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👏Awesome wow cool angad listen mukti so sweet thank you for update dear and pm👏👏👏
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"Mukti please zara sa diyan do apne baathon main." Mukti only rolled her eyes picking up a white baggy shorts with a sleaveless pink t-shirt to go along with it. "Seriously dude muje tho yakeen hai hotha ke aaj Mr. Khanna na muje dinner ke liye invite kar diya."

"KYA DHILIP SIR NE TUME INVITE KIYA VO BHI DINNER KE LIYE?" he replied "Haan yaar seriously us admi ke paas koi kaam nahi hai kya."

"Mukti tum Khanna industries ke Chairman ke baare main bol rahi ho jiske paas waqth ke siva sab kuch hai." she replied, "Really tho aab uske paas waqth bhi kafi hai."

Slightly dabbing eyeliner and mild lipgloss she also slipped on a set of white sandals. Switching the speker phone off and throwing the wet cothes in the bag threw the wet and the coffee back in her hands, "Sau baath ke ek baath Prithvi, maine apne pariwar kodiya kyunki meri ma thodi careless thi."

"Mathalb?" he enquiered, "Ma ne kuch aise warnings ko ignore kiya jiske wajai se vo thiyar nahi ho payi. Main vo galthi nahi karungi. Muje jaana hai deed sari padyi karni hai muje."

"Best of luck Mukti, best of luck." both of them cut the line and Mukti started taking more notes focusing on those notes each topic looked at thorowly. She did not look up when the door was knocked, she didn not see the Mishti come inside either untill she stroked her hair, "Mishti aap yahan kya kar rahe hai?"

"Baito meri jaan, actually main yeah dekne aayi ke tum teek ho ya hani. Ek customer meeting main thi jab ghar main yeah sari drama hua. Tum teek tho ho na?" Mukti nodded, "Good aur haan by the way tum pichle theen ganton se sirf padayi kar rahi ho. Is there something we can get you? Tume brake ke saak sarurath hai."

"Paanch minute ke liye tho no problem, I would seriously like some juice though." she added, "Juice comming up then kaunsi?"

"Kuch bhi aap bilkul phikar bath kijiye main kitchen main ja kar bana sakthi hoon." she repplied, "That's ok main mangwathi hoon, tumhari se hi. Haan Shalaka please send two glasses of juices to Mukti's room."

"Vo bijwdegi aab tumhari padayi kahan thak aayi hai?" Misthti looked at the work Mukti was doing, "Kafi achi yeah notes kafi simplifed datas, detained notes, key words aur points sab alad alag lika maine. That really helps me at a latter point."

"Good, aur tumari colour codeing tho kar rahi ho na kai tum confuse na hojao." Again Mukti smiled, "Haan baba kar rahi hoon aap mere baare main ithni phikar kyun karthe hai?"

"Nalan ho tum mere liye, kyal rakna meri farz hai." she replied, Mukti imagined Misthi in a pink sari with her gungat on top and a large bindi and sinduur instead of her knee lenght formal black skirt and the yellow full sleaved shirt. She started laughing holding her stomatch Misthi looked confused as Mukti continued laughing. "Misthi babi aap ne kitchen se juice manga kya? Mukti tum has kyun rahi ho?"

"Haan Angad aur haan main bhi vohi puch rahi thi is ladki se." she replied, "Great mind if I join you, aur han ithni hasi wali baath kya hai meri jaan?"

"Kuch nahi Misthi keherahi thi ke yeah meri babhi hai." Angad looked lost, "That's a fact Mukti kya hua yaar tume hasne ke kya zaurath hai."

"Sorry maine bas imagine kya, you know Misthi in those sopes ke bhabhi ke roop main imagine kiya."

Both of them smiled at the idea, "Your right Mukti, kaafi hasi tho aati hai aise imagine karke. Aur hamare juice agaye hai, Mukti, if you don't mind kya main yahan aap logon ke saath..."

"I don't mind Angad, aare meri calculator kahan gayi hai? Yehi par tho raki maine use." she added taking the glass of fresh juice from the servent and searched for the calculator. "Aah yahan par hai, thank god sirf theen sums baki hai practice karne ke liye. Fifteen minutes for each... mmh. Aare Angad dinner kab hai?"

"Don't worry you have another hour, yeah lo yeah juice pilo uske baad padayi karo." she nodded and sipped the drink, "If you don't mind kya aap mere liye ek kaam karenge?"

"Bolo kya kaam hai?" she pointed towards her closet, "If you don't mind meri closet se dinner ke liye kuch achi dress nikaldo na. Aap tho aksar Mr. Khanna ke sath dinner par chalthe hai na, tho aap tho janthe honge ke appropriate dress kaunsi hai."

