MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88) - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy kanky love ur ff.. it's very fresh and different. adding punjabi to it it's really good.. im gujju and i dont' understand most of wat u said but i can imagine someone saying it and me reading the subtitles.. hehe cont sooon. xSonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
luvd it yaar!!!!!!! but again dis tym nups dreamt!!!! 😳 lst tym mayu dreamt!!!! plzzzzzzz let dem knw their real feelings abt each other...... 😊 m luving dis ff of urs....god bless ya dear... 👍🏼
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow it was really sweet FF really cute...loved it...keep up the gud work...cant wait for the next FF...
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Posted: 16 years ago
o now i cant wait for ur next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice yaar!!......loved it.....plzz update soon.....can't wait to read more......n thanx a lot fo the pm!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh it was such a sweet romantic update!!
wow...hehe...yeh mayur baarish wale scene ne sabko romantic kar diya hai!
gunjan knows about his love too!! LOL....maybe she can help him...hmmm...
great update!! continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow wow
very nice loved it!!
loved mayur!!!
cont soon!!
cant wait!!
see yaa
love uuu
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part - 8

The Pandit arrived and the Pooja started . . . he started off with some prayers giving blessing to the wud b husband-wife Samrat and Gunjan . . . then they they started off with the Arti session! On by one all the couples came and performed it . . . Nupr asked his Dadi -


N - Dadi, meri t behn da vyad hai, main arti kyun nahi kar sakti? 😭

D - Main vi te nahi kardi payi, aie jodiyan de liye henga . . . tussi kudiya ai nahi kar sakde! 👏

N - 😭😭😭

Gunjan came up to her . . .

G -- Jaa karle arti . . .

N - Par Dadi . . .

Gunjan interrupted . . .

G - Pata hai . . . jaa . . . Mayank ka bhi mann hai karne ka . . . tu uske saath mein karle! 👏

N - Par di . . . this is only 4 couples!! 😳

G - Toh?

N - Hain? Tu bolna kya chahti hai Di . . .??? (she shouted) 😲😳

G - Mujhe sab pata hai!

N - Kya?

G - Yehi k tujhe woh May . . .

Nupur kept her hand on Gunjan's mouth!

Nupur whispered, " ye tum kya bol rahi ho? Aisa kuch nahi hai yarr."

G - I'm your elder sister . . . I can read ur mind!

N - Really? I dun think so . . . I'm really confused u c . . . 😲

G - Koi baat nahi . . . filhal tu pooja karr . . . maine Dadi se puch liya hai! 😃

Nupur and Mayank then did the Arti together . . . 😳 both looking at each other and their relatives & friends staring both the two. 👏👏

B - Ye Mayank pagal toh nahi ho gaya?

D - Kya pata? Dude, I've never seen him like this. 🥱

Samrat entered . . .

S - Isiko toh kehte hain Ishq! 👏

B & D - 😲??????

S - Aise shakalein matt banoa bhakt janoon, kyun? Mayank ko pyar nahi ho sakta? 😕😉👏

D - Ho toh sakta hai but this gal . . . she's so contrsting to his nature . . . matla ye kitabi keeda aur woh Drama Queen! How's this possible? 🥱

B - Wohi toh, ek gulab jamun toh ek karela! 🤣

S - Tum apne sade sade one liners apne paas rakho . . . main chala apna dost ka haal - e - dil puchne! 👏

B - Hain? 🥱

D - Shut up . . . let's go fing Anne! Yahan toh hume Mayank aur Samrat mil ke pagal kardenge! 😕

Mayank and Nupur did the Arti and stood at aside . . . Mayank was continuosly looking at her . . . though, she she didn't even dare to look at him. 😳

M - Nupur?

N - Haan? (still looking down)

M - Tum bahut acchi lag rahi ho! 😊

N - Tha . . . thanks!! 😳

M - Accha suno?

N - Hmmm?

M - Mere mom dad aaj shaam ko aane wale hain! Main tumhe aur Gunjna ko unse milwana chahta hun! 😛

Nupur finally gained confidence and thought, "ab aur nahi shamane wali mein, thoda maza kar lete hain" . . . 😆😆

N - Kyun? Di ka toh samjh bhi aata hai . . . woh tumhare best friend ki fiance jo hain but main? Kyun??

Mayank had no answer but heknew she was teasing her and inknowingly she was giving him signals that yes, even her feelings are mutual . . .😳

He finally thought of something . . .

M - Actually, mujhe tum bahut acchi lagti hun and I think we can be great friends! The way me and Samrat are and I love ur hospitality and the way you made me feel so special here!

N to herself - Friends? 😲 But he likes me . . . 😳

M - Kuch kaha tumne?

N - Nahi! 👏

M - So, friends? 😛

N - 😊😊😊

They both shaked hands . . . meanwhile Samrat and Gunjan were watching em . . .

S - Chalo, friendship to ho gayi . . .

G - Aage bhi jo hoga . . . woh hum hi karenge . . . right?

S - Bilkul! 😉😆 (teasing her)

G - 😳😳

G and S - Mission Milap acoomplished . . .

A gal coming towards em . . . said, "Mission Love Express shuru kiya jaye" . . . 😲😛

Samrat turned around . . . saw her and shouted . . . "TAMANNA" . . .

He was so loud that . . . that even Mayank who was standing away could here him . . . as soon as he saw Tamanna . . . he ran towards . . . and went close to her and hugged her tightly . . . "HEY SIS" . . .

Nupur and Gunjan didn't know who that girl was! 😲🥱

To Be Continued . . . 😛

Hey guys, I've added a new charcter Tamanna . . . who's Mayank's younger sister and now she'll also help SaJan in unting em! How's this twist guys?? I'll post her character sketch tomorrow! 😳😛





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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome ji !!!!!!!!
too good...now twist in tale ...wah wh wah wah
love u ..its awesome
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

awesome ji !!!!!!!!

too good...now twist in tale ...wah wh wah wah
love u ..its awesome




Thanks! 😳 When r u updating "My Journey"?? 😉

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