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sadaf.12 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Ha ha ha ... Yug... dressed as a girl!!!!! ha ha ha... thats the funniest fing i have ever heard!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 OMG... gotta stop laughing... gotta start typing!!! LOL ha ha ha
guys... that was the best part ever!!!! cant wait till the next part... oh my gawd... does it have to be on the 14th??? why not the 5th or 6th? MANN!!!!
cant wait guys... plz update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
WOW(had 2 be in caps)what a script!!!!
I realli enjoyed it😛

I love the way how Vrinda acted on the boat with her ipod😆
and yes what a beautiful mansion,😃 I wish it was mines also😆 and the way how the story was organized was great!!
i also love the way i could actually pictured how yug was reacting when his mom said that yug dressed as a girl for vrinda😆🤣 awwww how cute....and he with his evil looks at vrinda😆
i realli love the cute scnes ,the way they both acted.😃..

ok I understand that you guyz mayb busy,but i jus cant wait!!!!!!😃
i'll b waiting for the next 1 soon!!!
and keep it up,i know it's a lot of hard work and time consuming...
thanks alot to u both😃
this is for u both (as usual😆)

👏


Luv
Ani😛


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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
hahah!! this was soo cute!!
lol! loved it!!!!
continue soon!
Binky thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
OMG this was too good guys awesome i just loved it and specially loved the tiff between yug and Vrinda cant wait to see how they'll fall in love thanks guys this was really needed cos this week was the worst week for us so thanks guys really appreciate this
please do update soon cant wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

" Yug didi, you want to go and get a manicure and pedicure done? I going for one later in the week."🤣

LOL guyss you hadd my sidesss achingg, that was absolutely hilarious! Yug/ Vrinda fights aree soo absorbing that they makee mee all that moree anxiouss too imaginee them getting together! i loved thee whole family gathering and absolutely love Yug's sweet parents! oncee again awesomeee work guyss, you seriously never fail to deliver! Freida and Neel aree too cutee ! p.s YUG's housee is absolutely amazing
can't wait until your next updatee!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Neetu2825

OMG, I loved that story! Yug dressed up as a girl for our Vrinda. AWWW, so cute.😃 It's just like our Yug to do anything for her. I also enjoyed the pictures you posted....I love Yug's house! God, I wish I lived in a mansion like that on Yugoria Island...with Yug😍.
*snaps out of day-dream*😆.

I really loved the update. I wish you guys weren't going to make us wait so long but its understandable if you guys are busy. Thanks for all your hard work!😊

Thanks, hehehe I know Yug is too cute! I know I am also dreaming of that house and me there with Yug! 😳
Thanks for understanding and waiting!

Originally posted by: sadaf.12

Ha ha ha ... Yug... dressed as a girl!!!!! ha ha ha... thats the funniest fing i have ever heard!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 OMG... gotta stop laughing... gotta start typing!!! LOL ha ha ha

guys... that was the best part ever!!!! cant wait till the next part... oh my gawd... does it have to be on the 14th??? why not the 5th or 6th? MANN!!!!
cant wait guys... plz update soon!!!

😆Thanks for the comment!
Sorry for the long wait I was away on holiday at Yugoria Islands 😆😆 I wish!

Originally posted by: Ani-

WOW(had 2 be in caps)what a script!!!!
I realli enjoyed it😛

I love the way how Vrinda acted on the boat with her ipod😆
and yes what a beautiful mansion,😃 I wish it was mines also😆 and the way how the story was organized was great!!
i also love the way i could actually pictured how yug was reacting when his mom said that yug dressed as a girl for vrinda😆🤣 awwww how cute....and he with his evil looks at vrinda😆
i realli love the cute scnes ,the way they both acted.😃..

ok I understand that you guyz mayb busy,but i jus cant wait!!!!!!😃
i'll b waiting for the next 1 soon!!!
and keep it up,i know it's a lot of hard work and time consuming...
thanks alot to u both😃
this is for u both (as usual😆)

👏


Luv
Ani😛


Thank you for your comment, glad you liked it! So glad you could picture the scene😃

Originally posted by: zainab.A

hahah!! this was soo cute!!
lol! loved it!!!!
continue soon!

