he smiles.

"accha to kya pasand hai aapko??" he asks and she smiles.

"well hum naa… I mean main bharti, Armaan, rohit, Ranbir hum sab mast rehte hain, no tension, no sajna dhajna… we just like to be ourselves… yahan to sab doosron se zyaada acche lagne ki sochte hain, behtar karne ki sochte hain, India mein hum har week apni khud ki party organize karte the, phir mast hoke naachte gaate, truth and dare khelte, ek doosre ki khichayi karte… and specially pahaariyan and nadiyan… you know scenery… I feel wo enjoyment hota hai, yahan to sab bas doosron ko dikha rahein hain, khud enjoy nahi kar rahe" she says and he smiles.

"hmmm… nice, I like your thoughts" he smirks and she blushes.

"chalo…" he pulls her while she tries to free herself… they get out of the disco.

"kahan jaa rahe hain hum???" she asks surprised and he smiles.

"tum bas chalo…" he says , they walk a little and payal starts getting nervous.

"bhaskar mujhe darr lag raha hai, kahan jaa rahe hain hum?" she asks.

"yahan" he says and turns her around, she sees a beautiful river with a waterfall… she smiles.

"WOW, this is simply beautiful" she says and the cute smile that comes on her face makes bhaskar's heart melt…

he keeps staring at her, she turns and clicks in front of him "kya hua?" she asks and he just nodds his head. They sit on the bridge and talk… when they get up to leave it starts raining… bhaskar pulls her and starts running but she starts enjoying the rain… she also pulls him out of the shade and they play in the rain… when they reach the hostel…

"agar aap mind na karein… so I can fulfill your wishes… aapke type ka enjoyment" he raises his eyebrows and she smiles…

"so what say?? Kal chalein date par???' he asks and she blushes.

"good night bhaskarJI" she highlights the last words and runs away… he smiles behind her.

**************

Bhaskar keeps trying to woo payal to go on a date she finally agrees… but on the date she realizes he's not what she thought he was… she finds out how many girls he's been going out with etc… she argues with him and he insults her in front of everybody. she's upset and leaves the place… Now guys I just wanna fast forward it that's why I'm doing this actually payal-bhaskar storry should have been in current but I put it back but I guess its fine… Bhaskar has to leave college for some family problems and comes back after three & half years:

*************

End of third year…

Bharti is getting bored in the class, she looks outside and sees two birds sitting on the tree, she keeps staring at them and suddenly the birds start dancing… armaan sees this, he looks at bharti who is laughing and then he looks at the birds… he was shocked… "weird… California mein birds nachti bhi hain" he thinks then gets back to work.

Next class was science;

They were in the lab, and the teacher was giving them huge lectures then she starts mixing some different acids, bharti grins and suddenly the mixture goes haywire and blasts… like a small bomb and the teacher's face is black and hair like burnt string. LOL, everyone starts laughing and the teacher cries and leaves from there, armaan looks at bharti surprised "kya yeh sab bharti kar rahi hai?" he thinks.

Bharti laughs silently… After college is over they all return to the hostel by the college bus (the hostel is a few kilo meters away). Bhaskar goes on his expensive mo bike…

Bharti is sitting on the bench… armaan sees her and goes close "Hi…" he says and she smiles.

"oh hi… so college kaisa raha?" she asks and he smiles "theekh hi tha… aur tumhaara?" he asks and she smiles "cool, mast tha"

"waise tum party mein nahi jaa rahai?" he asks and she smiles "pagal hai kya?? Main aur party? Mere paas yeh faltoo ka time nahi, kitna kuch sikhna hai" she says then gets worried, he looks at her surprised "sikhnaa??" he asks surprised.

"uh… haan, aur nahi to kya… anyways main tujhe baad mein milti hoon… bye" she runs aways from ther and armaan sits and thinks "yeh bharti ko kya hua?? Kuch na kuch to chupa rahi hai yeh ladki" he thinks and also leaves.

Bharti is sitting on her bed "shit…aaj to pakri hi jaati… tu bhi na, bas bak bak karti rehti hai… lekin armaan mujhe aise kyun dekh raha the? Kahin usse shak to na…" before she can complete her sentence "pargaya hai" KK comes and says, she looks annoyed and holds her head "phirse aagaya tu? I mean aap" she says annoyed.

"good… good improvement" he says sarcastically, she rolls her eyes… "bharti, bharti, bharti… kitni baar samjaaoon ke mujhse kuch chupa nahi hai, tumhaare har kadam ka pata hai humein" he smirks and she looks annoyed.

