FF:TIMELESS LUv part 3 updt on pg 16 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
guyzzz so much thankoos for commenting !! sorry was liol busy!! will updte in few dayzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi guyzz sorry for been late!!am dam busy..buh trust me tried hard to do fast par...poor electricity conditions spoiled it more!!.😭.i really thank u all for co-operating so much..luv ya all..bcoz of u ppl i luv wrting more and more!!!
OH ya..those of u whoes name's nt in pm list dn't worry i put it!!!..sorry for nay mistakes...in th updt wrote really fast!!!
sum rplys to comments are remaining..i'l do it wid ths one!!dn't worry!!..
enjoy reading!! and do leave ur comments and suggetsion!!😛

Nups kept staring at him wid wide eyes trying to figure out tht..th guy she hugged in darkness was none other than Mayank himself!!!

"Hi!! Am Mayank!hope u knw me..arrr I mean atleast u hv seen my films"

his strong manly voice brought nups bck to reality!!REALity which was tht she and mayank were still holding hands of each other and her chain clinging frm between th hands!!! Nups smiled and was abt to say sumthing?"am sssssww.."wen she suddenly got sum flashes of her crying desperately, And screaming loudly.."noo plzz dn't go..dn't leave me?"and then she breaking down!!! Nups jolted bck her hand and slightly pushing him away..she ran frm there leaving mayank surprised by her abrupt behaviour!!!

Mayank wanted to stop her,say sumthng to her listen her!!!par she ran away!! RAN AWAY???? Frm him???why??wot's wrong wid his popularity???tht radio listner..th winner she didn't cum for movie!!then ths gal ran away seeing him???hmm lagta hai mayank u need to do sumthing!!!!wen turned back to press th button of th lift he saw her chain was still in his hands!! He quickly ran out to gv her and saw her walking slowly in th corridor..he screamed out "OYE!!hey w8!!HEY u?GAL frm th LIFT!!W8!!!!"

Nups realized it was him?and he was calling her..she paced up and without looking bck she got lost in th crowd which gathered as soon as evryboday noticed Its MAYANK!!!sum how he came out of th mall .into his car and gone!!!still absent mindly looking tat h chain..which had letter "N" as its locket!!!he still couldn't get her out of his mind!!!her touch?her big dove like eyes!!!he so wanted to hold her like tht!!caress her slim waist?feel her touch?caress her neck?CARESS her NECK???MAYANK!!!wot's wrong wid u??cumone man..stop been weird!!!she was juss an ordinary gal..who didn't even cared tht she was soo close to u..MAYANK sharma!!!

Meanwhile nups reached th gate of multiplex where sweetu's parents were standing wid her waiting for nups

N;sorry uncle was stuck in traffic..hmm cumone sweetu lets go!!!

And nups and sweetu enterd th cinema hall!!

[to LUv FM raido station]

a soft melodious voice was ringing through th corridors?mking each and everyone in th building smile..it was nt new in luv staion office..at ths hrs of morning..it was infact a normal thing to smile and relax urself wid th cities most luving RJ..Gunjan?who saying her daily..wrds of luv and warmth!!!

"HELLO,namaskar,gud morning?.apki pyaari gunjan agayi ahi phir lekar der sara pyaar.jo hua kaal raat bhool jao yaar,aaj hai din ki ek nayi shuruwat!!!!..so wonderful ppl out der..kis baat ka intazar ahi?phone utakar..dial kijye.mera number..aur make a request?.aur main..[her phone ringed]..lo..agaya humara..phela call..jo ki hum sab jante hain..kiska hoga..bhai?har roj show ki shuruwat ek hi gane se toh hoti hai..hmm lets see if it changes today!!!!"

G:hello..

S:gud morning?.gunjan?.how r u ths morning???

G:hmm lover boy..agaye aap?.am gud!!u???

S:bas jiraha hoon apke pyaar main?aur iss intzar main ki ek din aap se jarur milunga!!

G:well well well lover boy..itna senti mat hojaoo..haan main bhi ek din jarur dekhna chaungi ki roj ek hi gana kisko achha lagta ahi?.hahahhahahah

S:[got lost in th sweet giggles of gunjan..he juss wanted to be der,wid her,,hold her tightly,he luved seeing her giggling like dat!!there was an wave of emotion which urged him to juss leave everything and go der..to her and plant a kiss on her rosy soft cheeks,which he knew might hv becum light shade of pink?hiding themselves beneath her specs!!!

G:hmm u der??hey???

S[sunddenly cuming to senses]..oh ya!!hmm netwrk probs.ahhaha?so my song???u knw wot I wanna request!!

G:yep!!dedicate to???

S:th gal wid most cutest giggles ever?.byeee!!

Samrat cut th phone wid a content smile on his face?like he ahd talked wid her all ths face to face?buh his smile vanished wid a sudden announcement of sumone's voice!!!

[at radio station]

G:well here goes our 1st request..by lover boy ofcource..enjoy!!..

[at filmcity]

M;tumhe kya laga?maine tumhe pehchan nahii paya..???tumhari har sans..mere dil ki dhadkan hai,jab tumhe chot lagti ahi..mujhe dard hota hai,hum hassti ho..toh mera dil..khush hota ahi!!!..kyun ki maine tum se bahut pyaar karta hoon naina

Sum gal hugged him screaming..awwwwwwww I luv u too mayank!!!

M;[pulling her away frm him]hey..its varun!!!nt mayank!!!god!! and who wrote ths dialogues?uski chot mujhe dard..!!!its so nt happening!!!!change them and yes ofcource!![glaring at th gal]..PACK UP!!!!am off!!