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Binky

OMG this was too good guys awesome i just loved it and specially loved the tiff between yug and Vrinda cant wait to see how they'll fall in love thanks guys this was really needed cos this week was the worst week for us so thanks guys really appreciate this

please do update soon cant wait to read the next part 😃

Thanks Binky, I can't wait to write how they fall in love! 😛

Originally posted by: Manayuv

" Yug didi, you want to go and get a manicure and pedicure done? I going for one later in the week."🤣

LOL guyss you hadd my sidesss achingg, that was absolutely hilarious! Yug/ Vrinda fights aree soo absorbing that they makee mee all that moree anxiouss too imaginee them getting together! i loved thee whole family gathering and absolutely love Yug's sweet parents! oncee again awesomeee work guyss, you seriously never fail to deliver! Freida and Neel aree too cutee ! p.s YUG's housee is absolutely amazing
can't wait until your next updatee!

😆😆
Thanks, i loved that line as well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Thank you allllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll neetu, sadaf, ani, zainab, binky, manayuv- will be posting sooon❤️❤️ thanks for the lovely comments n the support this far!!! hope you like the other part as well will update soon =)))
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Hey Guys,
Just a little note if you are using the like button please remember to like both mine and Sana's post and sorry but I am unsure when our next post will be as its my sister's wedding at the end of the month so I am really busy, so Sana maybe posting on her own or something depending on what we decide.
Thank You for all your support guys!
Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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4th Script: Enjoy guys!!!! We are back again!!!! 😎
thanks for all your support ❤️ u all!
A view in to Vrinda's and Yug's room!

Edited by skstar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Hey guys we are back, Thanks for all your patience!

Hope you like this part

Script 4: Questions and Answers! And Jail?!?

Frieda: Come on Vrinda I will show you the rest of the house, finally I have a girl to talk to or I would have just spent my summer being ignored or bullied by these two.

Frieda takes Vrinda to her room.

Vrinda: So are we sharing this room?

Frieda: hehehe I would love to but you see I have my own room plus with so many rooms no need to share.

Vrinda: I don't mind my own room plus I brought so many books I could use this time to read.

Frieda: BOOKS? Oh god, I don't like reading!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't be such a bore'.if you are going to stay here then you have to spend lots of time with me.

Vrinda: You are cute! But being an only child I am use to being alone and love my own personal space, I am so use to it I would' but Vrinda stops in mid sentence.

Vrinda walks into her room and is mesmerized by its beauty. It has white walls complimented by the pink, around it there is a huge dressing area and a double bed right in the middle, and she loved the room. It is so pretty. The windows allowed her a sensational view of the sea. Her favorite she thought.

Frieda: Is that what you did back in UK? Stay home and read books?

Mesmerised by the room she took a while to respond to Frieda's question.

Vrinda: laughed and said oh hun I didn't mean it like that, just forget it.

Frieda: You have to see my collection of nail polishes. I have a fetish for it. Do you know that guys love colourful toes?

Vrinda: No I didn't know that but thanks for sharing.

Vrinda puts her belongings to its place while Frieda keeps talking non stop.

Vrinda would reply back with yes, no, hmmmm, ummm, hmmm and okay.

Frieda: Soooooo tell me something, do you have a boyfriend?

Vrinda looks at her, with a smile

Vrinda: Don't you think that's too personal to ask me? I mean I don't even know you enough to share such private things.

Frieda: That's not fair; I hate how you act so formal with me.

Vrinda: I am not being formal but usually when I meet someone that's not what I am asked.

Frieda: Oh sorry! It's just me; I am very up front, there is no point in skirting around the subject.

Vrinda: It's ok! I like it, saves so much hassle. Anyways back to your question.

