Mere Saathi- AN FIC(DMG) part 21 pg 28 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the lovely comments and support!

She wanted to cry and scream because she had seen something that had felt real. She seemed to have happiness even temporally in dreams. How would she approach him? Would just walking in and telling him that she had the surreal experience of them being married melt his heart? She knew one thing was that she could never love again after Abhimanyu Modi. It was only him that could have ever given the love she had always longed for. Why had it taken her ten days to snap out of the coma?

She was more crushed because it seemed real but the fact that she was under that facade just added to her pain. In actuality she was far from having what she had during the coma. However she knew she had to make things right. Abhimanyu Modi had fallen for her once before when she hadn't really tried to win him over. Now Nikita Malhotra had to win him over with her charm and her courage.

Riddhima and Muskaan decided to let Nikita enter Abhimanyu's office alone. After all this was her fight and others had already interfered enough. Nikita sighed heavily. She had just awakened from a shattered dream and now all she wanted was to make a better reality as her future to make up for it.

She knocked on the door.

" Come in," he stated firmly..

She entered to see him engrossed in some paperwork. Texts and reports of various cases were spread out nearby. There must have been some interesting case in the past few days for him to be so focused.

Abhimanyu realizes the person who entered had not said a word to him yet. He looked up in astonishment to see Nikita standing in front of him. She wore the yellow hospital pajamas with her hair strewn around her shoulders. He had never expected for her to simply walk into his office like this after waking up. He had not known what to expect. He had researched on what could be causing her so long to wake up. He got up from his chair as he tried to comprehend how all this had been possible.

" Nikki tum yahan? You should be in your room. I mean we should move you to a regular room after we observe you tonight," he stated.

" Before you do anything Abhi, I have something to say," she stated.

He stood frozen. He must have really hurt her kicking her out of his flat that late at night. Perhaps her accident was his fault.

" I should have spoken much earlier on your behalf. I do love you. I appreciate you saving my life despite the fact I was such a coward," she stated.

Her eyes were directed at her feet and he stood there motionlessly as it all sunk in.

" Nikita you had us really scared, You coded twice during surgery," he stated.

She looked at him surprised.

" Were you the surgeon?," she exclaimed.

" Main toh bus..," he trailed off.

There was so much he wanted to tell her. He wanted to spend time with her. He had felt him by her side encouraging him to do the surgery. She wanted him to do it for himself not just to possibly saving her life. However fact remained she had just awakened from a coma. He hoped this wasn't just a temporary arise of feelings. It was best to get her to her room for now.

" Nikita we'll talk later. Right now I need to get you back before Sister Lovely calls a Code Grey," he insisted.

She nodded. He came over and started to guide her out of the room. He was relieved to not see any of her friends outside his door as he guided her towards an empty wheelchair, that he had indicated for the peon to bring over. He seated her there and then wheeled her quickly to her room.

He quickly had Sister Lovely take her blood pressure and to keep a watchful eye on Nikita for a few hours.

"Inform me of any updates to Dr, Nikita's status. The time does not matter. Please inform this to your relieving nurse at next shift," he stated.

He then made sure Nikita was in her bed. He had the impulse to kiss her forehead but he knew this wasn't the time or place.

Precap: Abhimanyu gets a call from Sanjeevani that Nikita is not in her room

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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
awww...Cool dear...loved it..I hope they will soon get married lol....i wonder wer she went off 2!!!😆..Might hav been 2 Abhi's home!...who noz! Thankz dear...plzz upd8 asap!🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
hey tht was really gud.....glad to know tht abhi is realizing his mistake..........hope everything settles soon...........but why such a short part.........we want longer updates..............pls
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
superb part....
you've had us hooked to your story...
hope you update soon....impatient to know where is nikki...but i'm guessing she went to abhi's house?????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks girls, I still have to write the next part and if you want a longer part you'll have to wait some time. I will try to have a fresh part soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
It was a dream? Naaaaaaaaaahi. 😆

But I love the fact that Nikki dreamed all of that up! Sweet. in love

How will Abhi act towards her, since N has already said that she loves him? Is he still sulking over what happened? Did worry for her overcome his anger? Will he melt? Suspense. tongue sticking out

As always, looking forward to the next part. :kiss:
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
Thanks Fatima your lovely analysis! I'll be posting part 12 in a bit!
Edited by adventure_gurl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
Awwwww Abhi is so Sweet in your Fic, he's acting like a Right jerk in the Show right now .. although i see where he's coming from ..

