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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
wow there was some cute scenes with yug and vrinda which i really love.
thanks alot
and update soon!(m in a rush but just came specially to read ur FF,since it's my friend's wedding am hardly on now😔 )

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Neetu2825

Yug: I am too expensive! Can you afford me?


This was by far my favorite line. I can totally picture him saying that. Moreover, I think it was really cute the way Yug carried her suitcase back for her. I think it will take a while for these two to warm up to each other, though I hope it happens soon. But, I do have a question. How come Yug's parents r leaving so soon? I mean Yug just arrived today and they haven't seen him for a while, yet they r leaving the kids alone and going to a conference. Also, where r Neel&Freida's parents? Will you be introducing them as "evil" characters later on?

Love that line as well, Yug's parents are going away cause the story needs to move on without parental influence 😆😆😆
Neel and Frieda's parents you wil just have to wait and watch

Originally posted by: zainab.A

hahaha!! loved this part!
amazing!!!!!
continue soon! :)

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: shab83

nice update.

made me laugh when yug is at the dining table and whispers
Are you sure, it's not the other way round?,
they really have got off to a bad start havent they !
but like neetu sed, its gonna take them a while to get use to, and appreciate each other.
looking forward to the next part. yuvi on the beach, cant wait !

I know they have got of to a bad start but then the one you hate the most is the one you love even more, remember, as a kid a you would always fight with a guy/girl you liked the most, its just human nature.

Originally posted by: Mana26

YUG for salee? wow imm first inn linee😆

that wass oncee again a very absorbingg scene! & wow i havee to compliment on thee dining room, very spectacular andd an awesomee choicee.. haha yes sana i changedd my namee to mana26 becausee LOL thatss myy nickname, andd i thinkk it soundss better onn thee forum😆 okay back to thee scene, thee explosion of thee suitcasee wass hilarious, poor vri hadd her underwear on display for everyonee! YUG is soo self reliant..
and it makes it all that moree sweet when his soft sidee evokess and his apology beginss! thankss for thee quick updatee guyss, i wass soo excitedd andd just hadd too read ! most of all i likee vrinda's confidencee andd shee seemss soo much sweeter in your sceness! once again intriguining stuff guyss, i really cant wait for thee next scene, maybe a yuvii moment on thee way? what moree can i say, other than i really loved reading itt, its soo much fun when i get to evoke my imaginationn becausee my holidayss aree soo boringg! once again it wass a great piece of work, pleasee updatee soon!
best wishess priyanka
x.

Glad you liked the scene, I wanted Vrinda to be confident cause I am really bored with all these shy and quite girls, hehe the underwear on show,😳 maybe Vrinda should have packed better 😆😆
So glad you like reading it and its keeping you entertained for the holiday's, hope it keeps you entertained for longer

Originally posted by: Binky

i loved it guys specially the little tiffs they have i love this Yu reminds me of the old Yug sigh* i miss our old ug so much wish we could see him a gain

please do continue soon cant wait to see what happens in the garden 😃

I like the tiffs as well it reminds me of the YuVi, I use to love well still love, I want to see our old Yug again as well!! 😃

Originally posted by: sadaf.12

ha ha ha... yug is sooo funii and he is soooo sweet... i wish sum1 would carry my suitcase lyk dat... ambe yug

I know I wish Yug was their on my holiday, my suitcase broke it was so difficult to carry! 😆😆

Originally posted by: SweRav

sorry I haven't commented properly for the last update; just been a little busy but I read both the parts today and they are so good!

I love it how Yug and Vrinda were tight buddies while they were small. i think it's a hint the parents know they might become love buddies now! I can't wait for them to fall in love with each other!

thanks so much for the lovely update! update soon! (and I love seeing the pictures each update!) I want to see what happens when Yug follows Vrinda and the parents are out of the house. I guess when the parents come back, yuvi's love story would have progressed a lot! so cute!

Thanks its ok, just glad you commented. Well you will just have to wait and watch to see what happens with the YuVi love story!

