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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

wait. i have a ?? bharti and bhaskar were twins but bhaskar died. is the bhaskar now dif than bahrti' twin?



Well uske liye u have to wait and watch😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow gr8 update.. worth the wait.. luved the way u hve connected all the stories.. do continue soon...

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Hey swetha😃

First of all Thanx for reading and commenting🤗

Aww i'm just glad u liked it... aww thanks fo sayin that😳

Will be updating in a bit😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Nice parts dear

Just read them all
Sorry for commenting late
My computer got a virus so I was not in contact
Wo so Bharti is a witch
Super Cool
It would be fun reading it
Please Continue Soon
Thanks for the PM
Take Care
Zoya



Hey zoya😃

First of all Thanx for reading and commenting🤗
No way yaar nothing to be sorry bout😉
hmmm bharti a witch. LOl I'm just glad u liked it! will update sooon😉

Will be updating in a bit😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: BlessedCuteOne

Loved it hun do cont soon xxxxx



Hey shabz😃

First of all Thanx for reading and commenting🤗
Awww i'm glad u liked it😳

Will be updating in a bit😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Thanks to the following people who hit the LIKE button🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Please note: this is mainly a ArBi and RR lovestory... the rest of the characters are just fillers😊and BhaPa will also have a role in it but i guess the most will be ArBi coz there my favourite😳😳


RECAP: Payal falling for bhaskar slowly… bhasker woos her and they go on a date but he insults her there and she hates him… he leaves for America. Three years pass by, it's the end of third year and bharti is doing magic, when armaan notices it… she lies to him and argues with KK on the topic… he again vanishes and she gets annoyed… later armaan again asks her and she tells him that she is a witch and kk is her teacher. Armaan finds out that he is the first person she told and he asks her why, they have a eyelock and then he leaves.

Rano doesn't want to get married but then she has to choose a guy so she chooses the prince with the name ranbir unknowingly, she asks for permission and her dad allows.

Part 3

Next morning…

Bharti was in the bathroom… payal wakes up.

"Oh shit aaj bhi pehle ghus gayi??? Abhi bulaaoongi to ek ghante baad nikle gi [oh no bharti is in the bathroom? She'll take an hour now]" she thinks annoyed and starts knocking.

"Bharti jaldi kar [bharti hurry up]" she says and bharti smiles inside… she just waves her wand and her dress was changed… she felt fress like she had a bath… she smirks then she just puts her head down and comes up… her hair was combed teeth brushe… she smirks at her image and does the I'm the man action.

"You are too good… I am the woman" she smirks and gets out… payal is totally shocked… she looks at her from down to up.

"Bharti tu tayar hogayi?? [you are ready???]" she asks surprised, bharti smiles.

"haan [yaa]"

"itni jaldi? [so quickly?]" she looks shocked and bharti just smiles.

"Tu aam kha na, gutliyan kyun gin rahi hai?? jaa nahaale [you just eat the fruit don't count the seeds… go an bath now]" she says and payal goes still surprised.

"hey bharti… hey payal" armaan says and they both smile and reply.

"hi armaan"

"So nervous??" he asks and bharti looks a little nervous, she had been so pressurized these days, she couldn't concerntrate on studies, at night she would learn magic and morning she would go school it was hectic.

"ya kind of" bharti says and nikki comes, followed by gyaan.

"Hey guys… hey armaan"

"hi nikki…."

"waise armaan aaj bohot handsome lag rahe ho [armaan u looking quite handsom]" she flirts and he blushes, bharti just looks at her angrily.

"kya hai?? hun? Ab armaan se bhi shuru hogayi? [what? Why are u starting with armaan now?]" she asks angrily while all of them look at her surprised.

"I… I mean ranbir ko bura lage ga na [I mean ranbir will feel bad]" she lies and looks away while armaan smiles.

"guys main soch raha tha aaj humaare results ka…" dunno hindi so skipping this, gyaan says in shudh hindi and they all say "shut up"

The bell rings and they all rush to the assembly hall… ranbir also joins them.

"sorry guys… main late hogaya… waise bharti tum holidays me kya karogi??[sorry guys, I'm late… btw bharti what are u gonna do during the holz?]" he asks and bharti just smiles.

"jo har saal karti hoon… apna holiday job [he usual… holiday job]" she laughs and he hits her head.

"Humne trip plan ki hai. yaad hai ke bhool gayi… euro trip??? Yaad aaya?[you forgot?? We planned a euro trip?]" he says and she looks at him.

"ranbir tujhe pata hai na, main nahi aa sakhti [u know I cant come]"

"kaise nahi aayegi? Tera baap bhi aayega [what do you mean?? Even ur dad will come]" he says and they all laugh.

"haan bharti mazaa aayegi… chalo na [ya bharti it'll be great come na]" armaan says and she looks up at him.

"okay magar ek shart pe… main khud ke expenses khud uthaaoongi okay [okay but I'll pay my own expenses]" she says and they all smile.

"okay miss khudhaar [Okay miss independent]" ranbir says and they laugh when the principle shhhoosh's them. LOL

"SILENCE please" he says and continues a loooong lecture.

"I would also like to inform you that a teacher from India has come to join us… Mr. Amarjeet singh" he announces and the gang looks surprised and happy.

Amarjeet comes in his evergreen form and smiles at everyone (u kno the cute smile) "Hello ji… I am Amarjeet, you can call me Amarjeet sir… I will teach you hindi-english, because that is my OBSESSION" the music with WOD displayed. LOL

They all start laughing at his pronunciation then stop…

After the lectures everyone rushes to the notice board to see there grades.

