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hi, i am unable to open the page, can u plz repost it, or pm me the part...thanx.........
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chapter five:

hope you all enjoy this part?my next part on Sunday?.i will make my next part a little romantic?

" MARRIAGES ARE MADE IN HEAVEN"

Its evening, both families sat together?.they were smiling now?.happy...?all discussed about the reception?

Nupur had noticed his name when she signed for their official registration and now she knows his name?"mayank Sharma".she remember her mom would say more of his business tricks to her dad?he is moms friends son?but now her husband?.mayank noticing her very often?.he had look at her he thought she is beautiful....his inner heart never let him to think more?..he know he has no right to marry her without her permission?but what let me do that,he was thinking but it was too hard for him to search an answer for his own question?.nupur gave a glance at mayank...she thought he is handsome...both were in their own thoughts of each other?..they were thinking of the fate...both felt their life to be full of suspens....and now it's a high and tough time when gunjan and samrat made them feel lighter?.they both came near the newly married couples and wished them a good luck?.

They made introduction to all?samrat came near nupur and said let me introduce my family?he took her to his mom and said this my sweet mom and now your mother in law?you will like her a lot?.our best buddy?..both nupur and shilpa hugged with a smile?.

Next he took nupur to his brother our 1st purab and her wife suji?..both gave her pleasant smile,their marriage is a love marriage?.nupur looked at samrat and smiled?.

she looked at the babby they are holding?and said how cute,before she could finish,samrat said and she is harshithi 2yr old...cute?and sweetheart of the family?.nupur smiled taking harshithi in her hand?.

She love babies?gunjan said?.and now its my turn to introduce my family to mayank?.mayank smiled at her?.but samrat you forgot to say about you,anyways i will say?he is the 3rd brother and my best friend too?.oh nupur smiled at both?.

Gunjan said am nupurs sister,samrat and myself study in the same college?.mayank gave a smile to gunjan she continued?my mom keerthi bushan and he is my dad sushil bushan ?.both care lot for me and nupur?.

Ok samrat said hold on now its fine we had a great intro to both the families but still 2 more characters to be introduced to each other?.

Gunjan too smiled and said yes we will introduce both newly married couples and will leave them to talk for sometime?.

its simply superb and new tradition....all laughed.....hearing them saying it....
And now gunjan took nupur near mayank and said she is nupur bushan?.samrat who interfered said now she is mrs.nupur Sharma?all laughed both mayank and nupur too enjoyed their talk?.gunjan continued ,she is 24yr old?finished her MBA?.two years back?..she is working as a partner in our own company?very talented?most talkative?and looked at mayank sadly?.really am feeling sad for you?.nupur didn't allow her to continue anymore?.she closed her mouth and looked at mayank smiling?.

Samrat looked at his brother and said he is mayank Sharma?.27 yr old business man?he is unique,more talented too?both my brothers are hard working?his qualification MBA?so both are same in ur studies?great?.mayank always cares for our family a lot?.more u should only say in a few days?.he said smiling at nupur?.

Shilpa who came near samrat said ok you both will continue talking so better we all will leave them alone let them talk freely?all went out leaving nupur and mayank alone for some time??

They both stared at each other for some time?.till yesterday they were strangers but now husband and wife?they were standing inside the same room.......both wanted to talk something but waited giving some time for each other to talk?mayank stood and started as he was feeling more guilty he wanted to say sorry to her?he came near to nupur who was standing near the window??he absorbed her she looks stunning in her red colored lehenga?.just then he saw her fighting back with her tears?he just turned her and said nupur "am really sorry"?nupur just cried helplessly?mayank said am sorry nupur I was not in my control actually?.nupur looked up at him and said "thank you very much"you saved me?but am sorry?mayank was shocked to say nupur sorry.. why you are asking sorry nupur?.suddenly nupur replied you may had many ideas of your future but because of me you are the one suffering saying it she started crying more?.mayank was like oh god what a girl is she? am feeling bad for what I have done but she was thinking about me till now?he couldn't control himself seeing her crying like that?he pushed her into his arms?she felt more comfortable in his arms?.she was indeed needing an arm to cry ?.they were standing for a little long till samrat shouted brother come down you both had a long time?nupur came out of her crying and looked at mayank ?.mayank looked at her smiled,he shouted samrat we are coming man?.

mayank said look nupur i was the one wanted to ask sorry and please you are not the one to ask for pardon...just forget it....lets be good friends.....nupur smiled and shake her with his most awaiting hand?.