Originally posted by: Ani-

wow there was some cute scenes with yug and vrinda which i really love.
thanks alot
and update soon!(m in a rush but just came specially to read ur FF,since it's my friend's wedding am hardly on now😔 )

Thanks for the comment, its ok I am hardly on its my sis wedding soon so I am busy as well, just glad you commented 😃
Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
6th Script: Enjoy guys!!!!
Thanks for all your support ❤️ u all! and for those that I didnt comment yet to I will soon- thank you so much for all your support❤️
Rain, Work out and ummm up close and personal😆😆

Edited by skstar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Hey Guys,
Hope you enjoy this part!
Script 6: Walks and Talks

Yug leaves the room but he sees Vrinda so he follows her. Vrinda walks out of the mansion and is walking towards the shore. Yug curiously follows her.

As Yug is walking his phone starts to ring. Yug looks at his phone to see Mamasa is calling him.

Yug: Hello Mamasa is everything okay? It's only been 5 minutes since you left and you are calling me?

Mamasa: Yes Yug, everything is fine. We left in such a hurry but I just wanted to remind you to take care of Vrinda, Frieda and Neel. Especially Vrinda, she's our guest and I feel really bad leaving with Babasa but if he wasn't getting an award I wouldn't have left.

Yug: What award Mamasa? How come I never know what is going on in this house just like how you never told me Vrinda is coming.

Mamasa: Yug I did tell you but you never pay attention to anything I say over the phone in fact you are always in a hurry.

Yug: Okay fine Mamasa I forgot. It's always my fault right ma? You know I was tensed last few weeks in exams and yet you kept telling me things, I wasn't paying attention. But don't worry I will take care of everything here even Vrinda and he gives a wicked smile

Mamasa: Okay good, I will call you soon my Yuggie.

Yug: Ma please don't say Yuggie! I am back home now and in a week you will be back so you don't have to call every single hour checking on us or shall I say ME. Everything will be fine. Just enjoy the conference and don't worry, please Mamasa.

Mamasa: You sound so much like your dad as each day goes by. Well, we have reached the airport and I will call you in few days so keep your phone on and I love you a lot. Take care Yug.

Yug: Love you too Mamasa.

Yug ends his conversation and heads towards the entrance to see where Vrinda has gone. He walks out and heads towards the shore. He sees Vrinda taking her clothes off .Yug seems confused but interested at the same time. Vrinda surprisingly is wearing shorts and a tank top underneath her clothes so it was easy for her to get in to her work out gear. Yug can't help but think what an interesting girl Vrinda is. He walks closer and sees her stretching out and then Vrinda sits down. She then stretches back of leg and lower back. Yug gets impressed at her working out and walks up to her.

Yug: Wow! How did you manage to take your clothes off so soon? I mean we have a gym inside. Also, its going to rain any minute just look at the clouds the darker side is moving towards us.

Vrinda: I know but I like to be outside and I don't mind working out in the rain. Vrinda rolls her eyes at him just then it starts to drizzle.

Yug: See its drizzling and have some mercy on us guys or at least me I don't want to see you wet and he laughs.

Vrinda: No one is asking you to stay, you can go inside but I am not going anywhere.

Yug: Okay, as you wish Miss Vrinda but I am not going inside either and he lays on the hammock while Vrinda ignores him and continues working out.

Yug could see Vrinda's back while she was working out. He couldn't help but start whistling. Vrinda quickly stops and turns to give him a bad look, Yug smiles

Yug: Are you looking at me? and continues laughing but stops whistling. Vrinda goes back to stretching her self. Yug thinks to himself he isn't going to let her go off that easily so he starts singing the Indian song from the movie Johnny Gaddar

Doob ja mere pyaar mein
o yeah
o yeah all da sexy gals
all da sexy boys (he pulls his collar)
Gotta move ur
Gotta move ur
body and before he could say tonight
Vrinda turns back

Vrinda: Yug please stop. You are acting like a loafer. I understand you can't handle my beauty but I came out here to be alone not for you to watch me or sing to me while I am working out

Yug: Oh Vrinda, I can handle a lot more than you can imagine and continues laughing but sadly I am only here to keep an eye on you, Mamasa's orders!

