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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

😊Hey dear!!!!

Was disappointed with the short update but it was veryyyyyy nice. Plz continue asap.

Luv u !!!

Vinu

sorry dear 2mrw i will try to post another part....thz
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Posted: 16 years ago

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awesome👏 part yaar cant wait for the next part plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update it soooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz .& plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz make it little longer plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

sure dear....😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

My next part 2mrw…2day sorry for the short update…I will defenitly make a long one 2mrw…

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Posted: 16 years ago
i felt very sad when saw this short update.
but now happy that ur next update may be a longer one
thanx a lot 4 ur nice story.
plz add me on ur PM list if u have no problem.

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow anurikita!!
that's great
tooo goood!!
cnt wait 4 next
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!
great part, u rite vey well it was short but was worth it
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Posted: 16 years ago
plzz continue soon.....m adicted 2 ur ff......u write so well
plzz pm when u update.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

chapter five:

hope you all enjoy this part?my next part on Sunday?.i will make my next part a little romantic?

" MARRIAGES ARE MADE IN HEAVEN"

Its evening, both families sat together?.they were smiling now?.happy...?all discussed about the reception?

Nupur had noticed his name when she signed for their official registration and now she knows his name?"mayank Sharma".she remember her mom would say more of his business tricks to her dad?he is moms friends son?but now her husband?.mayank noticing her very often?.he had look at her he thought she is beautiful....his inner heart never let him to think more?..he know he has no right to marry her without her permission?but what let me do that,he was thinking but it was too hard for him to search an answer for his own question?.nupur gave a glance at mayank...she thought he is handsome...both were in their own thoughts of each other?..they were thinking of the fate...both felt their life to be full of suspens....and now it's a high and tough time when gunjan and samrat made them feel lighter?.they both came near the newly married couples and wished them a good luck?.

They made introduction to all?samrat came near nupur and said let me introduce my family?he took her to his mom and said this my sweet mom and now your mother in law?you will like her a lot?.our best buddy?..both nupur and shilpa hugged with a smile?.

Next he took nupur to his brother our 1st purab and her wife suji?..both gave her pleasant smile,their marriage is a love marriage?.nupur looked at samrat and smiled?.

she looked at the babby they are holding?and said how cute,before she could finish,samrat said and she is harshithi 2yr old...cute?and sweetheart of the family?.nupur smiled taking harshithi in her hand?.

She love babies?gunjan said?.and now its my turn to introduce my family to mayank?.mayank smiled at her?.but samrat you forgot to say about you,anyways i will say?he is the 3rd brother and my best friend too?.oh nupur smiled at both?.

Gunjan said am nupurs sister,samrat and myself study in the same college?.mayank gave a smile to gunjan she continued?my mom keerthi bushan and he is my dad sushil bushan ?.both care lot for me and nupur?.

Ok samrat said hold on now its fine we had a great intro to both the families but still 2 more characters to be introduced to each other?.

Gunjan too smiled and said yes we will introduce both newly married couples and will leave them to talk for sometime?.

its simply superb and new tradition....all laughed.....hearing them saying it....
And now gunjan took nupur near mayank and said she is nupur bushan?.samrat who interfered said now she is mrs.nupur Sharma?all laughed both mayank and nupur too enjoyed their talk?.gunjan continued ,she is 24yr old?finished her MBA?.two years back?..she is working as a partner in our own company?very talented?most talkative?and looked at mayank sadly?.really am feeling sad for you?.nupur didn't allow her to continue anymore?.she closed her mouth and looked at mayank smiling?.

Samrat looked at his brother and said he is mayank Sharma?.27 yr old business man?he is unique,more talented too?both my brothers are hard working?his qualification MBA?so both are same in ur studies?great?.mayank always cares for our family a lot?.more u should only say in a few days?.he said smiling at nupur?.

Shilpa who came near samrat said ok you both will continue talking so better we all will leave them alone let them talk freely?all went out leaving nupur and mayank alone for some time??

They both stared at each other for some time?.till yesterday they were strangers but now husband and wife?they were standing inside the same room.......both wanted to talk something but waited giving some time for each other to talk?mayank stood and started as he was feeling more guilty he wanted to say sorry to her?he came near to nupur who was standing near the window??he absorbed her she looks stunning in her red colored lehenga?.just then he saw her fighting back with her tears?he just turned her and said nupur "am really sorry"?nupur just cried helplessly?mayank said am sorry nupur I was not in my control actually?.nupur looked up at him and said "thank you very much"you saved me?but am sorry?mayank was shocked to say nupur sorry.. why you are asking sorry nupur?.suddenly nupur replied you may had many ideas of your future but because of me you are the one suffering saying it she started crying more?.mayank was like oh god what a girl is she? am feeling bad for what I have done but she was thinking about me till now?he couldn't control himself seeing her crying like that?he pushed her into his arms?she felt more comfortable in his arms?.she was indeed needing an arm to cry ?.they were standing for a little long till samrat shouted brother come down you both had a long time?nupur came out of her crying and looked at mayank ?.mayank looked at her smiled,he shouted samrat we are coming man?.

mayank said look nupur i was the one wanted to ask sorry and please you are not the one to ask for pardon...just forget it....lets be good friends.....nupur smiled and shake her with his most awaiting hand?.

They were friends?

all had their dinner and both the parents left to sleep?its fact they were tired?.but not worried anymore?.they were happy enough?purab,suji,samrat,gunjan,mayank,nupur were seated in the hall?..suji suggested that lets all go to the terrace it will be more fun?all found it us a great plan?..nupur was busy playing with harshithi?.she was seated near suji?.suji asked nupur you like babies huh?.nupur nodded with a big smile and you know I love harshirhi?.suji said in a low voice hold it, mayank may feel bad?.then he may get jealous of harshithi?she smiled knowing that she is teasing her?.she looked up catched mayanks eyes?he was also watching her?seeing her he raised his eyebrows questioningly?she just said nothing?..samrat who watched just raised his voice oh whats going on?..mayank just patted his back like nothing? purab who found his daughter sleeping on nupurs lap gave a voice to suji?see harshi slept?lets go down am tired too?..
samrat said then ok brother you take harshi and go down to sleep?.bhabhi wont come?.he holded her hand without leaving her hand....purab looked at suji ?.she stood and took harshi and said me too tired?.you guys enjoy?..am sorry samrat....samrat said its ok bhabhi good night....

Gunjan was lying on her sisters lap was talking with mayank about her college and her studies?.she was saying how samrat and she became frds?samrat said stop it yaar always talking about studies... and he gave look at gunjan and said you know i hate studying?..nupur was now on samrats side?.plz stop talking about studies?gunjan looked at her sister seeing her supporting samrat..mayank said ok gunjan,lets discuss it later...gunjan too said fine ok cool no more talk on studies....

Mayank said ok?so whats tomorrows plan?.samrat said lets go to beach?gunjan said shopping?mayank looked at nupur to answer?.samrat said brother you too on your wife side huh?.nupur said lets go to beech?mayank said ok fine after shoping we will go to beach...lets have our dinner out?.all were tired now so lets go and take rest?.

Nupur and gunjan went to sleep when samrat and mayank slept in another room?mayank called nupur and said good night?nupur replied good night?both were thinking of each other slept smilingly?next it would be a great day to enjoy??

let me know is thi too short update....plz let me know friends....
Edited by anurikita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
yes yes it waz very short but dam gud.....i felt lyk i need more continuation 4 it.....aww mayur r jus adorable....do continue soon...take care

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