"ab kya kiya maine?" she asks

He smiles "Bharti, maine kaha tha tumhaari shakti ka abhiyaas kissi ko nahi hona chahiye"

"ab wo kya hota hai??" she asks annoyed.

"tumhaari shakti ka kissi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye… lekin tumne apni shakti ka istemaal doosre logon ke saamne kiya… aur…" he says and she looks at him.

"aur kya??"

"Armaan ko… tumpe shak hogaya hai" he says and she looks shocked…

"oh teri… sacchi??? Ab main…"

"Don't panic… bas itna dihaan rakhna kissi aur ko shak na pare… aur tumhe guide karne to main aata rahoonga… lekin please be careful bharti, yeh shakti mujhe tumse chinni nahi hai" he says and she rolls her eyes.

"tujhse zyaada aur kaun khush hoga agar meri shakti chalijaye" she says and he smiles and vanishes.

"phirse gayab… Oye lesson kaun tera baap dega???" she shouts annoyed and hears his laughing voice, she hits the pillow on the roof and sits on her bed angrily.

**************

Bharti is sitting in the college backyard, Armaan goes and sits next to her, she offers him chewing gum, he refuses.

"bharti I know theres something you are hiding from all of us… please mujhe batao na" he says and she looks at him surprised.

"nahi… wo… uh" she tries to explain.

"come on bharti I'm your friend na?? jabse hum California aaye hain I've been seeing you do weird things par parayi mein kabi waqt hi nahi mila kuch poochne ka… but I'm sure theres something you're hiding!

"ab tujhse kya chupana… chal bata hi deti hoon… jab humein wo sponsorship mili thi na… uss raat main jab ghar lauti…"

**Flashback**

Bharti is excited, she cant express how much she wanted this… she goes home to find her drunk father swearing at her but today she was too happy to bother, she goes to her room dreamily and shuts the door… her father looks behind her angrily "aaj jagra nahi kiya? Ab mujhe paise kaun dega?" he thinks.

"kal mera birthday, my sweet sixteen and aaj itna bara gift?? Aww thank you god! Tere bhi khel nirale hain kabhi dhukh deta hai to itna ke insaan toot hi jaaye aur jab khushiyan deta hai to terajawab hi nahi! You rock dude… acha ab teri taareef bohot karli mujhe kal kaam pe bhi jaana hai… good night" she says to god and sleeps with a smile.

After a few hours at 00:00am [its her sixteenth birthday] she hears a noise and gets up… she looks around to see a bald guy standing in front of her dressed in a batman kind of outfit or more like a black cloak pulled over, he looked weird.. she gets scared and starts to scream but realizes she wasn't in her room anymore… she gets worried and looks around she was outside a huge building… it was too big to even estimate… but it was weird it had funny kind of trees around the building and it had a eerie kind of feeling to be there…

"kaun ho tum??? Kya chahiye???" she asks worried "main kahan hoon??? Hum yahan kaise aaye??"

"shhh… sab sawaalon ka jawab milega…main hoon KK"

"KK??? KK kaun??"

"KK as in Kishen Kanhaiya" he smirks and she looks at him bewildered "ab meri baat sahi se suno… Tum ek witch ho" he says and she just looks at him shocked.

"Yeh sab kya bakwaas hai??? Mera bakra banarahe ho na?? Ranbir! Payal… Kahan ho sab?" she shouts.

"yeh koi mazaak nahi… tumhaari zindagi ki sachayi hai… Tumhaari maa ek witch thi aur iss school mein apna jaado sikhti thi… ab tum sola saal ki hogayi ho and you have been gifted this power as well" he completes and she just stands there shell shocked… she looks at him bewildered then starts laughing "yeh sab bakwas band karo… aur batao kaun ho tum warna tumhaari vaat lagaadoongi… samjha kya?

He laughs "bilkul apni maa jaisi nahi ho tum…" he smiles and she just is confused.

"Main sach keh raha hoon… tumne kabhi harry potter nahi pari kya?" he asks.

And she looks totally confused "wo kya hai??" she looks at him surprised.

"chalo choro… let me explain yeh hai tumhaara wand… aur tum isse jaadu kar paaogi"

she just look confused "Main bohot confused hoon yaar… kya hai yeh? Jaadu??"

He explains to her…he shows her how to so magic as well… and she's finally convinced.