"Approporate dress?" he asked, "Teek hai main lekar detha hoon. Tumhari dresses kahan hai?"

"Umm muje kis thara ke dresses pehenkar jaana chahiye." she replied, "Tumhare paas koi long dresses tho hoga na?"

"Indian models yaa western? Donon hai." she replied sipping her drink, "Indian models preferable hai, dad loves them. Kahan hai?"

"Aayie main aap ko dikathi hoon." she showed into her closet and opened the cuboard, "This is the one, Angad smiled seeting the rack of clothes in there, "Mukti there must be atleast ten gagras in this cuboard. Pehenthi kaab yeah saab ko tum?"

"Angad inmain kuch gifts hai, aur haan kafi sari parties main pehenkar jaathi hoon." she replied, "Lekin phir bhi tum apni percentage kafi achi hai kaise?"

"Photographic memory aur superior iq level ke combination jo hai." she smiled, "Really?"

"Haan aur main balance main believe karthi hoon meri nazar main saab kuch chahiye. Aise koi bhi ek cheez nahi hai jo meri zindagi main sab kuch ban saktha hai. Aab kya aap meri dress select karenge?" she asked Angad nodded and looked through some of the outfits and pulled three of them out for a better look. Finlly he selected a yellow gagra choli with a red bluse which was short enough to expose her stomatch. Her duppata was a double colour see through with several golden buttas stiched into it. "Nice choice, thanks."

"Yeah it looked grand enough." he replied she did not respond mroe than that and both of went out, "So what's your plan now?"

"Muje aur sums calculate karna padega, exams ke liye prepare karne ke liye. Uske baad dinner.. aur thoda sa aur padayi bhi." she replied, "Kya hai na muje apne exams main ache marks lena hai, not just a pass. This is a very competitive exam."

Just then Angad's mobile rang, "Exuce me, helllo? Yes speaking aah yes, Mishti kaam agaya we have to run."

"Sure Angad, deko main tumse baad mail milthi hoon ok?" she replied, Mukti only nodded and got back to practicing the sums. Just as the alarm went of Mukti dropped her pen switching it of, "Bingo, Mukti Khanna strikes again, exam time se fifteen mintues aage. Oh no, aaj muje dinner ke liye bhi jaana hai, jwellery?"

"I'll take care of that thanks." she replied running a hand through her hair.

Prithvi's Apartment

The appartment was painted in a beautful shade of light blue with a set of classical grey sofa sets, a glass table and some cofee tables on the side. More importantly a Bosh music player in the side with a surround sound and several c.d's on the rack, that was all there was to the hall. The kitchen on the other hand had some basic silverware, plates, glasses mugs, rations etc but nothing in classic ways but it was clean and had the updated equipments. Finally a small dining table with four chairs, it was made of steal making it look over simple. That was all there was to this place at least on the ground floor, that made it even remotely classical, the floor was made of something very simple. In an empty whtie room on the side Prithvi sat on the ground with felt pen, some a-4 sheets writing some words on the paper. This paper was his place of refuge where he could simply let go and do what he wanted, work. Scribiling those words some more he picked up his laptop and wrote some more in the laptop, his fingers quickly typing away the stuff. He was working on a new project report, he had to do well in this project. This project was not for him, it was for Mukti, he could not disapoint her. Getting up he wrote something on the A3 sheet pasted on the bulitin board already filled various words, lines and colours. Sipping his cup of coco he continued writing the report constantly refering to the scatered papers on floor, the one on the bulitin board and his laptop. At some point or the other he would write some point on his white board. The ringing of the door bell made him stop sighing he got up with his drink and went out locking the door behind him. Slipping the keyes into his pocket he opened the door, "Yes..."

A girl dressed in a pink sleaveless chudidar, a set of chuite pink bangles on her wrists made of metal, a silver beed mobile bag that hung from her neck. She had a casual sandals on her feet her hair set back in some pins, "Mr. Prithvi Bose?"

"Yes?" she smiled and streched out her hand, "I am Nikitha Rana, aap ke tenent."

"Aare haan Mukti ne bathaya ke aap aaj aa rahe hai." she replied, "Thanks, kya main aapartment ko dek sakthi hoon?"

"Haan, yeah here are the keyes." he handed her a bunch of keys and pointed to the place next door, "That is the place, door number 587."

"Thank you, kya aap muje dikayenge?" she asked but Prithvi only rolled his eyes, "Kud deklijiye, after all aap Mukti ke recomondation hai tho I am sure you don't have any other kind of intentions."

