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wowowo awesome I love it , Thank you for pm , its awesome , contii soon.
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Hey that waz a wonderful part. You have to continue soon. Thnks for the PM!!!!
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thanks and i do wish more people will respond than u two
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Part two: The Family

"Your welcome, aab jao change karke aao brakefast in fifteen." she patted Mukti on the head and told her to run along. Just as Mukti got on the stairs she bumped into a lady dressed in a blue skirt. "Sorry Shalaka aap ko lagi tho nahi hai na?"

"Nahi Mukti aap ke liye ek fax aaya hai use dene ke liye aaya tha." Mukti took the fax, "Thank you, aur haan aap mere brakefast pool side par shift kar dijiye. Muje aaj Mrs. Khanna ke saath kaana hai."

"Sure, have a nice day." Mukti wished her the same and left going up the stairs to her side of the house her luck was not in her side as her cosin was excersising in the morning in his cycle and he saw her come through and called her. She turned around to face the man dressed in dark brown tracks with a light brown sleaveless t-shirt still swetting from the excersise. His hair too was wet thanks to the heavy work out, "Tum ithne subha kaha gayi thi?"

"Mandir." she replied, "Isiliye tum ithne saje hue ho, not bad. Any way kal mere kuch dost aa rahe hai mere saath chill karne ke liye, hame disturb math karna. Samji?"

"Ji kya main ja sakti hoon?" she requested, "Teek hai jao aur yaad rakna kaal pura din muje bilkul parashan math karna."

Mukti went into her area of the house and closed the door, tears flowed down from her eyes before she quickly wiped them. Her room was decorated grandly with rich cream walls, dark ebony cuboards and a lounging area that could fit at least ten people comfertabily with a glass table. There were at few more doors leading to other rooms. At one point there was a small mandap with an idol of lord Krishna. The light brown curtains filtered the light but made it look very nice! On the side was a single door refrigerator. Mukti opened one of the doors leading to her medium size walk-in closet that had stainles stelal doors and a large mirror. She picked up a dark blue denim skirt that reached her knees and a light blue sleaveles t-shirt that had dark blue bordars. Along with them she took a silver chain with a light blue pendent and a matching earings with a set of blue sandals that matched the outfit, going to the bathroom she washed her face compleatly and applie fresh make up matching the outfit and changed into the clothes. Rolling up her chudidar she placed them in the wash basket, changeing into the other dress and placed a silver bracelet with a blue stone. On the other hand she slipped a silver watch along with a light blue dial around it. Picking up her mobile she slipped it into her pocket and fixed her hair before leaving the room with her wallet.

At the ppl side table Naina waited for Mukti to come, who was as usual on time, "Aunty aap mujse kuch kehena chahathe the na?"

Naina waited till Mukti placed the napkin on her lap, "Mukti tumhari plan kya hai aaj ke liye?"
"Ji kuch nahi, maine socha ke thode der ke liye gumne jaon. Agar aap ko mujse kuch kaam hai tho main nahi jaungi." she added, Naina hesitated for a moment before speaking, "Atucally kuch kaam hai muje tumse, tume patha hai na ke Khanna industries ek CSR project kar rahe hai..."

"Aap vo aids hospital ke baare main baath kar rahe hai na?" she asked, "Haan beta, main yehi chatha hoon ke tum us project ko lelo."

"Aap chahathe hai ke main use lelun?" she asked, "Haan kyun nahi, tum ko bhi responsibilities hai na Khanna industries main."

Mukti silently ate a french toast taking her time to think about the project, slowly sipping her tea she replied, "Teek hai main lethi hoon." she replied, "Great, tho tume project ke baare main kuch baath samjathi hoon?"

"Sure." Mukti nodded, "Yeah kaam hum do mahena main compleat karna chathe hai lekin don't worry tumhari zyada waqth nahi lega..." the rest of what Naina said is drowned in the background music, finally she says, "Tum kaam kal se shuru kar do."

"Ji aur aunty ek aur baath muje aap se keheni thi."

"Bolo." she replied, "Two weeks ke baad meri exams ke results aur uske theen weeks baad medical collage exams bhi..."

"Don't worry Mukti, maine tumhare liye past papers aur kuch guides ke inthizam kar diya." said a voice behidn her. Mukti turned around to find a man dressed in dark blue sute with a whtie shirt with a stunning personality. His jade green eyes shone with confidence and he had a casual charming smile on his face, "Thank you Karthick."

"Your welcome." he replied placing a hand on her shoulder and took her full glass of juice with the other, "Aap yeah juice pikar apne brakefast katham karo."

