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SweRav

@SweRav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

ok wow totally in love with this part! yuvi love story seems so cute! I can see Yug has developed a bit of an interest in Vrinda and I can surely see them becoming friends really fast. wow and yug was so cute during vrinda's workout. he kept teasing her- and the HOT MUM! hahaha!

please update soon! I am so looking forward for the next chapter of yuvi's love story!

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Farzana Kabir (Urmee)

@urmee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

very nice ,sweet,romantic update.👏loved it.bcoz it was only yuvi part.missing yug's this funny style.love him sooooooooo much.

Edited by urmee - 16 years ago

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Great update, guys! I loved the whole beach scene, especially Yug's comments to Vrinda. He is so much more outgoing in your FF than he is in the actual show. Its nice to see that😊. My favorite part was the iguana scene & the part where Yug is chasing her around on the beach. I wasn't sure what he was going to do either, when he started to approach her. 🤔 Overall, it was a very romantic scene. I simply loved it!

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Binky
my Yuggie😆😆😆 it seems everyone is calling him that 😆 i love it i love this YuVi yaar they are not taking crap from anyone and uses their own head not like some people i know in the show god Vrinda in shorts its kind of hard to imagine her like that but i love it so guys please update soon i want to know what happens after they go hand in hand inside 😃😃

Thanks for the comment Binky! 😃

I am glad you like this YuVi I wanted to make them different from the show especially Vrinda, who needs to be independant, Vrinda in shorts she is a London city girl, not a village girl anymore hehe, well for this FF anyways.

Originally posted by: sadaf.12
*hai* niki... i didn't know u are sooo gud at writing romantic scenes... ( btw can i call u Niki?)
luved the iguana bit... and THERE ARE IGUANAS ON YUGORA ISLAND? i would not lyk to go dere... i cant handle it when i see a spider or a dog... letalone a lizard!!! =)

OMG wet yug... *sexiii*!!! <3

plz update soon guys... and Sana i love the scripts u make... they are soo pretty!!

Niki is fine 😉, the credit for the romantic scene goes to Sana as I have been really busy, I am finally free and have time to work on the FF now. Trust me you would still go to Yugoria Island if Yug is there to protect you 😆😆.

Wet Yug of course its sexy any Yug is sexy 😳😳

Originally posted by: Ani-
wowww i really love this one
some nice cute scenes between yug ad vrinda again
i love vrinda's acting
wished she did this acting onscreen😆
thanks alot u both!!
update soon😃

Thanks for the comment.

Glad you are liking this Vrinda, I am liking her as well 😆

Originally posted by: shab_rules

i absolutly loved this update.

i think it was the best one so far.

im glad the mum phoned, it seemed a bit too rushed the way they suddenly left, so now we have a proper explantion, plus this gives yug and excuse to "keep an eye on vrinda"

loved every bit of it. from the way he was checkin her out, and then freaked her by making her thing he was gonna do something wrong by stepping over the line, to the iguana and right at the end, the way they go back in holding hands.

i had to read ur FF over and over. it was really really fantastic.

i would quote, but there r just so many great lines in there, so i cant be bothered writing the better part of the update out.

anyway well done guys, great job.

you showed us the chemistry between them, without even making them fall in love yet ! hats off ! 👏👏👏

Thanks for the comment.

Glad you like it, 😆 seems like you are having the same feeling I have when I read your FF, it always makes me want to go over and read it again and again 😳

Originally posted by: zainab.A
hahaha!! i loved this part!!!
yug is sooo naughty! hahaa!!
vrinda is a strong girl!
i just love her character!!!
continue soon!
thanx for the PM!

Thanks, Vrinda seems to be getting a lot of apperciation, 😃 so glad everyone is liking her character! A naughty Yug, that's the best one around 😆😆 he is the one that will keep you guessing!!