"Oh... ok." she muttered taking the keys and going out feeling quiet confused about everything.

Back in Khanna Mansion

At the hall Dhilip sat down reading a bussiness magazine dressed in a navy blue dinner sute with a white silk shirt perfect for the occation. His shoes were polished enough to see his face on it, he looked at the time, exactly on dot the sound of her feet comming down the stairs made him look up. Her duppata was set across her her chest but tranceprent enough to see it, she wore a gold neckce with rubies set in them, the chain was thin with a the ruby set like drops at certain intervels the largest at the center. Her earings were like a simple drop ones but matched the set perfectly. On her hands were a set of yellow bangles sandwitched with red ones. Her golden eyeshadow was set with dark brown on the edges alone, highlighted by her eyeliner. Her red lipstick was extreemly light and casual. Her sandals were simple but the gold payel made them look grander as she stepped down. Her hair was brushed back very carefully with red long bindi with some gold beads, a combination Mukti created with what she had, his eyes were still as she slowly got down the stairs and stood in front of him, "Kya yeah teek lagtha hai, for the place we are going to?"

"Ahem, haan yeah teek hai beta, actually kafi achi lagte hai aap." she blushed and looked down, "Thank you, tho chale?"

"MUKTI!" some one called, "Ji, Mrs. Khanna?"

"Beta tumhare liye land line main ek phone aayi hai." she looked suprised, "Land line main, lekin jab meri paas mobile hai tho... excuse me, Mukti Khanna speaking?"
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Awesome part dear wowowo Mukti ko kissne phone kiya????? Thank You fpr this part & pm I like anagd and misty scene . so sweet.
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"Mukti, this is Rakshanda, Mrs. Umesh Raman?" she asked, "Main aap ke naam achi thara janthi hoon Rakshnda ji, bathayie ke aap ne ithne thakleef kyun liya?"

"Beta, muje aap se ek urgent kaam hona hai, kya aap kal mere ghar aa sakthe hai?" Mukti hesitated a bit before answering, "I will be there at nine."

"Thank you beta." she cut the line, "Sorry about that, bas ek chota sa kaam tha."

"Ko baath nahi hai beta, chale?" he asked, "Sure Mr. Khanna."

"Aur haan ek aur baath please muje aise Mr. Khanna maath kaho, uncle tho bulao. I am Karthick's father, your friends father." she thought for a moment before answering, "Ji koshish karthi hoon."

"Thank you, chale?" he took her hand and lead her to the car. Mukti leaned back on the seat as Dhilip told the driver where to go when she continued to look outside the window. "Mukti?"

"Ji?" she asked, "Kya hua kaafi geheri soch main padi hui ho."

"Kuch nahi." he raised his eyebrow, "Really bas thaki hui si ehesaas hai."

"Kaafi kaam kar rahi ho tum, Shashank kafi impressed hai tumhari dedicaiton ke saath." he replied this caught her attention, "Dr. Shashank?"

"Haan beta Dr. Shashank ne hi aise kaha, he does not give compliments that easily you know." he smiled for the first time he saw a light in Mukti's eyes that could be claimed as a smile, "He does not give compliments that easily you know."

"I know, maine kaafi suna hai unke baare main." she replied, "Tum docter bana chahti ho na?"

"Sirf docter nahi ek bahoth achi docter jo bahoth sari marizon ko teek karth hai." he laughed, "Bilkul apni ma ke thara ho, kai baathon main. Actually beta muje tumse ek baath karni thi."

"Ji kahiye." she asked looking at him, "Beta your going to turn eighteen soon, tum legally ek adult hojayegi jiska mathlab hai ke tum apni finncies aur rights tume kud deal karna padega."

"Ok?' she responded casully, "From now on you will be handiling your own financies, Naina ke naam tumhari account se nikal jayega. Not that she really kept an eye on you."

"Janthi hoon." Mukti pushed him a bit getting curious, "Beta you will practically be an adult, you will have to soon start to doing your..."

"Aap kehena kya chahathe hai?" she demanded frustrated but kept it out of her tone, "Thanks for making it easy for me from now on tumhari sari decitions aab tumhari zimidari hogi. I want you to take responsibility Mukti, just the way you took responsibility today."

"Yeah, I kind of understood that part." she nodded but internally she wanted to rip his limbs appart. "Mukti aaj maine yeah achi thara pehechan liya ke tum saach main ek adult ho. I'm glad about the decition to put you through boarding school, they really groomed you."

