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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Mana26

omg LOL sorry for thee latee commentss guyss!

that wass just :🤣🤣🤣
trust mee when i sayy that it kept mee well absorbed, im soo glad you girlss finally postedd! i lovedd thee Vrinda andd freida moment, it was likee a cutee sisterly moment andd i lovee Freida's thoughtss about lovee & i especially adoredd Vrinda's viewss towardss lovee becausee imm excitedd too read aboutt her sloww or fast changess in attitudess towardss it~!
best of all wass Yug's entry andd hiss room soundss very cutee, i lovedd how hee was reflecting on hiss childhood memoriess, my imaginationn wass playing up! well thankss nikki andd Sana, you never fail too impress, im noww eagerly waitingg thee results of thee clothess mixup😆 it wass a great laugh, doo updatee soon
best wishess x. priy
p.s just readd Neetu's comment, CONGRATULATIONS to your sister nikki😃

first i see you changed your name lol so i will assume u r manuvy became mana =)) cute! aww thanks for liking the sense of humor lol....thank you so much hun for such lovely comments and u r not late as niki said.....hehehe i am also excited to see the changes in vrinda on the topic of love❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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5th Script: Enjoy guys!!!!
thanks for all your support ❤️ u all!
Food, Dining Room and ummm clothes😆😆

Edited by skstar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Hey guys
Thanks for the comments, enjoy this part! 😃
Script 5: Confusion and dinner

When there is a knock on Yug's door: What! In an annoyed tone,

Vrinda comes in to see Frieda and Neel laughing and her suitcase is open.

Vrinda: At least my suitcase is safe. I got really worried for a second. Here is your suitcase Yug.

Vrinda blushes when she realises her underwear is showing and she runs over quickly to close her bag.

Yug: Thanks, but you should have told Wilfred he would have brought my suitcase over.

Vrinda: I couldn't find him so I thought I will bring it over and take mine back.

Vrinda quickly grabs on to her suitcase to take it back to her room.

Frieda notices Vrinda taking her suitcase back and she stops Vrinda.

Frieda: Vrinda you don't have to take your own suitcase back since your brought Bhaiya's suitcase, he should bring yours plus Neel bhai you always told me it's not good for girls to carry heavy stuff.

Neel caught in surprise: I did? Oh yeah, that was when you were 9 Frieda

Yug: and Vrinda is not 9

Vrinda: Its okay no worries, I will take mine plus I can carry heavy stuff unlike some people, she raises her eyebrows at Yug

Yug: Some people? Who are you referring to? I can carry heavier things then you can and Yug forcefully takes her suitcase from her hand but Vrinda takes it back. For 1 minute they go back and forth when the suitcase flips open and all the clothes are everywhere.

Yug and Vrinda both stare at each other with no expression. Vrinda quickly starts putting her stuff back while Yug tries to help her. Frieda and Neel while holding their laugh help Vrinda as well

Yug: I am so sorry Vrinda, I didn't mean for all this to happen.

Vrinda ignores Yug

Frieda: Vrinda, let Yug Bhaiya take your suitcase.

Vrinda too embarrassed to say anything leaves the room. Yug grabs her suitcase giving Frieda and Neel evil look and leaves, following Vrinda.

Frieda and Neel go downstairs to eat dinner while laughing non stop

Vrinda and Yug walk to the room but Vrinda stays quiet while Yug doesn't say anything either.

To break the silence Yug apologize to Vrinda twice more but she doesn't respond back so he apologizes once more

Vrinda: Okay apology accepted and thanks for bringing this, I am sure this must be very heavy for you to carry right? Vrinda being sarcastic

Yug: It's nothing. I can lift many heavier things than this. I was a champion in weight lifting and I also came 1st place. Actually I have a room filled with all my gold medals. Maybe one day I can take you there.

Vrinda thinks to herself this guy never looses a chance of praising himself and wonders how much is even true. They reach to Vrinda's room and Vrinda opens her room door but before Yug can even enter she stops him.

Vrinda: This will do! Its okay I can manage from here

Yug: Aren't you going to go down for dinner?

Vrinda: Yes!

Yug: So are you going to go by yourself?

Vrinda: Well, unless you want me to go with you?

Yug: If you want to, I thought maybe you might get lost.

Vrinda: hehehe if I was 9 I can see that but I must say very kind of you to consider walking me to the dinner table. Sometimes you can be a little sweet

Yug: Sometimes? A little?

Vrinda: From the time I met you till now, this is the first time you have sort of been nice to me or tried to at least

Yug: Girls! You can never please them

Vrinda: So you were trying to please me?

Yug: No! I was being my self.

Vrinda: Sure you were and Vrinda starts walking leaving Yug behind.

Yug catches up to Vrinda

Yug: You can be really cold at times.

Vrinda: Does it make a difference?

Yug: Stop being so complicated

Vrinda: I am not! This is me…learn to live with it

Yug: Starts laughing. Who said I am going to live with you?

Vrinda: You are forgetting for this summer you and I will be living together.

Yug: Oh yeah! I thought never mind.

Vrinda: Thought what?

Yug: I love food especially my moms and Yug walks to the table leaving Vrinda behind.

Yug and Vrinda enter the dinning room.

