Rahul-Muskaan/Atul-Anjali FF: Rishta IMP NOTE PG30

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

Thanks for the Awesome Part!!

Rahul- (realizes she's no longer angry with him so he hugs her around the waist and kisses her on the stomach considering he was sitting) Muskaan eik baat bataoon? 😍

Muskaan- (grabs his arm and pulls him back down on the swing and gives him an innocent look) Tu mujhe yahaan chodke jaa raha hai? 😆

Rahul- (shakes his head in disbelief) Muskaan, jaana, tu kitni badi nautanki hai yaar. (starts laughing)

very cute!! thank you the long update!!! and there is no way i was thinking when is this going to end... i actually was a little sad when it ended 😆

continue soon!! thanks 😊

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Imane

@accountband

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

Hey dost!
Wow i am so honored that you have dedicated this part towards me...
Actually i feel like i didn't deserve it....Your writing is mind blowing...
Seriously i felt like just reading it over and over after the 2nd time i read this part....Everything falls perfectly in to the screenplay..."Anjul" were so cute and "Khushal" are no less if not more...RaMusk will always top them because you have woven their characters so beautifully...it's just amazing...I am runnning out of words to describe how brilliant your work is...Seriously Dost "tussi te vadey alented ho, koi drama shama produce kyun nahi karte" LOL....i would so watch it if you produced it...Thanks again...And seriously i didn't deserve the dedication as you are way better of a writer than me but thank you for everything...

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: imane568
Hey dost!
Wow i am so honored that you have dedicated this part towards me...
Actually i feel like i didn't deserve it....Your writing is mind blowing...
Seriously i felt like just reading it over and over after the 2nd time i read this part....Everything falls perfectly in to the screenplay..."Anjul" were so cute and "Khushal" are no less if not more...RaMusk will always top them because you have woven their characters so beautifully...it's just amazing...I am runnning out of words to describe how brilliant your work is...Seriously Dost "tussi te vadey alented ho, koi drama shama produce kyun nahi karte" LOL....i would so watch it if you produced it...Thanks again...And seriously i didn't deserve the dedication as you are way better of a writer than me but thank you for everything...

Meri dost!!!!

Imane... meri dost, meri yaar, SHUT UPPPPPPP!!!! Of course you deserve it! Ki formailities ich pe jaandi hai. Jhalli.

🤣 you read it twice! 🤣 I was wondering if anybody would be able to get through it once. 🤣

Yaar actually that whole scene that Kunal flashbacked is a small excerpt form my Atul-Anjali ff. I wrote that part on my birthday last year. 😆 haven't updated since then, but i need to. Ever since I came up with the term "Anjul," me and Borna have been trying to promote it in the oasis.

Arre of course RM will always be first. They're.... RM. 😆

🤣 Main? Drama? Produce? Je main koi drama shama produce kitta the odde flop hon de vadde high chances ne. 🤣 Partner ship karde ne. Tussi kyun nahi produce karde, taan saare promotions ich investment lagaa daangi. Or better yet, I'lll act. Main toh ex-model bhi hoon. 🤣 I used to model when i was younger, and did hair and eye commercials when i was in middle school. I don't think it airs anymore, but i did an Oscar Meier commercial when I was 5. 🤣

You're not welcome... AGAIN. and seriously... i'm going to hurt you if you try to be formal with me! 😆 Aur yeh thanks thanks kya lagaa rakha hai? Enugh already dude! 😆

love you hameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesha!

Komzie

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

hey AWESOME part!!

and also i don't mind it at all being it this long....actually i love long parts!!

thanks for the pm!!

do continue soon!!

Thanks hun!

I'm glad you didn't lose your patience.... because I did. 🤣

Anytime. I'll PM u when I update.

- Komz

Originally posted by: paki_angel
wow evrytng writtin to such detail, just loved it WOW!!!!

thanks 4 da PM

Thank you so much! I''m glad u liked it.

You're welcome! 😊 I'll PM u again when I update.

