AK-KaSu-RM FF: ~TUMSE HI~ EPILOGUE:Pg117 (7/01) - Page 75

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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part!!
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Just read the whole FF in like an hour...it was greatt
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Recap: Riddhima is happy that her dad responded and sad that he didn't do anything after that, armaan explains to her and she hugs him.

Muskaan is tensed and calls armaan, sum teasing and then they agree to go to Punjab! Armaan immediately leaves and ridzi is surprised. Angad goes to kripz apartment and she was making rotis so they have some cute fun with atta all over and leave for airport as they were late… in the plane angad tease kripa to sit on him and they share cute moments while armaan promises ridzi two honeymoons and a love trip at the age of 60, she asks if he'll always love her he says obviously! Muskaan wants to receive her mates but her mom says no so rahul takes her in sumones bike… on the way she says that if she falls atleast they wnt get married and he asks if she hates him so much, she says no… on the bike she hugs him…

All the girls get jeolous of a girl and armaan-angad manao there girls while rahul asks muski if she was jealous they share a eyelock. The friends realize that they love eachother and Mission RM Milan starts… Ranbir comes!

Ab aage

Part 22

Breakfast table… everyone is sitting quietly, heads down while muskaan is smiling she's very happy.

"to Muskaan… tumhaare hobbies kya hain?"

"Hobbies, pooch matt, inne hai ke kya kahoon, main waale 'discos, bars, drinking driving and BOYS" she lies and rahul + gang look at her confused, she winks at them so armaan butts in understanding she wanted to break it.

"Ofcourse, humaari muskaan ko bars me jaana hi parta hai, samaaj sewaa jo karti hai" he lies and she looks at him angrily he tells her to chill "bhatke huye logon ko sahi rah par lane keliye aisi jagaon pe jaan parta hai" he says and ranbir smiles, muski looks annoyed.

"aur kya karti hain aap?"

"Smoking" she lies smiling "I …" before she can say anything kripa hits angads shoulder and he starts "haan smoking… smoking churaane ki institutes me help karti hain" he says still confused and kripa gives him a sweet smile while muski gives a killer one.

"oh okay, so u are into social services, good I like that" he says and she looks at them really angry.

"waise main drugs bhi karti hoon" she lies and ranbir spits out his coffee.

"WHAT?" he looks shocked and muski satisfied.

"Ofcourse uh…" ridzi starts, muski tries to tell her to shut up "drugs as in medicines… wo meri help karti hai medicines me" she lies still wondering if he asked what kinda help what would she say? Armaan winks at her and she blushes while muski looks totally annoyed.

"yeh ghaddhe meri help kar rahe hain ya mujhe phasaa rahe hain? Ab kripa tu kuch matt bol, please mujhe bolne de" she thinks in her mind while all the others wait for the next one.

"aapko khaana banana aata hai?" he asks and muskan smirks, now she didn't need to lie, she really didn't know how to cook.

"uh… wo…" she acts.

"Nahi… Nahi aata" kripa says with a smile, she had found out from rahul what the answer had to be lolz, muski smiles "oye kuriye I love u! atleast ek ne to help ki" she thinks but 'spoooof'

"good… humaare ghar me bahuen khaana nahi banaati" he exclaims and she looks shocked and annoyed, he tells rahul to come to another room and muski walks away irritated "rahul I had to tel you something from a long time" ranbir starts and all try to lean closer to listen, in the process kripa was close to angads face so he turns and kisses her, she hits him and gets back to listening while ridzi was sitting and armaan was leaning closer and falls on her, she gets irritated but then blushes.

"Aapki thories to nahi na?" rahul looks worried.

"nahi, tu ab tak un theories ko leke behta hai? Arre main to kab ka bhool gaya" he says laughing and rahul looks relieved but wonders how? "wo, last year America me mujhe ek larki milli" he says and rahul stares at him in disbelieve "kanya… aur hum dono ko pyar hogaya" he tells a little embarrassed.

"WHAT? Itne time se main aapki theories sochkar paagal ho raha hoon aur aap to unhe bhool kar gul chare ura rahe the, how could you bhayya? How could you?" rahul looks annoyed, AK-AR are trying to figure what theories they were talking of…

"Koi business theories hongi" angad says.

"nahi kuch aur hai" kripa says.

"right unki love theories hongi" ridzi says.

"no guys unki NO LOVE theories thi jo rahul kahin saalon se follow karne ki koshish kar raha hai" armaan says and they look at him surprised.

Back to RR:

"I know but kya karoon… wo hogaya na… time hi nahi mila bataane keliye" he says and rahul smiles.

"Bhayya aapko pyra??? OMG im so happy" he hugs him…

AK-AR look relieved.

*************

Muskaan was pacing around her room really angry with her friends "sale meri help kar rahe the ke meri band bajaa rahe the? Aane do aisi class loongi ke…" she was annoyed as the four tip toed, they hesitated to face her, she turned and saw them at the door.