Originally posted by: Mana26

okay finally had a chancee too peacefully readd😃

i never knew that a wet beach couldd bee a flirting heaven but you guyss provedd mee otherwisee, wow when they were running after eachother i wass anticipatingg a moment, but itss better that you guyss didntt add a lovey dovey moment just yet haha itsss much moree funn waitingg for itt😛 also , might i say what an exotic island! a iguana wow, i'vee seen a feww in my timee andd i wouldd havee to agree with vrindaa that they aree quitee weirdd creaturess andd i can understandd why she'd bee frightened, i meann thee way they bask in thee sun and their skin iss very wrinkly, they are thee truee kingss of lizardss! otherwisee guyss, what moree can i say it wass once again a great scene andd you madee mee finally believe that even thee beach can bee quitee a romantic placee..

hmmm.. my favouritee part in thee wholee scene wouldd have too be thee flirting on thee beach LOL, veryy cutee! well thankss once againn sana andd nikki, youu madee myy holidayss all that moree fun😃 doo updatee soon!

Priyanka, you so have to experience a wet beach it is the best thing possible 😃 It is me saying this who loves the beach and getting wet in the rain, my favourite to things in the world!! 😆😆 Plus to add a beach is very romantic, but not a crowded beach! 😆😆 A private on like Yugoria island😳

Lizard's scare the life out of me as well but I just ignore them the best I can!

Thanks for the comment!!

Originally posted by: SweRav
ok wow totally in love with this part! yuvi love story seems so cute! I can see Yug has developed a bit of an interest in Vrinda and I can surely see them becoming friends really fast. wow and yug was so cute during vrinda's workout. he kept teasing her- and the HOT MUM! hahaha!

please update soon! I am so looking forward for the next chapter of yuvi's love story!

Thanks for the comment, I loved Yug teasing her, Hot Mom - I would have had the same reaction as Vrinda 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: urmee
very nice ,sweet,romantic update.👏loved it.bcoz it was only yuvi part.missing yug's this funny style.love him sooooooooo much.

Thanks glad you liked it! 😃 I know we are all missing that Yug,

Originally posted by: Neetu2825
Great update, guys! I loved the whole beach scene, especially Yug's comments to Vrinda. He is so much more outgoing in your FF than he is in the actual show. Its nice to see that😊. My favorite part was the iguana scene & the part where Yug is chasing her around on the beach. I wasn't sure what he was going to do either, when he started to approach her. 🤔 Overall, it was a very romantic scene. I simply loved it!

Thanks for the comment. 😃

I am really happy that everyone has liked this YuVi who are more out going and independant!!

Keep commenting and the next part will be up soon! Plus a requst to all Silent readers to also comment!!

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skstar

@skstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Binky- thanks for the great comments n lol even i cant imagine her with shorts lol

Sadaf- Thanks hun and i am glad u r enjoying their story ;) and hope you keep reading it!

Ani- thanks for liking vrindas acting hehehe n yes even i wish she did that in real

Shab- thankssssss for liking it and i was so happy to read that u read it over n over again...hope the other updates u feel the same way! =0)

zainab- thanks hun for being part of this always appreciate your comments so sweet!!!! dont worry ill always keep u updated ;)

Priyanka- thanks hun for liking it lol n yes iguana are very freaky creatures i dont like them....ofcourse beach can be very romantic place lol u just need to explore fully in it hahaha =)

raveena- so happy to see you here...thanks hun for your lovely comments hope you maintain an interest in future too n our story keeps u entertain =)

farzana- thanks hun for your lovely comments, i was also happy to see you read n enjoy it, hope you like the future parts as well =)

Neetu- hehehe thanks a lot for liking it....i am glad u enjoyed it n lol yug in this is more outgoing i guess but so is vrinda so it works out well....hope to have u pulled in to this story =)

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skstar

@skstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

7th Script: We are back--- Enjoy guys!!!!

Thanks for all your support this far ❤️

Tv....phone.....talk......book with a date?😆

Edited by skstar - 16 years ago

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Hey guys

Yes we are back, thanks for the patience!

I would like to dedicate this part to Sana as she has been great this last month in sorting the updates out for this FF, as I have been busy so thanks Sana!! 👏👏

Enjoy this next part!

Script 7: TV talks

They arrived inside the mansion but Yug was still grabbing on to Vrinda's hand.

Vrinda: Yug!

Yug: Yeah?