-Komz

Originally posted by: divyashaz
Oh Sorrry Gabbar sorry reee galte se tuji Thakkur bola!!! Ab jaldi Basanti nu maff kar!!! pleejjj!!! 😵
Awww u Dedicated to Basanti aswell!! cho cweeet thxx!!! 😳 im soooooooo Loving Kunal n Kushi!!! reminds me of RM !!!😳 The rain part was soo adoreble but Rahul why dosnt he like Rain!😔but i loved it whn he lifted her up!! in his arms!!😍 nways!!! awesum update us usual!!!👏 👏!!! i sooo loved this part!! 😳 😳 😳
Rahul- (struggling with the drying) Uh'

Muskaan- (shook her head with a smile) Laa mujhe de. (starts to dry his hair)

Rahul- (realizes she's no longer angry with him so he hugs her around the waist and kisses her on the stomach considering he was sitting) Muskaan eik baat bataoon?

Muskaan- Bol.

Rahul- (pulls her down onto his lap) I love you. (moves in to kiss her) 😍 😍 😍 😍

Srsly Ghabbar ab wait nahi hota next update takk!!! 😳 😳

do conitnue sooon!!!!

Love you!!

Basanti!! <3<3<3 !!

Oye maaf kitta. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi! 😆

Uh.... dedications mein agar Basanti likha hai toh obviously Basanti ko bhi kiya hoga. 🤣 You're welcome yaar.

I love K-K too! 😆 I know, like I said, they're a remixed version of RM.

Rahul ko rain kyun nahi pasand? Uh... Rahul se pooch ke bataoongi. 🤣 Dude... it's just conveniet that way. Agar dono ko pasand hui toh bohot gadbad ho jaati if you know what i mean. 😉

Sorry Basanti. You have to wait until next week. I update every week na. I would update sooner if my parts weren't so long. 😆 but then i hate reading short parts so likewise, i can understand how you guys feel when u read short parts. that's why i write long parts. It's better to let the reader have the full meal instead of only giving them a taste and then making them pine for more. 😆

I'll PM you when I update.

love u!

Gabbar

Originally posted by: RM_lover
SOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUTEEEEEEEE
LOVED RM SCENE

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: Kanika05

OMG Komzii dii!! Thats such a fabulous FF!! I read the whole thing & now im absolutely in love with everything you wrotee!! 👏👏

Awww.. everything is soo adorable.. all the bonds between each character are so special!😳

Loved the RM flashbacks...sooo cutee! though i wasnt ever an AA fan but love them here!!😳

luv the way you are progressing wid Khushi & Kunal's love story.. No drama, tears & stuff... Just a Simple Cute Love Story...Awwww😳

And Khushi & Kunal are so like RM..😆

btw i love the letter 'K' and generally i tend to like all the people with K as their first initial😆 Weird no?...so many K's here... Komz di, Khushi, Kunal, Khushal and me tooo😆 he he...

btw.. i wonder where Rahul is?😕

continue soon.. and PM me if possible!!

Kanika😳

Hey Kanu! My shona! 🤗How are you jaan? It's been a while naa!

Thanks so much for taking the time out to read it bachha. I'm glad i could get you to like AA here. You already know that I'm a strong RM and AA fan toh how could I write anything without AA. 😉

Khushi-Kunal can't have drama or tears in their love story because they're characters are very vibrant and a good balance of loud and soft. If I added any sort of that crap to them, it would destroy their characters completely. 😊 Yes Kunal-Khushi are absolutely like RM with a hint of AA plus their own spice adds to it. Remixed version of RM.

You love the letter K? Ekta ki choti behen toh nahi ho naa? 😆 Well I feel very honored that you like me.

Yes, the ultimate question... WHERE IS RAHUL.... you'll find out as the story progresses. I have everything planned. 😉

I will definitely PM u when I update. 😊

luv u!

Komzie Di

Originally posted by: Sab93
This part was great!!! i love long parts.
both the RM flashbacks and the Khushi-Kunal parts were

soo cute!!!!! Thanks for updating, and continue sooon!!!!