"Thank you." she replied politly just the way she always did, "Aur haan ek aur baath hai, aaj jab tumne yeah kaha me main kabi tumhare papa ke bai ke roop main pesh nahi aaya."

"I am sorry about that Mr. Kha- I mean uncle, sorry aadath badalne main." he patted her lightly on the cheek, "Don't worry beta, now that's out of the way how about you let me get to know you over dinner?"

"JI?" Mukti nearlly scramed, "Yeah I mean really just get to know you please?"

"Sure tho aap kya jaana chahathe hai?" she asked, "Tumhari favorite restaurent kya hai?"

"Well there is this small place, a indian restaurent, Rakshain." she replied, "Rakshain, I can't beieve it, that is the restaurent we are going to tonight."

"Oh, ok that's a suprise." she replied confused but suddenly smiled, "Ek minute kya yeah reservations Shalaka ne kiya?'

"Haan, tume kaise patha tha?" she aksed, "Actually she knows that is my one of my favorite places."

"She knows?" she nodded, "Haan vo mere baare main kafi janthi hai."

"Oh, thank god for that." he replied, "So what do you like about this restaurent?"

"Aap ko kud dekna padega." she replied a fake smile again, Dhilip slighed and leaned as Mukti watched outide the window her eyes filled with tears. "Kya hua beta?"

"Mummy aur papa ke yaad aane lagi." she replied, "Achanak?"

"Nahi peheli baar nahi hai jab muje unlogon ke yaad aayi hai." she replied, "Hamesha muje unlogon kami tho mehesus hothi hai."

"I am sorry beta." she smiled a bit, "Thats ok jo hona hai hoth hai. Aare main tho bul gayi thi, muje hospital ke baare main app se kuch puuchna tha."

"Kya beta?" he aksed, "Well actually vahan par do floors children wards hai."

"Tho maine socha kyun na vahan par thoda sa alag types ka desighning kar diya jay? Chearfull stuff with a sense of beauty." Dhilip looked confused, "O.K...."

"Aur maine socha why don't we do something more with the space after all your main point of attraction for it financially are the complicated cases right?" she replied, "Right..."

"So why not throw in some aesthetics, something no other hospital has offered as a package so far am I right?" she replied, "Your right lekin beta yeah decition lene se pehele kuch logon ko ise dekna padega. You kno what am I talking about right?"

"I know, aap ko market research karna padega right?" she asked, "Haan, don't worry I will certainly take it up all right. Now, no more bussiness Mukti main at least aaj ke raath tume samajna chahati hoon. Can I do that?"

"Ok... tho aap mere baare main kya, well kya jaana chahathe hai?" she asked he wodnered a but and sighed, "How about your love live?"

"Non-existent, main aab jo hoon well it took six months of intensive make over, training and more importantly main class topers main ek thi so that means out of bounds. Aur haan main ladkon main concentrate bhi nahi karna chahathi thi. Haan interact karthi thi lekin romance ke liye zyada waqth nahi diya." Dhilip looked at her shocked before taking a deep breath, "Really?"

"Haan aur use bhi zyada maine apni zindagi main dyan diya, docter bane main, bachpan ka sapna tha." she replied a smile striking on her face, "Ithna bada ke main science aur maths main hamesha class main either third ya fourth aati thi leking rank to tenth tha meri baaki subjects ke wajai se."

"Baki sabjects ke wajai se?" he promted her, "Haan history, geography, english literature aur languate se main hamesha shalow reading karthi thi. Home work last minute katam kati thi kyunki hamesha vo main libery main medical related books padti thi, paas main ek kaafi achi librery thi."

"Really?" she nodded, "Haan, lekin badi padaku tho main nahi thi. Maine basket ball champion thi aur thoda sa dance-vance bhi karthi thi."

"Wow, maana padega you have enough to actually do more than enough to keep any guys on his toes. Aur kya karthi ho tum?" she just shrugged, "Why don't we find out slowly aur aap ko zyada digest karne ke liye majboori nahi hoga."

"Accepted with grace my child." he replied casually but his mind continued to process what he just heard with great speed. "Yeah ithni secretive kyun hai?"

"Uncle, main aap se kuch puuchna chahathi thi." she asked carefully, "Haan bolo, don't worry main tumse naraz nahi hojaunga."

"Thanks, actually meri sari bank acounts aap ke saath joint acount main hai, considering your my gaurdien. Janti hoon ke aap ne kabhi use haath nahi lagaya lekin phir bhi aap ne use kabhi use nahi kiya." she added, "Can I transfter all the money to an individual account."

"Tum apni zindagi main independent hona chahathi ho kya?" he asked, "Haan, please kya main kar sakti hoon?"