Krishi
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Hey that waz awesome!! The way u describe things is awesome!! Plzzz continue soon dear. Thnks for the PM!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey nice ff! Its really gud. Plz continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow very well written thank you so much for pm . Awesome part.
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Part Three: The Family

"Your welcome." he replied placing a hand on her shoulder and took her full glass of juice with the other, "Aap yeah juice pikar apne brakefast katham karo."

"Teek hai, kya main ise pikar jaa sakti hoon?" she requested, "Sure and best of luck with the project."

"Thank you, have a nice day." she added before going away, Karthick looked at her for a few moments but decided to leave along with Naina to the office.

In another part of Mumbai at this very moment a man was returning to his home from jogging, the house was gracefully made with a parking in the front and a flower bed leading to the main door, it was very mordern and had an air of welcome. The man was different though, dressed in black shorts and a baggy white t-shirt with whtie head and wrist bands, his black sports shoes kicking up the look a few noches revealing a part of his body that was both well built and well maintained. He stopped a moment near the tap for the gardern hose and splashed some watter on his face with the cold watter and wiped his face in the towel that was handed to him. "Thanks Kuki." he replied with a casual tone moving the towel revealing an eyebrow ring above a set of beautyful eyes, he did not smile much but when he did looked fabulous.

"No problem Prem, work out kaisa tha aaj?" she asked him, she looked nice in a gray tracks, her hair set up in a pony tail, "Kafi acha lekin boring bhi tum mere i-pod main kafi slow songs dal diya."
"Sorry kid bro." she replied ruffiling his hair, "That's ok, Tushar kahan hai?"

"Naha raha hai, tum bhi nahakar aana hame puja ke liye dear hojayega." she added pulling him inside, Prem rolled his eyes and went inside, "I don't get it yeah subah subah ma kyun bajan gaa kar muje sulathi hai?"

"Prem! Aise bagwan ke apman nahai karthe." Kukti scolded him, "Yeah sure, aab main nahakar aaun?"

"Jaldi." she added, Prem ran up the stairs to his room, it was a two story type with a small loung on the out side and Prem's study room on the inside saparated with a glass frame and binds that were at the moment closed. There was also a refregerator on one side for drinks, he ran up the stairs to his walk in closet and picked out a marron and yellow stripped bath robe with a white towel. Hitting the showers he switched on his muisc system and began listening to music timing his bath as well. Two songs that is ten minutes latter he was out and changed into a set of whtie kurthas for puja knowing any thing else Prerna will have his head. He just ran the towel through his hair a few more times not bothering to dry it compleatly, he was already running late. Below in the puja room the aarthi had all ready begun, Prem joined in quietly and waited till the sweet voice finnished singing to bajan. Prerna Bajaj was dressed in a beautyful pink sari with her hair wet and left open, she looked hevenly with flavour of motherhood shining from her. Turning around she handed gave everyone aarthi and prashad, Prem last who was half asleep at the end of it, "Prem beta prashad."

"Finally." he muttered the yelled, "Birju kaka mere liye coffee."

"Prem!' she laughed but he was already runing the other side to his room, "Yeah ladka bhi na."
Rishab Bajaj laughed, "Prerna tum tho janthe ho na ke use yeah saab main koi interest nahi hai, Birju Prem ko uska coffee jaldi dedo."

"Aap hamesha use ithne laad pyar kyun dete hai. Usi laad pyar ne use bigad diya." she cribbed, Tushar inturupted, "Mom Prem tho aab bhi chota hai sudar jayega."

"Bap aur bete milkar use hamesha bigadthe hai!" she replied going inside to the tulasi plant to compleat her puja. Kuki smiled at the whole thing before going along with Prerna to do the tulasi puja. That was the only time she could have her mother all to her self. "Tushar tume yaad hai na, aaj Vishaka wapas aa rahi hai Puna se."

"Haan dad maine gaadi bijwadiya, breakfast se pehela aayegi." he replied, Tushar was home thanks to his holiday and was helping Bajaj out on a few things. "Exited about meeting her?"

"Ofcouse dad US se aakar theen din hogaye hai lekin aab thak Vishaka se nahi mila." he cribbed,

"Aare beta main uska baap hoon aur two hafthe se nahi deka. Tum tho janthe ho na use kaam par pad gayi tho pure zamana bhool jathi hia."

"Point dad." he replied picking up a glass of watter and drinking it when his mobile rang, "Morning Karthick."

"Morning Tushar tum apne dad se us project ke baare main baath kiya kya?" he asked, :Haan aur dad ne haan kehediya, tum bas project report bijwado."

