Mere Saathi- AN FIC(DMG) part 21 pg 28

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Posted: 16 years ago

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LOVED UR FANFIC...HOPE THAT U WRITE MANY MORE

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Sonali

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Posted: 16 years ago

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thanks dear, glad you liked it!

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Ditto100

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey Sonali 😊

I know you finished this fic ages ago but I stumbled upon it today, read it all in one go and HAD to comment! 😃

I really enjoyed reading this. I love your plot - I was totally unprepared for the dream part. I really liked this part:

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

" I hope she will be happy. We can see her sorrow. I hope he can sense it too,"

Riddhima turned solemn.

" I think he's the one who will see beyond the walls she has built up.

It really shows how vulnerable Nikki is and the facade she puts on for everyone. It's as if only Abhi truly knows her (and vice versa). 😳

I reckon the cvs read the part where Nikki goes up on the terrace and borrowed the idea for the Armaan-Ridz-Who is Basket? scenario 😆

Also when I read Suman I was 🤣 🤣 🤣 couldn't stop thinking of SuSu (Suman Lata Dalmia)!!!

Seems like you were absolutely correct when you mentioned a woman (Alia) in Abhi's past. Right now Jiya has entered.

Btw - thanks so much for some of the translations! 😃

Also, I must say that I liked the names Nikhil and Alisha (did you choose "A" for "Abhi" and "N" for "Nikki" or is that purely coincidental? 😆 It kind of reminds me of Ron and Hermione and Hugo and Rose 😛!)

I look forward to reading more of your work 👏 ⭐️

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