They were friends?

all had their dinner and both the parents left to sleep?its fact they were tired?.but not worried anymore?.they were happy enough?purab,suji,samrat,gunjan,mayank,nupur were seated in the hall?..suji suggested that lets all go to the terrace it will be more fun?all found it us a great plan?..nupur was busy playing with harshithi?.she was seated near suji?.suji asked nupur you like babies huh?.nupur nodded with a big smile and you know I love harshirhi?.suji said in a low voice hold it, mayank may feel bad?.then he may get jealous of harshithi?she smiled knowing that she is teasing her?.she looked up catched mayanks eyes?he was also watching her?seeing her he raised his eyebrows questioningly?she just said nothing?..samrat who watched just raised his voice oh whats going on?..mayank just patted his back like nothing? purab who found his daughter sleeping on nupurs lap gave a voice to suji?see harshi slept?lets go down am tired too?..
samrat said then ok brother you take harshi and go down to sleep?.bhabhi wont come?.he holded her hand without leaving her hand....purab looked at suji ?.she stood and took harshi and said me too tired?.you guys enjoy?..am sorry samrat....samrat said its ok bhabhi good night....

Gunjan was lying on her sisters lap was talking with mayank about her college and her studies?.she was saying how samrat and she became frds?samrat said stop it yaar always talking about studies... and he gave look at gunjan and said you know i hate studying?..nupur was now on samrats side?.plz stop talking about studies?gunjan looked at her sister seeing her supporting samrat..mayank said ok gunjan,lets discuss it later...gunjan too said fine ok cool no more talk on studies....

Mayank said ok?so whats tomorrows plan?.samrat said lets go to beach?gunjan said shopping?mayank looked at nupur to answer?.samrat said brother you too on your wife side huh?.nupur said lets go to beech?mayank said ok fine after shoping we will go to beach...lets have our dinner out?.all were tired now so lets go and take rest?.

Nupur and gunjan went to sleep when samrat and mayank slept in another room?mayank called nupur and said good night?nupur replied good night?both were thinking of each other slept smilingly?next it would be a great day to enjoy??

let me know is thi too short update....plz let me know friends....
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Posted: 16 years ago
plzz continue soon.....m waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago

hai friends thank you all for ur lovely comments...hahaha now i cant open page 18 and 20 dont know why????but anyways ...okay part 5 was short so i now i need to type more than 15 pages in microsoft word then you guys will be satisfied and say it as long one huh....mmmm let me try that too....am happy all guys enjoy reading my ff...couldnt comment on each one comment....very sorry for that....but i read all the comments....love you all guys...i will pm you...when i post my next update....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
updating 2day...am sure its gonna be lenghthy one....so i expect no complaints that its short...i guess 2day at 4.oo i will be updating...i will pm u all.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
how much time you take for the update anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
yet 15 more min dear just editing...sorry for delay..
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Chapter six

No more worries,next day morning?it was 7.30 am when nupur wake up and she took leasurley bath and came out she was wearing casual shalwar kameez?..lavender mixed with yellow suited her?she was seated in front of the mirror?nupur thought of yesterday,she is married,looked at her mangalsutra,her mind thought of the incident but not to rahul?she smiled thinking of mayank?nupur came out of her thought ,she was ready now?she looked pretty enough as usual?she went near gunjan seeing her eyes opened wished her good morning ?gunjan wished her again?gunjan who looked at her and said you look gorgeous and closed her eyes to sleep once more?nupur kissed her forehead?gunjan was the one who cares for me a lot,she love her sister more than anything..came out of the room adjusting her shall just bumped into the opposite person?it was mayank?they had a short eyelock?mayank said gud mrg nupur?nupur too wished him gd mrg?mayank said lets go down come?nupur asked for samrat?he told he is sleeping?I guess gunjan is also sleeping?am I rt?he asked?nupur noded her head?both went down smiling faces??..