Frieda gets all excited and jumps on the bed and positions herself comfortably waiting to hear Vrinda talk.

Vrinda: No!

Frieda: Seriously; you are so pretty and no boyfriend?

Vrinda laughs: Me pretty really, I feel like I look average. Well no guy out there has swept me off my feet, had a couple of proposals. Plus, I don't believe in love. Love is only for Disney, Hollywood and Bollywood. Don't be a fool! Love to me is jail well like being in a jail.

Frieda: Jail? Wow, how morbid! Love is all I live for and it's supposed to be the most beautiful thing a girl encounters. I was born to love and be loved.

Vrinda: haha I wasn't trying to be morbid well I said it's a jail because just think about it. The guy who you will get married to, will never let you do anything of your desire. You'll be expected to do what he wants. Wash his clothes, cook for him, brush his hair etc. Vrinda starts laughing.

Frieda: Are you being serious?

Vrinda: Okay fine it's not jail I am just messing with you. But you can say love for me is after marriage and I really don't want to be in any sort of relationship right now. So I don't care much about love or finding it. Hopefully love will come to me because I am not going after it.

Frieda: I wish I can be like you. Do you know I was in love with so many guys well on TV but nothing in real because around Neel and Yug they don't let me talk to any guys. One time I saw this really cute guy but Neel gave me this look like don't even think about it. Maybe now that you are around I can sneak out to the city and meet my prince.

Vrinda laughs: Frieda dear don't worry your prince will come, I can't imagine having an over protective brother like Neel.

Just then Vrinda phone starts ringing but she ignores it.

Frieda: Why don't you pick it up?

Vrinda: It's not important this guy he's been after me forever. I told him I was going away and he started crying. Then he said he will call me everyday. I hate guys. It's like leave me alone!

Frieda: Wow, you are so mean. Poor guy! Is he cute?

Vrinda: He's okay but not my prince charming quipped vrinda with sarcasm and he really wants to marry me. I told him so many times no but he won't give up. He acts like he's my boyfriend and I wouldn't be surprised if he comes here. I hope not because I will be very terrified.

Knock knock

Frieda: Come in!

Mamasa: I hope I didn't interrupt but Vrinda you parents called so give them a call. Also Frieda, Neel is looking for you and Vrinda when you are done talking, come downstairs for dinner.

Vrinda: Okay mamasa I will call them right now.

Frieda gets up and leaves with mamasa to go to Yug's room.

The room was a total contrast to Vrinda's room it was totally boyish but it was noticeable that no one had spent time in it for a long time, a black feature wall room with Pokmon posters up on the wall and a box full of action figures.

Yug missed his room when he was away but now realised he needed to renovate it soon before he brings any girls in here.

He started to remove the posters and had told Wilfred to bring him some boxes. He packed away his childhood memories when he came across a photo album.

He was looking through the album and he saw his childhood snaps, a girl was present in all of them and he guessed the girl was Vrinda from mamasa's story. He found the picture of him dressed as a girl. He couldn't help it but laugh and realised he had to hide it before anyone else saw the album. He placed it safely in his cupboard.

His room now looked more adult like or you can say young bachelor. He started unpacking his suitcase when Neel walked in.

Neel: Evening brother or should I say sister.

Neel laughed

Yug: You do realise it's not funny to laugh at your own jokes.

Neel just smiles back: The hormones are in play

Yug thinks to himself I am going to kill him, a slow torturous death!

Yug just smiled back wickedly. Neel knew something was going on his head when Frieda walked in.

Frieda: Mamasa has called you both for dinner so come downstairs.

Yug: Frieda, wait a moment I have brought you something.

He opened his suitcase when Neel noticed; female clothing in there with some skirts and shorts.

Neel: Seriously having one sister was bad enough but two, as he shows Yug a skirt!

Frieda burst out laughing and Yug was shocked looking at what was inside the bag.

Yug: This ISN'T my bag, these AREN'T my clothes.

Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago

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