MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88) - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing update huni! loved it! i can imagine mayank! lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey! i just read the parts it was awesome .... 👏.. fabulas ..👍🏼. love it ..

update next part soooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanky



Even I do the same thing! 😉 But main aur SONI?LOL! 🤣I'm the ugliest gal ever! 😉

who said yaar you r such a sweet heart..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh gr8 updates yaar....... totally luved it...... plzzz continue soon..... n if u have time plzzz pm me.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
oye yaaar juldee update karoo na!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey wow loved ur ff kanky...really awesome....n just cant wait for next ff...plz pm me when u update it...it was really gud n gud job keep up the hard work..
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww......jst love u ffor that
it was so chweeet ....jst loved it !!
tioo good
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey...it was toooooo good yaar!!...i had earlier read the 1st part when u wrote it....but didn't come to know when the rest were updated!! but read them just now....ur doing a very good job....update soon and plz pm me if possible so that i can keep track of it.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part - 7

It was raining outside . . . Nupur was over whelmed . . . 😛 She went out and started dancing!!

Mayank shouted, "Nupur, kya karri ho?"

N - Dance aur kya, tum bhi aaona!!

M - Haan haan kyun nahi??

N - Tumhe kya problem hai??

M - Mujhe ho na ho, tumhe zaruru hogi . . . ye lehnga . . . tumhari mehndi . . .aur agar tabiyat khara ho gayi toh?? 😡👏

N - Kitna olte ho tum . . .

She danced all by herself . . . Mayank couldn't control himself . . . he went out and started dancing with her! She was blushing like anything! 😳 He couldn't control himself and he thought that he has to confess now . . . he turned her around and kept wrapped his arms aroung her waist and slowly whispered in her ears, "I wanna say something to u" and then he started kissing her neck! 😳 (that to on the road 🤣) Nupur was like what is this guy doing but couldn't help but blush! 😳

M - I love u. 😊

M - NUPUR, kahan kho gayi?? SRK k sapno mein? 👏

N - Nahi woh . . .

N to herself - Wat was that? By God, ye mujhe kya ho raha hai ! 😲 I was dreaming out this fellow! 🥱😳

She asked Mayank to go and sit inside the car while she'll be back in 2 mins . . .

M - Par tum jaa kahan kahi ho??

N - Kahin nahi, tum bass baitho!

Mayank wne t inside the car, he didn't get wet thankfully, he hated it . . . and then he saw Nupur dancing outside . . . enjoying the rain like a 5 yr old baby! He thought twas her grace! He loved her more than anything or anyody else! 😳

M to himself - How can I love a gal to death who like so different from me? 😲😳 But I can't help it . . . 👏

Samrat called Mayank up . . .

M - Hello?

S - Aur bhai . . .kya chal raha hai?

M - Kuch nahi!

S - Kcuh nahi? Ab bata hi de! 👏

M - Arey yarr, maine kiya uske sath time spend!

S - Hain? Ye tu uske samne keh raha hai?👏 Setting ho gayi kya?

M - No! :P Wo bahar arish mein bheeg rahi hai!

S - Waah mere silent admirer! 👏👏

M - Tu na. . .

S - Accha theek hai maine toh isliye phone kiya tha ki puchlun ki tum ho kahan . . . 3 baje gaye hain 2 ghante mein puja hai! 👏👏

M - Oh haan, we'll be back in 10 mins!!

S - Okay, bye!

M - Bye!

Mayank shouted, " NUPUR, tumhara ho gaya toh chelin? 3 baj gaye hain" 👏

N - Teen?? Chalo chalo!!

Nupur got drenched in water 4rm head to toe . . . Mayank gave her a shawl that was kept in the car . . .

N - Thanks, par ye shawl kahan se aayi?

M - Pata nahi, shayad Samrat ki mumma ki hai! Anyway, tumhe dhand na lag jaye isliye tum lelo!

Nupur smiled!! 😊

Mayank parked his car outside a chemist shop . . . he bought some medicines and gave em to Nupur . . . so that she doesn't catch hold of cough and cold!! 😳

N to herself - Goodness, ye kitna accha hai by God! He's such a sweet heart! 😊 I didn't know a guy like him would have a heart of gold. 😳😳

They went back home . . .

M - Tum jaldi se change karlo aur main ye lehnga Gunjan ko de deta hu!

Nupur smiled!

Mayank was left confused! 😲😃

Mayank gave the lehnga to Gunjan! Gunjan asked him to wait 4 a minute . . .

G - Mayank?

M - Haan bolo? Kuch kaam tha?

G - Nahi wo bass . . . ek baat batao? Do u love Nupur??

M - Wat?? Who told u??

G - I somehow chanced to notice it, batao . . . do u love her??

M - Ya . . . 😳

G - My sister is very very lucky! 👏 😊😊

And she went to her room to change!!

It was 5 o clock in the evening now . . . the bride came down along withe her sister . . . Gunjan was wearing a white lehnga and Nupur was wearing a blue suit . . .

M - Man . . . this gal is so beautiful . . . 😳

And then he got lost in Nupur's beauty! 😳

To Be Continued . . .

Sorry for the short update! 😳😭



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Posted: 16 years ago
woow yaar......awesome update..........i loved sayank convo......it was sooo cool.........mayur are too cute...........plzzzzzz update soon.pm me😉

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