Vrinda: I don't buy it!

Yug: Mamasa and Babasa are not here so I have to watch you. Just in case you drown, someone will have to save you, right? Thankfully, I know how to give CPR as well so I am sure that will come handy

Vrinda: I still don't buy it. I am working out not swimming plus I know how to swim so sorry try your CPR skills on someone else. I know for guys like you this is just an excuse to watch me work out

Yug: Oh please! You think way too highly of yourself. I always come here after dinner and I have better things to look at then to see you work out.

Vrinda: Like?

Yug: My neighbours hot daughter, her hot friends oh and her hot mom. Yug winks at Vrinda

Vrinda: Eww… That is too much information and absolutely gross and you are extremely lazy laying on your butt

Yug: and you are chubby

By now Vrinda was fed up with Yug. She got really annoyed. She bended down to pick up some wet sand in her hands and then she throws it on Yug while he was laying on the hammock. Yug caught by surprise, gets off the hammock and walks towards Vrinda

Vrinda walks backward just then Yug also picks up the wet sand in his hands. She knew it was better for her to run then to face Yug throw wet sand on her.

Vrinda starts running and Yug starts chasing her.

Vrinda: Good exercise for you fatty, she looks back and yells at Yug

Yug: You are going to get it Vrinda, you just ruined my thousand dollar worth shirt. Plus you have no idea but I am a trained runner.

Vrinda yells back is there anything you don't do and continues running and trying not to slip over the wet sand.

They both run for two minutes while it started to rain much faster and Vrinda starts freaking out. Yug catches up to her. Vrinda, not being able to run much longer stops near a palm tree. Yug continues to walk towards Vrinda with mud in his hands.

Vrinda: Yug, you wouldn't dare do anything to me. You started this; you called me fat and ruined my workout.

Yug: Oh yes! I will, you have no idea what I am going to do with you and he gives her an evil smile

Vrinda steps back but is stopped by the tree. She looks to her right, left and is scared to see what will happen to her as Yug is so near her. The rain had soaked both Yug and Vrinda. The rain drops kept dripping on Yug's face as he came closer to her. Yug looks right in to her eyes. He's gazing at her even the drops of rain couldn't stop Yug from blinking but Vrinda gets a worried expression on her face thinking what will Yug do to her? She notices the sand in Yug's hand had been washed out but he was still coming towards her. Vrinda's heart beat rises and she panics to think why Yug is still coming towards her? Just than Yug raises his hands, Vrinda ducks her face with her hands and screams, "No Yug please don't." Yug couldn't take it anymore and bursts out with laughter.

Yug: You really got scared of me didn't you? I wasn't going to do anything. Yug continues laughing

Vrinda holding her breath: whatever Yug and pushes him away.

Vrinda walks away while Yug catches up.

Yug: Now don't tell me you are mad at me?

Vrinda: You didn't have to come this close to me

Yug: I was just joking. I actually helped you work out. You loose more calories when you run, did you know that?

Vrinda: Look just leave it, I really don't want to talk about it. It wasn't funny just to let you know! But, am I really fat? Vrinda looks at him with a worried expression

Yug: He giggles; I was just messing with you. You are fine. Infact you have a great body

Vrinda: I know I have a great body but thanks anyway and Vrinda walks away leaving Yug behind. By now the rain had stopped. Vrinda kept walking and Yug trying to catch up to her

Yug: Future Miss Universe, can we go inside? I am really wet and so are you!

Vrinda: Are you always going to follow me around? I think you can see I am going inside and you don't have to worry about me I can handle my self

Yug: Fine don't come running to me when you can't because I won't help you. Giving her a bad look Yug walks away

Vrinda rolling her eyes walks behind him and just then she sees an iguana coming towards her, she screams loudly and grabs Yug's arm.