"aagaye?? Bahar kya chal raha tha? Hun? Tumlog meri band kyun bajaa rahe the?" she shouts.

"chill muskaan, relax, calm down" armaan tells her and she shoots him a angry glare.

"kya keh raha tha wahan? Social work? Social work ther dikhaati hoon" she runs behind him, he tries to save himself, while she runs with her pillow.

"muski chor na… muskaan, MUSKAAAAAN" ridzi shouts and all look shocked, they never heard her scream "bas, abhi issi waqt armaan ko chor aur yahan aa" she demands and all are shocked even muskaan, armaan looks at her confused but smiles.

"hum teri help hi kar rahe the, rahul ne hume bataaya tha ke ranbir ko kya pasand hai aur kya nahi, hum ussi hisaab se sab kar rahe the, isme armaan ki koi galati nahi" she explains and armaan smiles.

"oye hoye, aaj to kissi ko bari fikar ho rahi hai humaari" he says and she blushes.

"tumhe to meri itni chinta nahi rehti, kuch sikho" angad tells kripa and she looks at him surprised.

"kya kaha? Mujhe fikar nahi hoti? Accha yeh baat hai?" she says pouting he smiles.

"kidding yaar"

"nahi jaao, mujhe nahi baat karni tumse" she says annoyed.

"sorry kaha na… please maan jaao" he holds her hand and says.

"nahi" she says childishly.

"kyun lollipop chahiye?" he teases and gets closer to kiss her cheek..

muskaan looks irritated at the two couples flirting with eachother.

"Ab tum sab apni lovestories pe thori der ke liye coma lagaoge? To meri shaadi pe full stop lag sakhe" she says annoyed and they get embarrassed and pull away.

**********

Lunch time

Rahul was sitting on the first chair from the beginning, her pappaji on the main chair and her mother on the one opposite rahul, rest of the family was sitting on various places… muskaan comes and goes to sit on the chair next to her mom but ridzi sits down.

"oh sorry tujhe behetna tha?"

'nahi its okay, main yahan behet jaati hoon" she holds the chair next to ridz but armaan comes and sits there.

"mujhe ridz ke baazu me behetna hai, I hope you don't mind" he says and she smiles and goes to the chair opposite armaan (one seat away from rahul) but kripa comes and sits there, she looks a little annoyed now they were all doing it!

"oh sorry mujhe laga tu yahan behetegi" she points the seat on the other side, muski smiles and moves to it.

"but yahan to main behet raha hoon" angad says and she looks at them annoyed when her mum tells her to sit next to rahul… she makes a face and sits.

While eating AK-AR are busy romancing.

"waise aaj tu bohot sundar dikh rahi hai" he whispers, she blushes but then gets back.

"accha, aur tu bilkul joker lag raha hai"

"waise hone waali patni ji aapko meri respect karni chahiye after all shaadi ko do hi din bache hain"

"whatever, aur haan honewaali divorcee patni" she smirks and he smiles.

"that's my dialogue"

"ab jo aapka hai wo mera bhi hai na" she teases he laughs.

"good going" he smirks and she gets embarrassed.

Muskaan gets up to get something from the kitchen, rahul makes a pretext of water and follows her… she was dishing out sum food she touches the hot pot and her hand gets burnt (a little it happens man lolz) "aaah"

"kya hua? Kya hua?" rahul takes her hand and starts blowing on it she starts staring at him, he takes her from there and gets a first aid box and puts the ointment while blowing.

"jall raha hai??? Abhi theekh hojaayega" he says worried and she just stares at him, he looks up and finds her staring they share a eyelock, muskaan feels weird and goes away from there….

She sits in her room and thinks about rahul the whole time while Rahul-AK-AR plan a surprise on the terrace.

"muskaan, muskaan jaldi aa wo rahul…" kripa comes running and panting, muski gets worried.

"kya hua? Kya hua rahul ko?" she asks worried and kripa pulls her to the terrace.

*******

The terrace was fully decorated full of lights and flowers… the path was filled with red roses… muskaan walks on it and calls rahul, AK-AR stand on one corner and watch them.

Rahul walks to her, she looks worried, surprised.

"rahul yeh sab? Tune mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya? Pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi" she blabbers but he puts a finger on her mouth;

"shhhh… muskaan, aaj kuch matt kaho" she looks at him confused, they share a eyelock.

"I love you muskaan, patanahi kab kaise, lekin mujhe tumse pyar hai, bas tumse hi… mera din, raat, khushiyan sab tumse hi! Muskaan I love you, I love you a lot! Kya tum sachme mujhse shaadi karogi?" he asks on his knees with a ring in his hand, she looks at him confused but happy… somewhere in her heart she had always dreamt of this, since the day she met him… she couldn't decide if this was true or a dream…

"Muskaan please jawab do… will u marry me?"