<333 Saby

Haha I'm glad that you do Saby! Otherwise I would have been in a lot of trouble from a lot of readers! 😆

You're welcome hun. I'll PM you when I update. Thanks for the lovely comments.

<333 Komz

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HI KOMZIE!!!

WHAT A CUTE FUNNY PART!!

LOVED IT YAAR!!

KUSHI AND KUNAL ARE FANTASTIC...

AND SO LIKE RM!!

THEY ALL ARE SO ADORABLE!!

WILL WAIT 4 NEXT PART!!

CONTINUE SOON!!

SEE YAAA

LOVE UUU!!

Hey Monu!

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Yaar, aaj toh saare keh rahe hain that KK are like RM. Yes they're a remixe version of RM. 😛

I'll PM you when I update.

See ya!

Love you tooooooo!

-Komz

Originally posted by: ibdt2004
Thanks for the Awesome Part!!

Rahul- (realizes she's no longer angry with him so he hugs her around the waist and kisses her on the stomach considering he was sitting) Muskaan eik baat bataoon? 😍

Muskaan- (grabs his arm and pulls him back down on the swing and gives him an innocent look) Tu mujhe yahaan chodke jaa raha hai? 😆

Rahul- (shakes his head in disbelief) Muskaan, jaana, tu kitni badi nautanki hai yaar. (starts laughing)

very cute!! thank you the long update!!! and there is no way i was thinking when is this going to end... i actually was a little sad when it ended 😆

continue soon!! thanks 😊

Hey Shilpa! You are very very welcome! I'm glad to see a comment from you. Finally caught up huh?

The long update, again, was completely accidental! I kinda couldn't stop. 🤣 WHAT????!!! You wanted it to be longer still? God woman, where's the limit? 🤣

I'll PM u when I update!

Love,

Komz

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

Awesome part!!!

Thanks for the PM...

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ejaz_lover

@ejaz_lover

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

wow.. awesome part komal.. loved it :)

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

wow Komal, i absolutely loved this part!!! dialogues were mind blowing yaar!! AA were so cute as usual. Loved the whole over-acting drama in the beginning. Kunal and Atul were tooo funny!! i just love Kunal and Khushi's chemistry. Their parts are always sooo cute. Love ur flashbacks- especially the one with RM in the rain.

Let me break down some special dialogues from today:

"Oh please. Yeh paagal hai iss se zyaada proof tumhe aur kya chahiye ke yeh tumhaara hi beta hai" – favorite dialogue
from Anjali, i was cracking up

Khushi- (laughs and then looks at him all dramatically) Nahi Kunal nahi. Aise dukhi mat ho. Mujhse tumhaari yeh haalat nahi dekhi jaati! (fake cries and then starts laughing when Kunal gives her an annoyed expression)
Kunal- (irritated) Hatt! (leaves while Khushi laughs)

i thought this part was sooo funny with Khushi also acting and i could totally imagine how Kunal would have said Hatt!! lol

Another favorite dialogue:

"Abbey utth! Meri kamar toot jaayegi! (she gets off of him quickly and he sits up) Pata nahi kaunsi chakki ka aata khaati hai. Mujh jaise hatte katte bachhe ko bhi thod diya!"

and when they were cooking and how Kunal was like
"Khushi, I don't understand alien."- that was too funny

and and and the best of all was.....
"Arre yaar tum kya itne time se ladki ladki ladki kar rahi ho. Tumhe… ladkiyaan pasand hain kya?"

God that one just drove me crazy 🤣

Komal, i think this has to be my favorite part from this FF. the fact that it was longer made it even better, that's y i even gave a longer comment, just couldn't resist!! I am desperately waiting for the next part!!!!! Love You!!!!

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MrsMaanKhurana

@MrsMaanKhurana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

wow..great part..thanks for the pm....and by the way...i love long parts..this was jst amazing..i love the rahul-muskaan scene and i love kunal and khushi's story...it's so cute..please continue soon!!

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

hey komzi....it was very very cuteee part yaaar...loved Anjul and Khushal part...soo cute and love Kunal and khushi..they r awesome loved all RM flashback...AMAZING part...please continue sooon..thank u soo much for pm