Shilpa was happy to see them smiling all had a small pooja?..

Nupur saw her parents she knows how their feelings would be?.she smiled at them?.sushil came near nupur and hugged her and just said sorry nupur?he was hardly controlling his tears?nupur said dad I know you both love me?its nothing what you have done?.please you don't feel guilty?she too had tears?shilpa said ok stop crying past is past?.please don't cry she looked at mayank?mayank too said yes uncle we just leave it and we all will keep her happy?he said in a promising tone?shilpa smiled at his son?.all smiled?.

Keerthi hugged her daughter ?and said I thought you would wear saree?shilpa too said yes I want you to see u in saree?nupur looked at both and said you both want me too change my dress?.mayank said mom its ok she is good in her salwar?.shilpa smiled at this..ok fine may be tomorrow?she said sure aunty?..shilpa said if u don't mind u can call me mom?nupur said yes mom?mayank smiled?

Mayank ? where is bhaya,bhabhi?they are sleeping till now huh?

Mom-no no purab went to office in the morning,some important meeting huh?he told and went early this morning?

Mayank-yes mom I too forgot but y didn't he remind me?..

Mom-he told he will manage,if you want u call purab and talk but ur not going to the office for one week atleast?you got it?.

Mayank-(was shocked)what 1 week?its impossible mom?I have many works to go on?.let me talk to bhaya?he dialed his no?

Purab-hello mayank

Mayank-bhaya I will be there within 1hour?he was cut off by his bro voice

Purab-hold on..mayank,I have postponed all your meetings to next week?today I have manged enough?you know your brother?.please enjoy yourself man?.you better take your wife outside?

Mayank-he smiled ok bhaya.thanks

Purab-common mayank no formalities?bye?..

Mom-ok just stop talking officially,I want to ask you both about your reception?you both fix a date and say it in evening?.

Both noded?

Samrat-came down holding harshithi in his hand saying mom when are we leaving home?.

Mom-tomorrow?

Samrat-said fine mom,but now am really hungry?.

Keerthi-yeah,come breakfast is ready?lets go and have it?

Gunjan-joined them in between?

After their break fast they planned for going to the shopping?now all were ready to leave the home?nupur looked at suji,

Nupur-suji your not coming huh? (As both had 1yr suji suggested nupur to call her by name)

Suji-no nupur,harshi will not remain queit?.u all enjoy?let us plan for the another day?

Mom-suji I will take care of harshi you join them?

Suji-its ok mom?no problem,she smiled..

So now its samrat,gunjan and mayank and nupur are in car?they went to the shoping?.mayank and nupur were left at back?samrat was driving the car with gujan seated near by her?.both of them busy talking about their college issues?.

Mayank-nupur actually you look good in your casual wearings?I guess you like wearing jeans?and those pink top really suited you?

Nupur-she was really confused of him now..how did he know I love wearing jean?

Mayank-why no answer?

Nupur-yes I like wearing jean but how do you know mayank?she asked eagerly?

Mayank-remember I and sammy was in your room,so I just had look at all of your pictures?in all you were wearing jeans?I guessed it should be your favourite?

Nupur-smiled?

Mayank-you know onething he whispered in her ears you look good in all you wear..

Nupur-she couldn't say anything but said thanks?

They entered into the shopping complex?.as they entered?all suggested to by nupur something first?samrat and gunjan had planned something else?they want mayank and nupur to purchase alone?..

Some voice came calling samrat?hearing both samrat and gunjan smiled teasingly?.there came their gang?.its benji,uday,dia,amrin,shiv?.all came there smiling enough?.samrat and gunjan had some fun and gave intro to mayank and nupur....all wished them?

Benji-so where is the treat Sammy?

Amrin-we need a double treat yaar?..

Nupur-asked y double treat huh?.