Vrinda: You can let go off my hand, now! Vrinda glares at him

She tries to let go of his hand but Yug was holding it tightly which made it harder for her to let go

Yug pulls Vrinda closer to himself, and says are you sure Vrinda? What if something else comes and attacks you? You won't be scared again will you?

Vrinda: Yug, I can manage it from here. The only thing I need protection from at the moment is you. Vrinda successfully gets her hands out of Yug's hand.

Yug: Excuse me!

Vrinda: You heard it!

Yug: Ha-ha, very funny I am waiting for that moment when another thing attacks you and you come running in to my arms

Vrinda was about to come out with another snide remark but decided to leave, but by then she had realised some things about Yug and his character and felt it was better to ignore him at this present moment in time.

Just then Frieda walks up and is surprised to see Yug and Vrinda wet.

Frieda: Oh my god bhaiya, you guys went swimming and didn't ask me?

Yug: Well clever clogs, swimming is not done with clothes on and my clothes are wet. Did you not know it was raining outside?

Frieda: Really oh man, I missed getting wet in the rain, damn Neel Bhaiya; I was busy arguing with him. Aww, you think I am clever how sweet of you Bhaiya, I shall remember and treasure this moment, equalling Yug's sarcasm.

Yug: Speaking of' but before he could speak Vrinda cuts him off.

Vrinda: I am going to go to my room and change or I will catch a cold.

Yug: Actually same here I need to go and change as well. Frieda I will see you in few minutes and Vrinda if you want you can join us in the TV room?

Vrinda umm' I will think about it. I need to go and change and just need to sort some stuff out.

Yug: You sure you need to change or you have another layer of clothes hiding to come out.

Vrinda: Funny! With a fake laugh Vrinda walks off.

Yug smiling walks the same way Vrinda is walking. As they went up the stairs, Vrinda thinks to herself how annoying Yug is and at the same time Yug thinks how much fun it is to tease Vrinda. As they reach the hall way, Vrinda walks to the right side and Yug goes to the left side. Vrinda gets to her room and is changing when her phone starts to ring. She ignores it and goes back to changing. The phone kept ringing for straight five minutes. She comes running to it and then clicks ignore. A minute goes by and it starts ringing again. Vrinda picks up the phone with an annoyance

Vrinda: What is it? Can you stop calling me? What part of NO don't you get?

Voice over the phone: Calm down! Why are you yelling at me? You know why I am calling you. How many times do I have to repeat to you that you can't just ignore me like this? You have only seen my nice side but your attitude is asking for something else.

Vrinda: I told you to stop calling me and no one can tell me what I should do or shouldn't do especially you. Just LEAVE me alone and Vrinda ends the call. By now she was so frustrated that she throws her phone in the wardrobe and closes the wardrobe door. She takes a seat on the bed with a worried look on her face

Meanwhile downstairs Yug enters the TV room Neel and Frieda are fighting over the remote, Yug walks in and changes the channel.

Frieda: Oi! I was watching America's next top model, before Neel interrupted me and now you are as well.

Yug: Well you weren't watching it and neither is Neel, so shh! I am watching Scrubs.

Frieda: You have watched this episode a 1000 times, can't we watch something else?

Neel: Sorry brother but this time I have to agree with shorty here. I want to watch the cricket match. It's West Indies VS India.

Frieda throws a cushion at Neel: Stop calling me shorty, GEEK!

Yug: Wow, don't I miss this.

Frieda: You totally do.

Yug: Yeah, I do. So tell me what's going on with you?

Frieda: The usual. Which girl friend are you on?

Yug: Sadly I stopped counting but which one did I tell you about last time?

Frieda: The girl with the curly hair?

Yug: OH there were three of those, what was her hair colour?

Frieda: umm I think it was red

Yug is about to say something when Vrinda walks in

Vrinda walks in, looking worried, frustrated and scared. Yug notices the worried look on her face but ignores it for now

Frieda: What took you so long?

Vrinda still distracted manages to say: Oh yeah I was changing and then had to deal with a phone call. Vrinda comes and sits by Frieda

Frieda: Anyone special?

Vrinda: No! It's nothing just the usual. Ignoring her question looks away

Frieda: Must be that guy, Frieda whispers to her self

Yug and Neel: Guy?