"Aare kyun nahi?" he asked, "Zarur karo waise jab main kud karne wala tha lekin this way is better. Lekin agar tume kuch chahiye tho phir bhi manglena don't hesitate."

"Ji, excuse me." she added when her phone rang, "Hi biya!"

"Hi ladli Angad ke saath chat kar raha hoon aur vo bol raha hai ke tum aab Dhilip uncle ke saath ho." he demnded, "Haan Ammey biya main uncle ke saath hoon dinner ke liye ja rahi hoon. Aur haan aap ke update hojayega jaise main ghar pahonchti hoon."

"Teek hai aur haan, tum please une Druv aur us dinya ke bare main kuch bhi maath kaho unse." he added, "Nahi karungi I sware."

"Ji biya, aap bilkul phikar maath kijiye main kisi ko bhi kuch nahi bataungi." she replied, "Aur biya ek aur baath hai kya aap Dr. Tananjay Chattergy ke baare main refer karke bataenge muje?"

"As you wish love, aur haan finally maine tumhare liye kuch stress management ko tuje bejdiya. Aab dinner ko enjoy karo and no studying tonight." he added, "Aab uncle ko phone do!"

"Uncle biya aap se baath karna chahate hai." she gave the phone to Dhilip, "Haan Aarman bolo beta."

"Uncle aap mere liye ek kaam karenge please?" Dhilip looked confused, "Kya?"

"Make sure she eats a rich dinner, main yehi chahatha hoon ke yeah aaj ke din achi thara so jaye." he replied, "Ofcouse beta anything else."

"Nahi uncle, by." Dhilip turned to Mukti returning her phone, "Kaafi achi model hai."

"Actually main ise badalne ke baare main soch rahi hoon. Collage admission ke liye wait kar rahi hoon ek baar vo tai hojay uske baad kafi kuch karna padega." she added, "Don't worry beta Naine tumhari project ke liye tume paise dedegi. Your on a employee baisis just like the other kids, tumhari bank main bhi paise transfter hojayega."

"Janti hoon maine contract ko achi thara pad liya. Aur aunty ne muje yeah project isi liye diya kyunki main docter bana chati hoon aur isi bahane unlogong se expose ho jaou jo medical field main influence karte hai." Dhilip nodded, "Maine is project ko isi liye liya taki main hospital ke baare main seek saku aur ek din achi docter banu."

"Tum kuch chupa rahi ho mujse." he demanded, "Your right lekin us sawal ka jawab main aap ko aab nahi de sakti."

"Mukti beta kya kisi ne kabhi app ke saath?" she shook her head, "Nahi kabhi nahi aap shayad yeah nahi jante hai lekin main self defence min kafi achi thara trained hoon aur ek athlet bhi hoon."

"Saach?" he smiled, "Haan, mama aur papa ke last project main jo log kaam kar rahe the us aunty aur uncle ne muje kud train kia. Jab sai main class three main thi tab sa, it just so happened ke vo log vohi sheher main the. Haar weekend min une ke ghar main teherti thi, principle unlogong ke kafi ache dosth the so koi problem nahi tha."

"Koi problem nahi tha? Lekin gaurdian ka permission?" she rolled her eyes, "Uska power of autorny tho aap ne Shalaka ko dediya hai na. Aur vohi yeah sab sambal rahi hai."

"Point, yeah lo restaurant bhi agai." A man opened the back door and smiled, "Good evening sir. Aare good evening Ms. Khanna, main manager ko batadun ke aap yahan aaye hai?"

"Please do so." she replied going into the restaurant when a little away a white BMW swong into the car park. The car was sparkling even in the late evening, dark glasses rolled up, a man dressed in a dark grey suit and black trousers and shirt stepped out allowing a glims of white leather seats, a very top class c.d player and a stearing with access to the phone cord connected to the car. He himself was quiet stylish with international desighner shoes and gray socks, a silver swiz watch on one wrist and a platinum bracelet. Once he locked the car he twirled the keyes in his finger flashing the great key chain with an antique piece in her hand.