"bharti hum tumhe sikhayenge jaadu kaise karte hain, roz raat ko main aaoonga tumhe sikhaane keliye"

"to main jaadoo kar paaoongi?" she asks all smiles.

"haan lekin sirf iss school mein…"
"le… aur main itni khush ho rahi thi" she makes a face and smiles.

"char saal baad tumhe poori azaadi hogi bahar jaadoo karne ki lekin koi ko pata na chale…" he tells her.

**Flashback ends**

Basically harry potter rules. LOl guys I really like magic and HP and the wizards of waverly place "Alex" imagine her in place.

Armaan sits there open mouthed "oye mun band karma… baas aa rahi hai" she laughs and he looks at her in disbelief.

"sachme… tu jaadoo karsakhti hai?" he asks her

"to abhi kabse kya keh rahi thi??? Tu bhi na armaan" she says and he smiles.

"Oh god… kya baat hai" he gets up smiling.

"oye please koi ko bata nahi hun"

"what??" he looks confused.

"Please yaar koi ko mat batana warna meri shakti chali jaayegi yaar" she says and he looks surprised.

"You mean to say main wo pehla insaan hoon jisse tumne yeh bataya hai?" he asks surprised.

"aur nahi to kya" she says.

He holds her and turns her to look into his eyes "Kyun???" he looks at her intensely… she looks at him and feels a weird thing "uh… wo… main… uh" she looks confused when staring in his eyes.

He starts laughing and leaves her "chal ab so jayein, kal results bhi hai na… Fourth year jo chaaloo ho raha hai" he says casually and she looks around a weird feeling surrounding her… "haan chal" she says still feeling weird and they leave.

**************

Rano is sitting in her room, she's looking outside the window, staring at the moon… "aap to jaante ho na? main abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti…" she makes a sad face and nimmi comes in "kya ho raha hai?" she asks…

"nimmi tu to jaanti hai na… mujhe apne sapno ke rajkumar ka intezaar… main shaadi kaise karloon?" she says upset and nimmi smiles "haan haan, sapno ke rajkumar na sirf kisse kahaaniyon mein hote hain, asal zindagi mein nahi… aur tere sapno ka rajkumar…" she giggles "aisa to koi insaan iss duniya mein ho hi nahi sakhta" rano looks at her and smiles… "hai nimmi, kahin na kahin to hai… mujhe ehsaas hota hai uska" she gets all dreamy "wo hai… aur dekhna wo zaroor aayega" she says and smiles, nimmi smiles and nodds her head "hoga… tere yakeen par mujhe bhi bharosa aagaya hai… tere liye jo bana hoga wo shayad asmaan se utrega" nimmi laughs and ranbir is shown bungi jumping from a helicopter, fearless he moves in the air… he's all grown up now, rano sits and starts imagining him…

Next day… the palace is in full swing, everyone is doing something or the other, rano looks very tense, the maids dress her, she smiles at her image in the mirror while nimmi comments "Haaye meri rano kinni soni lag rahi hai aaj" she says and rano smiles, her mother enters.

"Meri rajkumari kitni pyaar lag rahi hai" she takes out her nazar "ladkiyan itni jaldi bari kyun ho jaati hain?" she has a tear in her eye and rano also has a tear they share a cute moment.

"meri pyaarisi chotisi rajkumari tayar hogayi?" shekhar says as he enters with sideshwari, they both compliment her and share a moment with there sweet little princess.

"Maharaj ne bulaaya hai" one of the guy informs them.

They all go to the hall… theres about fifteen rajkumar's and there families waiting, rano looks a little upset but continues to walk… she sits down then soon they start introducing the raj kumars to her but she's confused she cant decide…

"rajkumari yeh faisla aapko hi karma hai" maharaj informs her and she looks confused… she starts walking towards them and reads all there names.

"rajkumar yudishter"

"Rajkumar Rameshwar"

"rajkumar purushotam"

"Rajkumar Ranbir" she stops there and the RR music starts playing.

"Aashiq deewana pagal…" she feels some attachment to the name and decides to go with it without even looking at the prince she agrees to marry him, her parents are excited.

At Night…

Rano is sitting at her window "uss naam kop arte hi mujhe kyun wo ajeeb si feeling aane lagi?? Shayad wohi mere liye bana ho issliye??" she thinks and her dad enters, rano looks at him with a smile.

"Baba hum parayi karma chahte hain… shaadi se pehle hum apni parayi poori karma chahte hain" she tells her and her dad looks confused.