Yug caught by surprise stops when Vrinda pulls him towards her self

Vrinda: Yug what is this thing and its coming towards us. Is it a lizard? or I don't know, all I know is I hate and I mean hate these crawling creatures. Oh goodness! YUG DO SOMETHING.

Yug: Relax Vrinda! Can you let go of me because you are hurting my arm, I think the blood stop flowing. That's an iguana and it's not going to harm you. Just ignore it. It's common for them to walk around like this. See, I told you to listen to me but women they never do! You don't know much about this island. You can't just roam around by yourself now admit your fault and say Yug is the best.

Vrinda: I don't believe you. You think this is funny I just had a heart attack. I could have died. It was staring right at me and the tongue oh my god. Can you just walk with me till we go inside?

Yug: Oh, so now you want me to walk with you before what did you say? You can handle yourself. Right? I didn't hear Yug is the best.

Vrinda: Okay fine you are the best and I am wrong jeez you can never let go can you.

Yug: You are the one holding on to me so how can I let go.

Vrinda Ignoring Yug's comment: Can you stop arguing and let's please go inside before I see another walking creature coming right at me.

Yug decided to take advantage of the moment for no particular reason and grabbed Vrinda's hand and they walk towards the mansion

Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
my Yuggie😆😆😆 it seems everyone is calling him that 😆 i love it i love this YuVi yaar they are not taking crap from anyone and uses their own head not like some people i know in the show god Vrinda in shorts its kind of hard to imagine her like that but i love it so guys please update soon i want to know what happens after they go hand in hand inside 😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
*hai* niki... i didn't know u are sooo gud at writing romantic scenes... ( btw can i call u Niki?)
luved the iguana bit... and THERE ARE IGUANAS ON YUGORA ISLAND? i would not lyk to go dere... i cant handle it when i see a spider or a dog... letalone a lizard!!! =)
OMG wet yug... *sexiii*!!! <3
plz update soon guys... and Sana i love the scripts u make... they are soo pretty!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
wowww i really love this one
some nice cute scenes between yug ad vrinda again
i love vrinda's acting
wished she did this acting onscreen😆
thanks alot u both!!
update soon
😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

i absolutly loved this update.

i think it was the best one so far.
im glad the mum phoned, it seemed a bit too rushed the way they suddenly left, so now we have a proper explantion, plus this gives yug and excuse to "keep an eye on vrinda"
loved every bit of it. from the way he was checkin her out, and then freaked her by making her thing he was gonna do something wrong by stepping over the line, to the iguana and right at the end, the way they go back in holding hands.
i had to read ur FF over and over. it was really really fantastic.
i would quote, but there r just so many great lines in there, so i cant be bothered writing the better part of the update out.
anyway well done guys, great job.
you showed us the chemistry between them, without even making them fall in love yet ! hats off ! 👏👏👏
Edited by shab83 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
hahaha!! i loved this part!!!
yug is sooo naughty! hahaa!!
vrinda is a strong girl!
i just love her character!!!
continue soon!
thanx for the PM!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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okay finally had a chancee too peacefully readd😃
i never knew that a wet beach couldd bee a flirting heaven but you guyss provedd mee otherwisee, wow when they were running after eachother i wass anticipatingg a moment, but itss better that you guyss didntt add a lovey dovey moment just yet haha itsss much moree funn waitingg for itt😛 also , might i say what an exotic island! a iguana wow, i'vee seen a feww in my timee andd i wouldd havee to agree with vrindaa that they aree quitee weirdd creaturess andd i can understandd why she'd bee frightened, i meann thee way they bask in thee sun and their skin iss very wrinkly, they are thee truee kingss of lizardss! otherwisee guyss, what moree can i say it wass once again a great scene andd you madee mee finally believe that even thee beach can bee quitee a romantic placee..
hmmm.. my favouritee part in thee wholee scene wouldd have too be thee flirting on thee beach LOL, veryy cutee! well thankss once againn sana andd nikki, youu madee myy holidayss all that moree fun😃 doo updatee soon!
Edited by Mana26 - 16 years ago

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