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👏Oh Aweseom Great & Mind Blowing Thank You For This part Dear Kaun Hai woh Handsome 😉👏👏 Please conti soon.👏
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"Please do so." she replied going into the restaurant when a little away a white BMW swong into the car park. The car was sparkling even in the late evening, dark glasses rolled up, a man dressed in a dark grey suit and black trousers and shirt stepped out allowing a glims of white leather seats, a very top class c.d player and a stearing with access to the phone cord connected to the car. He himself was quiet stylish with international desighner shoes and gray socks, a silver swiz watch on one wrist and a platinum bracelet. Once he locked the car he twirled the keyes in his finger flashing the great key chain with an antique piece in his hand. His dark eyes had a shine in them with his hair slightly fluffy and wavy a side partition on his hair showing of a few gray hairs making it look great. He had high cheek bones with a soft yet slightly dark skin with only one damage - a deep cut on his forhead right above his right eye in a slight angle missing his eye in inches. The clean shaved and well taken care of features made him actually stand out from the crowd of men. Despite his mark he had something in him that expressed confidence and comfort with what he was, a valet walked up to the place and continued with his walk casually into the restaurent. "Good evening sir!"

""Good evening Mr. Dheskmuk kaise hai app?" the man who stood there asked glancing the tables, "Bilkul teek hoon, it's just me."

"Sir there is a table in the balcony." he pointed the place out, "My usal table not available?"

"Actually one of the restaurent is owners is here and she is at the table. Sorry I really can't..." Mr. Dheshmuk cut him off, "This table close enough though right?"

"Ofcource sir why don't you let Raj show you the table." Raj a waiter there showed him to the table but instead of sitting he moved over a bit to the nearby table and said, "Hi miss..."

Mukti looked up confused but got up any way, "Sorry do I know you?"

"Nope and nither do I know you." he replied, "Looks like you got my favorite table today. Kaafi regular customer hoon yahan par."

"O...k." she replied getting up and smiled gently, "I hope you enjoy this place by the way this is my uncle Mr. Dhilip Khanna."

"Hi Mr. Khan.... Khanna, ek minute uncle as in?" he demanded Dhilip also got up, "She is my brothers daughter."

"Mukti? Mukti Khanna?" the man demanded, "Ji haan aap muje jante hai kya?"

"Actually beta I'm Gansham Deshmuk." she looked confused, "I knew your father and your mother, main tha vahan par us raath, vohi raath jab unlogon ke mauth hua."

"Gangna?" Mukti wispered her face becoming pale rapidly Dhilip looked confused but before any responce could be given Mukti suddenly fainted upon Gansham Deshmuk. His arms went around her instantly so that she did not fall on the ground. Dhilip filled with fear quickly went up to her and patted her cheek calling her name repeatedly, "Ise hospital lekar chalte hai. Paas main hospital kahan hai?"

"MUKTI?" there was a scream as Appo*na came running to her, "Mukti beta kya hua ise? RAJ JALDI GADI NIKALO. SAMAR, CALL RAJVIR, ISI WAQT. Mr. Khanna aap bilkul chinta maat kijiye."

"Thank you." he replied, "Ma'am gaadi thiyar hai. Maine Dr. Rajvir ko bhi phone kar diya."

"Ise utao, Mr. Khanna, Mr. Deshmuk aap mere saath chaliye." she demanded with a tone of authority that made the men follow him quietly into an office where the conference took place. "Please sit down and tell me what happened. Mukti achanak behosh kaise hogayi?"

"Maine apne app ko introduce kiya aur vo behosh hogayi." Approna sighed, "I don't believe this - you actually thought that she won't recogonize you?"

"Muje yeah bhi patha nahi tha ke Mukti zindaga hai. Leave alon know that she actually remembered me." he demanded, "Point, lekin Mukti behosh kyun hogayi?"

"Well Mr. Khanna, the problem is that Mukti has both a photograpic memory and a week heart." he replied, "Mukti aap ko dek kar chaunk gayi thi. Usi ke wajai se yeah behosh hogayi thi. Don't worry Dr. Rajvir ko Mukti ke medical history achi thara janti hai."

"Medical history?" Dhilip took a deep breath, "Kya vo saach main bimar hai?"

"Bimar nahi, lekin haan kamzor hai." she replied, "Don't worry Mr. Khanna she will be compleatly fine. Vo medicine tho zarur teek kar sakti hai use."


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Gust appearence:Dr. Rajvir is played by Mohit Malik


Hospital - Dr. Rajvir's office

Dr. Rajvir stood over the girl looking at the B.P, making few check ups and her breathing as well, he also check her eyes a bit before giving her an injection. Once he moved out of hte room he called up Approna, "Haan Approna ji thank god aap ne muje sahi waqth muje phone kiya. She is getting much better lekin main yeah chahata hoon ke vo ek din, umm say till tommorow night. Uske baad we'll see about releasing her."

"Ek minute muje uske gaurdian ko bathana padeg." Approna repated the information and told Rajvir that some one will pick Mukti up tommorow at the given time. He was still too shocked to respond to the given request. "She'll be fine don't worry about that. Uski tabyath main kafi sudar aayi hai. I think we can reduce the dosage of her medicin."