Ths is very usual in shoots wen.mayank was upset abt sumthing..then th whole day he would keep finding faults for no reason!!!even wid himself!!! Ths is was his usual mood swings!!

M:[to himself] god!!wot are those romantic lines for?wot on earth do they mean??tumhara dard..meri boat!!no..w8 meri boat..tumhara dard!!aaargh!!y does she feel bad abt my boat???BOAT???th lines had boat???

"boat nahi?.chot!!"called out a familiar voice..which managed to bring a small smile on mayank's face!!!

It was uday..his manager!!and his only..frnd..for anme sake..though mayank never calld him one really!!

M;uday!!hii der!!

U:mayank..wot's worng???

M:nthing?juss wondering how can her chot make me pain???

U;tht was happens in luv!!u'll nt knw it unless u fall in luv!!u knw..pyaar main..jab who dur hoti hai na..tab bhi uske aasoo mehsoos hote hain!!!

And mayank got sum flashes of th voice!!!!voice in pain,voice which sounded teary,voice which thanked him,voice he wanted to meet and she didn't turn up!!yaa!! he feeld she was crying!! And then those eys?no nt th thanking gal!! th gal frm lift..her eys..speaking volume?and way she went awy..left so many questions unanswered!!!..y..he ran behind her??y he wanted to hug her??feel her slim waist in his trong arms??y he couldn't take his eys off her lovely soft lips,which were constantly encouraging him toh feel them under his manly lips!!nooo..mayank stop thinking at her..she was mean,rude and wot's wrong wid u??u falling for tht..rude rather than th angel who was thanking u!! u din't even find out y she din't cum!!!

Mayank stood up and started hurrying to his car?

U:oye!!mayank?kahan bhai??

M:kissi ko dhondna hai!!see ya

In his car and off!!!which halted straight in front of LUV FM office?he left his keys to th guard for parking his car and hurried off to owners office?.he was more tahnw elcumed in there!!

O:yes sir!! How may I help u??

M:hmm hii!juss a request..y'dya I had an contest and sumone wined it to sum errrr sweetu!! Can u plz gv me her number..if u can?well I need it bcoz..hmm well..err..ya..my manager..he says she his long lost cousin!!!so..i kinda helping them to get together!!u see?[he said ths all in one breath.and looked at th owner..if he was convinced enough..to gv him]

O:ohhh..ya!!ofcource sir!!

W8 a min..plzz?[he quickly ringed his manager and gv him orders?.]

Within next sec a boy came rushing in wid sum paper in his hand!!

O:here!!sir ur desired num!!

M:wow thanxx..they'll be so happy!!!.my manager n his sis..wowwwwthey'll bless u!!!

O:thanxx sir!!have a gud day

M;oh ya..it'll be gr8!!now!![he said wid a mischievous smile]

Leaving th office and getting in his car..M:"SWEETU..main aa raha hoon..hahhaha..god!!sumtimes its fun to be an actor!!!".said mayank flashing his dimples!!

luv

Nihu

Edited by ILuvArjun - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
You may be Just a little bit Deewani.. JUST a little Crazy . par baby ur da one.....
tu naa aise yaar hai meri jo hamesha mera dill khush kar deti ho

Here is my first Ever shayari 4 u

dill ke ek kone me aapne jaagah bana li
Dill ke ek kone mei aap ne jagah bana li
pyaar itna hai hum tum se karte ke dill bhi chota par jaaye


*wah wah claps at own shayari*

Tu ne jo naa kaha main woh hamesha se samajh taati hoon par ajeeb dosti hai hamari something common MayUr hai naa




mera fave gaane ka lyrics on this occassion of a marvellous Updt

aaya woh phir najar aise baat chidane lagi phir se
aankhon mein chubhata kal ka dhuwaan
haal tera na hum sa hai iss khushi mein kyun gum sa hai
basane laga kyun phir woh jahaan
woh jahaan dur jisase gaye the nikal
phir se yaadon ne kar di hai jaise pehal
lamaha bita huwa dil dhukhaata raha
khaamakha bewajah khwaab bunata raha
tune jo na kahan main woh sunata raha
khaamakha bewajah khaab bunata raha
jaane kisaki hamein lag gayi hai najar
iss shehar mein na apana thikaana raha
dur chaahat se main apani chalata raha
bujh gayi aag thi daag jalata rah

wwell yeh sab toh maine kar dia but I forgot to praise your update

AWESOME PART Nihu


Hats off yaar
enjoy reading my Long comment😆

Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part nihu..loved reading it :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
lol...it was sooooooooooo cooooooooooooooollllllll...!!!!!!!!!!!
fab.....i just wish there would be another meeting lol...i wanted the part to be never ending..!!!!!

do update soon...!!!........
btw if nups is a junior artist...why dont u make her a junior artist in one of mayank's movies ...and well then he can say all those romantic lines to nupur instead of the herione by mistake lol..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nihu! Great part.. as these "flashbacks" leading something in a prior life or something like that? would love for u to cont extra soon xxSonia
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nihu you updated and this part is too special
first i love their action
the reaction
and maynk's dialoge very lovely
or samart 's line touche me
very beautifully written
love it
thx for pm
or last maynk ka dialoge actor hone ka kuch to fyda hai love it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesum yaar loved it

But wished Nups culd speak him and not run away
He got the no wat if he calls her and Nups will talk to him lik Sweetu
Wats this yaar
I want her to tell him that her real name Nupur
Plz aur wo chain ka kya hua
Waise Boat was awesum😆
Edited by -afsha- - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
it was awesome!!
loved reading it!!
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
continue soon
and plz add me to ur pm list

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