I guess somethin like this has to happen in the Show aswell for Him to Realise Nikki's Importance in his life ..

BTW once again a Really good Part .. you kind of sudhrofyed some off the Charchters in your Fic .. Abhi is not acting like a Jerk, and Riddimma is not interfering in AN's Love Life ..

I like .. Lolz

anyways

Take care

Yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
Yeah that's the great thing that I have always liked about fiction, it can be inspired by many different things and the writer has control in their own little universe!
Anyway here is part 12

Abhimanyu got home and had just slept for a few hours when his phone rang. His first emotion was irritation but then he realized it could be about Nikita. He picked up the phone.

" Hello sir! Dr, Nikita yahaan apne kamre mein nahin hai," the night nurse stated frantically.

" Start looking for her ! I am coming there now," he replied.

The sound of thunder struck him as a warning that he better hurry in case Nikita had left in this weather. He hurried to pull on a sweatshirt and grabbed an extra jacket for Nikki in case she had indeed walked out into the heavy rain.

Nikita had sneaked past a sleeping Atul. Anjali had night duty and he decided to stick around and keep Nikita company until Anjali was done. She needed fresh air. She wondered if even Abhimanyu had even taken her words seriously earlier that day. She wanted him to say his peace and they could move on with what was next. However she didn't think she could really move on without him. She really wanted to spend the rest of her life with him.

She ended up on the rooftop. The rain came down like cats and dogs and ligtening occurred yet she stayed right where she was.

She didn't turn around until she heard heavy breathing and footsteps behind her.

Nikita turned to see Abhimanyu there. His expression was of relief and exhaustion.

" Tum yahan kya kari ho? It's raining like crazy!," he exclaimed.

A sudden dangerous idea popped into her head. She got up on the ledge. She peered down as she breathed heavily. She was scared but she wanted to know if he loved her. She wanted him to say it. This time she wanted it to be real and she would reply right away.

" Nikki get down from there!," he yelled.

She turned slightly.

" Kya karlo gaye, agar main nahin mani?," she inquired as she shivered.

" Dekho tum bahar par jao gayi," he stated.

She turned away as the rain drops kept coming down heavily.

He knew if he said something else it could aggravate her further. He put down the umbrella and went over and pulled her down. He turned her to face him and grabbed her by the shoulders.

" Kya hoga hai tumhe? You coded twice last week and you want to get pneumonia?," he exclaimed.

She stood there saying nothing and first.

" I know about Alia," she stated.

He stood there stunned. How could she possibly know what transpired between him and the first girl he allowed himself to fall for?

" How did you know?," he asked.

" Woh jab main coma mein thi, usme humne shaadi karli thi. You told me about her," she stated.

He turned back to face her.

" I don't know if Alia is alive today. However I know one thing. Woh mera kal thi, kya tum meri aaj aur future bano gi?," he asked.

She nodded.

" Haan Abhi I love you, kyat um bhi mujhe se pyar karte ho?," she inquired.

He smiled brightly.

" Nikita Malhotra I love you! Kyat um meri saathi ban gi?," he inquired.

She smiled as he bent on one knee.

" Yes Mr. Abhimanyu Modi, agar aap mere saathi bana chahte hom tum main bhi aap ki saathi bana chahati hoon," she declared.

He picked her up gently and took back inside Sanjeevani. After she dried off , he tucked her in.

" Listen this time you better stay here," he hissed.

She smiled like a child.

" Theek hai main kahin nahin jari hoon. I'll be waiting for you tomorrow morning. I want to go home so badly," she stated.

Abhimanyu smiled and pinched her nose.

" Pehle tum theek ho jao. When you are better I will bring your discharge papers ," he promised.

As he was about to get up, she yanked his arm.

" Abhi kya tumari koi family hai? My parents left me a long time back. I am hoping we will have some of your family with us," she stated.

" I will tell you about them another time. Now Madam Nikki please get some rest," he stated.

She smiled and closed her eyes.

Atul spotted Abhimanyu leaving the room.

" Did you find Nikki?," he inquired.

Abhimanyu nodded.

" She should be fine. If you want that red mark off your record you need to make sure she stays stable throughout the rest of tonight. If I find her room empty tomorrow morning, you'll face the consequences Atul!!"

" Don't worry Dr. Modi. Nikki will be here when you come in the morning," he stammered.

Abhimanyu straightened his collar and looked at Atul firmly.

" Good. I will see you in the morning then Dr. Atul."

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Posted: 16 years ago
great part
yay AN are togather
the creatives should read this
cont soon

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