"Really that's great." Appo*na smiled happily, "That is perfect!"

Rajvir continued to plce a spong on her head when she finally opened her eyes, "Hi Mukti!"

"Hi Rajvir, thanks for taking care of me again, I'll give you your check soon." she replied, "Don't worry about the money for the moment. Main tume 24 hours observation main rakna chahatha hoon."

"All right sounds fine." she replied, "Just need some sleep tonight don't want to waste my time."

"I'll give you some drugs for it. What did you have for dinner?" she shrugged, "Just ordered when he came."

"No more quistions from my side then, ek minute." he picked up his mobile and made a call, "Hello dominos? Yeah I need a...."

Bajaj House

Prerna got an SMS, "Mukti fainted - met Deshmuk."

"Muje yakeen nahi hotha ke vo budu ithna bada galati kar sakta hai." she swore, "Kya hua Prerna?"

"Rishab, Deshmuk ne Mukti ke saamne agaya tha." she muttered frustrated and sat down sighing, "Us duffer ne ithna bada kaam kiya aise. I mean achanka aur bechari ke dil aalready ithni kamzor hai."

"Don't worry Prerna - ek minute call. Haan docter Rajvir kahiye." Bajaj put the phone on speaker, "Mr. Bajaj, Mukti ke tabyth main kaafi sudar aane laga hai. I'll be changeing her medication."

"Thank god." Prerna sighed but Rajvir continued, "Ek aur baath hai Mukti ko aab bhi nightmares aati hai use aab bhi aur main use kal thak observation main rak raha hoon. Don't worry Mrs. Bajaj vo pehele se bhi kaafi sudar gayi hai."

"Achi baath hai." Prerna smiled, "Kal main mandir jakar Mukti ke liye puja karti hoon."

"Ok Mrs. Bajaj muje aab jaana hai. Good night." Rajvir cut the line with out waiting for a reply, "Muje is baath ki kushi hai ke Mukti teek hai."

"Main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon. Prerna kya tumne kabhi Muki se mila? I mean kabhi deka use face to face?" Prerna shook her head, "Nahi maine use kabhi nahi deka, aap tho jante hai na ka vo apni puri padayi Bangalore main kiya tha hostel main."

"Tumne kabhi unlogon se koi tasvir bhi nahi?' Again she shook her head, "Kaise mangti jab main achi thara janti hoon ke main uske baare main over protective hokar use danger mail laga sakti hoon."

"Prerna tume kya lagta hai? Ke kabhi hum Mukti ko uske aasliath ke bare main batha sakte hai?" She sighed bit, "Bathana padega lekin kaab aur kahan tho muje patha nahi hai."

Restaurent

Dhilip got an SMS saying, "I have oddered my dinner, aap loog bhi kaa lijiye."

Ghanga 'Gansham' Deshmuk sighed and took a spoon full of the raitha and rice Appo*na had placed in front of them finally. "Use kya hua?"

"Normal problem hai - uske photograpic memory ke wajai se vo apne ma aur papa ke mauth par hevily affected hai. Docters use davai de rahe hai to reduce the stress effect. She has finally come to a level of what they medically 'call out of danger' her energy has been heavily redirected. Her medical records have finally come to a proper record. Anything else?"

"I AM HER GAURDIEN FOR GODS SAKE AUR MUJE ISKE BAARE MAIN KUCH PATHA KYUN NAHI THA." he yelled Appo*na simply (calmly) replied, "Aap ko ek medical report mila tha chaar pages ka details ke saath. Agar aap ne use pure thara pada tho tha shayad aap ko patha hotha."

"I am sorry about what you did Mr. Khanna - agar maine uska gauirdian hone ke liye haan kaha hotha tho bohoth sare problems..." Dhilip placed a hand on him, "Nahi yeah mara kaam tha, I failed. Aap tho kai aur the, you had nothing to do with it."

"They were my closest friends... maine Mukti ko raise kiya." he felt his breath hold back for a few moments, "I am going to make it up to her with what ever I can."

"I know you will and I am going to be there helping you every step of the way." Both the men stood up and shcook hands on it, "I am going to help you there."

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👏Oh Awesome Great & Mind Blowing Thank You For This part Dear so rajvir is here woow great . conti soon
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A/N: Hay guys I have just learned about Karan's divorce (figured it's old news) and I just wanted to say a couple of things. First and for-most I am not sure why I feel there is more to the story than what meets our eyes. Second, I am not changing my story at all because I am using the identities of the characters and not the actors... so this story is going to have a Aarman and Ridhima pairing. As far as the story of Karan's 3 timing is concerned, that is his personal life and I don't care about anyone's personal life but I do hope that he gets back to work soon as he is a good actor. Same goes to Shradda as well.