"lekin aap iss waqt parayi to kar rahi hai na?"

"haan baba lekin hum college jaa kar parayi karma chahte hain… humein bhi dekhna hai key eh duniya baharse kaisi hai… baba hum apni shaadi ke pehle kuch mahine apni zindagi alagse jeena chahte hain… shaadi ke baad to hum ek nayi haveli mein ked ho jaayenge… baba bas humaari zindagi ke kuch mahine hume dedijiye… Please baba" she says and her father looks at her angrily then smiles.

"humaari rano itni jaldi bari ho jayegi, humne to socha hi nahi tha… kal teri shaadi hojaayegi phir hum to tujhe bara miss karenge beta… tu jo maang rahi hai wo hum tujhe kaise de dein??? Yeh duniya bohot buri jaga hai beta… hum tujhe akele wahan kaise bhej dein?"

"baba hum akele thodi na honge… humaare saath aapki, rani maa ki duayen hongi aur phir baba hum bohot samay ke liye nahi jaayenge, bas do mahine… hum iss duniya ko kareeb se dekhna chahte hain… please baba" she says and he looks at her thoughtfully.

"lekin"

"please baba, sirf ek baar" she says pleading and he smiles, her mother, shekhar and siddeshwari enter, they all wait for the answer.

"theekhe par sirf ek mahina… ek mahina kaafi hai iss duniya ko samajhne keliye" he tells her and she smiles.

"Oh baba I love you" she hugs him and everyone smiles.

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Okay guys that's it for now next part will be up before weekend, I hope so I'm sorry for delaying this one soooo much it was because I lost my update, I had a longer one on Bharti-Armaan convo but to retype it was annoying because the same thing over again… I just was really lazy to retype it! But I just hope u like this one… if you do please hit the the LIKE buton and I'll continue it soon!

Luv you all,

Nadz😳


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Posted: 16 years ago
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~:~ Jab Dill Miley~:~
PROMO

Bhaskar's re-entry, payal-bhaskar have an argument… RR meet and ranbir finds rano really annoying because she doesn't behave normal, bharti has suddenly developed a little something for armaan which she cant understand his presence makes her feel a weird sensation… what is this???


Hope u like the promo, if you do, Hit the LIKE button😉


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yaayyyyy !!! Finally Nadia the 2nd part...but it waz worth w8ing ...saari shikayat door kar di... Wow wat an update .... Nadia it waz just awesum... 👏 👏
I really like the way u r weaving different stories 2 b later merged into one...
The 1st part waz a bit confusing wid so many characters... But after reading the 2nd part, the picture is getting clearer...
Oooohh...w8ing eagerly 4 RR to meet & also other characters 2 enter the story.... & i m already fallen in luv wid Bharti as a magician...
Update soon yaar ...its gonna b very difficult w8ing...
Well done..
⭐️ 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow yaar awesome update cool lolzz...very well written dear awesome story well done:)Dkeep it up the good job:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dear Nadz,
Just finished reading your FF.
I just loved it. The reasons are:
1. Bharti the witch- I am a Harry Potter fan and I will love to see Bharti doing magic. She is naughty so I think we will be able to see some "naughty magic tricks".😉
2. KK is Bharti's friend, I hope he was her friend in BB as well😆.
3. Rano entering the college- I hope there will be a fairy tale, as she is a Rajkumari.
4. Many of my favourite TV characters are there in the FF, hope to meet them soon.
5. I love Arbi and Bhaskar-Payal jodi
BTW I understood the reason for 4 yr leap but I wanted to what happened between ArBi and Bhaskar Payal in these 3 years?
Take Care
Kaninika
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Finally you updated!! YAY!! i love the harry potter touch....haha
please update soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved ur FF plz write more soon can't w8 for it... and if imnot mistaken this is not the 1st FF u wrote right?.... u've written some before?.....anyways loed this FF and im w8ing for the next part

and thnx for the PM if u didn't then i would of never figured it out LOL :P
and i love the idea of HP thats sooo cool :D
bye
take care :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome update!! no prob bout the hindi it was an aweosme update!! lol, yeah, let me guess, irresponsible with magic. luv wowp. did you see the movie?? anyway, amazing update!! it wasreally nice!! thanks for the pm!! keep up the great work radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wait. i have a ?? bharti and bhaskar were twins but bhaskar died. is the bhaskar now dif than bahrti' twin?

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