Rishabh: I see you are both are still not separable.

Yug and Vrinda laugh forcefully.

Vrinda and Yug take their seats, Vrinda sits next to Neel and Yug is sitting next to Frieda.

As dinner goes on, general conversation takes place from questions to Vrinda, Yug, Neel and Frieda about school, life in America/UK, just random general stuff.

Rishabh: Oh yeah, before I forget Suhana and I, have to go away for a week, we will be leaving today after dinner.

Yug: Where are you going babasa?

Rishabh: I have this business conference.

Vrinda: The one in Rome.

Rishabh: Yeah, how do you know about it?

Vrinda: Mum and Dad are going to it.

Rishabh: Oh that's nice, do you want to come with us and visit them?

Vrinda: No, sorry but those things are so boring, no offence, but they really are, I remember last time I went I was stuck with some business man's loser son, he annoyed me so much and he still annoys me.

Everyone laughs.

Yug whispers: Are you sure, it's not the other way round? Only Frieda hears him and hits him gently.

Suhana: I have to say they are really boring but at least your mother will be there so I won't be bored.

Vrinda just smiles back.

Vrinda is about to get up and take her dishes to the kitchen,

Suhana: Vrinda beta, what are you doing?

Vrinda: Taking my plate to the kitchen mamasa

Suhana: You don't have to do that here.

Vrinda: I am so use to doing that. I am sorry mamasa

Suhana: Oh hun don't be sorry, I know your mum taught you great manners. Yug, you should learn from Vrinda.

Yug: I can take care of my self. You know mamasa back in US, I do so much like cleaning, washing dishes and even mopping

Suhana: Yug, you will never change. Okay, its getting late and we have to go to the airport. See you all in a week. Love you all and please take care of each other. Suhana gets up and leaves the table with babasa.

Yug, Vrinda, Neel, and Frieda say goodbye at the same time. After saying their farewell they all go back to their conversation.

Vrinda: That's great Yug! I think you should take all of our dishes to the kitchen and wash it for us too. I would love to see you doing that.

Yug: I am too expensive! Can you afford me?

Frieda: Bhaiya I don't think she can afford you. Plus she only likes to spend money on books.

Vrinda: Yes! Books are worth funding in. Back home I get guys working free for me so its okay Yug thanks for the offer. Vrinda gets up and leave.

Neel and Frieda can't stop laughing.

Yug: Must be an English thing. Anyway I am out!

Yug leaves the room but he sees Vrinda so he follows her. Vrinda walks out of the mansion and decides to walk towards the shore. Yug curiously follows her.

Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Yug: I am too expensive! Can you afford me?


This was by far my favorite line. I can totally picture him saying that. Moreover, I think it was really cute the way Yug carried her suitcase back for her. I think it will take a while for these two to warm up to each other, though I hope it happens soon. But, I do have a question. How come Yug's parents r leaving so soon? I mean Yug just arrived today and they haven't seen him for a while, yet they r leaving the kids alone and going to a conference. Also, where r Neel&Freida's parents? Will you be introducing them as "evil" characters later on?

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
hahaha!! loved this part!
amazing!!!!!
continue soon! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
nice update.
made me laugh when yug is at the dining table and whispers
Are you sure, it's not the other way round?,
they really have got off to a bad start havent they !
but like neetu sed, its gonna take them a while to get use to, and appreciate each other.
looking forward to the next part. yuvi on the beach, cant wait !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
YUG for salee? wow imm first inn linee😆
that wass oncee again a very absorbingg scene! & wow i havee to compliment on thee dining room, very spectacular andd an awesomee choicee.. haha yes sana i changedd my namee to mana26 becausee LOL thatss myy nickname, andd i thinkk it soundss better onn thee forum😆 okay back to thee scene, thee explosion of thee suitcasee wass hilarious, poor vri hadd her underwear on display for everyonee! YUG is soo self reliant..
and it makes it all that moree sweet when his soft sidee evokess and his apology beginss! thankss for thee quick updatee guyss, i wass soo excitedd andd just hadd too read ! most of all i likee vrinda's confidencee andd shee seemss soo much sweeter in your sceness! once again intriguining stuff guyss, i really cant wait for thee next scene, maybe a yuvii moment on thee way? what moree can i say, other than i really loved reading itt, its soo much fun when i get to evoke my imaginationn becausee my holidayss aree soo boringg! once again it wass a great piece of work, pleasee updatee soon!
best wishess priyanka
x.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
i loved it guys specially the little tiffs they have i love this Yu reminds me of the old Yug sigh* i miss our old ug so much wish we could see him a gain
please do continue soon cant wait to see what happens in the garden 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ha ha ha... yug is sooo funii and he is soooo sweet... i wish sum1 would carry my suitcase lyk dat... ambe yug
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry I haven't commented properly for the last update; just been a little busy but I read both the parts today and they are so good!

I love it how Yug and Vrinda were tight buddies while they were small. i think it's a hint the parents know they might become love buddies now! I can't wait for them to fall in love with each other!

thanks so much for the lovely update! update soon! (and I love seeing the pictures each update!) I want to see what happens when Yug follows Vrinda and the parents are out of the house. I guess when the parents come back, yuvi's love story would have progressed a lot! so cute!

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