I fell in love (Ak) Updated PART5 pg9

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"Somewhere between our cute fights I fell in love with you "

Synopsis:

Friendship or love? What will she choose? First friendship comes between her and ends everything and then when she finds love, He ruins it all again. Does she deserve this? Is he worth it, who she loves unconditionally?

Characters:

Angad Khanna:

A commerce student of Excel college. A very charming guy in the college. He is a complicated guy no one knows what is next logic is. An extreme person. An arrogant and rude person. ( more details as story develops )

Kripa Sharma : A very sweet yet beautiful girl. Very emotional cries in seconds. Trusts everyone easily. (more details as story develops )

Prithvi Bose : A very sensible guy. Elder than Angad and kripa. More detail as story develops.

Aliya Khan : kripa's bestfriend. Who knows her more than anyone else. Warns her of everything.

Mahi Roy : Kiripa's other best friend who guides her on every step of life.

(More characters will be introduced accordingly as the story progresses )

Background :

" uffo aliya aisa kuch nae hai, I know na. He just takes me as a friend" kripa said to her bestfriend.

" kripa main bata rae hoon, I think he likes you." Says aliya.

" arey, why out of all the girls me? Im just ordinary . And Prithvi Bose you know can find any girl for his charms. From the past record I have been informed that there are several girls who love him So It's not me the one he likes ." Says kripa.

" That I don't know. I think he really likes you. " Says Aliya.

" acha. We'll see" says kripa.

" hmm.. aur batayee? Kya ho raha hai ?" says aliya.

" Wait.. Aliya he texted. =/ "says a confused kripa.

" itna late ?" says aliya.

" that's what I am wondering, he never texts so late!" Says kripa

"hahah lets see what he says" says aliya.

" suno I'll talk to you later. I'll see what he says and then I'll update you okay ?"

says lripa.

" haan okay ! takecare." Says aliya.

And then kripa hangs the phone. She's confused why is prithvi texting her 2 am in morning?

Prithvi texted :

Hey kripa, whatsup ? <3

Kripa :

Hey umm.. nm you tell what are you upto?

Prithvi :

Nothing Nothing Just wondering. :P

Kripa :

About ?

Prithvi :

Kripa I need to confess something.

Kripa:

Confess what ?

Prithivi :

Something.. :D

Next part :

Prithvi confesses. Kripa Confused.

I await your comments. Hope you like the story. =]

Takecare,

Laraib.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice ontro.
waiting for Angad's entry.
hope Angad is not a negative character.
pm me wen u update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks alot. Yeal i will. Lets see. Sure i will Pm you all
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great part.. continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankyou for the comments :)
I will update soon :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

Kripa :

What something ?

Prithvi :

Kripa I really like this girl, do you think I should tell her ?

Kripa :

Umm I guess yeah.

Prithvi :

Kripa I really like you.

Kripa :

Umm .. Okay.

Kripa is confused what to do next.

Prithvi :

What okay ? I need an answer.

Kripa :

Listen prithvi I never thought about you that way I need time.

Prithvi :

Kripa I can wait. Take your time. Don't make any rash decision.

Kripa:

Thanks prithvi. Anyway I'll talk to you in the morning. Good night and take care.

Prithvi :

Okay goodnight love. Sweet dreams =]

Kripa was perplexed. Prithvi had always been a very good friend. Someone who she was close to. He understood her well and had always helped her out. If she says No then she's going to lose him and about yes she was confused. She called up Aliya.

"aliya he asked me out !" says a confused kripa.

" haha see I told you ! Now what you'll do ?" said aliya

" umm I don't know I need time. " Said kripa.

" Whatever you'll do, think practically before taking a decision. " Said aliya.

"Yeah ! anyway I need some sleep too tired " said a perplexed kripa

"okay goodnight. " said aliya.

Kripa was stressed out. There was too much going on her mind. What to do? Was the question! She was confused what to do and this resulted in a sleepless night. She couldn't sleep and when ever she slept she woke up with a startle. Prithvi kept coming in her dreams. She woke up in the morning by prithvi's message.

" hello sunshine. Are you awake ?"

She replied " hey.. Umm yeah ! =) "

He replied " Did you sleep well ? =P "

She " Umm yeah ! Listen I'll talk to you in a while. Hope you don't mind "

He replied " Umm sure take your time. I await my answer and I know you won't disappoint me "

" We'll see" she replied.

Next part :

Answer.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow cool i hope kripa refuse him , cool part thx for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey that waz an aweosme part. Plzzz continue soon. Cn u PM me when u update!! Thnks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i love the part LARAIB 😉 ... it's amazinggg jaaniii 😆

love,aliya!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha aliya can u relate the story line to someone ??:P

HAHAHA

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