mayur one shot ff- ice cream khayegi? - Page 5

Originally posted by: sugar.n.spice14

awwwww

yeh kitna shweeeeet tha sindhya dii..

mujhe to diabetes ho gaya!

aap kitna aacha likhte ho!!!

bohut khub!!!

--molii <33--

Originally posted by: sree_27

cho chweet yaar...made me smile instantly!!

Originally posted by: KHJL

OMG...this is soooooooooo damn cute....in fact it is the cutest ff/one shot i have ever read.....😳😛

superb...fantastic...fabulous...outstanding...mind blowing...👏

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! lil' mayu and lil' nups make such a toddly lil' couple...awwwwwwwww🤗

seriosly hun...u had me cracking up with their adorable dialogues...and luved the fact you played around with the original speeling of the words to have more effect of what the characters were saying...simply brilliant.....was actually able to pic most of the scenes....chooooo kute😳😳😳

kk as u can see i can just go on n on....lol...😆
but in one word that was wicked!!!👏
u should definitely write some more one shots for mayur...in fact why don't u continue with this one....hehe!😉

kk...later!
Lisa

Originally posted by: special-4u

really,sindhya its funny and awesome

choooooooo sweet of u😳 😳

Originally posted by: Kanika05

awww it was shoo shweett!!

Originally posted by: shruthinair

It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute.... adorable....

so sweet yaar

no rpobs adi.. luv ya

Awwwww! This is like the most adorable thing EVER!!! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!😃👍🏼
👍🏼CHO CHWEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!👏👏
👏Taniya.