"Congrats bharti… tum pass hogayi and second class grades [congo you passed with second class grades]" armaan says and bharti looks over excited she hugs him… actually she expected to fail that's why she couldn't believ the pass grade. LOl

"YAYYYY" she was still hugging him really tight, he feels weird and she realizes feeling that awkward sensation again, she realeses him and then ignores his gaze while he smiles, the rest congratulate her.

she looks at the board and sees armaan came first…

"Oye tu to first aaya… ab to treat banti hi hai, what say guys? [OMG you came first now you have to give us a treat]" bharti says and armaan smiles.

"Sure any time" he says.

***********

Rano and nimmi land in California… they have four body guards around them annoying rano to the core, they keep interfering with anything she wants to do.

"ek coffee bhi nahi pee sakhte hum[they don't even let us have coffee in peace]" she says annoyed and nimmi smiles.

"mere paas ek changa idea hai… inn ko bhagaane ka [I have an idea]" she says and they try to listen… she tells her in the ear and the both laugh.

Rano was dressed in a princess dress… so all the people around were staring at her.

"humein bohot pyaas lagi hai… aap humaare liye paani le aayenge? [im thirsty… plz get me water]" she asks one of the body guard, he leaves.

"ouch… aahhhh" nimmi starts holding her stomach, "mere pet mei bohot dard ho raha hai… aap please wahan se dawaai layenge [my stomach is really sore plz get me some medication]" she tells the other, he looks at her annoyed and leaves.

"humein bathroom jaana hai [I want to use the bathroom]" rano says and they walk to it… the other two follow them and when the two return with water and medicine they don't know where to go.

"yeh ladies bathroom hai, aap nahi aa sakhte [this is the ladies rest room u cant come]" nimmi tells them and they go in… then they run out of the exit that was next to the toilets.

Both are laughing "kaise bhudhu banaya humne unhe [we fulled them so nicely]" rano laughs…

They both jump on a tram and leave, without thinking of the consequences… the body guards are looking all over to find the girls.

"hey rano dekh ice cream parlour… chal chalte hain [hey look ice cream parlour, lets go]" nimmi suggests and they get off the tram, the guy asks for money and they look worried.

"ab? [now?]" rano looks at nimmi and she remembers her dad gave her money, she pays him a bit too much and leaves without change, the guy is super excited.

"What a generous woman" he thinks.

They enter the ice cream parlour…

Payal, bharti, ranbir, Vicky, gyaan, armaan and nikki are sitting there.

"waise armaan tu itna kaise par leta hai? [armaan… how do u study so much?]" bharti asks.

"parayi pe dhyaan do to sab ho jaata hai [u just have to concerntrate]"

"Haan haan tu to hai hi parakoo bachpan se [yaa yaa you've always been so clever since childhood]" ranbir says.

"Ranbir tu to kuch bol hi mat… fail hote hote bacha hai warna repeat karta [Ranbir you just leave it, you almost failed… then you would be repeating]" bharti says.

"Oho aajkal armaan ki bohot favour kar rahi ho??? Ki gal hai [whats up? You are favouring armaan too much these days]" he winks and bharti kind of blushes then hits ranbir.

"Bakwas band kar [shutup… nothing like that]" armaan looks at bharti sweetly and she blushes again.

"main dekh ke aata hoon ice cream laa rahe hain ke bhens ka dood nikaal ke banayenge [let me go check if there bringing our ice cream or milking the cow]" he says and they all laugh.

Rano and nimmi get there ice cream and the guy gives the change, nimmi takes it… they both are enjoying it and heading to the tables, while ranbir is heading to the counter…

Rano wasn't looking and clsshes with ranbir… he holds her and they have an eyelock then he realizes that ice cream was all over him… he gets really angry and rano gets worried.

"Humein maaf kijiye… im sorry" she hesitates and he starts blasting her.

"Dekh ke nahi chal sakhti??? Fashion show chal raha hai yahan??? God look what you've done… this is not a fancy dress competition… if you cant wear these clothes why do you bother?? Silly girl [cant you watch and walk? This is not a fashion show okay… God look what you've done… this is not a fancy dress competition… if you cant wear these clothes why do you bother?? Silly girl]" he gets upset and leaves, everyone looks at rano she had tears in her eyes, she runs out and cries while nimmi consoles her and they decide to buy some clothes.

*********

Okay guys that's it for today… will update soon! Hope u liked it! If you did do leave a comment and hit the LIKE button

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Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Nadz thanks for the message,,,Waise I reallie liked da ArBi scenes...pls post soon..Waiting for the next part!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
Lovely Nadz😃

Are Ragini aur Aamir ko bulao, we want to see them performing this you know.😛

I liked every bit of it. Arbi was too cute. I am just imagining the expressions of Bharti and Armaan.😍

I felt sorry for Rano, its OK, pehle thora nokjhok to hoga i na😉

waiting to see some magic.

I am glad to see Amarjeet, he is too cute you know?😆

can't wait for the next part. continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
Lovely update Nadz..👏
Amarjeet here too ...wow ...mazaa aayega....😆

Luved the Arbi moments ...
luking 4ward to read more on RR..
😳

Update soon ..😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
hey
It looks really intresting!!
i'll read and than i am going to comment!!
Thanks for the PM...

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