mayur ff-never wnt dis 2 hpn NOTE-pg 149 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: anthara_mjht

Awesome awesome..

Very well written... keep continuing...😊

thx...😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy hieee.....u write so well...that i cant b pateint 4 ur next part....
when r u updating next...??? plzz update soon.......m waiting....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

heyy hieee.....u write so well...that i cant b pateint 4 ur next part....

when r u updating next...??? plzz update soon.......m waiting....

now updating it have a look....just 5min....am editing my post..plz hold on....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter four:

All had no idea for whats gonna happen next?time is running out only pure silence....where all was no mood of having any conversation?atlast it was none other than mr.bushan who broke up the silence?he came near shilpa?

Bushan: I want to talk with you personally mrs.shilpa?lets go to the guest room...we wanna discuss on this...so please...

Shilpa: sure I was also thinking about that..she followed him with keerthi..she was holding her hand,like whats gonna happen next?

Outside samrat and gunjan who was watching all, smiled at each other?no harm in their smiling?now they are more than friends?samrat murmured to gunjan in her ears..

Samrat: I couldn't believe it was mayank who did it?but yes what he had done is correct in my point of view?what do you feel gunjan?

Gunjan: me to happy and thankful to mayank..he saved my sister?more than that now we are good relations?

Samrat accepted her words with a sweet smile?now what next?

Gunjan looked up her sister she was not in a clear mind and so she said samrat next step I want to go near nupur?lets talk later?you too join me?both went near nupur...

she was seated like a doll?no reaction?she had no thought running in her mind and no intension of whats going on around?mayank was holding his head who was feeling guilty of what he had done had his eyes moving to nupur every now and then?he want to know what she is thinking.mayank was standing near his bro purab and suji?they too have nothing too say?both wished him?nothing more,,

Gunjan went near her sister held her hands,nupur whosaw her sisters started to cry silently by hugging....she murmured "you are correct gunjan....rahul is such a cruel fellow"?no more words came out of her.gunjan didnt allow her to talk about that....she told nupur plz stop crying all are fine...your safe now.....mayank who watched nupur crying felt more bad?he thought "am the reason for those tears.."

Inside the room?

Bushan who came near shilpa thanked her with his teary eyes..holding his hands?keerthi too had tears?

Shilpa who shocked said whats this?please both of you stop this thanking ?now am really happy that nupur is my bahu?.defenitely she is my daughter?and more..you know me very well...you don't like mayank ahh?she asked looking at keerthis eyes...

Both said in a single voice?

we are are happy mayank is our son in law.....He is our son...nupur is lucky?I know you all will make nupur happy?am so thankful to him...

Shilpa said no more quick descions we need nupur to accept her fact,we will give her some time then may be after some time we will keep the grand reception?may be one week?let her feel comfortable?

bushan's eyes were more teary...becoz of his stupidness what would have happend...if mayank was not there...he cant think more....he just thanked god for all......

Keerthi holded her hand thanking?
Shilpa you know am very happy to get a daughter in law like nupur,i know she will be lovable like you keerthi?

Keerthi smiled relieving?

bushan was now in a happy mood ,no more worries for him?
he compled shilpa to stay in their house for a week atleat.she too accepted it....she too wanted to talk with nupur...

Shilpa : I think mayank and nupur should talk alone for sometime?they both are not feeling good let us make them accept the fate...she smiled...

Both of them gave a smile as they came out with a smile.... they announced that the reception within a week is there so we all welcome you all for it?

they registered the marriage loyally.....they had been husband and wife...whats more left in their hearts.....
Now what nupur is thinking? mayanks feeling guilty....more on my next part....comment on it friends....
Edited by anurikita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
part was short but really very nice....
u rock....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
oh that was great now cant wait update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
oh wow......awesome part yaar.....i can't wait for the next part........ur ff is a unique one......keep it up pleease uodate soon.....pm me.😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
plz cont soon yaar it is too good
Edited by *~*riddhima*~* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
amazing FF!!! im luvin d storyline..
update soon & plz PM me!
Kanika
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thankyou 4 the treat.
Enjoyed it.
When r u updating next----curiosity has taken over me---very very interesting ff.
Love it.

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