One week latter: Khanna Manssion

Mukti sat in the main hall, near the coffee table on the ground, dressed in her most comfertable outfit ever. A black, cargo shorts with a yellow tank top and a black and white sriped cotton jacket on, her hair was clipped up in a bun with a pencil. A calculator in front of her with a notepad with plane A4 sheets, a black ball point pen, a red ball point pen and a dark pencil on the side. On the sofa sat Aarman dressed in a black jeans and a grey sleeveless t-shirt with black designs on it. Both of them were barefoot, Aarman was bussy marking quistions in mathamatics for her to practice. Mukti was on the other hand was working through a sum with the timer running near her. "Biya katham kar diya."

"Dikao." he replied and began correcting the paper before literally throwing it back at her, "Mukti phir se? Phir se tumhari presentation gandi hai. Kithni baar samjya maine tume? Samajti kyun nahi ho tum? Maths main presentation bahoth important hai. HAR STEP KO CHECK KARTE HAI - SIRF ANSWER KO TEEK SE LIKNA KAAFI NAHI HAI."

"Sorry biya aap jante hai na main maths main science ke thara fast nahi hoon." she cried, "SORRY? SORRY? Kya tum us insan ko bhi sorry kahogi? Sorry muje maths ithni jaldi nahi aati isi liye main presentation main compramise kar diya?"

Tears began flowing down Mukti's eyes, "Aab ro kyun kar rahi ho? Teek se ek sum likna nahi aatha lekin soap ke heroins ke thara aasun dikana shuru kardo."

"Lekin biya main saach main koshish kar rahi hoon." she replied, "Mukti koshish kaafi nahi hai tuje aache thara karna hai. I want you to get good scores in the paper as well. Only then will your average be good."

"Biya main seriously kosish kar rahi hoon." she replied but Aarman simply tore the answer sheet, "Tume ise bhi katin sum karna padega aab. Is baar sirf sum correct hona kaafi nahi hai, presentation bhi aacha hona chahiye. Got it?"

"G-got it." she stammered tears once again filing her eyes but she quickly wiped them before Aarman saw them. Quietly she continued working through the sum wiping her tears and continued the sum, just as she finished and showed Aarman he smiled naughtily with out even looking at the sum, "Dhar gayi thi kya?"

"Kya?" he smiled, "Meri daant ke wajai se - dhar yai thi kya?"

"Biya aap mere saath mazak kar rahe the?" she asked, "Haan aur kya tume laga ke main saach main naraz tha?"

Wipping the tears off her eyes he made her sit down and showed her the sum she had just done, "Deko - mera presure ke wajai se tum apni presentation main tho improve nahi hui. At the same time tum is sum main ithni saari galthi kar diya. Jis concept tume ache thara patha hai tum usi sum main galati kiya."

"Mathlab?" Aarman sat down and pulled her beside him, "Deko tum coppy karthe waqth kithne saare mistakes kiya. Mantha hoon silly the lekin sum ke answer pure thara badal diya. Tume pahta hai kyun?"

"Kyunki main nuervous thi." He nodded, "Haan tum nervous thi, agar tum nervous ho tho teek se soch nahi sakti. Ladli kabhi nervous maath hona tum, ek docter bankar tume hamesha stressfull situations ko handle karna padega. Aise dharogi tho kabhi nahi face kar paogi. Apne upar pure barosa daal kar kaam karo, muje tho hai. Tum par!"

"Karti hoon..." she replied and got up to study some more but Aarman pulled her away, "No, tum aur padayi nahi karogi. You need a brake, chalo change karke aao hum bahar ja rahe hai."

"Kahan?" she asked, "Suprise hai - jeans and t-shirt kaafi hai by the way."


Shopping Mall

Prerna and Prem were shopping for a gift for Tushar on his birth day, Prerna was bussy looking through some of the possible gifts for Tushar. Prem had picked up a book and was reading through it, just then some one called out, "PRERNA."

"AARE HAI!" Prerna huged the person who called her tightly, "Tum yahan?"

Prem stood there with a confused look on his face, just then Prerna broke the hug and turned to Prem, "Beta inse milo... Gansham Deshmuk. Ganga yeah hai Prem Yudi Sharma, mera beta."

Krishi
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Awesome Great & Mind Blowing Thank You For This part Dear . conti soonI l like last scene when prena inro prem with them ....Thank u for pm .

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