All answered in chorus 1 for marriage and 2 for gunjan and samrat had became realations?.

Mayank-smiled said enough enough?.treat is waiting for you all guys ?lets go?

Nupur-mmmmh yes come on lets go?

Samrat-said bhaya but we are here for purchasing ok lets do like this better you both purchase and join us for the luch?

Mayank-now where are you going yaar?come with us all of you?

Gunjan-we will be round here with our gang,you both finish your purchase and join us?

Nupur-gunjan?.nupur was stopped by mayank?

Mayank-nupur let them enjoy with the friends,ofcourse what they are gonna do over there??.we both will finish the purchase and join them?

Nupur-felt ok?.

Now all samrat,gunjan,and all laughed at their plan succeded?they went to benjis house and they had fun?

Mayank-said ok shall we go?

Nupur-followed him?

They entered the jewelery shop?nupur looked confusingly at mayank...he went to the rings section?

Nupur-mayank we have not planned purchase some dress materials but you?.

Mayank-yes after buying ring we can purchase that no problem in that?

Nupur-but it not needed now mayank?

Mayank-so I guess the ring what your wearing is ok huh?

Nupur-couldn't answer that?it was the encagement ring?which rahul had weared?in no other she had tears rolling?.

Mayank-nupur i am sorry,if had hurt you,

Nupur-suddenly said no?saying it she removed the ring?

Mayank-smiled and said good?now smile?no more tears..

Now they were shown with a some pattern of rings?nupur was seeing all?

Mayank-he showed a platinum ring with single stone in center?it looked really nice

Nupur-she really liked it?he just took the ring and placed it in her hand?

Mayank-said to the sales man I will pay after I purchase my ring?..

Sales man-yes sir

Nupur-purchased a gold pattern round ring for him and as per his demand she placed it in his hand?.she liked it very much?

They payed for the ring they purchased?.when they came out nupur who wanted to know something asked him?

Nupur-mayank you already had the plan of buying ring huh she asked enthusiastically?

Mayank said actually nupur it was my mom who told to buy a ring for?he actually lied..he was not in a mood to say the truth?something made him to lie?.nupur was little disappointed with it but was happy enough thinking of shilpa?nupur was happy hearing him saying see now we are encaged?but that too a different encagement?both smiled .Then they went to buy a dress for their reception..

Mayank-lets keep the reception on Sunday nupur,after then I may be busy in my schedule so I cant?

Nupur-she nodded?

They had purchased for mayank?.it was creamy colored sherwani?now its for nupur?

Mayank-hey select fast yaar,your taking so much time on selecting one saree....now I get to know why bhaya is afraid to out for shopping with bhabhi?

Nupur-mayank,I like both the sarees,I cant deside what to select?please help me na?

Mayank-I told you to go with your jean and tops but you neglected what can I do now?.....

Nupur-please mayank,don't play help me yaar?

Mayank-better buy both,that would do…

Nupur- looked like are you mad…it cost more…I prefer any one…

Mayank-am gonna pay…y r u worried of cost…he told them pack both the sarees….

Nupur-hmmm lazy fellow,

Mayank-hey am not lazy you know am feeling hungry…

Nupur-ok,where to search for samrat and gunjan…

Mayank-Lets give them a call nupur…before he could pick up the cellphone….he heard samrats voice nearby….

Samrat-so both of you finished your purchase huh….now lets go to the hotel my friend are waiting for their treat….

Mayank-fine purchased…lets go now….they went to the place reserved to them…they ordered foods and shared it with all…at last they ordered an icecream and finished their lunch…nupur opened it was really great to spend time with you all,we all enjoyed now we are too much jealous on your family…all are really friendly said uday.

Dia-you both are made for each other,look really great….samrat and gunjan were really lucky…

Gunjan-ok guys enough….so whats the next plan.

Amrin-lets go to a movie what say you all,..

all suggested the same so they went to a movie…after that they went back home…

to be continued....i will post my next part 2mrw...hope u all enjoy..
Edited by anurikita - 16 years ago
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wait i will edit my post yaar.........

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