Frieda: Vrinda's psycho boyfriend or umm stalker?

Neel: There you go Frieda a perfectly good excuse for you to stay away from boys.

Vrinda ignores what Neel is saying and still distracted just says: Can we change the subject please?

Yug: Look men are pigs and that's why we protect you for them.

Vrinda: Yep and I am assuming you are one of them

Yug: Depends on the day, and winks at her.

Frieda cutting in to their conversation, Bhaiya this is our favourite episode of scrubs, do you remember the girl in this sort of looks like the girl you were seeing....

Yug: Oh yeah! And he winks at Vrinda

Vrinda already annoyed with the phone call and Yug's behaviour gets up and sits in a corner by herself. She starts reading the book Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. Neel not interested in watching Scrubs takes the seat closer to Vrinda and starts looking through his book

Vrinda notices Neel looking through a book

Vrinda: Anatomy? Are you studying medicine?

Neel: Yeah, I am. I'm a first year med student.

Vrinda: That's great! I always wanted to be a doctor but lost that interest when I turned 13

Neel chuckles politely

Vrinda: So your parents must be really proud of you?

Neel smiled painfully: I guess

Vrinda: You guess?

Neel: Well, they passed away

Vrinda: Oh, I am sorry. I didn't know Sorry to hear that

Neel: It's okay. I guess one day we all have to die. I just wished I could have saved them.

Vrinda: If you don't mind me asking, what happened to your parents?

Neel: They died in an accident. Neel quickly changes the subject. Anyway, I guess you and I have one thing in common we both are not interested in Scrubs

Vrinda laughed: I guess

Neel smiles at her and goes back in to reading his book. Vrinda left with no choice also goes back to reading her book.

Frieda to Yug: Bhaiya look at them all in to their books, How boring. Let's go out and have some fun

Yug laughs: I guess Neel is not alone anymore. Yug walks up to them and notices the book Vrinda is reading

Yug: Nice choice, Vrinda

Vrinda: Huh? She looks up to him in a confused look. Neel and Frieda also look at him confused.

Yug: I mean the book you are reading, I enjoyed reading it.

Neel: You read? Seriously!

Yug: Occasionally, and this is a book I have happened to have read.

Neel laughs: Too much information, to process right now.

Yug: I do read books I mean my last girl friend worked in the library and you all know to ask her out I had to pretend to read books. This is one book I came across and the book which got me a date with her.

Frieda and Neel look at each other and can't stop laughing

Yug just laughs: It's not that shocking. Anything to be with a hot girl, trust me it was totally worth it.

Vrinda: This is disgusting. What girl is dumb enough to fall for something like this?

Yug: I don't understand what your problem is? I mean don't worry next time I will ask you out and he winks at her

Vrinda: You wish! I am not interested plus I like guys who are more studious

Yug: Like Neel? And he laughs

Vrinda: Yes like Neel.

Frieda: Bhaiya said he will never marry plus he hasn't even dated anyone yet

Neel: Frieda, she didn't mean me she meant someone like me. Can we stop discussing me?

Yug: Chill Neel. You get so serious, we are just joking around. No need to get so wrapped up.

Neel: I have to go study. See you guys later and Neel leaves

Vrinda: Oh is he mad at me? I was just saying that

Yug: No, its okay. He's just serious like that and doesn't get involved in such jokes.

Frieda: Yeah he is. Let's forget about Bhaiya. Vrinda are you busy tomorrow?

Vrinda: I don't think so

Frieda: Well Neel, Yug and I are going jet skiing, do you want to come?

Vrinda: Sure

Frieda: That's great! Okay I am going to go and finalized plans for tomorrow. Frieda walks away with Yug and Vrinda left alone in the TV room.

Vrinda: I guess since everyone left I'll leave too and she gets up to leave but Yug comes in front of her

Yug: What's wrong?

Vrinda shocked by Yug's question: Sorry?

Yug: You walked in here all distracted and worried and when we spoke about that guy you just closed up again.

Vrinda: It's nothing

Yug: Ok well don't forget this evening, if it wasn't for me that creature would have bit you. Who knows maybe by now you might have died with poison, so if you need anything you know who to call and he winks at her

Vrinda: Oh so sweet, thank you Yug for saving my precious life. Smiles sarcastically, now if you don't mind I would like to go to my room

Just then Yug gets a call

Yug friend: We've been waiting for you, when are you coming over?