"Sure, aur haan yeah project Mukti handle kar rahi hai. Sif tab thak hamare incharge Mr. Paresh nahi athe" he added, "Teek hai, tho main use pure thara guide kartha hoon. Tum project ke baare main bilkul phikar maath karo."

"Great thank you so much patha nahi ma soch kya rahi thi ma kya soch rahi thi Mukti ko ithna important project dekar." he replied, Tushar laughed, "Don't worry main hoon na."

Krishi

A/N: Only Prem's family members call him by that name and only when they are in private.
Edited by shakthi258 - 16 years ago
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awesome update i love prem , Thank you for pm . update soon.
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Part Three: As time becomes right


"Great thank you so much patha nahi ma soch kya rahi thi ma kya soch rahi thi Mukti ko ithna important project dekar." he replied, Tushar laughed, "Don't worry main hoon na. By! Seriously dad patha nahi is Khanna pariwar ke problem kya hai, vo apne beti Mukti par bilkul barosa nahi karthe. Which is totally not fair, vo ithni achi hai aur kafi smart bhi."

"Really?" He sounded quiet interested, "Haan main use party main mili thi, jo aap mere MBA ke liye thro kia. Use thodi deer ke liye baath kar paya tha, very inteligent girl dad aap ko use ek baar milna chahiye aabhi aabhi twelth ka exam diya hai aur medical field main jaana chahathi hai."

"Very interesting girl." Tushar went on, "Haan actually uske baare main kuch aur bhi note kiya. Dad vo kaiye baar apne chaha aur chachi ko name se bulathi hai."

"Naam se as in Dhilip aur Naina shayad unke ghar ke aadad hai." Bajaj brushed it off, "Nahi Mr. aur Mrs. Khanna, jaise vo koi paraya insan se baath kar rahi hai. Unlogon se bhi aise he behav karthi hai. Lekin bahoth sharp hai, koi bhi baath use chodkar nahi chalthi hai. Dr. Ragav apne ek patient ke baare main bol rahe the, is ladki ne kuch aise sawal kar rahi thi jaise vo kud ek docter hai. He was really impressed with her! Ithni achi brake through diya usne vo case ke liye aur donon pure raath kafi sare cases discuss kar rahe the."

"Oh! Vo ladki haan muje aab yaad aaya maine use deka tho tha Dr. Ragav se baath karthe hue lekin mil nahi paya. She was wearing a light blue dress right?" Bajaj asked, "Haan dad that's her, hamare is hospital ke kaam sahi haath main hai."

Tushar complimented people rearly and when he did, it was from the heart. The Bajaj home was a place always filled with love where differenciation was not existent.

Back in the Khanna manson Angad who had just finnished his brakefast picked up an apple and walked out biting into it as he took a small box file Dhilip had givien to him, his project for the summer. A little away Shalaka was speaking to some one on her mobile, "Haan kabar paka hai vo ladki zarur vahan aayegi aaj."

"Teek hai tum hamesha un logon par nazar rako aur hame bathathe raho." he replied, "Zarur bai aap bhi unlogn ke liye ek aank aur khaan kule rak dijiye."

"Kehena zaruri hai kya. Raktha hoon." he replied, just as Shalaka was about to keep the phone down a voice from behind asked her, "Kis se baath kar rahi thi?"

"MUKTI aap ne tho muje daradiya." Mukti stood leaning agaisnt the door with a look of indiference on her face, "Dika de raha hai, kise baath kar rahi thi?"

"Apne pariwar waalon se." she replied, the younger girl nodded, "Agar mere so called pariwar waalon ko patha chala tho..."

"Don't worry une kabhi patha nahi chalega. Not if I can help it darling." she added, "Janthi hoon, any ways main apne kuch friends ke saath..."

"When can we expect you back?" Shalaka knew Mukti too well, "Waqth ho jayega."

"Have fun love." Shalaka waved Mukti good by! Just as Mukti left a girl dressed in a blue denim skirt and an offer shoulder yellow top with blue vertical stripes. She was wearing an platinum chain and pendent with yellow stones set in the shape of a flower with matching earings. Her face was set with heavy make up, "Good morning Ms. Anita."

This was Anita Khanna the darling daughter of the Khanna's. "Good morning, main apne shopping ke liye ja rahi hoon. Project ke kaam ke liye, agar mere liye koi call aaya tho unlogon ko bol dena."

"I will do that aap ko kuch aur chahiye?" she asked, "Haan aaj se main ithna chakar maath dalo I don't want to be fat like that Mukti. Samje?"

"I will take care of that ma'am." she agred with a smile but internally felt like slapping Anita. That girl really had an attitude problem!

Krishi
Edited by shakthi258 - 16 years ago

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