"Haaan" she says with tears in her eyes, he smiles and puts the ring in her finger and gets up they hug and AK-AR set the fireworks… RM hug…

AK:

"pyar kitna ajeeb hota hai na? samajh hi nahi aata" angad says with a smile.

"I know, love is like the best feeling" kripa says with tears in her eyes, he looks at her and nodds his head.

"tum larkiyon ke paas tears ki factory hoti hai kya?" he teases and she hits his arm then hugs him.

"I love you"

"love u toooooo" she says smiling with tears.

AR:

"Oh no, nahi, plz no" armaan says and ridz looks at him weirdly.

"Kya?"

"Please rona matt, dekho tumhaari aankhon me phirse aansoon, god please no crying, I hate tears pushpa" he says teasingly and she smiles.

"very funny… waise armaan, Angad aur rahul ne to sabke saamne propose kiya, humaari aankhon me aansoon laa diye but humaara love to secret hi rehgaya" she says pouting childishly and he smiles.

"bas itni si baat?" he says and pulls her in the middle "ATTENTION" he shouts and she looks embarrassed, muski gets out of the hug and rubs her tears, they hold hands and stand.

Armaan kneels down and holds ridzi hand, she was embarrassed now "Maine jabse tumhe dekha hai, im in love! Tumse hi milke mujhe pyar kya hai samajh aaya hai… pyar kaise hota hai pata chala hai… tum mere liye pyar ka doosra naam ho! I love you a lot! Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?" he asks and she smiles and nodds he slips in the ring and they hug… all the rest smile.

Angad takes out a ring also "Will you marry me?" he asks simply on his knees, and without any answer he slips in the ring.

"aur kuch nahi kaha?" she asks.

"aur kuch kehne ki zaroorat hai kya?" he asks with eyes filled with love, she smiles.

"nahi… kuch nahi kehne ki zaroorat" she smiles and hugs him, RM smile and hug once again!

Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai

Tum Se Hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona hi hai

Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Aankho mein aankhe teri
Bahoo mein Bahe teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha
Hua kya
Bathon mein bathein teri
Rathe saogathe meri
Kuyn tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi si behoshi hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Aa aa aa aa aa aa…

Aadha sa vaada kabhi
Aadhe se zyada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is tarah
Wafa ka
Chode na chute kabhi
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya
Wafa ka
Mein tera sarmaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste mil jate hai
Manzile mil jati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai

Aa aa aa aa aa aa …


Okay guys that was part 22, hope u liked it😃 Radz i kept my promise😉will update a short part on AK-AR later tonite or tomorrow morning😉

Luv u all

Nadz😳

Ps: Pms and replies late as usual, me going for dinner now😉😉


Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

awwwwwwwwwwww again i loved RM in here. they were justttt sooooosoooooooooooooooo cuteeee "mera hone wala pati hain na" loved that lineeee..and loved their hot eye locks..also the hug...actually loved everything abt them..lol..and omggg ranbir is here hope he doesn;t create any problems. thankkk u for the pmmm continue sooon can't wait to read the next part.



Awwww Im jst glad u liked it😳 Thank u😳😳 im jst happy u liked everything about RM😳

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Awwww Im jst glad u liked it😳 Thank u😳

Luv u
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Originally posted by: love_KYPH

gr8 update
loved AK atta scene
cont soon



Awwww Im jst glad u liked it😳 me too loved that😆 Thank u😳will do😉

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Originally posted by: tamanna17

hi...sweet part....nice....thanks 4 the PM



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Originally posted by: AKForever

hey great part... continue soon

thanks for the pm..



Awwww Im jst glad u liked it😳 will do😉 U are always welcome😉

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Originally posted by: simi2

hyela i loved this part bahut mast tha yaar

Awwww thank u, im jst glad u liked it😳
waise hi nadz
how r you sweety , hope going fine ,
Absolutely😉 thanx, what about u????
well as per the part , wow yaar from start to end it was amazing loved it
hmm , rahul realised his love ,thanks to armaan and angad to tell him all that
Really? im jst happy u liked all😳
angad and kripa home scene was very cute that ataa and all , and i loved that plane small fight between them
Awww u liked it😳 me too loved it😉
oh hoo , ar were very cute too
😳😳
loved the way all the 3 girls getting jeolous over seeing boys flirting with that girl , hye all the reaction were superb
Lolz thanx😆😆😆 for noting that😉
lovely part yaar and muskaan pataoo mission is too good , waiting for that , per ye end mein kya bomb through kar diya now wht will this ranbir doo yaar , hope nothing wrong
Lolz yeah mission is on... and ranbir😳
waiting for the next part please update soon
till then take caree and thanks for the pm
Awwww im jst glad😳 Thanx😳
lots of love
simi


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear awesome and great part
love all the couples and the way they proposed each other
i wish u can write more romance b/w AK adn AR
can't wait for them to get married
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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