A New Day Has Come ... Part 12 ... Page 92 !!!! - Page 15

Originally posted by: KHJL

awwww hun...u've added benji also...yipeeeee!😛

i had to .. otherwise soem of the readers would have killed me 😆

yup this is only someting tht nupur can do in her bindaas character😉😆...u have totally captured the essense n cute friendship/relationship b/w samrat n benji as well as nupur n benji...great job hun👏👏

thanks lisa ... i try to keep them as close to there characters as possible

ahhhhhhhhhh! CJ is here too😳...OMG😲...pure ki pure MJHT team this event par presence hai😉...good going dear👍🏼👏👏....seriously was missing some of the character of MJHT...been so long since we saw them...hopefully they will come back now tht MJHT is going back to it's old mastiful track😛

i knw have been msising them in thw show . so thought of including them all in the FF ... even though none of them play a pivotal role its oce to have them around 😳

awwwwwww just loved this part...very sweet scene👏...would love to see something like this in the real show...after samrat has realized his feelings for gunjaan...where just seeing her happy he also gets happy😳

i knw .... v have been dying to watch such type of a scene since god knows when ....😳😳😳 .. offcourse there was this type of a scene during diwali but jsu wanted more depth to the scene

i was waiting for so long

for a miracle to come

everyone told me to be strong

hold on and dont shed a tear

through the darkness and the good times

i knew i had make it through

and the world thought i had it all

but i was waiting for u

A New day has come ............ awww...these awesome lines😳....seriosly dear...i just love how u incorporated these lyrical phrases w/in ur ff...too good👏...excellent job👏⭐️

thanks lisa ..... i think thats the crux of this FF ..... synchronising these lyrics to the sitatuion .. am glad u liekd it ... this was my fav part on this CC 😳

can totally imagine nupur walking on a delhi road and complaining about the excruciating heat n talking/yelling at her silly clients n also to herself for ever agreeing to come to delhi on the first place😆...another cute scene😛....n totally believable😉😆

i knw ...... its sooo nupur na 😆

hehe😳....he has no idea😉

he seriously doesnt .... watch out what she makes him do in the future parts 😆

awwww darn n i was getting all excited to the inaguration of the pepper spray😆...n also to see what mayank's reaction would b to see Nupur holding a pepper spray in the middle of the road...koi baath nahi..next time😉...lol j/k😆😆

LMAO u really wanted nupur to use the pepper spray on mayn ... yar mujhe joote padhte 😆

but seriously kanika...that was a very cute scene from nupur's part...totally loved the pepper spray touch to it👏

awwwwww thanks so much lisa ... it was totally on the spur of the moment ..... something that mayb nupur would do

awwww such a gentleman...😊...though he doesn't know it...he really is concerned😳

exactly 😉 .... well the path to true love isnt easy .... esp for those who tend to brush aside there feelings .......

yum....just the mention of parathas get me so hungry...luv them😳

lol same here ..i was craving for sum parathas after writing dis part 😆

yes indeed.....awwww there first lunch date...n they don't even know it😳😉...wuuuuuuu tht rhymed😛..lol😆

well kanika dear
as always loved this part...👏👏
all the scenes were just too cute n so believable...😊
u have completely kept the essence of each of the characters...👏👍🏼

though this ff is set on a different time frame n diff environment...
i could totally feel the MJHT touch to it...😳😊
awesome awesome...A-W-E-S-OM-E job!

lisa thank u so much for appreciating my FF so much 🤗 .

u r right this FF is set in a different time frame but i am trying to keep the original characters intact


n i seriously love how u always keep a balance b/w mayur n sajan in ur ff....
*big hug* to u for that

lisa u have no idea how tough it is to balance both 😳

its my conscious effort to maintain this balance but in sum later paths dis balance will get a bt skewed😳

...superbly done...👍🏼
n very enjoyable...😳😛



can't wait to read the next part...
update soon!😳
n keep up the fab job👏👏

with love🤗,
LiSa

awwwwww ur comments always encourage me to update as soon as possible

thanks a ton 🤗

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

Originally posted by: kavya.b

Originally posted by: kavya.b

then who forced u 2 have benzy in the FF

anyway, i love this guy as much as i do samrat,

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

LMAO kavs u still thinking abt that ... i dont remember ya .. i thin i read a few comments where people asked me if benjy wud b in this FF ... c the thing is apart fro Sg and Mn i dont think any other character will have a pivotal role ... jus a few scenes per se ..... as it is i dont see myself writing a very lengthy FF ... maax 20 parts 😊

wow luv ur fan fiction soomuch

awsoem brilliant

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Originally posted by: kavya.b

that's no problem kanz, he is there or not, only that matters

Originally posted by: cool82d

wow luv ur fan fiction soomuch

awsoem brilliant

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