Yug: Yes I am coming, give me some time, see you soon! Yug finishes his conversation.

Vrinda: So you are going outside?

Yug: Yeah kya karu! You are not giving me company so other girls will do and he winks at her again

Vrinda: Whatever I have better things to do then to hang out with you and your duplicates

Yug: Duplicates? Girls die to ask me out

Vrinda: I rather die than to be one of those girls

Yug comes closer to Vrinda and grabs her hand with annoyance

Yug: Look I don't get your problem, but you are always mean to me. What have I done to you? Just because some guy out there screwed you over now you're going to act like a spoiled brat with me. If you are going to live here then at least be nice.

In saying that Vrinda's eyes get teary and she looks up to Yug

Vrinda: I don't have a problem with you but I do have a problem with guys who waste their life on women or shall I say play around with women and their feelings. Mind your own business but no guy out there has screwed with my life because I am not dumb like your girlfriends. So let me be

Yug: Look I didn't mean to make you cry, I am sorry. It's just that usually girls are so nice to me but you are always so cynical towards me. I saw that when you walked in you had a worried expression so I thought some guy broke up with you and you are taking your anger out on me

Vrinda: Why is everything with you about relationships? I was worried but not over a guy so please Yug. Let go off my hand right now

Yug: So are we cool now?

Vrinda: NO, let go off my hand

Yug: I will when you change your behaviour towards me

Vrinda: I will think about it now can you let go off me

Yug let goes off Vrinda's hand and Vrinda walks away with anger

Yug fails to understand what Vrinda's problem is and walks away to spend time with his friends.

Vrinda goes to her room to find her cell phone with 20 missed calls. Vrinda in shock throws her phone away and starts to get her bed ready to go to sleep. Vrinda then lies on her bed with tears in her eyes.

Vrinda: I don't know why I even came here, it's so stupid, I was hoping to get away from it all and it's getting worse out here. This phone won't stop ringing; I wish I can go away from here. I mean Frieda and Neel seem nice but Yug is irritating me, so much. AHH! Its not even Yug's fault but I keep on taking my anger out on him. I guess he is at the wrong place at the wrong time. I think I need to apologise to him, he is making an effort but AHH I hate being this confused. I wish everything would go back to normal and simple in my life.

As Vrinda continued to complain about her life soon she had fallen asleep. At the same time Frieda was laying on her bed busy talking to a friend, Neel was studying and Yug on the other hand was dancing the night away

Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago

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Sadaf

@sadaf.12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

WOW ... yug is soooo funnii... everything to him is bout relationships... LOL hahahahahaha he is ONE joker!!!! guys... luved it... plz update soon!!!

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shabana

@shab_rules

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#99

OMG WOW.

i havent read anything great in days. that brought a big smile to my face.

i absolutly love yugs sarcastic humour. and these charachters and their personalities are totally beliveable. you know reading ur FF is like watching an american telenovela !

really interesting and nice.

loved freidas line "wich girlfreind are you on now" it was hilarious and so sweet, yug actually discusses his girfreinds with his sister. it must be their fav bonding pass time.

and the bit about yug reading a book to get a girl. what a player, makes me think tho. what lengths will he take when he realises he wants to get vrnda ??

and i also love how yug and neel find every oportunity to lecture freida about staying away from boys. really sweet.

also very curious about neel. what did happen to his parents. and is that why he is becoming a doctor now ? so he can save people, coz he wanst able to save his parents !

for a moment i got a bit worried. i thought freida mite get a silly idea in her head like hooking neel and vrinda tpogether, but thankfully she didnt.

oh, and lastly, i loved how yug came back and grabbed vrindas arm. it totally took me back to the kadwa chauth episode in the drama when yug grabbed vrindas arm there ! loved it !

oh and one more thing. i hope this mystery stalker is introduced soon. cant wait for yug to meet him.

so fantastic update niki and sana, and eagerly awaiting the next. plz do it soon.

Edited by shab_rules - 16 years ago